Run: 2026-03-18-01KM09X1PT8CZ68CW01KMNKFGK

Run Details

Duration:
27.6s
Cost:
$0.001810
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed. The same green neon sign buzzed above the entrance, flickering like a dying breath, casting its sickly glow over the pavement. Rory hesitated just inside the door, the scent of aged whiskey and stale beer wrapping around her like an old coat—familiar but too tight now, the sleeves moth-nibbled at the cuffs. She’d walked past the place a dozen times in the last year, always slowing her pace, always pretending she wasn’t looking for a face in the window or a silhouette at the bar. Tonight, she’d run out of excuses. The delivery bike’s chain had snapped two blocks away, and instead of calling Yu-Fei, she’d ducked into the Tube and carried herself here on instinct, like a compass needle swinging to true north after years of deviation. Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had long since surrendered to grime. His auburn hair, once as coppery as new pennies, now wore streaks of silver like badges of old battles. A neat beard, matching the hair, framed a mouth that still moved with the quiet precision of a man who measured every word before it left his tongue. On his right hand, the silver signet ring caught the dim light, rotating slowly as he turned the glass in his grip. Rory’s fingers twitched toward her left wrist. The crescent scar beneath her sleeve had long since stopped throbbing, but the ghost of it flared now, a phantom limb aching with memory. She took two steps forward, her boots scuffing against the floorboards worn smooth by decades of soles. A couple in the corner laughed too loudly over a game of darts. The air hummed with the low murmur of secrets half-spoken. Silas’s gaze lifted. For the briefest second, confusion creased his forehead. Then his eyes locked onto hers, and something in his shoulders settled, like a ship correcting its list after stormy seas. “Thought I recognized the gait,” he said. His voice hadn’t changed—still that rumble of gravel and smoke, years of whispers in foreign tongues layered beneath. “Figured you’d moved on from London by now.” Rory exhaled through her nose, a sound that wasn’t quite a laugh. “People don’t always get what they want.” A flicker of something passed over his face—amusement, maybe, or recognition of the blade-edge in her words. He slid the polished glass onto the shelf behind him and leaned a hand on the bar’s surface, knuckles whitening slightly. The limp in his left leg was subtle, just a hitch when he shifted his weight, nothing dramatic. But she saw it. He’d always moved like a man who owned the ground beneath him. Time had made him pay rent. “Sit down, Rory,” he said. She remained standing. “Rory’s the name kids on delivery bikes call me. You always called me Laila.” His jaw tightened. “Laila it is.” The stool cushion groaned under her weight when she finally settled onto it. The last time she’d sat here, she’d been 19, full of fire and plans to study law, to follow in her father’s polished footsteps. She’d worn a red dress that night, laughter too bright, dreams too loud. Evan had been there, charming and venomous in the same breath. She could almost smell the patchouli of her own naivety. Silas turned away to grab a bottle from the top shelf. “Whiskey?” “You’re not my handler anymore.” “No.” He poured two fingers into a glass, neat. Pushed it toward her. “But you’re still standing in my bar.” She picked up the glass. The liquid inside did not tremble. Neither did her hand, though it felt like it should. “Fine. Whiskey.” He poured another for himself, slower, with more restraint. “You look like your mother.” The words landed like a stone in still water. Jennifer Carter—sharp-witted, quick to laugh, the kind of woman who could recite Shakespeare while making toast. Not fragile, but Rory had seen the way her mother’s hands shook when she thought no one was looking, the way her voice softened when speaking of Wales, of home, as though the words themselves pained her. “She okay?” “Last I heard.” Silas took a sip, then set the glass down with a soft clink. “You left Cardiff in a hurry.” Rory traced the rim of her glass. A thin crack ran from the base upward, barely visible unless you knew where to look. “Needed to breathe.” “Or run.” She considered throwing the whiskey in his face. Instead, she drank it in one swallow. The burn was familiar, grounding. “Some things follow you.” Silas’s signet ring caught the light as he reached for the bottle again. “Regrets are just memories wearing different clothes.” “That’s a pretty quote for a spymaster.” “Ex-spymaster.” He poured her another. “Former. Your lot don’t make things pretty. They make things necessary.” “And you don’t anymore, I take it.” He didn’t answer right away. Behind him, the photographs on the wall seemed to watch—grainy faces from decades past, frozen in moments of triumph or betrayal. One young agent smiled with too much confidence, his face unlined. That had to be Silas, back when the world was simpler and the only shadows were the ones cast by lamplight. “Life’s quieter now,” he said eventually. “That’s its own kind of victory.” Rory wanted to ask about the Prague operation. About the knee. About whether he still woke in the night to gunfire. But that would mean admitting she’d cared enough to remember, and that admission would unravel too much. Instead, she said, “You ever miss it? The rush.” Silas chuckled, low and dry. “Every damn day. But I don’t miss the body count.” He tilted his head toward the back of the bar, where a bookshelf sagged under the weight of old books and board games no one played. “Secret room’s still there. Still smells like dust and bad decisions.” “You use it much?” “When I need to remember who I was.” He studied her. “You ever need that room, Rory, the door’s still open. Just pull the third volume of Hardy from the left.” The third volume of Hardy. She knew that code. It was a sign of trust. But trust was a currency she wasn’t sure she had left. She drained the second whiskey. The alcohol pooled warm in her stomach, but it didn’t quiet the voices in her head. Evan’s voice. Her father’s disappointed tones. The judge in her mind who never let her rest. Silas filled her glass once more without asking. In the corner, a jukebox scratched to life, emitting a warped version of “Moon River.” It was a song her father had played on their old record player. She hadn’t heard it in years. “You kept it,” she said, nodding at the machine. “People need anchors,” Silas replied. “Even when they think they’re swimming free.” Rory wrapped her hands around the glass, letting the cold seep into her palms. “I’m not free.” Silas’s expression didn’t change, but his eyes—hazel, flecked with gold—softened. “No one is who they think they are, Laila. That’s the first lesson of this job.” “And what’s the second?” “That leaving doesn’t free you. It just changes the scenery.” The silence that followed wasn’t awkward. It was heavy. Like rain before the storm breaks. Rory stared at her reflection in the glass surface of the bar. Her black hair fell straight to her shoulders now, no more of the red streaks she’d experimented with at university. Her skin was paler, the brightness gone from her blue eyes, replaced by something like caution. The scar on her wrist begged to be hidden under a sleeve, a constant reminder. In Cardiff, she’d been Aurora, the daughter of privilege, the one with the sharp mind and sharper tongue. In London, she was just Rory, the delivery girl with a past too loud to ignore. “You still read?” Silas asked, nodding at her hands. She flexed her fingers. “Only when I sleep.” He didn’t laugh. Instead, he reached beneath the bar and pulled out a worn paperback. The title read *Bleak House*. “First edition. Belonged to my mother.” Rory took it. The pages smelled of lavender and time. She flipped it open—her father’s handwriting on the inside cover: *For Daniel, who’ll appreciate the irony. J.* Daniel. That had been Silas’s real name. Daniel Blackwood. The spymaster had been a boy once, with a mother who loved Dickens and a father whose face was lost to war. “I remember this,” she said softly. “Then you remember me too.” The words hung between them, suspended like a held breath. Rory closed the book. “I remember the lessons. The tricks. The way you taught me to pick a lock with a paperclip and a paper straw.” Silas smiled, just a little. “You were the only one who never broke one of my antique pocket watches.” That made her laugh, raw and sudden. It felt like crying. Silas leaned forward, resting his forearms on the bar. The signet ring gleamed. “You could’ve called.” “I know.” “Or written.” “I couldn’t.” “Because?” She hesitated. The jukebox clicked off. The room felt smaller. “Because every time I heard your voice,” she said finally, “I remembered the girl I used to be. And I hated her.” Silas exhaled, slow and measured. He knew what that was like—waking up and hating the person you’d been yesterday. He’d carried that weight longer than she had. Rory stood abruptly, the stool scraping against the floor. The book stayed on the bar between them. “Keep it,” Silas said. She hesitated, then nodded. At the door, she paused. The green neon sign buzzed overhead, casting fractured light across the pavement. “You ever wonder if we’re the villains of our own stories?” she asked, without looking back. Silas didn’t answer right away. When she turned, he was pouring another drink, the glass catching the light like a promise. “Story’s not over till the last page,” he said. “And even then—sometimes the paper burns.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
92.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said eventually [eventually]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.107
91.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1678
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1678
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"measured"
count2
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"weight"
count4
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"unravel"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count1
10
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"measured"
2"flicker"
3"weight"
4"footsteps"
5"traced"
6"unravel"
7"stomach"
8"silence"
9"reminder"
10"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords1667
ratio0.005
matches
0"Bleak House"
1"For Daniel, who’ll appreciate the irony. J."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1325
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Yu-Fei1
Tube1
Pushed1
Carter1
Shakespeare1
Rory12
Wales1
Silas17
Prague1
Hardy1
Cardiff1
Aurora1
London1
Daniel3
Blackwood1
Dickens1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Shakespeare"
4"Rory"
5"Silas"
6"Daniel"
7"Blackwood"
places
0"Tube"
1"Wales"
2"Prague"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
globalScore0.858
windowScore0.667
58.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"quite a laugh"
1"felt like it should"
2"something like caution"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.6
wordCount1667
matches
0"Not fragile, but Rory had seen the way her mother’s hands shook"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences167
matches
0"knew that code"
1"carried that weight"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean22.53
std19.84
cv0.881
sampleLengths
057
176
287
331
440
53
629
733
819
978
105
1117
126
1371
1412
155
1620
1723
1814
1962
202
2122
2226
232
2424
2520
267
2716
287
2958
3012
3138
329
3352
344
3531
3626
3737
3842
399
4012
4117
4226
434
4410
4515
4663
4734
489
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"was lost"
87.01% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs236
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"was looking"
2"was like—waking"
3"was pouring"
5.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences167
ratio0.048
matches
0"Rory hesitated just inside the door, the scent of aged whiskey and stale beer wrapping around her like an old coat—familiar but too tight now, the sleeves moth-nibbled at the cuffs."
1"His voice hadn’t changed—still that rumble of gravel and smoke, years of whispers in foreign tongues layered beneath."
2"A flicker of something passed over his face—amusement, maybe, or recognition of the blade-edge in her words."
3"Jennifer Carter—sharp-witted, quick to laugh, the kind of woman who could recite Shakespeare while making toast."
4"Behind him, the photographs on the wall seemed to watch—grainy faces from decades past, frozen in moments of triumph or betrayal."
5"Silas’s expression didn’t change, but his eyes—hazel, flecked with gold—softened."
6"She flipped it open—her father’s handwriting on the inside cover: *For Daniel, who’ll appreciate the irony."
7"He knew what that was like—waking up and hating the person you’d been yesterday."
97.75% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1339
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount57
adverbRatio0.04256908140403286
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008215085884988798
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean9.98
std7.48
cv0.75
sampleLengths
05
121
231
333
46
537
618
719
828
922
107
1124
1217
1313
1410
153
168
1721
187
1918
208
2112
227
2317
2421
2518
264
2712
286
295
303
3114
323
333
3413
3524
3613
3711
3810
3911
401
415
429
434
447
455
466
4710
482
499
53.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3473053892215569
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"Then his eyes locked onto"
1"Instead, she drank it in"
2"Instead, she said,"
3"Instead, he reached beneath the"
ratio0.034
92.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences119
matches
0"She’d walked past the place"
1"His auburn hair, once as"
2"She took two steps forward,"
3"His voice hadn’t changed—still that"
4"He slid the polished glass"
5"He’d always moved like a"
6"She remained standing."
7"His jaw tightened."
8"She’d worn a red dress"
9"She could almost smell the"
10"He poured two fingers into"
11"She picked up the glass."
12"He poured another for himself,"
13"She considered throwing the whiskey"
14"He poured her another"
15"He didn’t answer right away."
16"he said eventually"
17"He tilted his head toward"
18"He studied her"
19"She knew that code."
ratio0.319
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences119
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest hadn’t changed."
1"The same green neon sign"
2"Rory hesitated just inside the"
3"She’d walked past the place"
4"Tonight, she’d run out of"
5"The delivery bike’s chain had"
6"Silas stood behind the counter,"
7"His auburn hair, once as"
8"A neat beard, matching the"
9"Rory’s fingers twitched toward her"
10"The crescent scar beneath her"
11"She took two steps forward,"
12"A couple in the corner"
13"The air hummed with the"
14"Silas’s gaze lifted."
15"His voice hadn’t changed—still that"
16"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
17"A flicker of something passed"
18"He slid the polished glass"
19"The limp in his left"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
ratio0
75.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Silas stood behind the counter, polishing a glass with a rag that had long since surrendered to grime."
1"A neat beard, matching the hair, framed a mouth that still moved with the quiet precision of a man who measured every word before it left his tongue."
2"Jennifer Carter—sharp-witted, quick to laugh, the kind of woman who could recite Shakespeare while making toast."
3"Not fragile, but Rory had seen the way her mother’s hands shook when she thought no one was looking, the way her voice softened when speaking of Wales, of home,…"
4"She flipped it open—her father’s handwriting on the inside cover: *For Daniel, who’ll appreciate the irony."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He poured, neat"
1"she asked, without looking back"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.0435%