| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1365 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "fluttered" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "silk" | | 8 | "trembled" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "footfall" | | 15 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 141 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 149 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1349 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "hovering" | | 1 | "into" | | 2 | "ahead" | | 3 | "beside" | | 4 | "thickening" | | 5 | "on this side" | | 6 | "receded" | | 7 | "feed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1276 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.52 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 91.18% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as though offering" | | 1 | "tasted like rust and crushed violets, and" |
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| 51.74% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.483 | | wordCount | 1349 | | matches | | 0 | "not into the night air but *into* the dark, as though the darkness drank it" | | 1 | "not toward Rory, but as though she were listening to something Rory couldn’t hear" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 28.1 | | std | 19.27 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 69 | | 1 | 54 | | 2 | 45 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 75 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 61 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 49 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 45 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 17 | | 30 | 65 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 33 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 42 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 36 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 227 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 149 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "A moth the size of her fist fluttered past her ear, not fluttering—*hovering*, wings a steady hum too deep for its size." | | 1 | "The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers slung over her shoulder felt wrong here—plastic containers of fried rice and dim sum in a place that shouldn’t know human hands let alone kitchens." | | 2 | "Not from behind—from *ahead*, inside the dark." | | 3 | "In the sudden black, she heard it again—soft, deliberate, like someone testing the weight of steps before committing." | | 4 | "Her back was to Rory, but even from here Rory saw the way her posture leaned—too still, too centered, like a statue balanced on a needle." | | 5 | "The woman’s head tilted—not toward Rory, but as though she were listening to something Rory couldn’t hear." | | 6 | "She kept her eyes on the path ahead—the beam of her flashlight illuminated only three more feet." | | 7 | "She wished she’d brought the knife from her flat—the one with the bone handle Eva had carved with wyrm patterns." | | 8 | "Not just absence of light—a *thickening*, like standing at the edge of tar." | | 9 | "The woman in the dark dress stood ten feet behind her, not having moved—she’d just been there all along." | | 10 | "But the air tasted like rust and crushed violets, and the woman’s dress was now unclasped at the collar, revealing a glimpse of collarbone that wasn’t smooth—it bore fine, pale lines like braided silk under the skin." | | 11 | "The grass behind her didn’t press up—it *receded*, pulling away like tide going out too fast." | | 12 | "Something giggled—a child’s laugh, pitch perfect, but underlaid with a wet, clicking noise like bones tapping glass." | | 13 | "The darkness around her pulsed—once, twice—like breathing." | | 14 | "Blood welled, crimson against her skin, but it wasn’t blood—it was dark, viscous, like oil mixed with wine." | | 15 | "It was a bargain—one she’d already accepted by coming." | | 16 | "The woman stood directly in front of her now, so close Rory smelled her—damp loam and old graves." |
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| 93.27% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1298 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.040832049306625574 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006933744221879815 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 149 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 149 | | mean | 9.05 | | std | 7.02 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 30 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 42.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.2751677852348993 | | totalSentences | 149 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just emptiness that drank the" | | 1 | "Then her chin dipped in" | | 2 | "Too late now." | | 3 | "Then, from everywhere and nowhere," | | 4 | "Too many to count." |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "It paused a yard ahead," | | 1 | "She caught herself on the" | | 2 | "She wasn’t cold." | | 3 | "She unzipped the top an" | | 4 | "She zipped it shut again." | | 5 | "She flipped on the tiny" | | 6 | "She stepped closer, heel pressing" | | 7 | "She flipped the flashlight off." | | 8 | "She matched her breathing to" | | 9 | "She turned her head slightly" | | 10 | "She turned the flashlight back" | | 11 | "Her back was to Rory," | | 12 | "Her voice sounded thinner than" | | 13 | "She kept her eyes on" | | 14 | "She stepped forward." | | 15 | "Her breath quickened." | | 16 | "She wished she’d brought the" | | 17 | "Her flashlight flickered." | | 18 | "She looked down." | | 19 | "She clenched her fist, stinging." |
| | ratio | 0.279 | |
| 33.77% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The night swallowed the narrow" | | 1 | "Rory followed the faint pulse" | | 2 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 3 | "A moth the size of" | | 4 | "It paused a yard ahead," | | 5 | "Rory exhaled through her nose" | | 6 | "The moment her right foot" | | 7 | "She caught herself on the" | | 8 | "The pendant flared brighter, pulsing" | | 9 | "The moth darted away, swallowed" | | 10 | "She wasn’t cold." | | 11 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 12 | "The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers" | | 13 | "She unzipped the top an" | | 14 | "Steam curled out in lazy" | | 15 | "She zipped it shut again." | | 16 | "The path widened into the" | | 17 | "The standing stones here were" | | 18 | "Moonlight didn’t touch the ground" | | 19 | "She flipped on the tiny" |
| | ratio | 0.852 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "To shut it down." | | 1 | "To seal it." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It paused a yard ahead, suspended in air that smelled of wet moss and something metallic, like the air before a thunderstorm." | | 1 | "The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers slung over her shoulder felt wrong here—plastic containers of fried rice and dim sum in a place that shouldn’t know human hands le…" | | 2 | "The beam cut a feeble yellow path across the clearing but stopped three feet from the nearest stone, as though the darkness beyond was a solid wall." | | 3 | "She stepped closer, heel pressing into dew-slick grass that felt too spongy, too alive." | | 4 | "Tall, slender, wearing a dark dress that hung like wet silk." | | 5 | "The woman’s shoulders lifted fractionally, as though she’d registered the disturbance but deemed it not worth turning for." | | 6 | "In her palm lay a thorn the length of Rory’s thumb, black as charcoal, glistening with a moisture that wasn’t wet." | | 7 | "But the air tasted like rust and crushed violets, and the woman’s dress was now unclasped at the collar, revealing a glimpse of collarbone that wasn’t smooth—it…" | | 8 | "The moth from earlier darted across her path again, wings beating erratically this time, as though injured." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "the woman said, voice layered with whispers" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |