| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.78% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.36% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1758 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "glint" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "flicker" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "sanctuary" | | 10 | "wavering" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "flicked" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "perfect" | | 16 | "marble" | | 17 | "velvet" | | 18 | "predator" | | 19 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 163 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 211 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1731 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "something" | | 1 | "tell" | | 2 | "hummed" | | 3 | "shrunk" | | 4 | "memories" | | 5 | "yielded" | | 6 | "pressure" | | 7 | "tear" | | 8 | "breath" | | 9 | "opened" | | 10 | "melted" | | 11 | "yielded" | | 12 | "eyes" | | 13 | "changed again" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 78 | | wordCount | 1245 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 37 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 20 | | Prince | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Prince" | | 4 | "Belphegor" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.014 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 32.35% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something like it—flickered in their gaze" | | 1 | "as if breathing" | | 2 | "something like cinnamon" | | 3 | "as if returning to a lover’s embrace" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.889 | | wordCount | 1731 | | matches | | 0 | "not walking, not running, but slipping between the gaps in reality" | | 1 | "not running, but slipping between the gaps in reality" | | 2 | "no flame but" | | 3 | "not warmth, but *pressure*, like the air before a storm" | | 4 | "not in the grove, but in a place" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 99 | | mean | 17.48 | | std | 13.62 | | cv | 0.779 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 50 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 25 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 63 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 28 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 24 | | totalSentences | 211 | | ratio | 0.114 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed once, like a heartbeat—warm, almost reassuring." | | 1 | "After what she’d seen—the shadows moving on their own, the way the air thickened when they spoke—she’d stopped flinching at impossible things." | | 2 | "A ripple passed through the darkness—a shift in density, less mist, more form." | | 3 | "A glint of amusement—or something like it—flickered in their gaze." | | 4 | "They moved then, gliding toward the end of the alley—not walking, not running, but slipping between the gaps in reality." | | 5 | "But where the trees should have been normal, Rory saw something else—an unnatural stillness, a hush deeper than silence." | | 6 | "The trees didn’t creak—they *hummed*, a low vibration in Rory’s ribs." | | 7 | "Not in distance—time." | | 8 | "The morning London sky darkened; the air thickened like syrup." | | 9 | "And the light—it wasn’t sunlight." | | 10 | "The grass didn’t bend to her weight—it *yielded*, then rebounded, like walking on memory." | | 11 | "At the center stood a figure—tall, silver-haired, their back turned." | | 12 | "The air around them bent, as if they radiated heat—not warmth, but *pressure*, like the air before a storm." | | 13 | "Isolde’s lips curled faintly—almost a smile, or a grimace." | | 14 | "Birds—if they were birds—chirped in notes too high, too sharp." | | 15 | "A low sound rolled through the grove—not wind, not thunder—*breath*, vast and unseen." | | 16 | "Not cracked—*opened*." | | 17 | "Within the depths, light flickered—not torchlight, not magic—but the dim glow of distant feasts." | | 18 | "They lifted their head and sniffed the air—tasted it, like a predator testing wind." | | 19 | "The rift behind the traveler pulsed, and from within, the sound of laughter rose—dozens, hundreds of voices, feasting, drinking, chewing." | | 20 | "A gesture Rory had only seen in dreams—an invitation, or a warning." | | 21 | "No—*yielded*." | | 22 | "Nyx smiled—something rare, something almost warm." | | 23 | "She stood not in the grove, but in a place where the sky was warm amber, vast, endless—and in the distance, spread before her, lay a land of vineyards and golden fields, of towering spires shaped like feasting halls, and pathways lined with souls in chains, carrying baskets of grapes that never emptied." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 364 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 8 | | adverbRatio | 0.02197802197802198 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008241758241758242 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 211 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 211 | | mean | 8.2 | | std | 6.42 | | cv | 0.783 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 44.23% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3080568720379147 | | totalSentences | 211 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "More than one thing." | | 1 | "Then, from the heart of" | | 2 | "Then they turned their gaze" | | 3 | "Then the ground beneath the" | | 4 | "Then they turned and slipped" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "It pulsed once, like a" | | 1 | "She didn’t like feeling watched," | | 2 | "she said, stepping closer" | | 3 | "It burned faintly under her" | | 4 | "They moved then, gliding toward" | | 5 | "They pulsed faintly, as if" | | 6 | "She took a step forward," | | 7 | "It felt alive." | | 8 | "They moved forward, a shadow" | | 9 | "It was something else." | | 10 | "She pulled her coat tighter." | | 11 | "She stepped carefully over moss" | | 12 | "Her gaze flicked to Nyx" | | 13 | "Their skin was too smooth," | | 14 | "Their eyes were black pits," | | 15 | "They wore a cloak of" | | 16 | "They lifted their head and" | | 17 | "Their voice was liquid honey" | | 18 | "Her hand hovered near her" | | 19 | "Their teeth were too white." |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 31.97% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | 0 | "The alley behind" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, like a" | | 3 | "She didn’t like feeling watched," | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice materialised from the" | | 5 | "Rory didn’t jump." | | 6 | "she said, stepping closer" | | 7 | "A ripple passed through the" | | 8 | "Nyx stood taller, their silhouette" | | 9 | "Nyx tilted their head." | | 10 | "A glint of amusement—or something" | | 11 | "Rory exhaled sharply." | | 12 | "A gust of cold air" | | 13 | "Rory’s stomach twisted." | | 14 | "Dymas was a realm Rory" | | 15 | "Purgatory’s gourmet wing." | | 16 | "Rory wanted to laugh." | | 17 | "Nyx stepped closer, their solid" | | 18 | "Rory glanced toward the mouth" | | 19 | "Rory touched the pendant again." |
| | ratio | 0.856 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stood taller, their silhouette gaining definition, violet eyes glowing faintly like dying embers." | | 1 | "The trees grew taller, their bark shifting from brown to silver-blue, etched with glowing runes." | | 2 | "A path wound through the trees, lined with stone lanterns that gave no flame but cast wavering, violet light." | | 3 | "Isolde tilted her head, silver hair rippling as if underwater." | | 4 | "Their eyes were black pits, reflecting flames that weren’t there." | | 5 | "The golden-skinned figure sank into the moss with a sigh, as if returning to a lover’s embrace." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 64 | | tagDensity | 0.219 | | leniency | 0.438 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.063 | |