| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1509 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.55% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1509 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "scanning" | | 3 | "throbbed" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.07% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "started to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 164 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1509 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1476 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Rory | 13 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a victory of its own" | | 1 | "not quite make out" |
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| 67.46% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.325 | | wordCount | 1509 | | matches | | 0 | "not on the screen but behind the glass, standing with its mouth open" | | 1 | "not with ripples but with a slow turning, as if something beneath the slab rolled" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 81 | | mean | 18.63 | | std | 17.59 | | cv | 0.944 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 74 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 31 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 32 | | 43 | 40 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 36 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 230 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 164 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.11% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1478 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.04330175913396482 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008119079837618403 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 164 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 164 | | mean | 9.2 | | std | 7.5 | | cv | 0.815 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 43 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 39.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 17 | | diversityRatio | 0.2857142857142857 | | totalSentences | 161 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Just different, as if she" | | 1 | "Then several at once, though" | | 2 | "Then another branch answered somewhere" | | 3 | "Only black water remained, holding" | | 4 | "Somewhere in the trees, something" | | 5 | "Even the water on the" | | 6 | "Then another, higher up in" | | 7 | "Just breath dragged over leaves." |
| | ratio | 0.06 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "She pinched it through her" | | 1 | "They rose out of the" | | 2 | "Her phone had lost signal" | | 3 | "Her voice came out too" | | 4 | "She stepped inside the circle." | | 5 | "She moved deeper between the" | | 6 | "Their heads turned with her," | | 7 | "She spun, scanning the dark" | | 8 | "Her breath smoked in front" | | 9 | "She listened until her ears" | | 10 | "she told the dark" | | 11 | "She crouched, careful not to" | | 12 | "Her own reflection looked back" | | 13 | "She drew back fast enough" | | 14 | "Her pendant throbbed against her" | | 15 | "She looked around the bowl." | | 16 | "She knew it had because" | | 17 | "She had not heard anything" | | 18 | "She had not looked away" | | 19 | "She said it to the" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 35.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory crossed the last stretch" | | 1 | "Richmond Park had gone black" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant lay cold" | | 3 | "She pinched it through her" | | 4 | "They rose out of the" | | 5 | "Moss thickened their bases." | | 6 | "Lichen webbed across the dark" | | 7 | "Wildflowers pushed up in careless" | | 8 | "Her phone had lost signal" | | 9 | "The screen gave her her" | | 10 | "The time blinked 1:17." | | 11 | "Her voice came out too" | | 12 | "The trees took it and" | | 13 | "She stepped inside the circle." | | 14 | "The air changed first." | | 15 | "The pendant shifted against her" | | 16 | "Rory stopped and pressed a" | | 17 | "Warmth seeped through her fingers" | | 18 | "Another one answered from somewhere" | | 19 | "The grove did not answer." |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Just different, as if she had walked from one room into another where someone had opened a window hours ago and let the smells settle: wet bark, crushed stems, …" | | 1 | "Heat burned up from the crimson gem, bright and sudden, and the chain tightened against her neck as if something on the far side had taken hold of it." | | 2 | "The water had begun to move again, not with ripples but with a slow turning, as if something beneath the slab rolled over in its sleep." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |