| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.77% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 823 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "cautiously" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.32% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 823 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "glint" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 814 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.62% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 633 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.53 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 16 | | Tube | 1 | | Eva | 13 | | Veil | 2 | | Market | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Compass | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Market" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.236 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 36.36% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to reach something" | | 1 | "something like burnt sugar" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 814 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 18.93 | | std | 17.16 | | cv | 0.906 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 47 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 36 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.099 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick with the scent of mildew and something else—something metallic and faintly sweet, like old blood left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "She leaned in, sniffing faintly—chlorine and something like burnt sugar." | | 2 | "She plucked it free—a scrap of fine black wool, barely larger than a handkerchief." | | 3 | "At the far end, near a service door half-open to darkness, something glinted on the ground—a single black button, half-buried in grime." | | 4 | "The button was heavy, jet black, with a single thin silver stitch—eight holes, military grade." | | 5 | "Quinn’s fingers curled around the brass compass in her coat pocket—the Veil Compass." | | 6 | "Her gaze locked onto a faint smudge on the platform’s edge—not dirt, not grime." | | 7 | "A shadow shifted at the end of the platform—a slow uncoiling from the darkness, something too tall, too thin to be human." | | 8 | "Then—" |
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| 90.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 644 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "single thin silver stitch—" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.043478260869565216 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.018633540372670808 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 8.95 | | std | 6.48 | | cv | 0.724 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 28 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 58.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.3626373626373626 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 54.64% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Too close to the surface." |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "She flicked on her torch," | | 1 | "She picked it up cautiously," | | 2 | "She held up the glass" | | 3 | "His eyes were open, wide" | | 4 | "She leaned in, sniffing faintly—chlorine" | | 5 | "She stood abruptly." | | 6 | "She plucked it free—a scrap" | | 7 | "She picked it up between" | | 8 | "She held it up." | | 9 | "She turned, her eyes narrowing" | | 10 | "She’d come prepared." | | 11 | "Her gaze locked onto a" | | 12 | "She knelt, pressing her fingers" | | 13 | "She didn’t look back." | | 14 | "She glanced at Eva." |
| | ratio | 0.246 | |
| 9.18% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 1 | "The air hung thick with" | | 2 | "She flicked on her torch," | | 3 | "Eva stood near the center" | | 4 | "The corpse lay sprawled on" | | 5 | "A dark stain spread across" | | 6 | "Quinn’s jaw tightened." | | 7 | "Eva didn’t look up." | | 8 | "Quinn moved closer, her boots" | | 9 | "A shard of green-tinted glass" | | 10 | "She picked it up cautiously," | | 11 | "Quinn’s gaze flicked around the" | | 12 | "She held up the glass" | | 13 | "Eva exhaled sharply through her" | | 14 | "Quinn stepped closer, crouching to" | | 15 | "His eyes were open, wide" | | 16 | "A thin line of dried" | | 17 | "She leaned in, sniffing faintly—chlorine" | | 18 | "She stood abruptly." | | 19 | "Eva finally looked up, tucking" |
| | ratio | 0.902 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The corpse lay sprawled on the filthy platform, limbs splayed at unnatural angles, one arm flung out as if trying to reach something." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn stepped, crouching to examine the man’s face" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |