Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09FWD766B0J7KEYHCTD1QC

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.002250
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the standing stones, boots crunching on frost-crusted grass the colour of old bones. The air pressed down on her shoulders like wet wool, thick with the scent of damp earth and something older, something metallic. She tightened her scarf against the cold, her breath fogging in the dim moonlight that filtered through the trees—moonlight that seemed to come from a source too far away, too white. The Fae Grove. Isolde’s grove. A place that shouldn’t exist and yet did, pulsing like a slow, erratic heartbeat beneath Richmond Park’s skin. The wildflowers bloomed year-round here, but the ones pressed into the earth beneath her boots weren’t greeting-card yellows or mallows. They were the colour of old bruises, their petals too smooth, their centres too deep. Rory adjusted the strap of her courier bag, fingers brushing the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed again, deliberate and slow, like a second heartbeat against her ribs. She pulled it free. The crimson stone glowed softly in the moonlight, the silver chain cold against her palm. She was here for a reason. The pendant had been leading her for weeks—since it first flared to life above her flat, humming like a live wire in her drawer. It knew something she didn’t. Knew where the Hel portal was. Knew why the shadows in her dreams sometimes had teeth. A twig snapped behind her. Rory didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. Nothing. Just the quiet. The kind of quiet that wasn’t quiet at all. It was filled with things waiting to fill it. She turned slowly, torch in her other hand now, its beam cutting through the dark in a narrow, trembling corridor. Between the standing stones, the park beyond looked wrong. The trees stretched too tall. The moon was too bright, too steady. No clouds. No breeze. She caught movement near the tree line. Not an animal. Not a person. Something else. Silent. Bent at angles that made her teeth ache. She killed the torch. Darkness rushed back in. Rory stood still. The pendant burned against her sternum. She wasn’t alone. She heard it then—a voice, whispering through the silence like silk through rust. But the words weren’t meant for ears. They were meant for thoughts. *"Little thief."* The voice slithered into her mind, smooth and viscous as oil. Not spoken aloud. Embedded. She clenched her fists, nails biting into her palms. The pendant pulsed again, hotter now, almost too hot to touch. She forced herself to step forward. The ground was spongy beneath her boots, like walking on a lung. Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—white blossoms with stems the colour of bleached bone. When she crouched, crushed one between her fingers, it smelled like iron and spoiled honey. She stood too quickly. Something moved behind her. Not walking. Sliding. Rory spun, torch on. Nothing. Her breath came too fast. She forced herself to breathe. *Paranoia. Jet lag. Too much coffee.* A sound cut through the silence—a child’s laugh, high and distant. It came from nowhere. Not her ears. Not outside. Inside her skull. Her phone buzzed in her pocket. The screen lit up the dark, weak and blue. The glow recoiled the wildflowers. Their petals shrunk back, as if scalded. Then—movement. Fast. A shape darted from behind a tree to her left. Too quick to recognise. Too wrong in its limbs. She spun, torch up. Nothing. Her heart hammered in her throat. The pendant burned white-hot against her skin. She wasn’t imagining things. A voice, again. *"You took what isn’t yours."* The words slithered into her mind, smooth and viscous. Rory forced out, "I don’t know what you’re talking about." *"Liar."* The word echoed in her skull. *"The Heartstone was never meant for human hands."* She flinched. The torch flickered. The thing before her was tall. Too tall. Its limbs too long, joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch. It moved without sound, gliding over the earth like it weighed nothing. Rory’s back hit a tree trunk. She hadn’t even seen it there. The bark was warm to touch, almost *breathing* against her spine. The pendant pulsed violently. The crimson light flared in her cupped hands, casting her face in bloody relief. The thing recoiled, its featureless face contorting. *"No—"* Rory thrust the pendant forward. Light exploded. A scream tore through the grove—not hers. The thing thrashed, its long limbs flailing as if burned. The air shimmered. The ground trembled. Rory ducked, arms over her head. Darkness rushed back in. Silence. She lowered her arms. The grove was still. The thing was gone. No ashes. No marks on the earth. Only the wildflowers had changed. Where there had been white blossoms, now there were blackened stalks, their stems twisted like dying veins. The scent of spoiled honey was gone. Replaced by iron. Rory’s hands shook. She tucked the pendant back beneath her shirt, skin buzzing with residual heat. She wasn’t alone anymore. And something was different. She turned in a slow circle. The standing stones were still there. The trees were still there. But the moon— The moon was too high. Too bright. And for the first time, she noticed the stars weren’t stars. They were eyes. Watching. Waiting. She should leave. Now. Rory ran for the standing stones, boots pounding against unnatural earth. Behind her, whispers started up—their voices soft and tired, almost apologetic. She didn’t look back. The stones loomed ahead. She reached— Her hand passed through. A laugh bubbled up in her throat, half-hysterical. She staggered forward, back into the normal world. Park air hit her like a slap. Relief flooded her veins. Almost made her weak. Almost. Then she saw the shadow on the path ahead of her. Long. Too long. Bent in ways that didn’t conform to anything human. And it was walking toward her. Leaving footprints in the frost. Footprints that weren’t hers.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.94% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"lurch"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"loomed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"silk"
3"echoed"
4"flickered"
5"stomach"
6"lurch"
7"shimmered"
8"trembled"
9"pounding"
10"loomed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences152
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences152
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences156
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords24
totalWords978
ratio0.025
matches
0"\"Little thief.\""
1"Paranoia. Jet lag. Too much coffee."
2"\"You took what isn’t yours.\""
3"\"Liar.\""
4"\"The Heartstone was never meant for human hands.\""
5"breathing"
6"\"No—\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount954
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Richmond1
Park2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Rory10
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
globalScore0.976
windowScore0.833
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"moonlight that seemed to come from a source too far away, too white"
1"smelled like iron and spoiled honey"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount978
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences156
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean11.64
std13.69
cv1.176
sampleLengths
069
158
248
351
45
55
61
721
820
925
107
116
122
139
148
159
163
1725
182
1935
2046
214
224
233
244
251
2616
2723
2827
2921
304
311
326
337
344
353
365
379
3810
3915
405
4133
4223
4325
441
455
462
4723
486
494
93.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences152
matches
0"was filled"
1"were meant"
2"was gone"
3"were blackened"
4"was gone"
80.95% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs168
matches
0"weren’t greeting"
1"wasn’t imagining"
2"was walking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences156
ratio0.064
matches
0"She tightened her scarf against the cold, her breath fogging in the dim moonlight that filtered through the trees—moonlight that seemed to come from a source too far away, too white."
1"The pendant had been leading her for weeks—since it first flared to life above her flat, humming like a live wire in her drawer."
2"She heard it then—a voice, whispering through the silence like silk through rust."
3"Wildflowers bloomed at her feet—white blossoms with stems the colour of bleached bone."
4"A sound cut through the silence—a child’s laugh, high and distant."
5"Then—movement."
6"A scream tore through the grove—not hers."
7"But the moon—"
8"Behind her, whispers started up—their voices soft and tired, almost apologetic."
9"She reached—"
86.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white-hot against her"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.04860392967942089
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005170630816959669
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences156
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences156
mean6.27
std5.05
cv0.805
sampleLengths
016
122
231
33
42
518
620
715
816
913
104
1115
126
1324
145
156
1610
175
183
192
201
213
229
239
2420
259
265
277
282
292
307
313
323
332
341
358
364
374
383
396
403
4113
427
435
442
4511
463
471
489
4911
43.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences156
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just the quiet."
1"Too much coffee.*"
2"Too quick to recognise."
3"Too wrong in its limbs."
4"Only the wildflowers had changed."
5"Almost made her weak."
6"Then she saw the shadow"
ratio0.057
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences122
matches
0"She tightened her scarf against"
1"They were the colour of"
2"It pulsed again, deliberate and"
3"She pulled it free."
4"She was here for a"
5"It knew something she didn’t."
6"It was filled with things"
7"She turned slowly, torch in"
8"She caught movement near the"
9"She killed the torch."
10"She wasn’t alone."
11"She heard it then—a voice,"
12"They were meant for thoughts."
13"She clenched her fists, nails"
14"She forced herself to step"
15"She stood too quickly."
16"Her breath came too fast."
17"She forced herself to breathe."
18"It came from nowhere."
19"Her phone buzzed in her"
ratio0.295
78.85% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences122
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the standing"
1"The air pressed down on"
2"She tightened her scarf against"
3"The Fae Grove."
4"A place that shouldn’t exist"
5"The wildflowers bloomed year-round here,"
6"They were the colour of"
7"Rory adjusted the strap of"
8"It pulsed again, deliberate and"
9"She pulled it free."
10"The crimson stone glowed softly"
11"She was here for a"
12"The pendant had been leading"
13"It knew something she didn’t."
14"A twig snapped behind her."
15"Rory didn’t move."
16"The kind of quiet that"
17"It was filled with things"
18"She turned slowly, torch in"
19"The trees stretched too tall."
ratio0.762
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She tightened her scarf against the cold, her breath fogging in the dim moonlight that filtered through the trees—moonlight that seemed to come from a source to…"
1"A place that shouldn’t exist and yet did, pulsing like a slow, erratic heartbeat beneath Richmond Park’s skin."
2"Its limbs too long, joints bending in ways that made her stomach lurch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0346%