Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0A11180CN2RFB1K5E5959T

Run Details

Duration:
25.4s
Cost:
$0.001539
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon flicker of a chicken tikka sign painted Eva’s living room wall alternating gold and red. Through the thin curtains, Brick Lane’s evening bustle rumbled below—car horns, shouts, the occasional bass drop from a passing car. Rory froze halfway between the door and the kitchen, the tea towel still twisted in her hands. The knock came again, sharper this time. Three raps, then a pause, then two more. A pattern. Her pulse jumped. That wasn’t Eva’s rhythm. Eva knocked like she was playing a piano with one finger—PTOOOM, PTOOOM, PTOOOM—never in code. The cat, Ptolemy, lifted his head from the pile of receipts he’d been napping on. His yellow eyes locked onto the door. A slow blink. Disapproval, maybe. Or just judgment. Rory set the towel down. Pressed a finger to the peephole. Blue iris glowing back. One amber eye. The other black, almost swallowed by the pupil. Pup. Of course it was him. She yanked the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, bathed in the sickly glow of the curry house sign behind him. Tailored charcoal suit, immaculate even in the dim light. Platinum blond hair slicked back like polished metal. Ivory cane resting against the doorframe, the Knife inside it no doubt whispering against the bone handle. He didn’t smile. Never did. “Rory,” he said, voice smooth as aged brandy, rolling the r perfectly. She didn’t move. Didn’t step back. Just stood there in her faded jeans and stained tee, barefoot on the threadbare mat. “Lucien,” she said. Warm evening air rushed in, carrying the scent of fried onions and diesel. The cat slunk closer, tail flicking against Rory’s ankle. She felt his judgment like a cold draft. He tilted his head slightly, eyes flicking past her into the flat. “Eva’s not here.” “Wasn’t expecting her.” A beat. His gaze dropped to her wrist—the small crescent scar peeking out from under her sleeve. The one he’d seen a dozen times before, each time tying another knot in whatever invisible thread still connected them. “May I come in?” he asked. She exhaled through her nose. Not a laugh. Not a sigh. Just air leaving lungs, the kind that carries away something you didn’t mean to keep. He stepped across the threshold before she could answer. The flat reacted instantly—walls covered in bookshelves bowed under the weight of occult texts, yellowed maps, stacks of handwritten notes in Eva’s looping cursive. A skeleton of a crow hung from the ceiling fan, catching the neon’s glow like fractured stained glass. The cat wound between Lucien’s polished shoes, affectionate as a shadow. Rory closed the door. The deadbolts clicked into place like the last notes of a bad song ending. Lucien turned. “You look well.” She crossed her arms. “You look expensive.” He gave her the ghost of a smirk. “That’s the idea.” Ptolemy leapt onto the windowsill, tail lashing as he surveyed the street below. The cat had opinions. Rory knew what his were. “What are you doing here, Luc?” He tapped the cane once against the floor, a single, deliberate strike. “Business.” “In Brick Lane? Since when?” “Since always.” He crossed to the small table where Rory kept her kettle and a chipped mug. Ran a fingertip along the rim. “You still take it black, no sugar.” “You still remember trivial shit about me.” “You still leave your tea to go cold.” She picked up the towel, folded it neatly. “You’re not here to talk about tea.” He set the cane against the table, leaned on it lightly. “No. I’m here about the location charm Eva handled last week.” Rory stilled. “You mean the one she didn’t get paid for?” “Exactly.” “So you show up when she’s out? Convenient.” “I showed up when I had reason to believe she might have information I need.” “Or you knew I’d be here.” He looked at her. Really looked. Not with his usual polished detachment, but with something raw beneath it. Something hungry. “You left Cardiff without a word,” he said. She tossed the towel onto the counter. “I told you I was leaving.” “Not the same.” “It is when you don’t warn people.” “You think I wanted to scare you?” “You wanted me to run?” His jaw tightened. Just for a second. But she saw it. Saw the fracture in his armor. “Rory,” he began, then stopped. The flat felt too small. The neon bleed too bright. She moved to the window, pulled the curtain tight except for a sliver. The street below jittered with life—drunk students, a guy selling bootleg DVDs, a young couple arguing over a kebab. She spoke without turning. “I trusted you.” “And?” “And you let me walk into that warehouse like it was nothing.” He exhaled through his nose. A sound like a man bracing for impact. “I told you the risks.” “You didn’t tell me Evan would have friends with real metal.” A pause. She felt it like a blade between ribs. “He shouldn’t have known you were there.” “He knew.” She turned. “He knew, Luc. That only happens if someone talks.” The flat was deathly still. Even Ptolemy had gone rigid, belly pressed to the windowsill like a furred lodestone. Lucien’s fingers tapped once against the cane. One. Two. Three. “You think I sold you out.” “I think,” she said, voice low, “that you didn’t check your sources well enough.” “You think I’m careless.” “Or complicit.” He went very still. The air thickened. The neon behind her pulsed, painting his face in flickering amber and black. Then he laughed. Not a sound of humor. A sound of defeat. “Christ, Rory. After everything—” “After what? After you taught me to load a revolver in an alley behind a jazz club? After you showed me how to spot a glamour from a mile out? After you kissed me in the back of that taxi and told me it wouldn’t complicate things?” She stepped closer. “Complications don’t just vanish, Luc. They *roost*. And yours flew back to me in a black van with Evan’s initials.” He didn’t flinch. Didn’t look away. “You think I wanted that?” he asked quietly. “You didn’t *prevent* it.” Silence. The curry house sign outside cast a sickly rhythm over them—red, gold, red, gold—like a pulse. Then Lucien moved. Just a shift of weight, but it changed the room. The cane came up, ivory handle glinting. “Eva took payment in favors,” he said. “Not coin. Last night, her flat was broken into. Nothing taken. No signs of forced entry. Just… *bother*.” Rory went very quiet. “You think they were looking for something.” “Or sending a message.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap down and rub against her leg. She reached down absently, fingers threading through his fur. “Why tell me now?” “Because you’re part of this too.” He tapped the cane against the floor again. *Thud. Thud.* “Eva’s gone. Left a note saying she needed fresh air. Your friend in Cardiff—Brendan—answered his phone once, slurred. Said you left in a hurry. Then silence.” She swallowed. “You tracked me down.” “I followed the trail to where it ended.” Another beat. The flat felt like a cage. “And?” “And,” he said, “I need your help finding whatever they took from Eva’s place. And I need it *now*.” Rory barked a laugh. Sharp. Bitter. “Wow. Direct. No nostalgia. No apologies. Just business.” “Would an apology change anything?” She stared at him. Blue eyes meeting heterochromatic gaze. The scar on her wrist itched. “Probably not.” “Then we skip it.” She turned to the kettle. Filled it at the sink. The sound of running water filled the silence. “Fine,” she said. “But I’m not doing this because you asked nicely.” He almost smiled. “I never asked nicely.” She plugged the kettle in. Waited for the click. “Where did they hit Eva’s place?” “Front door,” he said. “Not broken. But the lock’s been *reworked*. Like someone picked it in reverse.” Rory glanced back. “Like the charm we lifted from the Thames docks last year.” “Exactly like.” She exhaled through her teeth. “So they’re not just amateurs. They’re methodical.” “Or lucky.” “Or *both*.” The kettle rumbled to life. Rory leaned against the counter, arms crossed again. “You realize if we go poking, we’re walking into the same viper pit.” “That’s why I came.” She looked at him. Really looked. No easy words. No grand gestures. Just two people who knew each other’s rhythms, who’d danced this dance before, under different names, different disguises. And this time, the music was wrong. Lucien’s cane tapped once against the floor. Waiting. She turned off the kettle before it could boil. “Get your coat,” she said. “We’re going window shopping.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he began then [then]"
1"he asked quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.053
75.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"lightly"
3"really"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"fractured"
count1
4
word"charm"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"methodical"
count1
9
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"fractured"
4"charm"
5"pulsed"
6"silence"
7"glinting"
8"methodical"
9"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences145
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences204
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords8
totalWords1447
ratio0.006
matches
0"roost"
1"prevent"
2"bother"
3"Thud. Thud."
4"now"
5"reworked"
6"both"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
91.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount944
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy4
Moreau1
Knife1
Warm1
Rory11
Lucien6
Ran1
Silence1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.917
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a cage"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.691
wordCount1447
matches
0"Not with his usual polished detachment, but with something raw beneath it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences204
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean13.04
std12.04
cv0.924
sampleLengths
054
117
222
330
411
515
66
75
852
95
1012
1121
123
1330
1415
153
1637
176
1826
199
2053
2118
225
237
2411
2522
266
2713
285
2930
307
318
3215
3322
3411
351
368
3715
386
3920
408
4113
423
437
447
455
4617
475
4842
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was playing"
58.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences204
ratio0.029
matches
0"Through the thin curtains, Brick Lane’s evening bustle rumbled below—car horns, shouts, the occasional bass drop from a passing car."
1"Eva knocked like she was playing a piano with one finger—PTOOOM, PTOOOM, PTOOOM—never in code."
2"His gaze dropped to her wrist—the small crescent scar peeking out from under her sleeve."
3"The flat reacted instantly—walls covered in bookshelves bowed under the weight of occult texts, yellowed maps, stacks of handwritten notes in Eva’s looping cursive."
4"The street below jittered with life—drunk students, a guy selling bootleg DVDs, a young couple arguing over a kebab."
5"The curry house sign outside cast a sickly rhythm over them—red, gold, red, gold—like a pulse."
92.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.048370136698212406
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013669821240799159
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences204
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences204
mean7.09
std5.89
cv0.83
sampleLengths
017
120
217
37
48
52
63
74
815
915
107
113
122
133
145
156
164
173
188
191
205
215
2218
239
248
2517
263
272
2812
293
303
3115
323
3313
349
358
3612
373
383
392
4015
4120
426
435
443
453
4615
479
4824
4918
51.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3480392156862745
totalSentences204
uniqueOpeners71
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences114
matches
0"Of course it was him."
1"Just stood there in her"
2"Just air leaving lungs, the"
3"Just for a second."
4"Then he laughed."
5"Then Lucien moved."
6"Just a shift of weight,"
7"Just two people who knew"
ratio0.07
83.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences114
matches
0"Her pulse jumped."
1"His yellow eyes locked onto"
2"She yanked the door open."
3"He didn’t smile."
4"he said, voice smooth as"
5"She didn’t move."
6"She felt his judgment like"
7"He tilted his head slightly,"
8"His gaze dropped to her"
9"She exhaled through her nose."
10"He stepped across the threshold"
11"She crossed her arms."
12"He gave her the ghost"
13"He tapped the cane once"
14"He crossed to the small"
15"She picked up the towel,"
16"He set the cane against"
17"He looked at her."
18"She tossed the towel onto"
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.342
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences114
matches
0"The neon flicker of a"
1"Rory froze halfway between the"
2"The knock came again, sharper"
3"Her pulse jumped."
4"That wasn’t Eva’s rhythm."
5"Eva knocked like she was"
6"The cat, Ptolemy, lifted his"
7"His yellow eyes locked onto"
8"A slow blink."
9"Rory set the towel down."
10"The other black, almost swallowed"
11"She yanked the door open."
12"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
13"Platinum blond hair slicked back"
14"Ivory cane resting against the"
15"He didn’t smile."
16"he said, voice smooth as"
17"She didn’t move."
18"The cat slunk closer, tail"
19"She felt his judgment like"
ratio0.719
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Even Ptolemy had gone rigid,"
ratio0.009
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The neon behind her pulsed, painting his face in flickering amber and black."
1"Just two people who knew each other’s rhythms, who’d danced this dance before, under different names, different disguises."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged brandy, rolling the r perfectly"
1"she said, voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences76
tagDensity0.145
leniency0.289
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.0648%