| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 80.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.88% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 753 | | totalAiIsms | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "lurched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 17 | | totalWords | 743 | | ratio | 0.023 | | matches | | 0 | "Just go at midnight. The pendant will glow. Then you’ll know." | | 1 | "right" | | 2 | "Badger. Fox. Breeze." | | 3 | "Turn around." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 11 | | wordCount | 731 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.41 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Richmond" | | discoveredNames | | Underground | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Aurora | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 743 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 72 | | mean | 10.32 | | std | 12.19 | | cv | 1.181 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 97.44% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 130 | | matches | | 0 | "were breathing" | | 1 | "was coming" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.102 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened with every step—heavier, wetter, as if she were breathing through wet wool." | | 1 | "Step through the stones and the world shifted—cooler, sharper, as if colours brightened in the dark." | | 2 | "Then—a sound behind her." | | 3 | "Too visible—she expected the darkness to blur them, soften their lines." | | 4 | "Another footstep echoed—closer." | | 5 | "Then—a laugh." | | 6 | "Then again—higher, closer." | | 7 | "The laugh came again—from behind her this time." | | 8 | "The petal resisted, then peeled back slowly—like skin flaking off a burn." | | 9 | "Dress yellowed with age, splitting along seams, revealing flashes of pale skin darker than it should be—like smoke given shape." | | 10 | "The words came from everywhere—from the trees, from the earth, from the space between her ribs." | | 11 | "The stone burned beneath her palm—deep crimson now, almost angry." |
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| 89.01% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 742 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.05256064690026954 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005390835579514825 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 6.3 | | std | 5.82 | | cv | 0.925 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 50.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3559322033898305 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 10 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw the standing" | | 1 | "*Just go at midnight." | | 2 | "Then you’ll know.*" | | 3 | "Just her boots crunching on" | | 4 | "Then—a sound behind her." | | 5 | "Just the pulse of blood" | | 6 | "Too visible—she expected the darkness" | | 7 | "Then came the breathing." | | 8 | "Then again—higher, closer." | | 9 | "Then the flowers near her" |
| | ratio | 0.127 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked the rest of" | | 1 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 2 | "She didn’t bother restarting it." | | 3 | "She checked the pendant hanging" | | 4 | "She was where she needed" | | 5 | "She took a breath." | | 6 | "She spun again, heart hammering." | | 7 | "She exhaled slowly through her" | | 8 | "She took two steps forward." | | 9 | "She turned her head just" | | 10 | "She whipped around." | | 11 | "She walked faster." | | 12 | "She checked the pendant again." | | 13 | "It trembled in the air" | | 14 | "Her breath hitched." | | 15 | "She didn’t want to." | | 16 | "It tilted its head." | | 17 | "She said nothing." | | 18 | "It moved like oil sliding" | | 19 | "She stumbled back, hand flying" |
| | ratio | 0.266 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora left the Underground at" | | 1 | "The wind carried the smell" | | 2 | "She walked the rest of" | | 3 | "The air thickened with every" | | 4 | "The entrance to the Fae" | | 5 | "She hadn’t told Eva she" | | 6 | "The pendant will glow." | | 7 | "The torch died as she" | | 8 | "She didn’t bother restarting it." | | 9 | "Wildflowers bloomed along the path" | | 10 | "The air tasted of ozone" | | 11 | "She checked the pendant hanging" | | 12 | "The deep crimson stone pulsed" | | 13 | "She was where she needed" | | 14 | "The path wound deeper into" | | 15 | "The standing stones marked the" | | 16 | "She took a breath." | | 17 | "She spun again, heart hammering." | | 18 | "The breathing stopped." | | 19 | "She exhaled slowly through her" |
| | ratio | 0.633 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 24 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked the rest of the way through Richmond Park, her torch app flickering on her phone lighting the path between the trees." | | 1 | "The air thickened with every step—heavier, wetter, as if she were breathing through wet wool." | | 2 | "Just her boots crunching on damp earth and the silence pressing in from all sides like a living thing." | | 3 | "The wildflowers glowed brighter, their light pulsing in time with her quickening steps." | | 4 | "On its underside, in tiny black ink that bled fresh from the paper-white surface, two words:" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |