| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 914 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.35% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 914 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "loomed" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "glistening" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "raced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 112 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 23 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 27 | | totalWords | 900 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "Just get the damn job done." | | 1 | "Something’s wrong with the stones. The pendant’ll help. Hurry." | | 2 | "moved" | | 3 | "wrong" | | 4 | "unfurled" | | 5 | "hands" | | 6 | "split" | | 7 | "Names work in stories. They trap things." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 17 | | wordCount | 875 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.26 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Rory | 11 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.871 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite words, like someone dragging fingernails across a windowpane" | | 1 | "quite touch the ground, just hovered a few inches above the grass, disturbing the frost in a slow-motion circle" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 2.222 | | wordCount | 900 | | matches | | 0 | "Not enough to notice, not enough to scream, but enough to know something wasn’t right" | | 1 | "not enough to scream, but enough to know something wasn’t right" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 20.93 | | std | 16.65 | | cv | 0.795 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 30 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 52 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 28 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 42 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 1 |
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| 95.86% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was *unfurled" | | 2 | "were clasped" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.112 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like overripe fruit left to rot in the dark." | | 1 | "A mistake—must’ve been a mistake." | | 2 | "A gust of wind cut through the branches, and for a second, the Grove didn’t just feel wrong—it *moved*." | | 3 | "Then back—closer." | | 4 | "It pulsed again—stronger now." | | 5 | "It had the rough outline of a person—head, torso, limbs—but the proportions made her stomach twist." | | 6 | "A wet sound came from its throat—part growl, part gurgle." | | 7 | "Rory barely had time to flinch before it was on her, hands—*hands*—gripping her arms with cold that burned worse than frostbite." | | 8 | "A foot, maybe, but the texture was wrong—soft, yielding, like treading on old mushroom." | | 9 | "Behind her, the thing made a sound like tearing silk—angry, hurt." | | 10 | "But this one wore a dress—or what used to be one." | | 11 | "The moonlight fell on its face—or what should’ve been a face." | | 12 | "The vertical mouth split wider—just a little—and a sound leaked out." |
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| 96.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 892 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.043721973094170405 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004484304932735426 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 7.76 | | std | 5.24 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 49.71% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3448275862068966 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "*Just get the damn job" | | 1 | "Just a dull, stubborn warmth." | | 2 | "Maybe she could circle back" | | 3 | "Maybe Eva’s bar was closer" |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "It pulsed once, sharp and" | | 2 | "She counted five instead of" | | 3 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 4 | "Her breath hitched." | | 5 | "She turned slowly, boots angled" | | 6 | "She crouched, pulling the Heartstone" | | 7 | "She spun, hand flying to" | | 8 | "Its form rippled like heat" | | 9 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 10 | "It pulsed again—stronger now." | | 11 | "It had the rough outline" | | 12 | "Its arms hung too long," | | 13 | "It tilted its head." | | 14 | "Its feet didn’t quite touch" | | 15 | "It was *unfurled*, like a" | | 16 | "Its mouth opened." | | 17 | "She yanked her arms back," | | 18 | "It staggered, just for a" | | 19 | "Her breath came in ragged" |
| | ratio | 0.278 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 72 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The full moon hung low" | | 1 | "Rory stepped off the worn" | | 2 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "It pulsed once, sharp and" | | 5 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 6 | "She counted five instead of" | | 7 | "A mistake—must’ve been a mistake." | | 8 | "The stone near the center" | | 9 | "She wasn’t supposed to be" | | 10 | "The pendant’ll help." | | 11 | "The first sound hit her" | | 12 | "A wet crunch." | | 13 | "Footsteps in the grass, too" | | 14 | "Her breath hitched." | | 15 | "She turned slowly, boots angled" | | 16 | "A gust of wind cut" | | 17 | "A shudder ran through the" | | 18 | "The trees leaned in." | | 19 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Now just a smooth, featureless" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 90.59% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone near the center had a fresh gouge, deep and jagged, as if something had clawed its way out." | | 1 | "Hurry.* And now Rory stood where she shouldn’t, under a sky that felt too small, too close." | | 2 | "A *split*, vertical and glistening, lined with needle teeth that dripped something dark and thick." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory repeated, voice steady," |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |