| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.778 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1336 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1336 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "sentinel" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "flawless" | | 10 | "predator" | | 11 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 126 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1315 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Shit." | | 1 | "Focus." | | 2 | "not" | | 3 | "crack" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 1236 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 1.38 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Movement | 1 | | Conversational | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.812 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 86.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "fabric that seemed to drink the darkness rather than reflect it, the hem brushing the loam without disturbing so much as a single dry leaf" | | 1 | "As if chatting about the weather with the bogeyman" |
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| 47.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.521 | | wordCount | 1315 | | matches | | 0 | "not the soft thud of warmth she'd grown used to, but sharp" | | 1 | "not knurled wood, but cold grey stone" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 32.07 | | std | 27.85 | | cv | 0.868 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 107 | | 1 | 105 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 57 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 51 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 60 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 81 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 30 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 46 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 32 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 200 | | matches | | 0 | "was trying" | | 1 | "were glowing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 24 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.164 | | matches | | 0 | "Its pulse had been faint then—almost reassuring, like the vibration of a phone lost in a cushion—but now it thrummed against her sternum like it was trying to burrow straight through to her spine." | | 1 | "Not much—just a tangle of foxgloves and ferns that hadn't been there two minutes ago." | | 2 | "It skated along the shell of her ear in a voice too gentle to be human, carrying the faint scent of lavender and something old—something that had been buried before memory." | | 3 | "Her left wrist prickled—the old crescent scar itched like malaria." | | 4 | "Movement in the peripheral vision—a flash of something pale between the hawthorns." | | 5 | "Another sound—this time from above." | | 6 | "The standing stones along the perimeter were glowing—arcs of faint red light arcing between them like circuit testers in a pitch-black room." | | 7 | "The tree’s scent hit her—peppery and alive, the smell of healthy oak bark." | | 8 | "She hissed, jerking her hand out of instinct—her palm sported a fresh crescent line of crimson across the lifelines." | | 9 | "Petrified bark spiralled upward like a baroque column—not knurled wood, but cold grey stone." | | 10 | "Rory’s pulse spiked into her throat as she stared at the impossible grain of the bark—black ribs beneath mineral grey, veins of quartz pulsing sluggishly like a patient’s oxygen line." | | 11 | "The Heartstone flared violent crimson—like staring into a camera flash." | | 12 | "Every voice layered in perfect unison, speaking a language Rory’s brain rejected like a corrupted file—symbols that hurt just to glance at." | | 13 | "A laugh cut through the whispers—soft, throaty, amused." | | 14 | "Standing between two of the standing stones—to all outward appearance human—was a woman with skin like polished obsidian." | | 15 | "Her eyes—bright as poisoned ice—locked onto Rory’s face." | | 16 | "The woman’s smile sharpened, baring teeth too white, too even—the teeth of a predator who’d long forgotten how to chew." | | 17 | "The black rosebud split open in her hand with a wet *crack*, revealing nothing inside—just hollow petals of darkness stretching wider, wider, unspooling into a tunnel of absence." | | 18 | "They poured over the grove’s loam like mercury—dozens of them, limbs too long, joints bending backward, their hairless scalps gleaming under the stone lights." | | 19 | "Rory lunged—" | | 20 | "—and the ground vanished beneath her feet." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1265 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sickly-sweet beneath it." | | 1 | "white-hot beneath winter" | | 2 | "ominous, resting against flawless skin." |
| | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.03557312252964427 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0071146245059288534 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 10.27 | | std | 8.09 | | cv | 0.788 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 31 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 53.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.390625 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Just earth that looked freshly" | | 1 | "Too fast for rabbit." | | 2 | "Too low for fox." | | 3 | "Just black branches swaying, though" | | 4 | "Just a bud, flawless and" |
| | ratio | 0.047 | |
| 91.70% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked beneath the gnarled" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She hadn't expected the grove" | | 3 | "Its pulse had been faint" | | 4 | "She swallowed, throat dry." | | 5 | "She exhaled hard through her" | | 6 | "She stepped forward and nudged" | | 7 | "She crouched, fingers hovering just" | | 8 | "She pushed her hair back" | | 9 | "It skated along the shell" | | 10 | "She didn’t breathe." | | 11 | "She forced herself upright." | | 12 | "she said, proud her voice" | | 13 | "Her left wrist prickled—the old" | | 14 | "She whipped her head round." | | 15 | "Her stomach dropped like she'd" | | 16 | "Her neck muscles locked into" | | 17 | "She couldn’t look up." | | 18 | "she called into the dark" | | 19 | "She didn’t remember leaning against" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 77.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She ducked beneath the gnarled" | | 1 | "The crimson stone burned cold" | | 2 | "That wasn't right." | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "She hadn't expected the grove" | | 5 | "Rory kept the pendant in" | | 6 | "The Heartstone had woken three" | | 7 | "Its pulse had been faint" | | 8 | "She swallowed, throat dry." | | 9 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 10 | "Rory spun, boots skidding in" | | 11 | "The standing stones at the" | | 12 | "She exhaled hard through her" | | 13 | "The undergrowth had shifted." | | 14 | "Foxgloves didn't grow in clusters" | | 15 | "She stepped forward and nudged" | | 16 | "The stem bent like melted" | | 17 | "She crouched, fingers hovering just" | | 18 | "She pushed her hair back" | | 19 | "The Heartstone’s glow intensified." |
| | ratio | 0.764 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "As if chatting about the" | | 1 | "—and the ground vanished beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of her bag and forced her legs to keep moving, heels sinking into the loamy earth that smelled of turned compost and something sickly-swe…" | | 1 | "It skated along the shell of her ear in a voice too gentle to be human, carrying the faint scent of lavender and something old—something that had been buried be…" | | 2 | "The air hummed, vibrating through her molars, setting her teeth on edge." | | 3 | "A collective chime that set her teeth vibrating, a deep resonant hum that morphed into a chorus of overlapping whispers." | | 4 | "She wore a dress of some shimmering fabric that seemed to drink the darkness rather than reflect it, the hem brushing the loam without disturbing so much as a s…" | | 5 | "Her hair hung to her waist in tight black ropes threaded with tiny silver bells that chimed softly with each shiver of breath." | | 6 | "The woman’s smile sharpened, baring teeth too white, too even—the teeth of a predator who’d long forgotten how to chew." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |