Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09X070W24S2Z2P7C1R9NE0

Run Details

Duration:
19.8s
Cost:
$0.001289
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The scuff of leather soles on the door’s peeling letter slot stop the argument mid-syllable. Ptolemy launches from the armchair with a throaty yowl, tail a black brush-stroke across the stack of unmarked parcels. Aurora doesn’t turn. She stays bent over Eva’s desk, tracing the crack in the varnish with her thumbnail until the wood yawns wide enough to hide a shard of something tiny and bright. “You’re not expecting him,” Eva says. Rory’s boat neck sags off the sharp bone of her shoulder. “No.” “Then why the hammer?” Aurora sets the claw hammer back on the windowsill with more care than the job needed. Glass beads tink like wind chimes. She straightens the thumbtack holding the train timetable to the wall, though it hasn’t moved. Every muscle in her forearms bunches, then releases. Footsteps on the communal stairs—one half-step heavier than the reflexive drag of boots, one practiced and deliberate. Three deadbolts tremble before they slide home. The door swings inward, carrying a hit of bergamot and the metallic scrape of a blade unsheathed inside a cane. Lucien Moreau fills the frame: charcoal suit loving the hunch of his shoulders, one sleeve rolling to reveal the ivory grip of something that isn’t a cane. His left eye, black as pooled oil, fixes on the nicked floorboards where Rory dropped a drip of wax last autumn. His right, the raw honey of an old lie, lingers on the back of her neck. Ptolemy plants himself directly between them, fur bristling in a T, tail lashing like a metronome set to furious. “Hello, Malphora.” His voice slides over the hated nickname like oil on water. Years of French lessons eroded to ashes. Aurora wets her lips. “Luc.” He steps over the cat without apology. The flat shrinks; the books exhale dust in protest. He drops the cane into the umbrella stand with a clink that should not sound like burial rites. “I took a liberty. Reported to your office for the afternoon shift.” Rory finally faces him. The windowsill bites into the soft flesh beneath her ribs. “You followed me.” “Tracked your movements.” He unsnaps a button on his cuff—left hand; his ruined pinky curls inward like a hook. “Efficient, not stalkerish.” “Same diff.” Eva exhales through her nose, a sound that should be a growl. “We’ve got a deadline on the—” “Weather charm.” Lucien smiles at the wall behind Eva, not the witch herself. “Yes, I’m aware. Eva asked for meteorological mnemonics. I brought ten contingencies. Four involve hail, three demons, two tempests, and one glorious monsoon that only torments humans over five-five.” Ptolemy ambles to Eva’s ankle, weaving between her legs like a furry nub of disapproval. Eva folds her arms. “You’re here five minutes and already undressing us with information.” Lucien tilts his head. The movement makes the lamplight carve his cheekbones into something sculptural. “I prefer to think of it as undressing the room.” Rory’s skin prickles beneath that gaze—honey and broken glass. She turns to Eva, forcing her own pulse to stay under seventy. “We’ll need ten minutes.” “You’ll need to eat.” Eva’s eyes flash a warning that only Rory should catch. “He hasn’t eaten; he’ll start smelling like ozone if he goes too long without.” Lucien’s breath leaves him, a sound that might be laughter. “Humanity’s greatest liability—appetite.” Eva scoops Ptolemy off the floor. “I’ll grab pakoras from downstairs. Five pounds says he orders vindaloo just to wind you up.” She slips out before Rory can object. The quick silence that follows is packed with all the things not said since she fled the basilica in St-Omer two years ago—since the night he wrapped her fingers around his throat and whispered, “Stay or I’ll let my father carve you out of my life.” Aurora keeps her hands on the desk edge. “What do you want?” Lucien runs a finger along the spine of a grimoire on the nearest shelf. “Same as always: leverage.” “There’s nothing left to leverage.” “You moved flats three times in six months before landing here.” He taps the edge of an astronomy chart pinned crooked. “Three delivery vans torched. A loan shark’s kneecaps rearranged. A night at a police station in Greenwich that still haunts your personnel file—” “That’s slander.” “—and an ex-boyfriend who won’t mention your name when he sobers up.” He pauses. “So yes, there’s always something to leverage.” She watches his thumb trace the outline of a pentagram doodled in the bottom corner of a shopping receipt. “You didn’t come all the way to Brick Lane to threaten me.” “No.” The heel of his hand presses against the cane’s ivory end; the blade whispers free an inch, no more. “I came because you disappeared after Evan’s bar burned down. I spent four nights in Marseille because the demonic grapevine swore you’d fled to the Mediterranean.” Rory’s nails dig into the wood. “Marseille’s out of your jurisdiction.” “City’s forty percent ours, Rory.” The blade retreats with the same slick sound of steel kissing steel. “I searched every dive in the Vieux-Port. No Rory, no Malphora, no silhouette that even remotely looked like you. Just a girl with your eyes playing poker in a backroom above a butcher’s shop.” He inhales—deliberate, testing the air like a wine merchant. “She played ace of spades on every hand. Same tells you used when we dealt at the Bocage Casino.” The memory lands in her stomach like a stone. Rory swallows. “That was someone else.” “Same hair. Same straight shoulders hiding a wrist with a crescent scar.” His gaze flicks to her left hand—always hidden by bracelets, by watch, by sleeve rolled to the elbow and rolled back. “Almost identical.” Ptolemy slinks back to his armchair, curls into a question mark. The flat feels too small; every breath draws in wool and old candle smoke and the faintest top note of gunpowder that clings to Lucien’s suit. He crosses the room in three strides, stopping when the toes of his shoes almost brush the frayed rug where they last stood tangled in sheets and half-truths. “Show me the scar.” Rory’s hand flies to her wrist on instinct. She doesn’t lower it. “Go to hell.” “Already have.” He tilts his head, letting the black eye catch the last of the streetlamp glow. “Come with me sometime. It’s dull.” Outside, a siren howls; Eva’s voice murmurs with the delivery guy—an order confirmed, a price agreed. The moment stretches, liquid and fragile. Lucien exhales. It sounds like surrender—or maybe regret. “I’m not here to drag you back to the underworld, Malphora. I’m here because a very senior demon called in a marker three nights ago. A debt owed to my mother’s line. Payment: a human soul, newly minted, no ties on file. They described her as ‘carrying the blood of the old witches.’” Rory’s pulse hammers in her throat. “And?” “Evan wasn’t your average arsonist.” Lucien’s cuff snaps shut. “He sold his soul two weeks before the bar burned. Renegotiated the fine print. The new owner? A nine-tail named Veythas who favors jazz pianists and electric Eels.” A shiver crawls up her spine, cold and deliberate. “You’re saying Veythas wants me.” “I’m saying Veythas wants whatever Evan owed—and Evan used your name on the dotted line.” Lucien finally looks at her. The raw honey in his right eye glows faint. “Congratulations. You’re the soul-debt heir.” The door creaks open before she can speak. Eva fills the gap, pakoras steaming in a foil boat, the scent of coriander and chili oil intensifying the sudden metallic tang of fear. She eyes Rory, then Lucien, then the izakaya box between them. “Food first, then demonic fine print?” Rory doesn’t move. Her fingers tremble against the crescent welt. Lucien watches, unblinking. Outside, Brick Lane hums with weekend drunks and scooter horns and the deep, relentless pulse of a bass bin. Somewhere in Marseille, a demon played a jazz standard on an out-of-tune upright while a nine-tailed prince waited to collect.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.51
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1340
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"efficient"
count1
3
word"charm"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count3
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"footsteps"
2"efficient"
3"charm"
4"pulse"
5"silence"
6"stomach"
7"electric"
8"standard"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1330
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount864
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva11
Rory12
Moreau1
French1
Ptolemy5
Lucien11
St-Omer1
Aurora4
Brick1
Lane1
Marseille1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Aurora"
places
0"St-Omer"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Marseille"
globalScore0.806
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1330
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean26.6
std17.02
cv0.64
sampleLengths
034
133
26
312
44
545
644
764
819
92
1023
1134
1212
1317
1422
152
1618
1742
1829
1925
2025
2128
2213
2322
2453
2512
2618
275
2844
292
3021
3131
3246
3311
3479
3515
3635
3737
3832
3915
4023
4122
4261
437
4437
4514
4634
4749
4813
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"is packed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences111
ratio0.108
matches
0"Footsteps on the communal stairs—one half-step heavier than the reflexive drag of boots, one practiced and deliberate."
1"The flat shrinks; the books exhale dust in protest."
2"“Tracked your movements.” He unsnaps a button on his cuff—left hand; his ruined pinky curls inward like a hook."
3"Rory’s skin prickles beneath that gaze—honey and broken glass."
4"“He hasn’t eaten; he’ll start smelling like ozone if he goes too long without.”"
5"The quick silence that follows is packed with all the things not said since she fled the basilica in St-Omer two years ago—since the night he wrapped her fingers around his throat and whispered, “Stay or I’ll let my father carve you out of my life.”"
6"“No.” The heel of his hand presses against the cane’s ivory end; the blade whispers free an inch, no more."
7"“I searched every dive in the Vieux-Port. No Rory, no Malphora, no silhouette that even remotely looked like you. Just a girl with your eyes playing poker in a backroom above a butcher’s shop.” He inhales—deliberate, testing the air like a wine merchant."
8"“Same hair. Same straight shoulders hiding a wrist with a crescent scar.” His gaze flicks to her left hand—always hidden by bracelets, by watch, by sleeve rolled to the elbow and rolled back."
9"The flat feels too small; every breath draws in wool and old candle smoke and the faintest top note of gunpowder that clings to Lucien’s suit."
10"Outside, a siren howls; Eva’s voice murmurs with the delivery guy—an order confirmed, a price agreed."
11"It sounds like surrender—or maybe regret."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount878
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.017084282460136675
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004555808656036446
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean11.98
std9.61
cv0.802
sampleLengths
015
119
23
330
46
511
61
74
816
96
1015
118
1217
137
1420
1527
1621
1716
1819
192
2011
217
224
231
247
259
2618
2712
284
2910
303
3119
323
332
3412
356
3613
3729
3815
394
4010
414
4211
4310
449
4512
464
4714
4814
4910
69.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.42342342342342343
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners47
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Somewhere in Marseille, a demon"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences70
matches
0"She stays bent over Eva’s"
1"She straightens the thumbtack holding"
2"His left eye, black as"
3"His right, the raw honey"
4"His voice slides over the"
5"He steps over the cat"
6"He drops the cane into"
7"He unsnaps a button on"
8"She turns to Eva, forcing"
9"She slips out before Rory"
10"He taps the edge of"
11"She watches his thumb trace"
12"He inhales—deliberate, testing the air"
13"His gaze flicks to her"
14"He crosses the room in"
15"She doesn’t lower it."
16"He tilts his head, letting"
17"It sounds like surrender—or maybe"
18"She eyes Rory, then Lucien,"
19"Her fingers tremble against the"
ratio0.286
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences70
matches
0"The scuff of leather soles"
1"Ptolemy launches from the armchair"
2"Aurora doesn’t turn."
3"She stays bent over Eva’s"
4"Rory’s boat neck sags off"
5"Aurora sets the claw hammer"
6"Glass beads tink like wind"
7"She straightens the thumbtack holding"
8"Every muscle in her forearms"
9"Footsteps on the communal stairs—one"
10"The door swings inward, carrying"
11"Lucien Moreau fills the frame:"
12"His left eye, black as"
13"His right, the raw honey"
14"Ptolemy plants himself directly between"
15"His voice slides over the"
16"Years of French lessons eroded"
17"Aurora wets her lips."
18"He steps over the cat"
19"The flat shrinks; the books"
ratio0.943
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau fills the frame: charcoal suit loving the hunch of his shoulders, one sleeve rolling to reveal the ivory grip of something that isn’t a cane."
1"Lucien’s breath leaves him, a sound that might be laughter."
2"The flat feels too small; every breath draws in wool and old candle smoke and the faintest top note of gunpowder that clings to Lucien’s suit."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she fled (flee)"
1"his hand presses (his hand press)"
2"Lucien’s cuff snaps (lucien cuff snap)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.078
leniency0.157
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.118
82.9141%