| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "Eva said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.234 | | leniency | 0.468 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.085 | |
| 89.41% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 57.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1416 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "unraveling" | | 5 | "eyebrow" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "weight" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 166 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 202 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1406 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 16.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1124 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.4 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 27 | | Tube | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Eva | 20 | | Shade | 2 | | Like | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Kowalski" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Like" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.299 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1406 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 202 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 87 | | mean | 16.16 | | std | 13.92 | | cv | 0.861 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 63 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 27 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 36 | | 20 | 31 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 23 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 166 | | matches | | 0 | "been poured" | | 1 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 202 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a navy-blue coat swaying near the tunnel mouth where the tracks had collapsed years ago, or so the records claimed." | | 1 | "The air smelled of wet stone and something older—rusted pipes mixed with burnt wiring and the faintest whiff of something sweet, almost like clover." | | 2 | "Blood pooled dark on the stone, thick enough to smell—coppery, cloying." | | 3 | "A curl of red hair had escaped her glasses frame—she tucked it behind her left ear with a nervous flick." | | 4 | "Quinn glanced at her watch—worn leather, ticking steady despite the damp." | | 5 | "The blood seemed to have congealed in a way that defied timing—like it had stopped flowing before death." | | 6 | "Something in Eva’s tone rang hollow—like she was reciting lines from a half-remembered book." | | 7 | "But the margins looked cauterized—edges darkened, tissue fused." | | 8 | "He shrieked, clutching his face—black veins spidering from his eyes like ink in water." | | 9 | "His pupils were gone—just black pits pouring darkness." | | 10 | "She looked up at a stall keeper—a wiry figure with too many knuckles per finger." | | 11 | "The shadow advanced—no face, just a void in the shape of a man." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1137 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.029023746701846966 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0079155672823219 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 202 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 202 | | mean | 6.96 | | std | 5.4 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 54.46% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3712871287128713 | | totalSentences | 202 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw the body." | | 1 | "Just stared at the spreading" | | 2 | "Then she nodded." | | 3 | "Then it lunged." |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She was in territory where" | | 2 | "Her boots clicked on the" | | 3 | "She knew better than to" | | 4 | "She only cared about what" | | 5 | "It lay beneath the rusted," | | 6 | "She crouched, ignoring the damp" | | 7 | "She reached out, gloved hand" | | 8 | "His fingernails were black at" | | 9 | "She exhaled through her nose." | | 10 | "She carried a worn brown" | | 11 | "She gestured vaguely at the" | | 12 | "She reached into her bag," | | 13 | "She didn’t believe in Not" | | 14 | "She turned back to the" | | 15 | "She knelt again, closer." | | 16 | "She reached in, pinched it" | | 17 | "She pulled it free." | | 18 | "He shrieked, clutching his face—black" | | 19 | "His pupils were gone—just black" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 73.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 99 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off" | | 1 | "The platform’s tiled walls glinted" | | 2 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "She was in territory where" | | 5 | "Her boots clicked on the" | | 6 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 7 | "These ruins had been silent" | | 8 | "A bonfire smoldered near the" | | 9 | "Tarpaulins sagged over crooked trestles" | | 10 | "A woman in a long" | | 11 | "Quinn didn’t pause." | | 12 | "She knew better than to" | | 13 | "She only cared about what" | | 14 | "It lay beneath the rusted," | | 15 | "Something surgical in the precision." | | 16 | "Blood pooled dark on the" | | 17 | "She crouched, ignoring the damp" | | 18 | "The victim was a man," | | 19 | "She reached out, gloved hand" |
| | ratio | 0.773 | |
| 78.13% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time Quinn reached" | | 1 | "Because she recognized the thing" |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A bonfire smoldered near the edge of the platform, casting long shadows past the makeshift stalls that shouldn’t exist." | | 1 | "Engraved with spirals and jagged sigils that made her fingers twitch." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.17 | | leniency | 0.34 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.085 | |