| 29.79% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory said dryly [dryly]" | | 1 | "Isolde said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 2 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" | | 3 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.277 | | leniency | 0.553 | | rawRatio | 0.308 | | effectiveRatio | 0.17 | |
| 77.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1793 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "lightly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "sharply" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.34% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1793 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "resonance" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "measured" | | 7 | "echoes" | | 8 | "gleaming" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "lurched" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "pulsed" | | 15 | "gloom" | | 16 | "could feel" | | 17 | "electric" | | 18 | "quickened" | | 19 | "flicked" | | 20 | "trembled" | | 21 | "grave" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 213 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 213 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 247 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.82% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 30 | | markdownWords | 104 | | totalWords | 1775 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones remember." | | 1 | "The Fae do not respect the laws of time." | | 2 | "sing" | | 3 | "Come closer," | | 4 | "See what waits within." | | 5 | "It also does not approve of questions it hasn’t been asked." | | 6 | "are." | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "We are being observed." | | 9 | "trap" | | 10 | "It is a test of trust." | | 11 | "It will not." | | 12 | "yielded" | | 13 | "knew" | | 14 | "shuddered" | | 15 | "Guides," | | 16 | "Or guardians. They do not yet decide if you deserve to pass." | | 17 | "know" | | 18 | "It recognizes this place. It draws power from the Veil’s thinness." | | 19 | "cracked" | | 20 | "hhhhhh" | | 21 | "For now." | | 22 | "smiled" | | 23 | "her." | | 24 | "You hesitate. Do you not trust it?" | | 25 | "that" | | 26 | "reached back." | | 27 | "The past is not a warning. It is a choice." | | 28 | "could be" | | 29 | "will be." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.94% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 92 | | wordCount | 1495 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 29 | | Nyx | 14 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 35 | | Fae | 2 | | Ahead | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Veil | 2 | | Evan | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Fae" | | 5 | "Heartstone" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.329 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 78.57% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if stretching into the gaps between reality" | | 1 | "as if bending aside in deference" | | 2 | "as if sleeping" |
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| 30.99% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.69 | | wordCount | 1775 | | matches | | 0 | "not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it" | | 1 | "Not in the way of roots or earthworms, but like something watched from below" | | 2 | "not under her weight, but as though it *knew* her" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 247 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 112 | | mean | 15.85 | | std | 12.71 | | cv | 0.802 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 37 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 45 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 45 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 43 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 42 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 97.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 213 | | matches | | 0 | "been scoured" | | 1 | "been asked" | | 2 | "was woven" | | 3 | "were made" | | 4 | "was pulled" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 294 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 20 | | totalSentences | 247 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed grapes left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "The first thing that struck her was the silence—not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it." | | 2 | "Not a trail—it looked more like a scar across the earth, a strip where the moss had been scoured away, leaving bare soil exposed." | | 3 | "The sound wasn’t from the branches—it was deeper, like the hum of a plucked harp’s underside." | | 4 | "Ahead, the path curved sharply—and the world *shimmered*." | | 5 | "It spanned a chasm so deep Rory couldn’t see the bottom—just endless black, stretching into infinity." | | 6 | "Not ice, not stone—something in between." | | 7 | "She could almost make them out now—tall, gaunt figures with hollow eyes, their bodies shifting between solid and mist." | | 8 | "Her eyes were no longer pale lavender—they burned faint violet, like embers." | | 9 | "Rory’s hand flew to the pendant beneath her jacket—the Heartstone, warm against her chest." | | 10 | "The guardian figures closed in, their forms solidifying into something resembling people—if people were made of bark and smoke." | | 11 | "The chasm below let out a sound like a held breath released—*hhhhhh*—a gust of air that smelled of burnt cinnamon and old blood." | | 12 | "The guardian figures bowed their heads—or perhaps it was a dismissal." | | 13 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors—petals of deep violet, electric blue, black as midnight." | | 14 | "When Rory stepped closer, she saw her own face ripple back—but older." | | 15 | "She had come seeking answers about the Veil—about the rifts." | | 16 | "Now it showed a door—old wood, painted red, slightly ajar." | | 17 | "She reached toward the pool—but her hand didn’t touch the surface." | | 18 | "He knocked on the door—once, twice." | | 19 | "And a girl—herself, but younger." |
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| 92.64% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1516 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "silver twisted together, pulsing" |
| | adverbCount | 63 | | adverbRatio | 0.04155672823218998 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012532981530343008 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 247 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 247 | | mean | 7.19 | | std | 4.72 | | cv | 0.656 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 39.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.2631578947368421 | | totalSentences | 247 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw it." | | 1 | "Then the trees began to" | | 2 | "Then she saw the bridge." | | 3 | "Then pulled the Heartstone free." | | 4 | "Instead, the reflection *reached back.*" | | 5 | "Then pushed it open." |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, more to herself" | | 1 | "Their voice curled around Rory’s" | | 2 | "She stood a dozen paces" | | 3 | "She turned, lips curving in" | | 4 | "She pushed to her feet," | | 5 | "They stepped forward." | | 6 | "They weren’t quite oak." | | 7 | "It started as a low" | | 8 | "She clamped her hands over" | | 9 | "It was in her skull." | | 10 | "*It also does not approve" | | 11 | "*We are being observed.*" | | 12 | "She focused on Isolde’s back," | | 13 | "It spanned a chasm so" | | 14 | "It was woven from light:" | | 15 | "It coiled like a serpent," | | 16 | "*It is a test of" | | 17 | "*It will not.*" | | 18 | "She simply began to walk." | | 19 | "She moved forward, unhurried, untroubled." |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 59.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 145 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hung thick with" | | 1 | "Rory crouched, fingers brushing the" | | 2 | "The standing stones were warm" | | 3 | "she muttered, more to herself" | | 4 | "Nyx shifted beside her, the" | | 5 | "A ripple ran through the" | | 6 | "Their voice curled around Rory’s" | | 7 | "*The stones remember.*" | | 8 | "Isolde didn’t answer." | | 9 | "She stood a dozen paces" | | 10 | "She turned, lips curving in" | | 11 | "Rory said dryly" | | 12 | "She pushed to her feet," | | 13 | "They stepped forward." | | 14 | "The first thing that struck" | | 15 | "They weren’t quite oak." | | 16 | "Isolde moved ahead, her bare" | | 17 | "Nyx followed, their form elongating" | | 18 | "Rory lagged behind by half" | | 19 | "Nyx hummed, amused." |
| | ratio | 0.801 | |
| 55.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it showed a door—old" | | 1 | "To go back." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 58.11% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood a dozen paces ahead, her silver hair catching the faintest light, as if woven from moonlight itself." | | 1 | "The first thing that struck her was the silence—not the absence of sound, but the wrongness of it." | | 2 | "Yet the trees swayed, their branches twisting in patterns that made Rory’s eyes ache if she looked too long." | | 3 | "Nyx followed, their form elongating slightly as if stretching into the gaps between reality." | | 4 | "It started as a low vibration in Rory’s ribs, a resonance that turned her bones into strings." | | 5 | "The moment her foot touched the first strand, it *yielded*, not under her weight, but as though it *knew* her." | | 6 | "The chasm below let out a sound like a held breath released—*hhhhhh*—a gust of air that smelled of burnt cinnamon and old blood." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, more to herself than anyone else" |
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| 86.17% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory argued (argue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 47 | | tagDensity | 0.255 | | leniency | 0.511 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.128 | |