| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 28 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.036 | | effectiveRatio | 0.036 | |
| 64.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1996 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "quickly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "slightly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "completely" | | 6 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 24.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1996 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "depths" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "comfortable" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "implication" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "vibrated" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "flawless" | | 18 | "perfect" | | 19 | "whisper" | | 20 | "stomach" | | 21 | "footsteps" | | 22 | "jaw clenched" | | 23 | "trembled" | | 24 | "raced" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "jaw clenched" | | 2 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 7 | | narrationSentences | 182 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "seem to" | | 2 | "began to" | | 3 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 210 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 57 | | totalWords | 1968 | | ratio | 0.029 | | matches | | 0 | "\"More than one walker has been trapped here, bound by the promise of secrets.\"" | | 1 | "Avoid vague answers, Rory. They're usually hiding something." | | 2 | "\"Frames of reality,\"" | | 3 | "\"Don't those sound comfortable.\"" | | 4 | "\"Time,\"" | | 5 | "\"The most gluttonous thief of all.\"" | | 6 | "\"You see it too?\"" | | 7 | "\"Or a trap.\"" | | 8 | "in" | | 9 | "\"Show yourself,\"" | | 10 | "Old Ones" | | 11 | "\"He has gone seeking something,\"" | | 12 | "\"And something has answered.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 27 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 94 | | wordCount | 1664 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 2.28 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 38 | | Nyx | 12 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 26 | | Half | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Hel-bound | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Brecon | 1 | | Beacons | 1 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Half" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.358 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like stepping through a curtain of" | | 1 | "as if testing the air" | | 2 | "as if ticking with a rhythm she couldn't decipher" | | 3 | "sounded like a chorus of hushed voices" | | 4 | "purples that seemed to shift when observed indirectly" | | 5 | "something like recognition in the depths" | | 6 | "as if looking down a corridor of time" | | 7 | "as if reacting to a rhythm only they could hear" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1968 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 210 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 77 | | mean | 25.56 | | std | 17.36 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 73 | | 1 | 48 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 59 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 45 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 43 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 24 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 36 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 99.48% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 182 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was filled" | | 2 | "been obsessed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 29 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 21 | | totalSentences | 210 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "The first step across the threshold felt like stepping through a curtain of spider silk—thin, almost nonexistent, yet impossible to ignore." | | 1 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant at her throat with numb fingers—cool against her skin, pulsing faintly, as if ticking with a rhythm she couldn't decipher." | | 2 | "Isolde's bare feet didn't disturb the carpet of wildflowers—larkspur, foxgloves, snapdragons—all blooming in riotous profusion despite it being winter." | | 3 | "Movement caught her eye—a flicker of silver at the edge of vision." | | 4 | "Isolde began to walk, her steps silent, leaving no prints, her silver hair catching the pale light that filtered through the canopy in impossible beams—like light from a sun that wasn't there." | | 5 | "One moment they stood between two towering oaks whose trunks spiraled upward like DNA strands; the next they stood in a natural amphitheater of moss-covered stones, arranged in concentric rings that made Rory's temples throb if she stared too long." | | 6 | "Wildflowers continued to bloom in impossible colors—blues no dye could create, reds drenched in gold, purples that seemed to shift when observed indirectly." | | 7 | "When she lifted her hand, a tiny spark of light clung to her fingertips—brief as a firefly's glow—before fading." | | 8 | "The moment her fingers closed around it, the gemstone—deep crimson, the size of a thumbnail—flickered with a faint inner light." | | 9 | "Her expression didn't change—Half-Fae faces rarely shifted in obvious ways—but Rory thought she saw something like recognition in the depths." | | 10 | "Rory wanted to argue—to demand answers, to insist they unpack this nonsense about hearts and frames of reality—but the grove itself seemed to press in on her, insisting on silence." | | 11 | "Nyx floated—or walked, it was hard to tell—toward the edge of the mossy circle." | | 12 | "This time, when she brushed aside the wildflowers, Rory saw it—a stone basin half-buried in the earth, no larger than a washbasin, its rim worn smooth by centuries of unknown hands." | | 13 | "The water sculpture held for a breathless moment—pure crystal, flawless—and then dissolved back into stillness." | | 14 | "A cold breeze wound through the grove, carrying with it a scent of burnt sugar and something older—ozone and copper, like after a lightning strike." | | 15 | "Then she felt it—a prickling along the base of her skull, a warning she knew intimately." | | 16 | "Something moved in those shadows—subtle, fluid, almost liquid." | | 17 | "Her hand instinctively went to the dagger at her belt—the Fae-forged blade Isolde had given her weeks ago." | | 18 | "A whisper answered from the stone forest—half giggle, half sigh." | | 19 | "A sound cut through the grove—a single, clear note from a bell that shouldn't exist." | | 20 | "And Rory realized—with cold certainty—that the path they'd walked into the grove was no longer a path at all." |
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| 91.20% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1698 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 84 | | adverbRatio | 0.04946996466431095 | | lyAdverbCount | 35 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02061248527679623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 210 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 210 | | mean | 9.37 | | std | 7.62 | | cv | 0.813 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 32 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 40 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 42.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 16 | | diversityRatio | 0.2714285714285714 | | totalSentences | 210 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "Just leaves shifting." | | 1 | "Then it began to rise," | | 2 | "Then she nodded." | | 3 | "Then she felt it—a prickling" | | 4 | "Then she lifted the pendant," | | 5 | "Too many eyes." |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 1 | "She raised one slender hand," | | 2 | "she murmured, not looking back" | | 3 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 4 | "She blinked, and for a" | | 5 | "She rubbed her eyes." | | 6 | "She gestured vaguely ahead" | | 7 | "Her father's voice echoed in" | | 8 | "They're usually hiding something.* But" | | 9 | "She turned sharply, but it" | | 10 | "She knelt and brushed her" | | 11 | "She rose smoothly." | | 12 | "they echoed, voice like wind" | | 13 | "She reached into her jacket" | | 14 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 15 | "Her expression didn't change—Half—Fae faces" | | 16 | "She tilted her head" | | 17 | "She didn't like that implication." | | 18 | "She never asked for favors" | | 19 | "She focused on the pendant" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 27.86% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 121 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "The first step across the" | | 1 | "Rory's boot caught for half" | | 2 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 3 | "Isolde paused at the boundary," | | 4 | "She raised one slender hand," | | 5 | "she murmured, not looking back" | | 6 | "Rory glanced at Nyx beside" | | 7 | "The Shade stood very still," | | 8 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 9 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 10 | "She blinked, and for a" | | 11 | "She rubbed her eyes." | | 12 | "Isolde's bare feet didn't disturb" | | 13 | "Rory's sneakers left faint indentations" | | 14 | "Every breath she drew tasted" | | 15 | "Nyx's voice whispered through the" | | 16 | "The words drifted from nowhere" | | 17 | "Rory shoved her hands into" | | 18 | "Isolde turned finally, her pale" | | 19 | "She gestured vaguely ahead" |
| | ratio | 0.864 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 33.73% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory's boot caught for half a second on something that wasn't quite solid, like the membrane between one breath and the next in a crowded room." | | 1 | "She exhaled sharply, her breath curling in the air before dissipating too quickly, as if the very space here couldn't be bothered to hold mundane things." | | 2 | "The Shade stood very still, their form flickering between definition and smoke along the edges, violet eyes scanning depths that shouldn't exist between two oak…" | | 3 | "She touched the Heartstone pendant at her throat with numb fingers—cool against her skin, pulsing faintly, as if ticking with a rhythm she couldn't decipher." | | 4 | "The standing stones marked the perimeter, ancient and moss-covered, their surfaces carved with spirals that made Rory's eyes ache if she looked too long." | | 5 | "Isolde began to walk, her steps silent, leaving no prints, her silver hair catching the pale light that filtered through the canopy in impossible beams—like lig…" | | 6 | "One moment they stood between two towering oaks whose trunks spiraled upward like DNA strands; the next they stood in a natural amphitheater of moss-covered sto…" | | 7 | "Wildflowers continued to bloom in impossible colors—blues no dye could create, reds drenched in gold, purples that seemed to shift when observed indirectly." | | 8 | "Then it began to rise, forming a protrusion that elongated like a finger pointing toward something in the sky Rory couldn't see." | | 9 | "Nyx shifted beside her, their form solidifying fully, shadow arms elongating into claws." | | 10 | "Had dragged her to séances, tarot readings, that ill-fated trip to some hedge priest in the Brecon Beacons who'd claimed to commune with the *Old Ones*." |
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| 71.43% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 28 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "she murmured, not looking back at them" | | 1 | "Isolde clarified, her gaze distant" | | 2 | "Nyx interrupted, their voice closer than expected, almost at Rory's ear" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Isolde clarified (clarify)" | | 3 | "Isolde repeated (repeat)" | | 4 | "Nyx interrupted (interrupt)" | | 5 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 6 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 7 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 8 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 9 | "they observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 56 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.476 | | effectiveRatio | 0.357 | |