Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09JS99T2053F8JRGEGK2Y4

Run Details

Duration:
25.0s
Cost:
$0.001656
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed a bit. The same green neon sign flickered weakly above the door, casting a sickly glow over the pavement. Rory hesitated for half a second before pushing inside, the scent of aged whiskey and cigarette smoke clinging to her coat like old memories. She exhaled slowly, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—an old wound, like everything else. The bar was quieter than she remembered. No laughter spilling from the back room, no clink of glasses lifted in toast. Just the low hum of a radio tucked behind the counter, some jazz station bleeding static through warped speakers. The walls still wore their layers of history—yellowed maps pinned haphazardly over black-and-white photographs, faces Rory didn’t recognize but felt she should. She stepped forward, boots scuffing against the sticky floor. The stool cushions had seen better decades. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen too many winters. His grey-streaked auburn hair was combed back, but the auburn had faded more than she recalled. The neat beard was still trim, the signet ring catching the dim light as he worked. His left leg—permanently angled when he leaned on the counter—gave a slight hitch when he shifted, old injury flaring. Time hadn’t treated him kindly, but he carried it like a uniform. Rory slid onto a stool halfway down the bar. Two fingers from him, distance preserved. Silas glanced up. His hazel eyes, sharp as ever, locked onto her. Something flickered behind them—recognition, maybe surprise, quickly smoothed into something unreadable. He set the glass down, wiped his hands slowly on the rag. “Well,” he said. “If it isn’t Laila Carter.” The name struck like a blade twisted sideways—familiar, but wrong. Rory hadn’t been Laila since Cardiff. When Evan dared to call her that, she’d gouged the memory into her wrist. But Silas knew. He always knew. She exhaled through her nose, throat tight. “Rory.” He dipped his chin slightly, as if she’d corrected the record. “Rory. Of course.” The rag twisted between his fingers. “Last time I saw you, you were wearing a barrister’s suit I’d bet a month’s tips on you never earning.” “People change.” “Do they?” He leaned on the bar, arms tense. “I heard you walked into a courtroom once. Won a case your first try out.” Rory looked down at her hands. The nails were short, raw in places from package corners and courier straps. Her fingers curled into fists. “Transcript said otherwise.” Silas exhaled through his nose. A bar laugh, dry. “Fair point.” Silence settled between them, thick with what wasn’t said. The radio hummed a trumpet that crackled like embers. Rory broke first. “I live above you now.” That got a lift of his eyebrow. “The flat? Still leaks when it rains.” “So does my past.” She pushed her black hair behind her ear, noticing the threads of grey at the roots for the first time. The string lights above the bar caught them like silver threads in a tapestry. Silas didn’t reach for another glass. His signet ring glinted as he tapped the bar top, once, twice. “Delivery job keeps you busy?” “Every day.” A beat. “Yu-Fei cracks eggs like he’s building pyramids.” A ghost of a smirk touched Silas’s lips. “Sounds about right.” Rory studied the photographs on the wall—faces in old coats, hats tilted over eyes, secrets exchanged in corners. She pointed to one—a woman in a trench coat standing under a flickering streetlamp. “Who’s that?” Silas followed her gaze. “No idea. Fell off a truck in ’98. Didn’t ask questions.” “Classic.” He leaned forward, elbows on the bar. “Why are you here, Rory?” The question hung. Not accusatory, not curious—just bare. Like he’d already guessed the shape of the answer. She met his eyes. “I ran into Eva last week.” That muscle in his jaw twitched. Eva—Eleanor Voss, childhood friend, the one who’d dragged Rory to London when the bruises proved too many. When Evan’s grip became a brand. Rory’s voice dropped. “She said you tracked her down in Bristol last year.” Silas exhaled. “She needed papers.” “Not citizenship.” “Discretion.” “Right.” He looked away, towards the shadowed doorway that led to the back room, the one hidden behind a bookshelf. “You think I forgot what it’s like to live with ghosts?” “I think you made peace with yours. Mine sleep in corners.” Silas swished a rag over the counter, leaving a trail of moisture. “You’re not the same girl who left Cardiff.” “I hope not.” She laughed once, sharp. “That girl still has a scar shaped like half-moons on her wrist.” He glanced down at her left arm, resting now on the bar. The sleeve had ridden up just enough to show the pale crescent. His gaze darkened. “We don’t have to talk about it,” he said. “Then what do we talk about?” Her voice cracked. “The weather? The price of tea? How you turned a bar into an intelligence front like some kind of retired spy cliché?” Silas didn’t flinch. “You know damn well why I did.” “Because the alternative was prison. Or death.” She laughed, low and bitter. “Or maybe just another quiet retirement in the Cotswolds with a wife who saved her nervous breakdown for the garden.” His lips thinned. “You think you know?” “I know Evan’s lawyer still calls himself a friend. Know Cardiff’s rain still smells like salt and old guilt.” Silas froze. “Evan’s—” “Dead.” Rory’s voice stayed level. “Car crash. No note, no warning. Just gone.” Silas stared at her, eyes sharp with sudden clarity. “You think I don’t check these things?” “I think you check enemies. Not… aftermath.” Silence stretched. The trumpet on the radio had long since ended, and the static now sounded like a voice lost in translation. Rory’s fingers drummed the bar. “I didn’t come here to talk about Evan.” “Then why?” He leaned in again, closer. “Eva? Or…” His eyes flicked to the second floor, where Rory now rented the flat above the kitchen that always smelled faintly of lime and damp. Rory exhaled. “Because I needed to see the way you looked at me now.” “And how’s that?” “Like I’m no longer yours to fix.” Silas didn’t answer right away. He reached under the bar, pulled out a whisky bottle without a label, poured two fingers into a glass. Pushed it toward her. Rory stared at the amber liquid. “You used to drink gin,” he said. “Neat, with a twist you’d squeeze with your teeth.” She lifted the glass, smelled it—smoke and time. “People change.” Silas poured his own, no ice, no water. “Not that much.” Rory swirled the glass. The liquid clung to the sides like syrup. “You still run messages?” He nodded once. “For the right price.” “I need names.” Silas didn’t move. Didn’t blink. “Why?” “Someone’s asking about me.” She tapped the scar on her wrist. “And I didn’t leave Cardiff to lose everything again.” Silas sipped his drink. “What kind of names?” “Evan’s old circle. Ones he called friend.” Silas exhaled through his nose. “You think they’d cross the sea for vengeance?” “No. For profit.” She met his gaze. “Because someone’s buying information about a girl who dropped out of Law school three years ago.” Silas set his glass down slowly. The rings on the wood looked like old wounds. “You’re being hunted,” he said. “Not yet. Not quite.” He looked at the back room door, barely visible behind the bookshelf that doubled as a drinks rack. “That stuff is dangerous, Rory. Last guy who asked me for that kind of intel came back in a body bag.” “Because he paid in loose change.” Silas studied her—really studied her—for the first time. The sharp angles of her face, the way her shoulders held themselves now, not like a girl who feared the dark but one who carried a flashlight straight through it. “You still afraid of the dark?” he asked. She smiled, but it didn’t reach her eyes. “I sleep with a light on. And a knife under the pillow.” Silas chuckled once, low. “Same old Rory.” “No.” She finished the whisky in one swallow, coughing slightly as the burn hit. “I just don’t run anymore.” Silas wiped the rim of his glass. “So this is it. You’re back in the game.” She leaned in. “Not the game. A job.” He looked at her for a full ten seconds. The bar felt smaller. “Fine.” He reached under the counter again, pulled out a slip of paper and a pen. Scribbled a single name. “Start here.” Rory took it, unfolded it. The ink smudged—bad paper. Harper. Just Harper. “That’s it?” “That’s what I had in my pocket.” He met her eyes. “The rest costs.” She tucked the paper into her coat pocket. “I’ll pay.” Silas nodded toward the back room door. “Go on, then. Through the bookshelf. You remember the drill?” She stood, coat rustling. “I remember.” He didn’t stop her as she walked toward the shelf lined with leather-bound ledgers and fake first editions. She slipped behind the thick, musty fabric of the world’s most obvious secret door. Silas stayed behind the bar, listening to the back room door click shut. Then he reached for his phone, thumb hovering over a number not in his contacts. But in his past.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She laughed once [once]"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.224
leniency0.447
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.024
77.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1570
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"quickly"
2"slightly"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1570
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count2
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"tapestry"
count1
6
word"aftermath"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"unreadable"
2"familiar"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
5"tapestry"
6"aftermath"
7"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1556
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1046
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.2
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Rory16
Laila1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Silas23
Eleanor1
Voss1
London1
Scribbled1
Harper2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Laila"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
6"Eleanor"
7"Voss"
8"Harper"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
globalScore0.401
windowScore0.167
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like a voice lost in translation"
1"looked like old wounds"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.643
wordCount1556
matches
0"not like a girl who feared the dark but one who carried a flashlight straight through it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean16.38
std13.44
cv0.82
sampleLengths
064
162
216
380
415
512
623
78
836
98
1040
112
1224
1327
1411
1518
168
1714
1838
1923
2011
2111
2234
2315
241
2512
2617
2710
2829
2913
305
312
321
331
3430
3511
3620
3719
3827
399
4031
4110
4232
437
4419
453
4613
4716
487
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"was combed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs199
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences189
ratio0.063
matches
0"She exhaled slowly, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist—an old wound, like everything else."
1"The walls still wore their layers of history—yellowed maps pinned haphazardly over black-and-white photographs, faces Rory didn’t recognize but felt she should."
2"His left leg—permanently angled when he leaned on the counter—gave a slight hitch when he shifted, old injury flaring."
3"Something flickered behind them—recognition, maybe surprise, quickly smoothed into something unreadable."
4"The name struck like a blade twisted sideways—familiar, but wrong."
5"Rory studied the photographs on the wall—faces in old coats, hats tilted over eyes, secrets exchanged in corners."
6"She pointed to one—a woman in a trench coat standing under a flickering streetlamp."
7"Not accusatory, not curious—just bare."
8"Eva—Eleanor Voss, childhood friend, the one who’d dragged Rory to London when the bruises proved too many."
9"She lifted the glass, smelled it—smoke and time."
10"Silas studied her—really studied her—for the first time."
11"The ink smudged—bad paper."
99.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1064
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.040413533834586464
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.013157894736842105
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean8.23
std5.76
cv0.7
sampleLengths
07
117
224
316
47
514
619
722
89
97
1017
1116
1216
1319
1412
159
166
173
189
1911
2012
213
225
2310
246
2514
263
273
287
291
3011
319
3220
332
349
3515
366
3713
385
393
405
414
422
439
449
453
465
477
487
4924
50.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.31216931216931215
totalSentences189
uniqueOpeners59
60.06% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"Just the low hum of"
1"Then he reached for his"
ratio0.018
72.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences111
matches
0"She exhaled slowly, fingers brushing"
1"She stepped forward, boots scuffing"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
3"His left leg—permanently angled when"
4"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
5"He set the glass down,"
6"He always knew."
7"She exhaled through her nose,"
8"He dipped his chin slightly,"
9"He leaned on the bar,"
10"Her fingers curled into fists."
11"She pushed her black hair"
12"His signet ring glinted as"
13"She pointed to one—a woman"
14"He leaned forward, elbows on"
15"She met his eyes."
16"He looked away, towards the"
17"She laughed once, sharp"
18"He glanced down at her"
19"His gaze darkened."
ratio0.369
18.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences111
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed"
1"The same green neon sign"
2"Rory hesitated for half a"
3"She exhaled slowly, fingers brushing"
4"The bar was quieter than"
5"The walls still wore their"
6"She stepped forward, boots scuffing"
7"The stool cushions had seen"
8"Silas stood behind the bar,"
9"His grey-streaked auburn hair was"
10"The neat beard was still"
11"His left leg—permanently angled when"
12"Time hadn’t treated him kindly,"
13"Rory slid onto a stool"
14"Silas glanced up."
15"His hazel eyes, sharp as"
16"Something flickered behind them—recognition, maybe"
17"He set the glass down,"
18"The name struck like a"
19"Rory hadn’t been Laila since"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
81.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that had seen too many winters."
1"He dipped his chin slightly, as if she’d corrected the record."
2"The sharp angles of her face, the way her shoulders held themselves now, not like a girl who feared the dark but one who carried a flashlight straight through i…"
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She laughed once, sharp"
1"He leaned, closer"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed once (laugh)"
1"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.165
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.047
79.9838%