Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09X0XNPX8HREYJWHDV7QAK

Run Details

Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.001221
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as Rory stepped past the standing stones, her boots sinking into damp moss that clung to her soles like wet fingers. The Grove shouldn’t have been this quiet—no rustle of foxes in the undergrowth, no distant owls calling from the trees. Just the breath of her own lungs slicing through the damp, sweet-scented night. She adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, fingers brushing the familiar weight of the Heartstone pendant tucked beneath her jacket. It had pulsed against her sternum all evening, a stubborn warmth she couldn’t ignore. Yu-Fei had tried to press a thermos of tea into her hands before she left, his dark eyes flickering with something like warning. *“Sometimes the boss isn’t in a mood for delays, tiger,”* he’d muttered. But she hadn’t told him where she was going—only that she had to follow the signal. The Heartstone had led her here, to this ring of blackened oaks, their trunks scored with symbols that shivered when she looked too long. A branch snapped somewhere beyond the clearing. Not an animal—too precise, too deliberate. Rory’s pulse steadied. She knew this feeling, the prickle down her spine when danger wasn’t immediate but inevitable. She’d felt it in Evan’s flat the night he broke three of her ribs. She’d felt it crossing the threshold of her old law firm when the partners smiled too wide. The world narrowing. The wrongness pressing in. She unzipped the delivery bag, drew out a small paper-wrapped parcel. Inside was a glass vial, stoppered with black wax. The contents sloshed sluggishly, like syrup catching in a tilted bottle. Yu-Fei had told her what was inside once—*daemon’s blood, cured in salt and starfall*—before slamming a cabinet shut. *“People don’t always ask for what they need, Rory. Some things should stay buried.”* She uncorked the vial with her thumb, the scent rising sharp and metallic, cutting through the floral perfume of the Grove. A response flickered in the Heartstone—deeper, slower, like a heartbeat syncing to hers. Good. It was working. Whatever had opened the way tonight, whatever waited at the other end of this bloodline stain, she could close it again. “You’re late.” The voice came from the dark between two stones, smooth as poured oil, layered with something not quite human. Rory didn’t startle. She slid the vial into her pocket and tugged her jacket tighter. “I wasn’t aware I had an appointment.” A figure stepped forward, blurred at first like heat haze over tarmac, then resolving into a woman with pale, hairless skin and eyes like polished river stones. She wore clothes that shifted between textures—sometimes silk, sometimes bark, sometimes scales—moving as if underwater. “But visas don’t expire,” the woman said, her lips barely moving. “They just fray at the edges. And yours is fraying.” Rory exhaled through her nose. “Isolde.” “Aurora Carter,” Isolde replied, tilting her head. “Or do you prefer Rory? Seems safer, somehow. Less like a claim.” Rory kept her hands loose at her sides. “What do you want?” Isolde smiled, teeth too even. “You followed the glow. That means you’re the one meant to mend what’s broken. But the thing that’s broken doesn’t want mending. It wants release.” A gust of wind rushed through the Grove, though the trees didn’t sway. The scent of wildflowers soured into something cloying, like rotting fruit. The Heartstone pulsed faster against Rory’s chest, warmth bleeding into her ribs. “Where is it?” Rory asked. Isolde gestured toward the heart of the Grove, where a low mound rose like a grave. Atop it sat a standing stone, split down the middle, dark fluid weeping from the crack. Rory’s stomach tightened. “That’s not a portal. That’s a wound.” “It’s both,” Isolde said. “It’s where the Hel spills into your world. Evan found it first. He called it power. I called it corruption. You—” She tilted her head. “You called it survival.” Rory’s breath hitched. “Evan?” Isolde nodded. “He ventured close. Felt the taste of it in his veins. Took what he needed. Left what he couldn’t bear.” A wet sound echoed from the mound. Not a voice. Not exactly a scream. Something gurgled, rising from deep within the stone. Rory reached into her pocket and pulled out the vial. Isolde’s eyes went wide. “You cannot—” “Shut up,” Rory said, snapping the cork free with her teeth. She hurled the vial onto the mound. It shattered, the daemon’s blood spraying over the crack. The stone hissed, steam blasting upward, filling the air with the stench of burning metal. The Hel-ooze bubbling from the fissure recoiled, sizzling like acid on stone. Then it screamed. Not with one mouth. With many. Ten figures lurch out from behind the oaks—Evan and nine others, faces twisted slack, mouths unhinged. Their bodies weren’t quite whole—limbs too long, joints bent wrong. Evan’s jaw unlatched, his eyes black pits. You think this fixes anything? His voice slithered into Rory’s skull, not spoken aloud. She clenched her fists. “I didn’t come to fix it,” she said. “I came to close it.” The Hel-spawn lunged. Rory dropped low, rolling as Evan’s clawed hand grazed her back. She came up hard, elbow catching another’s temple. Bone crunched—too easy, too wrong. The limbs snagged on the air like flies in honey. Isolde watched from the stones, unmoving. “You don’t understand what you’re closing. You’re trapping the pain. You’re sealing the hurt. Healers always do.” Rory didn’t answer. She drove forward, fingers brushing the Heartstone as she passed. It flared—deep crimson, pulsing like a wound in time. She reached for the stone, grabbed the fissure in both hands. The pain came first. Not hers. Hers was old fire. This was something else—ice in the veins, memories not hers, screams not spoken. A child’s sob stuck in her throat. A man’s plea cut short. A woman’s whisper in the dark: *don’t let them see.* The ground trembled. The Hel-spawn shrieked, bodies vibrating until they tore apart like paper in a storm. Isolde stepped forward, lips curled. “You feel that? That’s the cost. You can’t close the wound without owning the blood that made it. And you—” She pointed. “You’ve never owned anything in your life. Not your choices. Not your body. Not even your name.” Rory gritted her teeth. The fissure pulsed under her palms, trying to heal itself, trying to pull her in. She forced the pendant close. “My name,” she said, voice raw. “Is Rory Carter. And I choose what I own.” The stone shattered. The Hel recoiled, a wave of darkness crashing against an unseen barrier. Silence smashed down—absolute, crushing. Even the air held its breath. Then— Footsteps. Crunching leaves. Too heavy. Too slow. Rory turned. A man stood between the stones, coat dark with rain, face half-lit by moonlight, half in shadow. His eyes caught hers—bright blue. Familiar. Brendan Carter. Her father. Behind him, the standing stones were whole again. The mound gone. The Grove breathing. “Rory,” Brendan said, voice steady, softer than she remembered. “You shouldn’t be here.” Isolde’s laughter echoed, but she was already fading, dissolving like mist. Rory’s hands shook. She wiped them on her jeans. The Heartstone still burned against her sternum. “Neither should you,” she said. Her father stepped closer. Rain began to fall—not from clouds, but from nowhere, as if the sky had opened inside the Grove. “Time moves different here,” he said. “I’ve been waiting a long time.” Rory met his gaze. Didn’t flinch. “I know,” she said. “So have I.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
4.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1258
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"warmth"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"resolving"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count2
12
word"shattered"
count2
13
word"lurch"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"down her spine"
6"flickered"
7"resolving"
8"silk"
9"grave"
10"stomach"
11"echoed"
12"shattered"
13"lurch"
14"whisper"
15"trembled"
16"silence"
17"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences123
matches(empty)
96.40% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences123
filterMatches
0"think"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords35
totalWords1244
ratio0.028
matches
0"“Sometimes the boss isn’t in a mood for delays, tiger,”"
1"daemon’s blood, cured in salt and starfall"
2"“People don’t always ask for what they need, Rory. Some things should stay buried.”"
3"don’t let them see."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount992
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.81
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Grove6
Heartstone6
Evan4
Isolde9
Hel-ooze1
Hel-spawn2
Hel4
Footsteps1
Carter1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Isolde"
3"Hel-ooze"
4"Hel-spawn"
5"Hel"
6"Carter"
places
0"Grove"
globalScore0.593
windowScore0.333
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like warning"
1"not quite human"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.804
wordCount1244
matches
0"not from clouds, but from nowhere, as if the sky had opened inside the Grove"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean20.06
std20.2
cv1.007
sampleLengths
057
1110
269
363
459
52
634
77
842
921
106
1119
1212
1330
1436
155
1632
1710
1833
194
2022
2122
2210
236
2411
2543
263
276
2833
295
3013
3113
323
3334
3423
3533
364
372
3839
3917
4044
4119
425
4315
443
4522
461
471
486
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
97.96% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs196
matches
0"was going"
1"was working"
2"was already fading"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences143
ratio0.105
matches
0"The Grove shouldn’t have been this quiet—no rustle of foxes in the undergrowth, no distant owls calling from the trees."
1"But she hadn’t told him where she was going—only that she had to follow the signal."
2"Not an animal—too precise, too deliberate."
3"Yu-Fei had told her what was inside once—*daemon’s blood, cured in salt and starfall*—before slamming a cabinet shut."
4"A response flickered in the Heartstone—deeper, slower, like a heartbeat syncing to hers."
5"She wore clothes that shifted between textures—sometimes silk, sometimes bark, sometimes scales—moving as if underwater."
6"Ten figures lurch out from behind the oaks—Evan and nine others, faces twisted slack, mouths unhinged."
7"Their bodies weren’t quite whole—limbs too long, joints bent wrong."
8"Bone crunched—too easy, too wrong."
9"It flared—deep crimson, pulsing like a wound in time."
10"This was something else—ice in the veins, memories not hers, screams not spoken."
11"Silence smashed down—absolute, crushing."
12"Then—"
13"His eyes caught hers—bright blue."
14"Rain began to fall—not from clouds, but from nowhere, as if the sky had opened inside the Grove."
87.62% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1014
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"damp, sweet-scented night."
1"small paper-wrapped parcel."
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04043392504930966
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0039447731755424065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean8.7
std6.29
cv0.723
sampleLengths
024
120
213
321
414
523
612
716
824
97
106
113
1215
1314
1417
153
164
1711
189
1911
2018
2114
2221
2313
241
253
2621
272
2819
293
3012
317
3227
3315
3411
3510
365
371
387
3912
408
414
425
4325
4413
4511
4612
475
4816
4916
49.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners52
99.01% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"Just the breath of her"
1"Then it screamed."
2"Even the air held its"
ratio0.03
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences101
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It had pulsed against her"
2"She knew this feeling, the"
3"She’d felt it in Evan’s"
4"She’d felt it crossing the"
5"She unzipped the delivery bag,"
6"She uncorked the vial with"
7"It was working."
8"She slid the vial into"
9"She wore clothes that shifted"
10"She tilted her head"
11"She hurled the vial onto"
12"It shattered, the daemon’s blood"
13"Their bodies weren’t quite whole—limbs"
14"You think this fixes anything?"
15"His voice slithered into Rory’s"
16"She clenched her fists."
17"She came up hard, elbow"
18"She drove forward, fingers brushing"
19"It flared—deep crimson, pulsing like"
ratio0.267
19.41% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air thickened as Rory"
1"The Grove shouldn’t have been"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"It had pulsed against her"
4"Yu-Fei had tried to press"
5"The Heartstone had led her"
6"A branch snapped somewhere beyond"
7"Rory’s pulse steadied."
8"She knew this feeling, the"
9"She’d felt it in Evan’s"
10"She’d felt it crossing the"
11"The world narrowing."
12"The wrongness pressing in."
13"She unzipped the delivery bag,"
14"The contents sloshed sluggishly, like"
15"Yu-Fei had told her what"
16"She uncorked the vial with"
17"A response flickered in the"
18"It was working."
19"Whatever had opened the way"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The air thickened as Rory stepped past the standing stones, her boots sinking into damp moss that clung to her soles like wet fingers."
1"She wore clothes that shifted between textures—sometimes silk, sometimes bark, sometimes scales—moving as if underwater."
2"The fissure pulsed under her palms, trying to heal itself, trying to pull her in."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the woman said, her lips barely moving"
1"she said, voice raw"
2"Brendan said, voice steady, softer than she remembered"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.647
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.0548%