| 80.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said simply [simply]" | | 1 | "he said softly [softly]" | | 2 | "she gestured wildly [wildly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.12 | |
| 93.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1518 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1518 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "gleaming" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "could feel" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "traced" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach knotted" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 9 | | markdownWords | 38 | | totalWords | 1509 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "R" | | 1 | "real" | | 2 | "flat" | | 3 | "not" | | 4 | "not" | | 5 | "not" | | 6 | "talk" | | 7 | "Jennifer Ellis" | | 8 | "Brendan doesn’t know I’m writing this. But I need to remember. The dreams are back. The ones where the sky splits open and something watches from the other side." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "In the silence, Lucien spoke again, voice softer." |
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| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1127 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.33 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 11 | | Moreau | 1 | | Soho | 2 | | Didn | 2 | | Lucien | 10 | | Rory | 15 | | Parisian | 1 | | Heat | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Wales | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Heat" | | 5 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.835 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 79.58% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like home" | | 1 | "something like cedar and old books and the u" |
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| 1.19% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.988 | | wordCount | 1509 | | matches | | 0 | "not just a month of stolen mornings and pressed lips against her collarbone, but a piece of herself she still hadn’t found the courage to nam" | | 1 | "not the smirk, not the cool mask, but something raw" | | 2 | "not the cool mask, but something raw" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "knew that smell" | | 1 | "hated that he" | | 2 | "Hated that it" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 77 | | mean | 19.6 | | std | 17.9 | | cv | 0.913 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 42 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 30 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 77 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 36 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 61 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 56 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 40 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | 0 | "were rooted" | | 1 | "was dated" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 219 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva’s flat opened on a whoosh of warm, spiced air—garlic, cumin, a hint of something faintly sweet beneath—carried up from the curry house below." | | 1 | "Instead, she stepped forward, nudging him aside with her body, shoulder brushing his arm—warm, solid, *real*—as she moved into the flat." | | 2 | "Three deadbolts slid home—Eva’s perpetual paranoia." | | 3 | "His eyes flickered—surprise, then amusement." | | 4 | "Rory’s hand shot to her belt, where the switchblade from Silas still lingered in its sheath—but Lucien only pulled out a small, cloth-wrapped bundle." | | 5 | "But this—this was different." | | 6 | "Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could feel the heat of his body, the faintest pulse of power beneath his skin—demon blood, just beneath the surface." | | 7 | "Then he smiled—a real smile, not the smirk, not the cool mask, but something raw and open she hadn’t seen in over a year." |
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| 85.40% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1144 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "cluttered, book-lined hallway." |
| | adverbCount | 57 | | adverbRatio | 0.049825174825174824 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01048951048951049 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 8.98 | | std | 8.38 | | cv | 0.933 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 27 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3392857142857143 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 57 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Just stood there, a ghost" | | 1 | "Instead, she stepped forward, nudging" | | 2 | "Of course she wasn’t." | | 3 | "Just enough to fill her" | | 4 | "Then, from the shadows near" | | 5 | "Then he reached into his" | | 6 | "Instead, she said the hardest" | | 7 | "Just for a second." | | 8 | "Then he smiled—a real smile," |
| | ratio | 0.074 | |
| 72.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 45 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "Her stomach knotted before her" | | 1 | "It was Eva’s cooking, the" | | 2 | "His cane, ivory-handled and gleaming," | | 3 | "She hadn’t seen him in" | | 4 | "he said, voice low and" | | 5 | "She exhaled, sharp and involuntary." | | 6 | "He didn’t move" | | 7 | "Her eyes stayed locked on" | | 8 | "he said simply" | | 9 | "She wanted to slam the" | | 10 | "She did none of those" | | 11 | "It landed next to a" | | 12 | "He set his cane against" | | 13 | "She turned away, crossing her" | | 14 | "He stepped closer" | | 15 | "Her stomach twisted." | | 16 | "He was right behind her" | | 17 | "She could feel the heat" | | 18 | "She turned, finally." | | 19 | "Her voice was raw." |
| | ratio | 0.369 | |
| 95.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "The door to Eva’s flat" | | 1 | "Rory froze, one hand still" | | 2 | "Her stomach knotted before her" | | 3 | "It was Eva’s cooking, the" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 5 | "His cane, ivory-handled and gleaming," | | 6 | "The other, black as void-stained" | | 7 | "Rory’s pulse hammered in her" | | 8 | "She hadn’t seen him in" | | 9 | "he said, voice low and" | | 10 | "She exhaled, sharp and involuntary." | | 11 | "He didn’t move" | | 12 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slipped" | | 13 | "Rory barely glanced at him." | | 14 | "Her eyes stayed locked on" | | 15 | "he said simply" | | 16 | "A faint smirk tugged at" | | 17 | "Rory’s fingers twitched." | | 18 | "She wanted to slam the" | | 19 | "She did none of those" |
| | ratio | 0.73 | |
| 81.97% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | | 0 | "To walk out." | | 1 | "To never come back." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He set, never breaking eye contact" | | 1 | "he said, voice gliding after her" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she lied (lie)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.24 | | leniency | 0.48 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.08 | |