| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 84.79% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 986 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 986 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "lurch" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "pounding" | | 10 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 152 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 24 | | totalWords | 978 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Little thief.\"" | | 1 | "Paranoia. Jet lag. Too much coffee." | | 2 | "\"You took what isn’t yours.\"" | | 3 | "\"Liar.\"" | | 4 | "\"The Heartstone was never meant for human hands.\"" | | 5 | "breathing" | | 6 | "\"No—\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 954 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.05 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.976 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "moonlight that seemed to come from a source too far away, too white" | | 1 | "smelled like iron and spoiled honey" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 978 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 84 | | mean | 11.64 | | std | 13.69 | | cv | 1.176 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 33 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 25 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 23 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 93.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | | 0 | "was filled" | | 1 | "were meant" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "were blackened" | | 4 | "was gone" |
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| 80.95% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "weren’t greeting" | | 1 | "wasn’t imagining" | | 2 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.064 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her scarf against the cold, her breath fogging in the dim moonlight that filtered through the trees—moonlight that seemed to come from a source too far away, too white." | | 1 | "The pendant had been leading her for weeks—since it first flared to life above her flat, humming like a live wire in her drawer." | | 2 | "She heard it then—a voice, whispering through the silence like silk through rust." | | 3 | "Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—white blossoms with stems the colour of bleached bone." | | 4 | "A sound cut through the silence—a child’s laugh, high and distant." | | 5 | "Then—movement." | | 6 | "A scream tore through the grove—not hers." | | 7 | "But the moon—" | | 8 | "Behind her, whispers started up—their voices soft and tired, almost apologetic." | | 9 | "She reached—" |
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| 86.47% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 967 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 47 | | adverbRatio | 0.04860392967942089 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005170630816959669 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 6.27 | | std | 5.05 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 43.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 52 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the quiet." | | 1 | "Too much coffee.*" | | 2 | "Too quick to recognise." | | 3 | "Too wrong in its limbs." | | 4 | "Only the wildflowers had changed." | | 5 | "Almost made her weak." | | 6 | "Then she saw the shadow" |
| | ratio | 0.057 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her scarf against" | | 1 | "They were the colour of" | | 2 | "It pulsed again, deliberate and" | | 3 | "She pulled it free." | | 4 | "She was here for a" | | 5 | "It knew something she didn’t." | | 6 | "It was filled with things" | | 7 | "She turned slowly, torch in" | | 8 | "She caught movement near the" | | 9 | "She killed the torch." | | 10 | "She wasn’t alone." | | 11 | "She heard it then—a voice," | | 12 | "They were meant for thoughts." | | 13 | "She clenched her fists, nails" | | 14 | "She forced herself to step" | | 15 | "She stood too quickly." | | 16 | "Her breath came too fast." | | 17 | "She forced herself to breathe." | | 18 | "It came from nowhere." | | 19 | "Her phone buzzed in her" |
| | ratio | 0.295 | |
| 78.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the standing" | | 1 | "The air pressed down on" | | 2 | "She tightened her scarf against" | | 3 | "The Fae Grove." | | 4 | "A place that shouldn’t exist" | | 5 | "The wildflowers bloomed year-round here," | | 6 | "They were the colour of" | | 7 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 8 | "It pulsed again, deliberate and" | | 9 | "She pulled it free." | | 10 | "The crimson stone glowed softly" | | 11 | "She was here for a" | | 12 | "The pendant had been leading" | | 13 | "It knew something she didn’t." | | 14 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 15 | "Rory didn’t move." | | 16 | "The kind of quiet that" | | 17 | "It was filled with things" | | 18 | "She turned slowly, torch in" | | 19 | "The trees stretched too tall." |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 73.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She tightened her scarf against the cold, her breath fogging in the dim moonlight that filtered through the trees—moonlight that seemed to come from a source to…" | | 1 | "A place that shouldn’t exist and yet did, pulsing like a slow, erratic heartbeat beneath Richmond Park’s skin." | | 2 | "Its limbs too long, joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |