Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09K1F4PGPMX7HH5QB67KY0

Run Details

Duration:
33.4s
Cost:
$0.001474
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign buzzed like a dying insect when Rory pushed through the door. Green light spilled across the pavement, momentarily turning her shadow the wrong colour. She hesitated, gloved fingers tightening around the strap of her delivery bag. The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed—still that same rotten egg smell of stale beer and old carpet, still the hush that fell when the wrong sort walked in. She shook rain from her coat before it could soak into the leather. Inside, half the booths were empty. A man in the corner stared at the chessboard in front of him like it had betrayed him. Rory slid onto a stool at the bar, boots scuffing against the brass foot-rail. The wood beneath her palms was sticky. Silas was pouring something that looked like motor oil into a glass. She coughed. He turned slow, like his neck was made of rusted hinges. Hazel eyes flicked over her—black coat, pale face, dark hair cut to her jawline. A scar she didn’t have before, pale crescent on her left wrist—then recognition flared and his mouth settled into something colder than disappointment. “Delivery’s not for another hour,” he said. The ring on his right hand caught the light as he wiped a tumbler with a rag that had seen better decades. Rory unzipped her bag. “Didn’t come for chop suey.” He set the glass down. “Didn’t think you’d come at all.” Silence stretched. The clock over the beer taps ticked loud enough to drown out the rain now hammering against the windows. “How’d you know it was me?” she asked. “Same blind spot for colour on your left.” He tapped his own eyes. “Bright blue stares down the world same as it did when you were nineteen.” She glanced away, fingers tracing the rim of her delivery bag. A habit. Something to do with her hands. Silas exhaled through his nose, leaned on the bar. “Three years, Rory. Three years and you disappear into London like smoke.” “Four,” she corrected. “Left just before my birthday.” “Fled, more like.” The word hung there, heavy as a stone dropped into deep water. Rory felt it sink. She shrugged the coat off her shoulders. Underneath, sleeves of her black shirt were rolled to the elbow. The crescent scar gleamed faintly under the bar’s dim lights. “I wouldn’t have lasted,” she said. “You know that.” Silas’ limp was more pronounced as he turned to stack glasses. “Didn’t mean you had to vanish. Just meant you needed a proper plan.” “No one had time for another broken plan,” she said. “Not after—” “After Evan,” he finished. “I know. But what about Eva?” Rory’s jaw tightened. “Eva’s the one who sent me in the first place. Had to disappear so she could keep breathing.” Silas paused. The beer pump hissed. “And now?” “Now I’m breathing.” He studied her—the delivery bag, the boots, the way she sat without slouching, spine straight like she was still bracing for a strike. No mascara now. No bracelets that jingled when she was nervous. Just a thin silver chain around her neck hidden under the shirt collar. Probably a habit too. “Still using the name Malphora?” he asked. “Only when it suits.” “Smart girl.” She almost laughed. Almost. “I stopped believing in luck.” Silas reached under the bar, pulled out a half-empty bottle of decent whisky—no label she recognised. Poured two fingers, slid it toward her. Rory stared at the amber liquid like it might crawl out and bite her. “Drink,” he said. She picked it up, let the glass warm between her fingers. The scent alone threatened to undo something inside her chest. “You look like hell,” she said. “So do you.” They both drank. The whisky burned like a brand down her throat. Silas’ cough wasn’t from age. She remembered that cough. From Prague. Rory set the glass down carefully. “You never wrote.” “I’m in the business of secrets, not nostalgia.” “Still.” “Still nothing.” He wiped the bar again, slower this time. “You could’ve rung.” “So could you.” Another silence. This one different. Less charged, more like sediment settling. Footsteps approached—Silas shifted his weight slightly, a subtle guard shift. A woman in a mac stood at the bar, tapped the counter. “Whisky. Neat.” Silas poured without looking at the label. Rory watched the stranger’s reflection in the mirror behind the bottles. Saw herself reflected too—hair shorter now, face sharper, the scar more pronounced than the rest of her. Like a small moon orbiting her wrist. The woman paid, left without a word. Silas poured himself another drink, neat as well. Double, this time. Rory cleared her throat. “I work nights usually. Delivery shifts.” “Delivery.” “Yeah.” “Cars?” “Bike. Electric. Quiet.” He nodded once, like that confirmed something he already guessed. “Yu-Fei still running that place?” “Owns it now. Bought it outright after his uncle... retired early.” She almost said died. Almost. Some things didn’t need saying. Silas exhaled, long and slow. “Cheung always had a soft spot for strays.” Rory’s mouth twitched. Not quite a smile. “I’m no stray.” “Aren’t you?” She looked down at the scar again. The crescent. Small. Precise. Almost surgical. “I got a flat near Crystal Palace,” she said. “Second floor. Quiet neighbours. Leave before dawn, back after dusk. Like a ghost.” “Useful skill.” “Or survival instinct.” Silas drank. “Still afraid of the dark?” “Still afraid of Evan.” The admission hung—raw, unvarnished. The bar’s hum faded to a distant hum. The rain against the window stopped, turned to a drizzle that sounded like breathing. Silas exhaled. “You moved on. Changed your name. Changed everything except the fear.” “Is that such a bad thing?” “Is it honest?” She laughed, short and sharp. “Honest? I wear my fear like a second skin. Can you say the same?” Silas looked at his hands. The signet ring gleamed. His wedding band—long gone. Burned or buried or melted down. No one knew which. “I walk with a limp,” he said. “Knee gave out in Prague. Permanent souvenir.” “And?” “And I don’t tell people about it unless they ask. Just like you don’t tell people your real name unless they matter.” Rory’s lips parted. Closed. Silas set his glass down. “You think hiding makes you honest?” “I think surviving makes me honest,” she shot back. “I think honesty’s a luxury when your ribs are cracked and your back’s against the wall.” He met her eyes. Held them. “Who broke your ribs?” Silence settled like fog. The clock ticked. The bar breathed. Rory looked away first. “Evan.” The name left a stain. Silas didn’t flinch. Didn’t soften. Didn’t offer sympathy. Just let it sit there. “He in prison?” he asked. “I don’t know. Probably not.” She picked at the condensation ring under her glass. “He was careful. Charmed. Rich. Connected. Proper barrister gown at court, proper apologies at home.” “Convenient.” “Brilliant,” she corrected. “Psychopathic but brilliant.” Silas drank. Watched her over the rim of the glass. “You ever think about going back?” he asked quietly. Rory’s blood turned to ice. “To Cardiff?” “To the law. To fighting back. Properly.” She laughed—real this time, bitter. “I stuffed my degree in a drawer. Locked it. Threw the key.” “You were top of your class.” “Before or after the breakdown?” Silas didn’t answer. The door opened. A man in a wool coat stomped in, shook water off his sleeves. Rory recognised the bar’s bouncer-type presence instantly. Silas greeted him with a nod. Business resumed. Rory zipped her coat back up. “I should go.” “Delivery?” “Yeah.” “Need a lift?” She almost accepted. Almost froze in the offer. Almost let the past fifteen minutes melt away into something softer, something warmer. Almost. Instead, she hoisted her bag over her shoulder. “I’ve got my bike.” Silas leaned on the bar, ring tapping against the wood. “When you’re ready to stop running, Rory—or when fear stops telling you what to do—you know where to find me.” She paused at the door. Green neon haloed her shoulders. “Does that include using my real name?” she asked. He smiled—small, tight. “Always did.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.458
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.024
92.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1357
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"silence"
count3
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"silence"
2"tracing"
3"charged"
4"footsteps"
5"weight"
6"electric"
7"crystal"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences137
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences137
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences202
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1344
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount872
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.95
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Raven1
Nest1
Prague1
Silas17
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Silas"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore0.525
windowScore0.167
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like motor oil into a glass"
1"sounded like breathing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1344
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences202
matches
0"remembered that cough"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs105
mean12.8
std12.24
cv0.957
sampleLengths
079
145
212
32
448
529
69
711
821
98
1027
1119
1221
138
143
1516
1628
179
1824
1912
2010
2121
228
233
2451
257
264
272
289
2923
3014
313
3221
336
343
3512
3611
379
388
391
4013
413
4211
4310
4414
4542
467
4711
4810
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences137
matches
0"was made"
1"were rolled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"was pouring"
1"was still bracing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences202
ratio0.054
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed—still that same rotten egg smell of stale beer and old carpet, still the hush that fell when the wrong sort walked in."
1"Hazel eyes flicked over her—black coat, pale face, dark hair cut to her jawline."
2"A scar she didn’t have before, pale crescent on her left wrist—then recognition flared and his mouth settled into something colder than disappointment."
3"He studied her—the delivery bag, the boots, the way she sat without slouching, spine straight like she was still bracing for a strike."
4"Silas reached under the bar, pulled out a half-empty bottle of decent whisky—no label she recognised."
5"Footsteps approached—Silas shifted his weight slightly, a subtle guard shift."
6"Saw herself reflected too—hair shorter now, face sharper, the scar more pronounced than the rest of her."
7"The admission hung—raw, unvarnished."
8"His wedding band—long gone."
9"She laughed—real this time, bitter."
10"He smiled—small, tight."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount582
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.030927835051546393
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006872852233676976
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences202
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences202
mean6.65
std5.08
cv0.763
sampleLengths
014
113
212
327
413
56
618
714
87
912
102
1111
1214
1323
147
1522
164
175
185
196
202
2119
228
2313
2414
2511
262
276
289
2912
303
315
323
3312
344
357
3611
3710
386
393
4011
4113
4210
432
444
456
463
4718
482
494
61.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.40594059405940597
totalSentences202
uniqueOpeners82
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just a thin silver chain"
1"Probably a habit too."
2"Just let it sit there."
3"Almost froze in the offer."
4"Almost let the past fifteen"
5"Instead, she hoisted her bag"
ratio0.058
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences103
matches
0"She hesitated, gloved fingers tightening"
1"She shook rain from her"
2"He turned slow, like his"
3"He set the glass down."
4"He tapped his own eyes"
5"She glanced away, fingers tracing"
6"She shrugged the coat off"
7"He studied her—the delivery bag,"
8"She almost laughed."
9"She picked it up, let"
10"They both drank."
11"She remembered that cough."
12"He wiped the bar again,"
13"He nodded once, like that"
14"She almost said died"
15"She looked down at the"
16"She laughed, short and sharp."
17"His wedding band—long gone."
18"she shot back"
19"He met her eyes."
ratio0.252
66.80% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences103
matches
0"The neon sign buzzed like"
1"She hesitated, gloved fingers tightening"
2"The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed—still"
3"She shook rain from her"
4"A man in the corner"
5"Rory slid onto a stool"
6"The wood beneath her palms"
7"Silas was pouring something that"
8"He turned slow, like his"
9"Hazel eyes flicked over her—black"
10"A scar she didn’t have"
11"The ring on his right"
12"Rory unzipped her bag."
13"He set the glass down."
14"The clock over the beer"
15"He tapped his own eyes"
16"She glanced away, fingers tracing"
17"Something to do with her"
18"Silas exhaled through his nose,"
19"The word hung there, heavy"
ratio0.786
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed—still that same rotten egg smell of stale beer and old carpet, still the hush that fell when the wrong sort walked in."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she corrected (correct)"
1"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences83
tagDensity0.169
leniency0.337
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.048
85.3728%