| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.244 | | leniency | 0.489 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.044 | |
| 70.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1016 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "tightly" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 55.71% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1016 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "tension" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "pounding" | | 7 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 93 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 127 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1005 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 754 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | French | 1 | | British | 1 | | True | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Lucien | 5 | | Eva | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.704 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like spices and old paper, but tod" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1005 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Hated that he" | | 1 | "knew that look" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 15.46 | | std | 14.28 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 33 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 127 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva’s flat always smelled like spices and old paper, but today it carried an extra layer—something metallic, like cut copper." | | 1 | "Just flat, British enunciation—sharp and clean." | | 2 | "Just watched her with that unblinking stare, one corner of his mouth twitching—whether in amusement or regret, she couldn’t tell." | | 3 | "Something about the way he stood there—still, composed, like he owned the air between them—rooted her to the spot." | | 4 | "From inside the flat, Ptolemy yowled—a sharp, demanding sound, like he’d sensed the tension." | | 5 | "His gaze flickered past her, into the flat, where Eva’s chaos lived—scrolls spilling off the sofa, a coffee cup ring on a stack of rare books, Ptolemy now visible, tail flicking as he observed them with disdain." | | 6 | "Between his fingers dangled a silver locket—small, intricately engraved, its clasp broken." | | 7 | "Fanatics who believed in restoring the old powers—by force." | | 8 | "But the way he stood there—unyielding, vulnerable in his own way—made her fingers twitch." |
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| 85.82% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 765 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 43 | | adverbRatio | 0.05620915032679739 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013071895424836602 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 127 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 127 | | mean | 7.91 | | std | 5.93 | | cv | 0.749 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 65.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.41732283464566927 | | totalSentences | 127 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Just flat, British enunciation—sharp and" | | 1 | "Just watched her with that" | | 2 | "Then he stepped back, just" | | 3 | "Then he turned, his polished" | | 4 | "Then the metallic edge." | | 5 | "Then she shut the door." |
| | ratio | 0.072 | |
| 70.60% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She froze, one foot still" | | 1 | "Her breath caught." | | 2 | "His heterochromatic gaze locked onto" | | 3 | "he murmured, no trace of" | | 4 | "She gripped the railing, knuckles" | | 5 | "She tilted her head, voice" | | 6 | "He exhaled through his nose," | | 7 | "She wanted to step forward," | | 8 | "He shifted his weight slightly," | | 9 | "His jaw tightened." | | 10 | "His lips pressed into a" | | 11 | "His eyes darkened." | | 12 | "She took a step back," | | 13 | "Her voice cracked" | | 14 | "She hated it." | | 15 | "He didn’t answer right away." | | 16 | "His gaze flickered past her," | | 17 | "He pulled his free hand" | | 18 | "She knew that look in" | | 19 | "It wasn’t something she’d seen" |
| | ratio | 0.373 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The door groaned open before" | | 1 | "She froze, one foot still" | | 2 | "Eva’s flat always smelled like" | | 3 | "Cinnamon and smoke." | | 4 | "Her breath caught." | | 5 | "Lucien stood in the doorway," | | 6 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 7 | "His heterochromatic gaze locked onto" | | 8 | "he murmured, no trace of" | | 9 | "Rory’s stomach dropped like she’d" | | 10 | "She gripped the railing, knuckles" | | 11 | "Lucien didn’t step back." | | 12 | "The word tasted bitter" | | 13 | "She tilted her head, voice" | | 14 | "He exhaled through his nose," | | 15 | "Rory’s fingers twitched at her" | | 16 | "She wanted to step forward," | | 17 | "Something about the way he" | | 18 | "He shifted his weight slightly," | | 19 | "His jaw tightened." |
| | ratio | 0.699 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Before she could call out," | | 1 | "To lock herself in." | | 2 | "To forget she’d ever met" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She tilted, voice low, dangerous" | | 1 | "He shifted, the cane making no sound against the worn carpet" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 45 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.089 | |