Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09W62V1936X4JRJZP803GZ

Run Details

Duration:
31.6s
Cost:
$0.007859
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The platform underneath Camden felt wrong in a way Harlow Quinn couldn’t file into any report form she’d ever used. Dust sat in thin coats on the tiled walls, but the lamps along the tracks burned with a steady amber glow. The abandoned Tube station held its breath between groans of old concrete, like it listened for instructions. Harlow walked with military precision anyway. Her boots landed on cracked concrete with the same count every time. Her left wrist wore a worn leather watch, the band creased from years of being tightened against stress. Eva Kowalski kept pace beside her, a satchel slung low at her hip. Curly red hair bounced with each step; her fingers kept disappearing behind her left ear, tucking and untucking like she had to press the world into place. A man in a hood met them at the far end of the platform. He lifted his chin at the bone token in Harlow’s palm, then at her face, then away again. “Keep your cuffs on,” he muttered. “No dragging things across the sigils.” Harlow didn’t ask which sigils. She’d clocked the brass markings half-sunk into the floor, etched into the stone in rings and short lines that looked like someone had tried to spell protection using a compass rather than a pen. She lifted a latex-gloved hand. “I’ll bag evidence without touching the ground.” The hooded man’s mouth twitched, more irritation than humour. “That’s the story you’re telling yourself.” Eva angled toward Harlow as they passed. “Bone token held?” Harlow’s fingers closed around the token. “It got me in.” Eva’s gaze slid to the nearest stall, a collapsed canvas canopy with drawers made of warped wood and metal scraps. “It always gets you in. It doesn’t always get you back out with your answers.” Harlow didn’t take the bait. She spotted the body before the smell fully reached her. A body sat near the centre of the platform where the rails converged under a patch of brighter light. The corpse lay on its side with its head tilted back. There wasn’t the mess she expected from a struggle; the clothing looked arranged, the jaw set in a posture someone had checked and corrected. The victim’s hands rested flat against the concrete as if they’d been guided into stillness. Around the body, the brass sigil rings on the floor formed a neat halo, their lines clean and unbroken. “Who’s that?” Harlow asked, already stepping closer. Eva shifted her weight, satchel strap creaking. “A broker. Someone who sold routes, keys, and shortcuts. He came here two days ago.” Harlow crouched at the victim’s shoulder without letting her knee scrape a sigil line. She didn’t touch at first. Her eyes ran over details like bullets finding a target. The victim’s coat had been buttoned—every button fastened with care. A smear of dark staining marked the cuff at the wrist, but it stopped in a straight edge, as if someone had laid a cloth under it and pressed down. Blood shouldn’t behave like fabric. Her gaze caught the right pocket: a bone token lay inside, half-covered by a folded handkerchief. The token bore fresh shallow scratches along one edge, like a blade had worried it. Harlow’s voice dropped. “He still had a token.” Eva leaned in just enough that her curls brushed Harlow’s shoulder. “Not his. The token in your hand isn’t for him. It never is.” Harlow looked at her. “So why’s that one scratched?” Eva’s fingers hovered over the victim’s coat without landing. “Rubbing. Testing. Opening a route. People do it when they don’t want to waste a full moon getting the market to listen.” Harlow moved her attention to the face. The victim’s eyes had gone dull. The mouth wore the same controlled angle the hands did. She watched her own breath fog the air inside her hooded visor and then cleared her mind like a checklist. “Cause of death,” Harlow said, “should leave evidence consistent with the scene.” Eva’s mouth tightened. “Or it leaves evidence consistent with a lie.” Harlow finally touched the victim’s wrist with the pad of her gloved thumb, just long enough to feel the stiffness. She lifted her hand away. The cuff stain clung to her skin like a cheap threat. She examined the staining edge. It didn’t feather. It lined up. “Someone wiped him,” Harlow said. Eva looked down at the victim’s hands. “Or someone placed him after death.” “Placement doesn’t explain the blood’s stop line,” Harlow replied. “That’s not post-mortem. That’s interference.” The lamps flickered once as if the station approved or disapproved. Eva glanced toward the far wall where a doorway had been carved into brick that should have been solid. The doorway held no frame—just a rectangle of air with an outline made of faint light, like heat haze given a border. “There’s still a rift,” Eva said quietly. “Do you see the shimmer at the edges?” Harlow followed her gaze. The doorway shimmered, but the tiles around it stayed unchanged—no soot burn, no melted grout, no smoke damage. The station wore the rift like a sticker. “That doorway’s new,” Harlow said. Eva nodded, then cut in. “New or maintained. The market moved when it should’ve moved. Someone needed it in Camden under the full moon cycle to keep the rift accessible.” Harlow’s eyes returned to the body. “Time of death doesn’t line up with access requirements.” Eva bristled. “Access requirements don’t work like your paperwork. The market slides. The rules slide with it.” Harlow’s watch hand ticked forward. She checked the minute, then the hour, then the angle of the victim’s wrist on the concrete. She stood carefully, making sure she didn’t step across any of the brass lines. “Your interpretation,” Harlow said to Eva, “assumes the murder happened after entry into the market.” Eva’s shoulders drew back. “That’s what it looks like.” Harlow walked two steps toward the rails, crouched again, and traced the direction of scuff marks on the concrete near the victim’s left boot. The scuffs ran in a curve, like a dragging motion stopped and started. She compared the scuff direction against the halo’s rings. The scuffs didn’t cross the halo. They approached it and then stopped at the edge. Someone had brought the body into the ring and then placed it without dragging it across the protective sigils. Harlow stood and turned to Eva. “Tell me about the protective circles,” she said. Eva’s nervous habit surged—her left hand tucked her hair behind her ear so fast it almost yanked. “Sigils lock the space. Keeps rift energy from feeding on what’s inside. It’s a ward.” “Then why does the victim lie inside it?” Harlow asked. Eva stared at the halo as if it had answered too late. “To contain the damage.” Harlow’s jaw tightened. “Or to make the damage look contained.” She moved back to the victim’s chest and leaned close, eyes tracking seams in the coat. Something hard sat under the fabric, pushing up in the shape of an object. Harlow didn’t unbutton the coat yet. She listened with her gaze, following the contour of the lump. Eva watched her hands hover. “Don’t you dare rip through sigils.” “I’m not ripping,” Harlow said. “I’m reading.” She pressed her gloved fingertips lightly at the edge of the lump, enough to feel where the fabric resisted. The shape held a circular face. Harlow unbuttoned the coat carefully, keeping her thumb from dragging across the brass rings. Under the cloth sat a small brass compass with verdigris staining at the casing edges. Etched sigils covered its face plate in delicate lines, like protective script laid over metal. The casing still looked polished, too clean for an object used under ground markets. Harlow lifted it with two fingers. The compass felt heavier than its size suggested. Eva’s voice came out thin. “The Veil Compass.” Harlow rotated it so the face markings faced up. The etched sigils caught the amber light and threw it back in a dull sheen. The needle pointed toward the rift doorway. Harlow didn’t react. She held it steady, waited for the needle’s motion to settle, and then lowered it toward the concrete beside the victim’s hand without touching the brass. “Who handled this?” she asked. Eva leaned in. “Shade artisans craft them. Market buyers trade them for directions. People treat them like truth.” Harlow lifted the compass again and angled it toward the victim’s wrist. The needle quivered, then snapped and held. It pointed not toward the doorway, but toward the place where the victim’s hand rested. Harlow’s eyes narrowed. She brought the compass closer to the victim’s palm, still keeping it in the air. The needle shifted and held again, locked toward the victim’s hand as if the energy drew from within the body. Eva’s lips parted. “It’s tuned to a rift nearest the compass.” Harlow looked at her. “Nearest to what?” Eva shook her head once, curls bouncing. “To the supernatural energy in the room.” Harlow turned the compass a quarter turn in her grip. The needle kept pointing with stubborn consistency. It didn’t track the air. It tracked a source. She lowered the compass and spotted it immediately. Under the victim’s right palm, a thin sheet of something dark lay on the concrete. It blended with the stone in shadow, but the amber light caught the surface sheen. Harlow slid a swab beside it and lifted the edge with a gloved fingertip, careful not to touch the brass halo ring. The swab scraped up a smear that smelled like burnt pepper and old metal. Eva inhaled sharply. “That’s—” “Alchemical residue,” Harlow finished. Her voice stayed level. “Banned in this country for a reason.” Eva’s face tightened in a grimace that didn’t reach her eyes. “Quinn. Don’t say things like that like it makes them less real.” Harlow looked up. “It makes them measurable.” Eva stepped closer, then checked herself, eyes flicking to the brass rings. “So what did you see? What doesn’t add up?” Harlow held the swab up at eye level. The smear clung in a thin film, not dried into flakes. It still looked fresh. Fresh residue inside a ring meant to contain rift energy. Harlow set the swab into a specimen bag and sealed it with a snap that cut through the station’s quiet. “The blood on the cuff stops in a straight line,” she said. “Someone wiped the victim’s wrist or staged a bleed container.” Eva’s gaze dropped to the victim’s hands again. “So the blood doesn’t match the story.” “Exactly.” Harlow stepped toward the victim’s left boot and crouched. She traced the sole edge with her eyes. Mud clung near the toe, but it came from nowhere on this platform. Camden had rain and grit, but the platform tiles didn’t show corresponding smear trails leading here. She checked the concrete behind the boot. The dirt didn’t spread. It sat as if it belonged to a different surface. Harlow stood and walked to the edge of the halo, where one of the brass lines broke under a tiny chip in the stone. She pointed with a gloved finger. “This sigil line breaks.” Eva leaned down. “Cracked from weight.” Harlow shook her head. “Not cracked. Chipped. See the edge. It’s sharp.” She reached into her kit and pulled a small magnifier. The chip’s interior held a faint greenish dust. Verdigris. Eva stared. “The compass casing—” Harlow nodded without taking her eyes from the chip. “Someone let the Veil Compass fall or scrape the ground. That dust got into a place it shouldn’t.” Eva straightened slowly. “Unless the compass scraped a different spot before it ended up here.” Harlow turned the compass in her hand one more time, watching the needle react to the station’s shimmer. It pointed toward the rift doorway, then drifted toward the victim’s palm again, then settled. Three pulls. One source. Two directions staged. She faced Eva. “Who sold this compass?” Eva’s mouth worked, then she closed it. The corners of her eyes tightened like she wanted to squeeze words out without giving away too much. “People don’t sell it like a necklace,” Eva said. “They use it, lose it, then sell what the needle told them. But if you found it here with residue and a staged bleed, someone wanted the needle to lead you into the wrong story.” Harlow’s eyes moved over the halo rings again. The circle lay clean except for that chipped line. Someone had damaged the ward. A ward that contained rift energy. Harlow stepped back toward the body and looked at the rift doorway across the platform. The air outline stayed stable. No expanding bloom. No hungry stretch. Harlow spoke like she set an equation down on a bench. “The rift didn’t open in this moment,” she said. “It already existed, maintained at a low feed.” Eva frowned. “That would still kill him.” “Low feed can drain people,” Harlow agreed. “But it doesn’t fix the scene into a perfect tableau. It doesn’t stop blood like an instrument.” Eva moved her gaze to the bone token in the victim’s pocket. “The scratched token.” Harlow walked to the victim’s torso, unhooked the handkerchief with her thumb, and slid the bone token out. She turned it under the light. The scratches ran in shallow arcs, but the pattern wasn’t random. It formed partial letters, like someone had traced a sigil outline on the surface and then erased parts to remove evidence. Harlow’s throat tightened. “This token carries protective marks.” Eva leaned in. “That’s why it got him into the market. Bone tokens can hold wards for entry, then release later.” Harlow held the token at an angle. The scratches weren’t deep enough to cut bones. They looked like metal had danced over the surface—something precise, not hurried. “A detective’s patience lasts longer than a murderer’s,” Harlow murmured. It sounded like a memory more than a statement. Eva went still. “You thought about Morris.” Harlow didn’t look at her. Her eyes tracked a faint line at the base of the victim’s neck. A mark sat under the collar: a thin crescent that looked like a thumbprint pressed into fabric, except it didn’t belong on skin. It looked like it pressed from the inside. Harlow spoke without turning. “Supernatural cases don’t leave bruises like regular fights. They leave contact marks in the wrong places.” Eva’s voice sharpened. “You’re saying he got folded into the scene.” “I’m saying someone used the rift without letting it fully show,” Harlow replied. “They contained it, guided energy into a source, and timed the body presentation to match what the Veil Compass would tell us.” Eva swallowed. “You still think the compass needle lied.” “I think the needle pointed true,” Harlow said. “Someone arranged the nearest source so the needle would aim at a body like bait.” Eva’s eyes flicked to the dark smear under the victim’s palm. “And they wanted you to find the residue.” Harlow took a slow breath and then moved fast. She pulled on a fresh pair of gloves and lifted the victim’s left hand with careful leverage, keeping pressure away from the brass halo. Under the palm rested a second thin layer of residue—less obvious, almost washed out. Harlow held the hand up and angled it toward the rift doorway. The needle on the Veil Compass quivered. It swung toward that hidden source. Then it snapped back toward the doorway, like the energy offered two competing directions and then forced a decision. Harlow set the compass down on a clean patch of concrete outside the halo. The needle settled toward the doorway and held. Eva watched it, jaw set. “Then the rift doorway really sat close.” Harlow shook her head. “It sat close on the compass’s first query. After it reacted to what I found, it returned to a steadier pull. That means the bait source existed for a moment, then faded.” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “So the maker wanted you to arrive after the fade.” Harlow stood and scanned the station. Her gaze caught small details that had stayed invisible while she worked the body: a brass hinge mark on a stall drawer, like something had opened and shut recently; a smear of greenish dust on a step; the clean edges of a dirt patch near the doorway. Someone moved here with a compass and a plan. Someone set the ward to contain the real rift, then cracked one line to let just enough energy drift. Harlow reached into her kit and pulled her notebook out. She didn’t write yet. She held it up like a shield. “Who else came in with bone tokens?” she asked. Eva’s fingers tightened on her satchel strap. “You don’t want the answer.” “I wanted the list,” Harlow said. “Now I’ll take the gaps.” Eva’s lips pressed together. “There’s a clique.” Harlow’s eyes didn’t soften. “Tell me their routes through this station. Who moves where. Who had time to break a sigil line without leaving more damage.” Eva’s gaze went past Harlow to the doorway. “They call themselves different things. Tonight they felt… organised.” Harlow took a step toward the crack in the ward line she’d spotted earlier and crouched again. The verdigris dust sat in a tiny crescent on the concrete, not spread like a topple. It looked deposited by contact rather than impact. Harlow looked up at Eva. “Someone brushed the compass against the ward.” Eva flinched. “To redirect it?” “To mark it,” Harlow corrected. “To tell the compass what counted as nearest. The compass wanted a rift or portal. They used a residue that acted like one.” Eva’s breath came out in a shaky line. “That’s not how normal alchemy works.” “No,” Harlow said. “This looks like someone used rift residue as a binding agent and then erased their own trail once the binding did its job.” She straightened, boots thudding softly on stone. “Evidence doesn’t add up,” Eva said, but her tone didn’t carry question. It carried relief at hearing Harlow confirm what she’d been holding back. Harlow looked down at the Veil Compass sitting outside the halo on its clean patch. The needle pointed toward the doorway now, steady and calm like it had made peace with the world. Harlow picked it up again and held it close to the brass sigil crack. The needle spun once, resisted, then snapped back—toward the doorway. Harlow nodded to herself, a small movement that belonged to her spine more than her face. “Clever,” Eva whispered. “They broke the ward line near the compass trace so the needle would keep pointing where they needed you to walk.” Harlow met her eyes. “And they staged the blood to make a physical attack look like a rift feeding.” Eva’s hands trembled once at her sides. She didn’t tuck her hair back this time. “Then you’ll arrest who?” Eva asked. “The person who made the residue? The broker who died? Or the market itself?” Harlow closed her gloved fingers around the compass and checked her watch again. “Police don’t arrest a location,” she said. “They arrest the people who treat it like one.” Eva’s gaze sharpened. “Who?” Harlow looked around the abandoned platform. She found the answer in the smallest mismatch: the hooded man had stood too far from the body, close enough to watch, far enough to claim ignorance. His shoes showed no mud, no green dust. He moved like someone who’d read the sigil map before arriving. Harlow stood and turned her head toward him. The hooded man lifted his chin. His eyes refused to land on the Veil Compass. Harlow held the compass up slightly, letting the amber light strike the protective sigil etchings on its casing. The needle pointed at the doorway again. Not at the body. Not at Eva. At the gap in the brick where air looked cut from stone. The hooded man’s stare flicked toward the doorway in the exact rhythm of someone performing familiarity. Harlow didn’t accuse him with words. She let her actions take the lead. She stepped toward him and stopped just short of the chalky floor dust that marked the ward’s edge. “Your ring stayed intact until the compass brushed it,” she said. “You stepped near the contact point. Your boots didn’t pick up verdigris.” The hooded man’s shoulders tightened. “If you want to blame the market—” “I don’t blame,” Harlow cut in. She lifted her notebook and tapped the page with one gloved finger. “I match. You had a token. You kept people away from the ward. You stood where you could see the Veil Compass when it settled.” Eva stepped in beside Harlow, voice steadier than her face. “And you didn’t look at the residue under the victim’s palm until Quinn pointed it out.” The hooded man’s eyes slid to Eva, then away. “What did you think you were protecting?” Harlow asked. “The rift? Or the people who paid for it?” The hooded man’s jaw worked. He didn’t answer straight. Instead, he nodded once toward the doorway in the brick. “You found what you found. Now you should leave before the market moves.” Harlow watched the man’s mouth and the way his hands stayed near his pockets without opening them. She watched the way his voice carried a rehearsed tempo. “No one moved me to this station,” she said. “I followed a report. Someone else used the report to bring me to this body.” Eva’s fingers tightened around her satchel strap until knuckles paleened. “Who sent you.” Harlow didn’t take her eyes off the hooded man. “A call from a man who said my partner’s name,” she said. “He didn’t know my partner’s name. You didn’t either, not until it fit your timing.” Eva sucked in a breath. Her gaze flickered to Harlow’s watch, then back to the man. The hooded man swallowed. “You’re talking like—” Harlow cut him off with the plain weight of certainty. “Like you want a supernatural story because it moves blame off you. Like you want me to stop at ‘the market did it.’” She reached down, scooped the sealed swab bag from her kit, and held it where he could see the label. “This residue doesn’t come from the rift doorway alone,” she said. “It came from the bait inside the halo. You broke the ward line to make the compass mislead.” Eva’s voice landed on the last word like a door closing. “So you controlled where she looked.” The hooded man stared at Harlow’s hands, at the compass, at the bag. His expression shifted—strain, then anger, then that tight stillness that lived in people who decided violence served as a shortcut. “Get out,” he snapped. Harlow didn’t move back. She slid her notebook into her kit and drew her radio close enough to hold it ready. “Not until I photograph the ward damage,” she said. “Not until I log who entered with a bone token and who stood within ten paces of the trace point.” Eva lifted her chin toward the doorway. “And not until you answer one more thing.” The hooded man’s glare sharpened at Eva. Eva spoke as she reached into her satchel and pulled out a thin notebook of her own, pages filled with cramped notes and sketched sigils. She held it open without showing the whole sheet at once, just enough for Harlow to see the column heading. “Which Shade artisan taught you to fake a Veil Compass settling?” Eva asked. Silence stretched tight. The amber lamps kept burning. The hooded man’s eyes didn’t flick to the rift. They stayed on Eva’s notebook, on the word she’d written at the top, like it carried a name he couldn’t afford to confirm. Harlow watched him, patient in her own way. Her watch ticked. The compass needle pointed at the doorway. When the hooded man spoke again, his voice lost the rehearsed tempo and caught on something real. “You don’t get to ask that here,” he said. Harlow lowered her radio a fraction, just enough to show she heard him. “I already asked,” she replied. “Now I waited for you to answer.” The hooded man’s hand moved toward his pocket. Harlow’s glove followed, fast and controlled. She didn’t tackle him. She trapped his wrist with two firm fingers, careful of the station’s brass lines as if the metal could bite. Eva’s gaze snapped down to the man’s pocket and then up to his face. “There,” she said, voice hard. “That’s a token. Another one.” The hooded man jerked, fighting the restraint. His eyes flashed, and his mouth opened— —and then the amber lamps all dipped at once, as if the station counted down to movement. The rift doorway brightened at its edges, the shimmer tightening into something that looked like a drawn breath. Harlow held the wrist anyway. She kept the man in place long enough to read his pocket’s outline through fabric. The hooded man’s panic arrived a half-second late. The market’s light served him first. The evidence served Harlow right after.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags40
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.301
leniency0.602
rawRatio0.025
effectiveRatio0.015
90.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4174
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"lightly"
2"sharply"
3"slowly"
4"really"
5"softly"
6"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4174
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"etched"
count3
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"traced"
count3
5
word"quivered"
count2
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"shimmered"
4"traced"
5"quivered"
6"perfect"
7"flicked"
8"scanned"
9"trembled"
10"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences321
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences321
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences413
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4167
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions53
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions172
wordCount2996
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.2
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Harlow96
Quinn1
Tube1
Kowalski1
Eva64
Veil3
Compass3
Silence1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Compass"
6"Silence"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0
windowScore0
65.05% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences206
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"looked like someone had tried to spell pr"
1"smelled like burnt pepper and old metal"
2"looked like metal had danced over the sur"
3"sounded like a memory more than a statemen"
4"looked like a thumbprint pressed into fab"
5"looked like it pressed from the inside"
6"looked like a drawn breath"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.24
wordCount4167
matches
0"not toward the doorway, but toward the place"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences413
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs224
mean18.6
std10.32
cv0.555
sampleLengths
020
138
236
340
432
512
639
712
815
910
1010
1135
1215
1354
1434
157
1622
1729
1840
195
2031
218
2224
239
2431
2523
2620
2712
2811
2936
3011
315
3213
3314
3411
3541
3615
3730
385
3930
4015
4117
4222
4314
4415
459
4637
479
4815
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences321
matches
0"being tightened"
1"been guided"
2"been buttoned"
3"been carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs589
matches(empty)
52.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences413
ratio0.031
matches
0"Curly red hair bounced with each step; her fingers kept disappearing behind her left ear, tucking and untucking like she had to press the world into place."
1"There wasn’t the mess she expected from a struggle; the clothing looked arranged, the jaw set in a posture someone had checked and corrected."
2"The victim’s coat had been buttoned—every button fastened with care."
3"The doorway held no frame—just a rectangle of air with an outline made of faint light, like heat haze given a border."
4"The doorway shimmered, but the tiles around it stayed unchanged—no soot burn, no melted grout, no smoke damage."
5"Eva’s nervous habit surged—her left hand tucked her hair behind her ear so fast it almost yanked."
6"They looked like metal had danced over the surface—something precise, not hurried."
7"Under the palm rested a second thin layer of residue—less obvious, almost washed out."
8"Her gaze caught small details that had stayed invisible while she worked the body: a brass hinge mark on a stall drawer, like something had opened and shut recently; a smear of greenish dust on a step; the clean edges of a dirt patch near the doorway."
9"The needle spun once, resisted, then snapped back—toward the doorway."
10"His expression shifted—strain, then anger, then that tight stillness that lived in people who decided violence served as a shortcut."
11"His eyes flashed, and his mouth opened—"
12"—and then the amber lamps all dipped at once, as if the station counted down to movement."
98.04% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount3007
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount127
adverbRatio0.042234785500498834
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.004323245759893582
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences413
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences413
mean10.09
std6.49
cv0.643
sampleLengths
020
121
217
36
412
518
613
727
814
918
106
116
125
1334
145
157
169
176
187
193
206
214
2220
2315
245
2510
2619
2711
2824
2915
3019
317
327
3315
3414
355
3610
3710
3830
395
4016
4115
423
435
4411
4513
464
475
489
4922
44.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.18401937046004843
totalSentences413
uniqueOpeners76
23.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences279
matches
0"Then it snapped back toward"
1"Instead, he nodded once toward"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount73
totalSentences279
matches
0"Her boots landed on cracked"
1"Her left wrist wore a"
2"He lifted his chin at"
3"She’d clocked the brass markings"
4"She lifted a latex-gloved hand."
5"She spotted the body before"
6"She didn’t touch at first."
7"Her eyes ran over details"
8"Her gaze caught the right"
9"She watched her own breath"
10"She lifted her hand away."
11"She examined the staining edge."
12"It didn’t feather."
13"It lined up."
14"She checked the minute, then"
15"She stood carefully, making sure"
16"She compared the scuff direction"
17"They approached it and then"
18"She moved back to the"
19"She listened with her gaze,"
ratio0.262
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount261
totalSentences279
matches
0"The platform underneath Camden felt"
1"Dust sat in thin coats"
2"The abandoned Tube station held"
3"Harlow walked with military precision"
4"Her boots landed on cracked"
5"Her left wrist wore a"
6"Eva Kowalski kept pace beside"
7"A man in a hood"
8"He lifted his chin at"
9"Harlow didn’t ask which sigils."
10"She’d clocked the brass markings"
11"She lifted a latex-gloved hand."
12"The hooded man’s mouth twitched,"
13"Eva angled toward Harlow as"
14"Harlow’s fingers closed around the"
15"Eva’s gaze slid to the"
16"Harlow didn’t take the bait."
17"She spotted the body before"
18"A body sat near the"
19"The corpse lay on its"
ratio0.935
17.92% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences279
matches
0"—and then the amber lamps"
ratio0.004
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences127
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She’d clocked the brass markings half-sunk into the floor, etched into the stone in rings and short lines that looked like someone had tried to spell protection…"
1"Eva’s face tightened in a grimace that didn’t reach her eyes."
2"Her gaze caught small details that had stayed invisible while she worked the body: a brass hinge mark on a stall drawer, like something had opened and shut rece…"
3"Harlow nodded to herself, a small movement that belonged to her spine more than her face."
4"The rift doorway brightened at its edges, the shimmer tightening into something that looked like a drawn breath."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, but her tone didn’t carry question"
1"she said, voice hard"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags38
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
1"Harlow agreed (agree)"
2"Harlow murmured (murmur)"
3"Harlow corrected (correct)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
5"he snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences133
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.09
82.2988%