Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0A8W876ZF5SCM0KZ9NXJNN

Run Details

Duration:
14.8s
Cost:
$0.013845
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven’s Nest buzzed against the wet Soho night, washing the pavement in a sickly glow. Rory came in with her hood up and a delivery bag banging against her hip, cold rain clinging to her sleeves. The bar held its usual stale warmth: gin, damp wool, old wood, a trace of polish fighting the smell of spilled beer. Maps covered the walls like a second skin. Black-and-white faces stared out from their frames over the room, each one caught in some earlier century, all of them fixed on the present with dead eyes. She paused just inside the door, shaking rain from her hair. “Kitchen next door’s already ringing for the satay,” she muttered, pushing the hood back. “If Yu-Fei wants me alive tomorrow, she’ll stop making me run both streets and drunks.” Silas was behind the counter, broad-shouldered and straight-backed despite the slight hitch in his left leg when he shifted. The silver ring on his right hand flashed as he set down a glass. His gaze lifted from the till, took her in, and stayed there a beat too long. “No one ever accused Yu-Fei of mercy,” he said. Rory started to grin, then stopped. The man by the far end of the bar had turned at the sound of Silas’s voice. He stood with one hand wrapped around a whiskey glass, a dark coat open over a pressed shirt. His hair had gone silver at the temples and been cut with care, not vanity. His face held lines that hadn’t been there in the memory Rory kept, sharper around the mouth, deeper at the eyes. Yet the shape of him lived in place beneath the years. The angle of his jaw. The set of his shoulders. The small scar near his eyebrow. Rory’s bag slipped against her thigh. “No,” she breathed. The man’s mouth pulled, not quite a smile, not quite a wince. “Well,” he said, voice roughened by age and something else, “that’s a fair greeting.” Silas’s hand settled on the bar top. “You two know each other.” Rory looked at Silas, then back at the man. Her throat tightened around a laugh that came out wrong. “Daniel?” He gave a small nod. “You still looked at people like they’d set the room on fire.” Her breath caught. “Danny.” The name left her mouth before she could catch it, soft and stunned, full of a shape she had not used in years. He stepped forward half a pace, then stopped, as if crossing that distance demanded a permission neither of them knew how to ask for. Silas’s eyes moved between them, alert in that quiet way of his. “I’ll be at the back if anyone needs me.” Rory shot him a look. “No, don’t vanish on me now.” But he was already turning, his limp making the movement careful, controlled. “Try not to break anything expensive.” His passing left them with the room’s low murmur and the drip of rain from Rory’s coat. Daniel lifted the glass a little. “You’ve got an audience now. Thought you might like that.” Rory snorted once, and some of the shock gave way to disbelief. “You’re here.” “I could say the same.” “You look like someone stole your old face and gave you money.” That did it. A short bark of laughter escaped him, startling both of them. “That was savage, Rory.” She folded her arms, still staring. “You’ve got grey hair.” “I know.” “You wore leather jackets like they were armour.” “I know that too.” “And you never shut up.” “Still don’t, when I’m cornered.” Her expression cracked. She looked away first, at the photographs on the wall, at a ship in one frame and a row of men in flat caps in another. Her pulse had started behaving badly, skipping at the wrong moments. “I thought you were in Manchester.” “I was.” “For how long?” He rolled the whiskey glass between his fingers. His ring finger was bare. That struck her harder than it should have. “Long enough.” “That doesn’t mean anything.” “It usually does.” She turned back. “You vanished.” His jaw tightened. “You left.” The words landed between them, clean and hard. Rory’s mouth opened, then closed again. A chair scraped somewhere behind her. A man laughed near the taps. The bar kept breathing around them. “I left because I had to,” she said. Daniel’s eyes stayed on hers. Dark now, she noticed, though she remembered them lighter in certain light, brown with gold in the centre. Age had shifted them into something deeper. “And I vanished because I had to.” “Same old competition with you.” “Still winning?” “You never changed.” That brought the second laugh, but it held no warmth. “Rory, look at me.” She had been looking. That was the problem. He wore his years differently from the men on the street with silver in their hair and regret in their gait. He’d built himself into something harder. Expensive shoes. Clean cuffs. A calm that looked bought and paid for. There was a watch on his wrist that cost more than the rent on her flat above the bar. “You’re some sort of corporate bastard now,” she said. He glanced down at the watch, then back up. “That’s generous.” “You used to nick lighters from pubs and complain about exam fees.” “I still complain.” “No, you don’t.” He took a sip. “You’d be surprised what money can do.” “Can it grow your conscience back?” His mouth pressed flat. She saw it then, the small shifts that hadn’t been in the boy she knew: the way he held himself like a door half shut, the practiced stillness in his shoulders, the pause before he answered, as if every sentence had been weighed and filed. He had not simply aged. He had been worn into a different shape. Rory looked down at her own hands, at the crescent scar on her left wrist, pale against her skin. “I didn’t expect to see you in Soho.” “That makes two of us.” “You live here?” “In London, on and off.” “You could’ve called.” “I could’ve.” She gave him a sharp look. “That’s not an answer.” “No, it isn’t.” The room had shifted around them. Someone had changed the song on the jukebox; a low guitar line threaded under the noise. Silas remained absent, though Rory knew he was near enough to hear every word if he wanted to. She wondered if he’d recognised the shape of this before it opened fully. Old friends. Old wounds. The kind of thing his bar swallowed and held in its walls. Rory set her delivery bag carefully on the floor. “How long has it been?” she asked. “Eight years.” She let out a breath through her nose. “You counted.” “Of course I counted.” “That’s not comforting.” “It wasn’t meant to be.” She stared at him, and the silence stretched thin enough to tear. Then she said, “You look like a man who’d learned how to disappear in a crowd.” He looked at her with something close to tenderness, though it had been sharpened by distance. “You look like a woman who learned how to survive one.” Her shoulders stiffened. “Don’t do that.” “Do what?” “Talk like you know me.” His gaze dropped, briefly, to the scar on her wrist, then lifted again. “I did know you.” The past tense made something hollow move through her chest. She reached for a glass on the bar, found it empty, set it back down. “Used to.” His thumb rubbed the side of his glass. “I heard about Cardiff.” She went still. “From who?” “People talk.” “You’ve got people now.” “I do.” Rory gave him a hard smile. “Right. Of course you do.” He leaned one elbow on the bar, and for a second the gesture dragged the old Daniel into the room, the one who used to sprawl in café chairs with borrowed confidence and a torn collar, who used to argue politics and music and the point of reading law when the world ran on luck and bad intent. The image vanished as quickly as it came. “You left before I could explain,” he said. Rory barked out a laugh with no humour in it. “Explain what?” “You never asked.” Her eyes flashed. “I asked enough.” “No, you didn’t.” The certainty in his voice made her step closer before she meant to. “You expect me to unpack all of that because you turned up in a bar holding whiskey like a proper stranger?” He set the glass down with care. “I expect nothing.” “That’s a lie.” He held her gaze. “Fine. I expected this.” “This?” “You looking at me like I’m a bad memory that learned to wear cologne.” Despite herself, Rory let out a short, unwilling sound that might have been a laugh. It died quickly. She looked at his hands, at the neat nails, the watch, the ringless finger. “What happened to you?” He gave a slow shrug. “Life.” “That’s a lazy answer.” “It’s the honest one.” She studied him again. He had grown into his bones, but not peacefully. There was tension in him, held under the skin like a wire. Whatever had shaped him had done it with force. She thought of the boy she had known at twenty, angry with the world, quick with a joke, reckless enough to climb fences and argue with police and kiss like he meant to start something. She thought of herself then too, all bright edges and panic under the surface, leaving notes she never meant to send, leaving cities before anyone could name the damage. “You married?” she asked before she could stop herself. He blinked once. “No.” “Good.” His brows lifted. “Good?” “Don’t get smug.” A half-smile tugged at him. “Too late.” She folded her arms again, but the edge had gone from the motion. “You got a family?” “No.” “You’ve got that face again.” “What face?” “The one where you say less than you know.” His eyes flicked away, briefly, to the front window and the rain beyond it. “And you?” Rory gave a crooked shrug. “You’d know if you’d kept in touch.” He looked back at her. “I know you live above the bar.” The small surprise on her face must have shown. “I know you work for Yu-Fei Cheung,” he continued. “I know you deliver half of Soho’s lunch and all of its grief. I know you still hate red wine, and you still put sugar in your tea when you think no one’s watching.” “Spying on me now?” He didn’t answer that. Rory’s voice softened against her will. “You didn’t forget.” “I wasn’t given the chance.” The words sat there, heavier than the noise of the room. She looked at his face, at the lines around his mouth, at the way his tiredness lived just under the surface. There had been years between them. Enough years to bury a friendship, or twist it, or make it into a story that only hurt when revisited. She said, “I wrote.” That caught him. His shoulders shifted. “What?” “I wrote to you. Twice.” He went very still. “You never replied,” she said. His mouth opened, shut. “I never got them.” She laughed once, but there was nothing light in it. “That’s convenient.” “It’s true.” “Everything’s true when it’s too late.” He took a breath through his nose, then let it out. The old urge to fight was there, but time had changed the rules. They had both become people who knew how to lose a battle by keeping their mouths closed. “Rory,” he said, and the use of her name hit like a hand on a bruise. She looked away first this time, because the room had started to feel too small. On the wall above the bar, a black-and-white photograph showed a group of women in work aprons standing on a dock, faces lifted to a wind she could not hear. Their expressions held stubbornness, fatigue, and the kind of dignity people carried when they’d been told no too many times. “What?” she said. Daniel’s voice had gone quieter. “I’m sorry.” The words were plain. No performance in them. No rescue. Just a man with a better suit and a ruined shape inside it, standing in a Soho bar under green neon with old rain on his shoulders, finally offering something he’d kept too long. Rory held his gaze. Her throat worked once. “That’s not enough,” she said. “I know.” Silas’s footsteps sounded from the back room, measured and unhurried. Rory didn’t turn. Daniel did, just slightly, enough to note the movement without breaking whatever fragile line held them. Silas came up beside the counter, ring gleaming under the low lights, and set down a clean glass without a word. His eyes moved over Rory, then Daniel, and stopped. “You look like hell,” Silas told Daniel. Daniel’s mouth twitched. “Nice to see you too.” Silas’s attention settled on Rory. “Your delivery’s in the kitchen.” She nodded without looking away from Daniel. “I know.” Silas took one look at the two of them, then reached for a bottle. The amber caught the light as he poured. “If either of you starts shouting, do it outside.” Rory’s lips parted, and for a second she almost smiled. Instead she looked back at Daniel, who stood there with his whiskey untouched and his face stripped of its polish. “You said you were in London on and off,” she said. “Which one is this?” He held her gaze. “The off part ended tonight.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2264
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"quickly"
2"very"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2264
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"tenderness"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"eyebrow"
2"pulse"
3"comforting"
4"silence"
5"tenderness"
6"tension"
7"flicked"
8"footsteps"
9"measured"
10"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences167
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences275
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2264
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1670
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Daniel"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Silas11
Rory22
Daniel10
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Daniel"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.841
windowScore0.5
79.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"not quite a smile, not quite a wince"
1"not quite a wince"
2"as if crossing that distance demanded a permission neither of them knew how to ask for"
3"something close to tenderness, though it had bee"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2264
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences275
matches
0"crossing that distance"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs152
mean14.89
std18.84
cv1.265
sampleLengths
099
111
229
349
49
56
698
76
83
912
1014
1112
1219
131
1417
154
1647
1721
1811
1918
2017
2116
2214
235
2412
2518
2610
272
288
294
305
315
3246
332
343
3523
364
373
385
395
4032
418
4237
435
442
453
4614
4766
489
4911
96.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences167
matches
0"been weighed"
1"been worn"
2"been sharpened"
3"been told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs292
matches
0"was already turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences275
ratio0.004
matches
0"Someone had changed the song on the jukebox; a low guitar line threaded under the noise."
99.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1677
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.04054859868813357
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.008348240906380441
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences275
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences275
mean8.23
std7.46
cv0.906
sampleLengths
021
121
222
38
427
511
614
715
819
914
1016
119
126
1317
1418
1515
1621
1711
185
195
206
216
223
2312
2414
257
265
279
2810
291
305
3112
323
331
3423
3524
3612
379
385
396
4012
416
4217
436
4410
4512
462
475
4812
493
46.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.24727272727272728
totalSentences275
uniqueOpeners68
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences150
matches
0"Then she said,"
1"Just a man with a"
2"Instead she looked back at"
ratio0.02
30.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount71
totalSentences150
matches
0"She paused just inside the"
1"she muttered, pushing the hood"
2"His gaze lifted from the"
3"He stood with one hand"
4"His hair had gone silver"
5"His face held lines that"
6"he said, voice roughened by"
7"Her throat tightened around a"
8"He gave a small nod."
9"Her breath caught."
10"He stepped forward half a"
11"His passing left them with"
12"She folded her arms, still"
13"Her expression cracked."
14"She looked away first, at"
15"Her pulse had started behaving"
16"He rolled the whiskey glass"
17"His ring finger was bare."
18"She turned back."
19"His jaw tightened."
ratio0.473
3.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences150
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory came in with her"
2"The bar held its usual"
3"Maps covered the walls like"
4"She paused just inside the"
5"she muttered, pushing the hood"
6"Silas was behind the counter,"
7"The silver ring on his"
8"His gaze lifted from the"
9"Rory started to grin, then"
10"The man by the far"
11"He stood with one hand"
12"His hair had gone silver"
13"His face held lines that"
14"The angle of his jaw."
15"The set of his shoulders."
16"The small scar near his"
17"Rory’s bag slipped against her"
18"The man’s mouth pulled, not"
19"he said, voice roughened by"
ratio0.913
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences150
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She saw it then, the small shifts that hadn’t been in the boy she knew: the way he held himself like a door half shut, the practiced stillness in his shoulders,…"
1"He leaned one elbow on the bar, and for a second the gesture dragged the old Daniel into the room, the one who used to sprawl in café chairs with borrowed confi…"
2"Instead she looked back at Daniel, who stood there with his whiskey untouched and his face stripped of its polish."
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, voice roughened by age and something else,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.048
84.3990%