Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09GGYZ764SJDWZBGSSZVR0

Run Details

Duration:
21.8s
Cost:
$0.001523
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The night swallowed the narrow path behind her without a sound. Rory followed the faint pulse of the pendant against her sternum, the deep crimson stone warm as a fevered thumb pressing into her skin. The silver chain bit into her collarbone when she hesitated at the first standing stone, its ancient oak bark black as pitch in the moonlight, veins of silver tracing its surface like old scars. A moth the size of her fist fluttered past her ear, not fluttering—*hovering*, wings a steady hum too deep for its size. It paused a yard ahead, suspended in air that smelled of wet moss and something metallic, like the air before a thunderstorm. Rory exhaled through her nose and stepped between the stones. The moment her right foot crossed the threshold, the world tilted. She caught herself on the stone’s rough surface, fingernails snapping as she steadied. The pendant flared brighter, pulsing once like a heartbeat beneath her sweater. The moth darted away, swallowed by the dark ahead. She wasn’t cold. Yet. Rory adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, though it wasn’t heavy. The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers slung over her shoulder felt wrong here—plastic containers of fried rice and dim sum in a place that shouldn’t know human hands let alone kitchens. She unzipped the top an inch. Steam curled out in lazy spirals, dissipating not into the night air but *into* the dark, as though the darkness drank it. She zipped it shut again. The path widened into the clearing. The standing stones here were taller, arranged in a rough circle. Moonlight didn’t touch the ground inside the ring. Not a single shadow pooled between them. Just emptiness that drank the light. She flipped on the tiny flashlight from her bag. The beam cut a feeble yellow path across the clearing but stopped three feet from the nearest stone, as though the darkness beyond was a solid wall. She stepped closer, heel pressing into dew-slick grass that felt too spongy, too alive. Footsteps echoed. Not hers. Not from behind—from *ahead*, inside the dark. Rory froze, pulse knocking in her throat. She flipped the flashlight off. In the sudden black, she heard it again—soft, deliberate, like someone testing the weight of steps before committing. She matched her breathing to the rhythm, slow inhale, slow exhale. Counted. One-two, one-two. The footsteps matched hers. She turned her head slightly left then right, listening for clues in the lanes of silence between sounds. Nothing. She turned the flashlight back on. A woman stood ten feet away, facing the dead center of the ring. Tall, slender, wearing a dark dress that hung like wet silk. Her back was to Rory, but even from here Rory saw the way her posture leaned—too still, too centered, like a statue balanced on a needle. The dress’s hem trembled with some unseen breeze Rory couldn’t feel. “Excuse me,” Rory said. Her voice sounded thinner than it should. The woman didn’t move. Three more steps forward. The grass whispered beneath her trainers, a sound like fabric tearing in slow motion. The woman’s shoulders lifted fractionally, as though she’d registered the disturbance but deemed it not worth turning for. Rory stopped. The pendant burned against her collarbone, steady now. The woman’s right hand lifted slowly from her side. Fingers uncurled from a fist that hadn’t been clenched. In her palm lay a thorn the length of Rory’s thumb, black as charcoal, glistening with a moisture that wasn’t wet. Rory swallowed. “You’re blocking my path.” The woman’s head tilted—not toward Rory, but as though she were listening to something Rory couldn’t hear. Then her chin dipped in a slow nod and she stepped aside, gliding rather than walking, the hem of her dress not disturbing a single blade of grass. Rory exhaled, low and controlled. She kept her eyes on the path ahead—the beam of her flashlight illuminated only three more feet. Beyond that, blank dark. She stepped forward. The woman’s dress rustled again. Not behind. From *beside* her now. Rory snapped the light left. Empty. Her breath quickened. She wished she’d brought the knife from her flat—the one with the bone handle Eva had carved with wyrm patterns. Too late now. The darkness between the stones deepened. Not just absence of light—a *thickening*, like standing at the edge of tar. The air pressed in, heavier than she remembered. Her flashlight flickered. The batteries were new. A voice, so faint it could’ve been wind through reeds: “You shouldn’t have come.” Rory’s grip tightened on the bag strap, crinkling plastic. “I didn’t.” Silence answered. Then, from everywhere and nowhere, whispering: “You did.” She spun. The woman in the dark dress stood ten feet behind her, not having moved—she’d just been there all along. The thorn glistened still in her palm. Rory’s voice stayed even. “I’m looking for a Hel portal. It opened near here. The pendant reacts when I’m close.” The woman didn’t blink. “Do you know what waits in Hel?” “I know what waits *on this side* if it’s open too long.” The woman smiled, a tilt of lips that didn’t reach her eyes. The thorn lifted fractionally between them, as though offering. “You’re already inside.” Rory’s wrist burned. She looked down. The crescent scar on her left wrist glowed faintly silver, reacting to the pendant’s pulse. She clenched her fist, stinging. The woman advanced one step. “The path behind you is a memory. The path ahead is hunger.” Rory’s thumb found the pendant beneath her sweater, its warmth spreading up her neck. She had come for a reason. To shut it down. To seal it. Simple. But the air tasted like rust and crushed violets, and the woman’s dress was now unclasped at the collar, revealing a glimpse of collarbone that wasn’t smooth—it bore fine, pale lines like braided silk under the skin. Rory stepped backward. The grass behind her didn’t press up—it *receded*, pulling away like tide going out too fast. She stumbled, caught her balance, and turned to run. The flashlight died. Something giggled—a child’s laugh, pitch perfect, but underlaid with a wet, clicking noise like bones tapping glass. Rory ran. Her trainers pounded the ground, each footfall sounding like a door slamming somewhere distant. The moth from earlier darted across her path again, wings beating erratically this time, as though injured. She skidded to a halt. The clearing wasn’t empty anymore. Figures stood at the ring’s edge, motionless. Too many to count. Silhouettes of women in long dark dresses, all facing inward, arms at their sides, palms showing nothing. None moved. Rory’s breath hitched. “Which of you has the Hel portal?” No reply. The moth dive-bombed her shoulder. She swatted. It crumpled in her palm, wings folding like rotten newspaper, body warm and damp. She dropped it. A thorn pricked her ankle through the trainer. She looked down. A thorn like the woman’s rested across the top of her foot, black as midnight. She kicked it off with a sharp motion. The darkness around her pulsed—once, twice—like breathing. Her wrist burned. She looked. The scar had opened into a shallow cut. Blood welled, crimson against her skin, but it wasn’t blood—it was dark, viscous, like oil mixed with wine. It dripped onto the grass. Where it touched, the blades shrank away, recoiling like scalded skin. The figures exhaled in unison. A sound like leaves skittering across pavement. Rory’s pendant flared white-hot against her chest. She gasped, clutching at her sweater. The figures took one step inward. She had the sudden, terrible clarity that the woman’s offer wasn’t a test. It was a bargain—one she’d already accepted by coming. The Hel portal here wasn’t something to shut down. It was something to *feed*. The woman stood directly in front of her now, so close Rory smelled her—damp loam and old graves. The thorn trembled in her outstretched hand. “Give it,” the woman said, voice layered with whispers. Rory’s fingers closed around the pendant. The warmth inside it became a brand. The figures stepped closer, dresses whispering against each other like secrets shared in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.67% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1365
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"fluttered"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count2
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"silk"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count2
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"quickened"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count2
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"tracing"
2"fluttered"
3"footsteps"
4"echoed"
5"weight"
6"silence"
7"silk"
8"trembled"
9"glistening"
10"quickened"
11"flickered"
12"warmth"
13"perfect"
14"footfall"
15"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fist"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences141
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords10
totalWords1349
ratio0.007
matches
0"hovering"
1"into"
2"ahead"
3"beside"
4"thickening"
5"on this side"
6"receded"
7"feed"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1276
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei1
Rory25
Eva1
Hel1
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.52
windowScore0
91.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though offering"
1"tasted like rust and crushed violets, and"
51.74% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.483
wordCount1349
matches
0"not into the night air but *into* the dark, as though the darkness drank it"
1"not toward Rory, but as though she were listening to something Rory couldn’t hear"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean28.1
std19.27
cv0.686
sampleLengths
069
154
245
34
475
538
650
711
867
96
1061
1115
1236
1349
146
1545
1629
1717
1826
1934
2014
2111
2210
2328
2420
2511
2612
2724
2826
2917
3065
3128
323
3350
3440
3510
3626
378
3833
395
4042
4112
4219
4336
4425
459
4613
4715
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"been clenched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs227
matches
0"were listening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount18
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences149
ratio0.114
matches
0"A moth the size of her fist fluttered past her ear, not fluttering—*hovering*, wings a steady hum too deep for its size."
1"The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers slung over her shoulder felt wrong here—plastic containers of fried rice and dim sum in a place that shouldn’t know human hands let alone kitchens."
2"Not from behind—from *ahead*, inside the dark."
3"In the sudden black, she heard it again—soft, deliberate, like someone testing the weight of steps before committing."
4"Her back was to Rory, but even from here Rory saw the way her posture leaned—too still, too centered, like a statue balanced on a needle."
5"The woman’s head tilted—not toward Rory, but as though she were listening to something Rory couldn’t hear."
6"She kept her eyes on the path ahead—the beam of her flashlight illuminated only three more feet."
7"She wished she’d brought the knife from her flat—the one with the bone handle Eva had carved with wyrm patterns."
8"Not just absence of light—a *thickening*, like standing at the edge of tar."
9"The woman in the dark dress stood ten feet behind her, not having moved—she’d just been there all along."
10"But the air tasted like rust and crushed violets, and the woman’s dress was now unclasped at the collar, revealing a glimpse of collarbone that wasn’t smooth—it bore fine, pale lines like braided silk under the skin."
11"The grass behind her didn’t press up—it *receded*, pulling away like tide going out too fast."
12"Something giggled—a child’s laugh, pitch perfect, but underlaid with a wet, clicking noise like bones tapping glass."
13"The darkness around her pulsed—once, twice—like breathing."
14"Blood welled, crimson against her skin, but it wasn’t blood—it was dark, viscous, like oil mixed with wine."
15"It was a bargain—one she’d already accepted by coming."
16"The woman stood directly in front of her now, so close Rory smelled her—damp loam and old graves."
93.27% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1298
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white-hot against her"
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.040832049306625574
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006933744221879815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean9.05
std7.02
cv0.775
sampleLengths
011
124
234
322
422
510
611
713
812
99
103
111
1212
1330
146
1522
165
176
1811
198
207
216
229
2327
2414
252
262
277
287
295
3018
3111
321
332
344
3518
361
376
3813
3911
4026
4111
424
437
444
454
4614
4718
482
498
42.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2751677852348993
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences122
matches
0"Just emptiness that drank the"
1"Then her chin dipped in"
2"Too late now."
3"Then, from everywhere and nowhere,"
4"Too many to count."
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences122
matches
0"It paused a yard ahead,"
1"She caught herself on the"
2"She wasn’t cold."
3"She unzipped the top an"
4"She zipped it shut again."
5"She flipped on the tiny"
6"She stepped closer, heel pressing"
7"She flipped the flashlight off."
8"She matched her breathing to"
9"She turned her head slightly"
10"She turned the flashlight back"
11"Her back was to Rory,"
12"Her voice sounded thinner than"
13"She kept her eyes on"
14"She stepped forward."
15"Her breath quickened."
16"She wished she’d brought the"
17"Her flashlight flickered."
18"She looked down."
19"She clenched her fist, stinging."
ratio0.279
33.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences122
matches
0"The night swallowed the narrow"
1"Rory followed the faint pulse"
2"The silver chain bit into"
3"A moth the size of"
4"It paused a yard ahead,"
5"Rory exhaled through her nose"
6"The moment her right foot"
7"She caught herself on the"
8"The pendant flared brighter, pulsing"
9"The moth darted away, swallowed"
10"She wasn’t cold."
11"Rory adjusted the strap of"
12"The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers"
13"She unzipped the top an"
14"Steam curled out in lazy"
15"She zipped it shut again."
16"The path widened into the"
17"The standing stones here were"
18"Moonlight didn’t touch the ground"
19"She flipped on the tiny"
ratio0.852
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences122
matches
0"To shut it down."
1"To seal it."
ratio0.016
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It paused a yard ahead, suspended in air that smelled of wet moss and something metallic, like the air before a thunderstorm."
1"The bag of Yu-Fei’s leftovers slung over her shoulder felt wrong here—plastic containers of fried rice and dim sum in a place that shouldn’t know human hands le…"
2"The beam cut a feeble yellow path across the clearing but stopped three feet from the nearest stone, as though the darkness beyond was a solid wall."
3"She stepped closer, heel pressing into dew-slick grass that felt too spongy, too alive."
4"Tall, slender, wearing a dark dress that hung like wet silk."
5"The woman’s shoulders lifted fractionally, as though she’d registered the disturbance but deemed it not worth turning for."
6"In her palm lay a thorn the length of Rory’s thumb, black as charcoal, glistening with a moisture that wasn’t wet."
7"But the air tasted like rust and crushed violets, and the woman’s dress was now unclasped at the collar, revealing a glimpse of collarbone that wasn’t smooth—it…"
8"The moth from earlier darted across her path again, wings beating erratically this time, as though injured."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the woman said, voice layered with whispers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
77.0633%