Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09NSEJ729WJ7DGJ0MVTCCA

Run Details

Duration:
14.4s
Cost:
$0.001023
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door groaned open before Rory’s knuckles could make contact with the wood again. She froze, one foot still on the stairs, the other on the landing. Eva’s flat always smelled like spices and old paper, but today it carried an extra layer—something metallic, like cut copper. Before she could call out, the scent shifted, softer, warmer. Cinnamon and smoke. Tobacco. Her breath caught. Lucien stood in the doorway, one hand resting against the frame, the other tucked deep in the pocket of his charcoal coat. The ivory handle of his cane glinted under the flickering bulb of the hallway light. His heterochromatic gaze locked onto hers, amber catching the dim glow like fire behind glass. “Surprise,” he murmured, no trace of his usual French accent sprinkled through. Just flat, British enunciation—sharp and clean. Rory’s stomach dropped like she’d missed a step on the stairs. She gripped the railing, knuckles whitening. “What the hell are you doing here?” Lucien didn’t step back. Didn’t smile. Just watched her with that unblinking stare, one corner of his mouth twitching—whether in amusement or regret, she couldn’t tell. “Eva told me you’d moved in. Figured I’d check on an old… acquaintance.” “Acquaintance.” The word tasted bitter. “Right. Just needed to see how the ex-client is doing.” “You were never just a client.” “No?” She tilted her head, voice low, dangerous. “Then what was I?” He exhaled through his nose, slow. “A complication.” Rory’s fingers twitched at her side. She wanted to step forward, to shove past him into the flat, to slam the door in his face. But she couldn’t move. Not yet. Something about the way he stood there—still, composed, like he owned the air between them—rooted her to the spot. “You could’ve called.” “I could have.” He shifted his weight slightly, the cane making no sound against the worn carpet. “But you don’t answer when I do.” True. She didn’t. Not since the job in Marseille. Not since the night he’d kissed her in a back alley while rain slicked down their coats and steam rose off cobblestones like ghosts. Not since she’d left without saying goodbye, not since she’d told herself it was for the best. “What do you want, Lucien?” His jaw tightened. Just once. “To know you’re safe.” Rory let out a short, disbelieving laugh. “You? Concerned about my safety? The man who sold information to the Blackthorn Cartel last month? The one who arms half the supernatural underworld in Whitechapel?” His lips pressed into a thin line. “Not all trades are clean.” “No. Some are just rot.” His eyes darkened. “You think I don’t know that?” The silence between them turned thick, suffocating. From inside the flat, Ptolemy yowled—a sharp, demanding sound, like he’d sensed the tension. Rory’s grip on the railing loosened. She took a step back, then another, until she could barely see Lucien through the gap. “I can’t do this. Not now. Not after everything.” “I know.” “Then why are you here?” Her voice cracked. She hated it. Hated that he made her feel raw, exposed. He didn’t answer right away. His gaze flickered past her, into the flat, where Eva’s chaos lived—scrolls spilling off the sofa, a coffee cup ring on a stack of rare books, Ptolemy now visible, tail flicking as he observed them with disdain. “Because I need your help.” Rory laughed again, sharper this time. “Help? From me? You’ve got half of London at your beck and call.” “Not for something like this.” “What’s it for?” “A name.” He pulled his free hand from his pocket. Between his fingers dangled a silver locket—small, intricately engraved, its clasp broken. “This belongs to someone who matters to me. Someone they took.” Rory’s chest tightened. She knew that look in his eyes. Desperation, thinly veiled. It wasn’t something she’d seen often. Never in him. “Who took them?” “Duskborn Syndicate.” She heard the capital S in his voice. Not just any thieves. A cult. Fanatics who believed in restoring the old powers—by force. “Why come to *me*?” “Because you’re the only one who ever found things no one else could.” His eyes locked onto hers. “And because you’re the only one I trust to burn the Syndicate down.” Rory exhaled sharply. “That’s not trust. That’s calculation.” “Maybe.” He held out the locket. It swung slightly, catching the light. “Take it. Or don’t. But the offer stands.” She didn’t reach for it. Inside, Ptolemy yowled again, louder now, edging closer to the door. Lucien’s gaze flicked toward the flat once more, then back to Rory. “You’re not alone in there. Good. I didn’t want to force entry.” “Force entry?” She scoffed. “You? Never.” He almost smiled. Almost. Then he stepped back, just a single pace, enough to give her space. The locket still dangled between them. Rory wanted to slam the door. To lock herself in. To forget she’d ever met him. But the way he stood there—unyielding, vulnerable in his own way—made her fingers twitch. She reached out. Took the locket. Its weight was heavier than it looked. Lucien’s breath seemed to leave him. “You’ll help?” “I’ll think about it.” “That’s all I ask.” She gripped the locket tightly, the cold metal biting into her palm. “Don’t call me again.” For a second, she thought he’d protest. That he’d argue. That he’d remind her of past debts, of favors owed. But he didn’t. “Understood,” he said softly. Then he turned, his polished shoes clicking against the stairs as he descended, coat swaying with each step. The scent of cinnamon and smoke faded first. Then the metallic edge. Until only the spice of Eva’s curry remained, still clinging to the air like a memory. Rory stood there, heart pounding, the broken locket burning in her grip. She waited until his footsteps disappeared down the stairs. Then she shut the door. But before she could lock the three deadbolts, Eva’s voice called from inside. “Who the *fuck* was that?” Rory leaned her forehead against the door, exhaling slowly. “A ghost,” she whispered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.244
leniency0.489
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.044
70.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"tightly"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"tension"
4"flickered"
5"flicked"
6"pounding"
7"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1005
ratio0.002
matches
0"me"
1"fuck"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount754
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.59
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
French1
British1
True1
Marseille1
Ptolemy3
Lucien5
Eva4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places
0"Marseille"
globalScore0.704
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like spices and old paper, but tod"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1005
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences127
matches
0"Hated that he"
1"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean15.46
std14.28
cv0.924
sampleLengths
061
13
252
318
424
539
615
76
812
98
1050
113
1224
1350
145
159
1633
1712
185
199
2021
2131
222
2319
2442
255
2619
275
283
2933
3022
313
322
3323
344
3531
368
3720
385
3911
4024
416
424
4313
446
4516
4614
473
483
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences127
ratio0.071
matches
0"Eva’s flat always smelled like spices and old paper, but today it carried an extra layer—something metallic, like cut copper."
1"Just flat, British enunciation—sharp and clean."
2"Just watched her with that unblinking stare, one corner of his mouth twitching—whether in amusement or regret, she couldn’t tell."
3"Something about the way he stood there—still, composed, like he owned the air between them—rooted her to the spot."
4"From inside the flat, Ptolemy yowled—a sharp, demanding sound, like he’d sensed the tension."
5"His gaze flickered past her, into the flat, where Eva’s chaos lived—scrolls spilling off the sofa, a coffee cup ring on a stack of rare books, Ptolemy now visible, tail flicking as he observed them with disdain."
6"Between his fingers dangled a silver locket—small, intricately engraved, its clasp broken."
7"Fanatics who believed in restoring the old powers—by force."
8"But the way he stood there—unyielding, vulnerable in his own way—made her fingers twitch."
85.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.05620915032679739
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013071895424836602
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean7.91
std5.93
cv0.749
sampleLengths
014
113
220
310
43
51
63
722
815
915
1012
116
1211
136
147
154
162
1720
1813
195
2010
216
228
234
246
252
266
2719
284
292
3019
313
3217
337
341
352
366
3724
3817
395
403
412
424
437
4426
457
465
475
483
496
65.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.41732283464566927
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences83
matches
0"Just flat, British enunciation—sharp and"
1"Just watched her with that"
2"Then he stepped back, just"
3"Then he turned, his polished"
4"Then the metallic edge."
5"Then she shut the door."
ratio0.072
70.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences83
matches
0"She froze, one foot still"
1"Her breath caught."
2"His heterochromatic gaze locked onto"
3"he murmured, no trace of"
4"She gripped the railing, knuckles"
5"She tilted her head, voice"
6"He exhaled through his nose,"
7"She wanted to step forward,"
8"He shifted his weight slightly,"
9"His jaw tightened."
10"His lips pressed into a"
11"His eyes darkened."
12"She took a step back,"
13"Her voice cracked"
14"She hated it."
15"He didn’t answer right away."
16"His gaze flickered past her,"
17"He pulled his free hand"
18"She knew that look in"
19"It wasn’t something she’d seen"
ratio0.373
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences83
matches
0"The door groaned open before"
1"She froze, one foot still"
2"Eva’s flat always smelled like"
3"Cinnamon and smoke."
4"Her breath caught."
5"Lucien stood in the doorway,"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"His heterochromatic gaze locked onto"
8"he murmured, no trace of"
9"Rory’s stomach dropped like she’d"
10"She gripped the railing, knuckles"
11"Lucien didn’t step back."
12"The word tasted bitter"
13"She tilted her head, voice"
14"He exhaled through his nose,"
15"Rory’s fingers twitched at her"
16"She wanted to step forward,"
17"Something about the way he"
18"He shifted his weight slightly,"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.699
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences83
matches
0"Before she could call out,"
1"To lock herself in."
2"To forget she’d ever met"
ratio0.036
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She tilted, voice low, dangerous"
1"He shifted, the cane making no sound against the worn carpet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.089
88.4244%