Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0A3T5SE71P3MQND8C5824Q

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.001628
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air from Brick Lane carried the scent of spices and exhaust fumes as Rory turned the deadbolt. The flat’s shadows stretched long across the book-crammed shelves, Ptolemy’s tail flicking behind a stack of yellowed spellbooks on the coffee table. She’d been expecting Eva’s key to scrape in her lock—not the broad frame of Lucien Moreau blocking the hallway light. A heartbeat of silence. Then his cane tapped once against the doorframe, the ivory gleaming under the flat’s single bulb. “Miss me, Laila?” Rory didn’t close the door behind her. Didn’t step back. The scar on her wrist itched, a phantom echo from Evan’s belt—not Lucien’s fault, but still, his presence felt like a bad debt coming due. Lucien adjusted his charcoal jacket, the fine wool catching on the doorjamb. His amber eye gleamed; the black one stayed unreadable as ever. “May I?” No apology. No explanation. Just the question hanging between them like the smoke from the curry house downstairs. “You don’t ask,” Rory said, arms still braced on the door. His mouth quirked. “I didn’t think I needed to.” She exhaled through her nose. The weight of his cane against her ankle as the door swung inward made her pulse stutter. He knew exactly how to breach a threshold. How to leave just enough space to force her to choose: shut him out or step aside. Ptolemy appeared from the bedroom, tail curling around her legs like a question mark. She reached down without looking, fingers finding the soft fur between his ears. “He’s not staying,” she told the cat. Lucien didn’t wait for an invitation. He moved past her, the scent of bergamot and something older—ozone, sulfur—filling the cramped space. The flat groaned under his weight, floorboards protesting as he crossed to the windowsill littered with star maps and half-empty teacups. Rory shut the door. The deadbolts clicked home like punctuation. For a moment, neither spoke. The hum of Brick Lane’s nightlife seeped through the thin walls—a siren’s wail, the clatter of a takeaway tray tossed into a bin. Lucien ran a finger along the spine of a leather-bound volume on a side table. *Practical Necromancy of the 18th Century*. He smirked without turning. “Still playing with dead things?” “Trying to keep them buried,” Rory replied. He chuckled, low and knowing. “Some ghosts won’t stay under.” She wanted to argue. Wanted to tell him ghosts weren’t the problem. It was the living who refused to stay buried—the ones who crawled back from their graves, dressed in the wrong clothes, saying the wrong names. Like Lucien in his tailored suit, standing too close to her books, breathing her borrowed air. “Why are you here?” She kept her back to him, hands gripping the edge of Eva’s cluttered desk. “Because you didn’t come to me.” He set down a brass paperweight shaped like a demon’s skull, exactly where Eva wouldn’t miss it. “London’s not big enough when one half of a conversation disappears.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “It wasn’t a conversation. It was an ending.” “Endings have exits. You took the fire escape.” She turned then, leaning against the desk. “You didn’t exactly leave a forwarding address, Luc. Or was hiding the corpse not part of the job description that week?” His eyes darkened at the core—like a match struck in reverse. Not anger, though. Never anger from him. Just a flicker of something sharper, something that had always sliced deeper than rage. Regret, maybe. Or the ghost of his own failures rising like mist. He didn’t deny it. The flat held its breath. Rory’s fingers curled into fists behind her. “Evan’s not dead.” “I know.” “Then why—” Her voice cracked. She cleared it, softer now. “Why dredge this up at all?” “Because you left without a note. Without a whisper.” Lucien finally looked at her, amber eye burning in the dim light. “Silas said you were gone. Vanished. And I—” He cut himself off, cane thudding once against the floor as if grounding a sound he couldn’t make. The silence that followed tasted like ash and old wine. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the couch, tail flicking in judgment. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the cat. “Eva’s still abroad?” Rory swallowed. “Yeah.” “And you’re living above Silas’ bar like some urban myth.” “Better than sleeping in my car.” That got a sharp inhale from him—almost a laugh, or a hiss through teeth. “You would have called.” “I did once.” “You lied.” The accusation settled between them, heavier than the Thames fog outside. Rory exhaled, slow. “I never lied about who I was. Only about where I was going.” Lucien’s fingers tightened around his cane’s ivory grip. “You always were terrible at goodbyes.” “So were you.” She stepped forward before she could stop herself, boots scuffing against the rug Eva had brought back from Marrakech. “You walked out on the Paris deal without a word. Just—vanished. Like it meant nothing.” “It didn’t.” His voice dropped, rough as gravel. “That’s the point. Some doors aren’t meant to be marked. Some exits aren’t meant to be found.” Rory’s breath hitched. He wasn’t talking about Paris. The realization hit like a punch to the ribs. She’d assumed his silence was indifference. But what if it was the opposite? What if he’d walked away because he couldn’t watch her leave? Lucien saw her understanding bloom in her eyes. His throat worked, Adam’s apple sliding under golden skin. “I didn’t come here to reopen wounds, Laila.” “Then why are you here?” He looked at her for a long, suspended moment. The amber in his eye seemed to glow faintly, like embers in a dying fire. “Because I need something you have.” Rory’s pulse jumped. “What?” Lucien tapped his cane against the floor once more, deliberate. “Information. The kind that doesn’t survive a phone call.” She scoffed, but the sound died in her throat. He wasn’t lying. His tells were different from humans—too still, too controlled. But the pulse at his collarbone fluttered like a trapped bird. “You could have emailed,” she said, but her voice lacked bite. “Would you have replied?” No. The word hung in the air, unspoken but louder than a scream. She’d blocked his number. Changed her routes to avoid the parts of London he frequented. Pretended he didn’t exist. And yet here he was. Rory turned away, walking to the kitchenette where Eva’s kettle sat atop an ancient ring of coil burners. “Fine. But I’m not doing this in the dark.” She clicked the burner on, the blue flame flickering under the kettle. Steam began to rise. Lucien followed, silent as a shadow. “You still take it with three sugars.” “And one for the cup.” She didn’t look at him. “Eva’s stash is in the cupboard above the toaster.” The clink of porcelain. The rattle of a spoon. Footsteps on the lino. Rory poured hot water into two chipped mugs Eva had bought at a Camden market years ago. “Talk fast. I’ve got a shift in two hours.” Lucien didn’t touch the tea. Just held the mug between his palms, watching the steam curl upward. “There’s a ledger. Ancient. Bound in human skin, written in something older than Latin.” He took a breath. “It lists the names of those who’ve trafficked souls between realms. And it’s in London.” Rory nearly dropped the spoon. “That’s not possible.” “It is.” He lifted his gaze. The amber eye burned. “And the last name added was Evan’s.” The kettle screamed. The sound fractured the moment. Rory’s hands shook as she set down the kettle. Evan’s name shouldn’t exist in a demon’s ledger. Not unless he’d done the unthinkable. Lucien didn’t need to say it aloud. The knowledge coiled between them, thick as smoke. “Why are you telling me this?” she asked, barely above a whisper. “Because your name is written next to his.” He set the untouched mug on the counter. “Page twelve. Recent addition. Real estate in the Blackwater Marshes. Legally, you’re next on the list.” Rory’s breath stopped. The Whitechapel curry house below rattled with laughter from a late-night crowd. The flat above it felt suddenly exposed, suspended in time. Lucien’s cane tapped once against the lino. “So. Are we going to talk about us… or just the ghosts?”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1386
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count3
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"fluttered"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"footsteps"
count1
13
word"fractured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"gleaming"
2"echo"
3"unreadable"
4"weight"
5"pulse"
6"flicker"
7"whisper"
8"flicked"
9"fluttered"
10"unspoken"
11"porcelain"
12"footsteps"
13"fractured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences154
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1377
ratio0.004
matches
0"Practical Necromancy of the 18th Century"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1013
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Rory16
Ptolemy3
Eva6
Lucien15
Moreau1
Evan2
Necromancy1
Thames1
Marrakech1
Paris1
Adam1
London1
Camden1
Whitechapel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Evan"
6"Adam"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Thames"
3"Marrakech"
4"Paris"
5"London"
6"Camden"
globalScore0.71
windowScore0.833
45.83% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a bad debt coming due"
1"as if grounding a sound he couldn’t make"
2"tasted like ash and old wine"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.726
wordCount1377
matches
0"not Lucien’s fault, but still, his presence felt like a bad debt coming due"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences154
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean19.67
std14.68
cv0.746
sampleLengths
060
14
219
335
425
518
611
79
847
934
1042
1110
1258
137
1410
1553
1618
1734
1811
198
2028
2144
224
235
2410
252
2616
2747
2810
2922
303
3110
326
3318
343
352
3627
3714
3837
3925
408
4133
4225
435
4430
454
4619
4732
4811
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"wasn’t talking"
1"wasn’t lying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences154
ratio0.058
matches
0"She’d been expecting Eva’s key to scrape in her lock—not the broad frame of Lucien Moreau blocking the hallway light."
1"The scar on her wrist itched, a phantom echo from Evan’s belt—not Lucien’s fault, but still, his presence felt like a bad debt coming due."
2"His amber eye gleamed; the black one stayed unreadable as ever."
3"He moved past her, the scent of bergamot and something older—ozone, sulfur—filling the cramped space."
4"The hum of Brick Lane’s nightlife seeped through the thin walls—a siren’s wail, the clatter of a takeaway tray tossed into a bin."
5"It was the living who refused to stay buried—the ones who crawled back from their graves, dressed in the wrong clothes, saying the wrong names."
6"His eyes darkened at the core—like a match struck in reverse."
7"That got a sharp inhale from him—almost a laugh, or a hiss through teeth."
8"His tells were different from humans—too still, too controlled."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1025
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.04
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006829268292682927
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences154
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences154
mean8.94
std5.77
cv0.645
sampleLengths
018
122
220
34
416
53
67
73
825
912
1011
112
122
132
1414
1511
163
176
185
1917
208
2117
2214
2313
247
256
2615
2721
284
296
305
3123
3215
336
344
355
367
375
385
394
408
4125
4216
4318
4423
4511
463
478
488
497
54.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.34415584415584416
totalSentences154
uniqueOpeners53
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then his cane tapped once"
1"Just the question hanging between"
2"Just a flicker of something"
3"Just held the mug between"
ratio0.036
85.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences110
matches
0"She’d been expecting Eva’s key"
1"His amber eye gleamed; the"
2"His mouth quirked."
3"She exhaled through her nose."
4"He knew exactly how to"
5"She reached down without looking,"
6"she told the cat"
7"He moved past her, the"
8"He smirked without turning."
9"He chuckled, low and knowing."
10"She wanted to argue."
11"It was the living who"
12"She kept her back to"
13"He set down a brass"
14"She turned then, leaning against"
15"His eyes darkened at the"
16"He didn’t deny it."
17"Her voice cracked"
18"She cleared it, softer now."
19"He cut himself off, cane"
ratio0.336
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences110
matches
0"The air from Brick Lane"
1"The flat’s shadows stretched long"
2"She’d been expecting Eva’s key"
3"A heartbeat of silence."
4"Rory didn’t close the door"
5"The scar on her wrist"
6"Lucien adjusted his charcoal jacket,"
7"His amber eye gleamed; the"
8"Rory said, arms still braced"
9"His mouth quirked."
10"She exhaled through her nose."
11"The weight of his cane"
12"He knew exactly how to"
13"Ptolemy appeared from the bedroom,"
14"She reached down without looking,"
15"she told the cat"
16"Lucien didn’t wait for an"
17"He moved past her, the"
18"The flat groaned under his"
19"Rory shut the door."
ratio0.818
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
ratio0
86.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was the living who refused to stay buried—the ones who crawled back from their graves, dressed in the wrong clothes, saying the wrong names."
1"Like Lucien in his tailored suit, standing too close to her books, breathing her borrowed air."
2"Just a flicker of something sharper, something that had always sliced deeper than rage."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She kept, hands gripping the edge of Eva’s cluttered desk"
1"she said, but her voice lacked bite"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.093
leniency0.185
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.5646%