| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.195 | | leniency | 0.39 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.88% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1096 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1096 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "loomed" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "surreal" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "churned" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "depths" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 106 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1084 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 26.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 852 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 2.46 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 21 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 13 | | Isolde | 12 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.268 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 18.42% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "color that seemed to pulse with its own inner radiance" | | 1 | "smelled like iron and old mushrooms" | | 2 | "as if trying to break free from her grip" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.923 | | wordCount | 1084 | | matches | | 0 | "not with fear, but with possibility" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 17.21 | | std | 14.65 | | cv | 0.851 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 75 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 31 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 53 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 30 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 62 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 42 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 157 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "The stones hummed—low, resonant, like a plucked harp string." | | 1 | "—and her boot met only empty air." | | 2 | "Wildflowers bloomed—snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—in a riot of color that seemed to pulse with its own inner radiance." | | 3 | "The light filtered through a canopy that shouldn't exist—faint, golden, and yet too bright, painting everything in a surreal glow." | | 4 | "The trees here were different—gnarled, twisted things with bark like cracked leather and sap that wept a slow, glowing amber." | | 5 | "At the center grew a single plant—a thorned stalk bearing a single bloom: a deep crimson flower, pulsing faintly, like a heartbeat." | | 6 | "The pendant's glow flared—matching the flower's crimson exactly." | | 7 | "Not like an earthquake—like something waking beneath them." | | 8 | "From the cracks between stones, tendrils of black mist curled upward, forming shapes—faces, hands, things that had no right to be remembered." | | 9 | "The mist tendrils stretched taller, coalescing into a figure—a gaunt, many-limbed thing with too many eyes, watching from within the living darkness." | | 10 | "Then—silence." | | 11 | "The air between them thickened again—not with fear, but with possibility." | | 12 | "From the depths of the twisted trees, a sound emerged—a low, guttural hum, like a voice speaking through submerged walls." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 868 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03917050691244239 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014976958525345621 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 7.8 | | std | 5.39 | | cv | 0.691 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 42.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.26618705035971224 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Then solid earth returned." | | 1 | "Just the whisper of leaves," | | 2 | "Then the ground changed again." | | 3 | "Then the ground trembled." |
| | ratio | 0.041 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 1 | "She moved without sound, without" | | 2 | "she called back" | | 3 | "It pulsed stronger, brighter, as" | | 4 | "It smelled like iron and" | | 5 | "She touched the black earth." | | 6 | "It clung to her fingers," | | 7 | "Her breath caught." | | 8 | "Its petals shimmered, translucent, revealing" | | 9 | "She looked at the crimson" | | 10 | "It had closed." | | 11 | "Its heartbeat ceased." | | 12 | "They weren't just in a" | | 13 | "They were on the edge" | | 14 | "It vibrated in Rory's ribs," |
| | ratio | 0.153 | |
| 36.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The morning mist clung to" | | 1 | "Nyx materialized beside her, the" | | 2 | "Rory didn't answer immediately." | | 3 | "The stones hummed—low, resonant, like" | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 5 | "The pulse from the Heartstone" | | 6 | "Nyx tilted their head, voice" | | 7 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 8 | "Nyx's form rippled" | | 9 | "A silver laugh cut through" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped from behind one" | | 11 | "She moved without sound, without" | | 12 | "Isolde said, her voice like" | | 13 | "Rory scrutinized the seer." | | 14 | "Isolde's lavender eyes gleamed." | | 15 | "Nyx shifted closer to Rory." | | 16 | "Rory took a step forward" | | 17 | "The ground vanished beneath her," | | 18 | "The path beneath her became" | | 19 | "The standing stones loomed behind" |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "—and her boot met only" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The pulse from the Heartstone Pendant against her sternum strengthened, a warm thrumming that vibrated through her ribs." | | 1 | "Wildflowers bloomed—snowdrops, bluebells, poppies—in a riot of color that seemed to pulse with its own inner radiance." | | 2 | "The trees closed in, their trunks twisting into impossible spirals, branches arching overhead like cathedral vaulting." | | 3 | "The light filtered through a canopy that shouldn't exist—faint, golden, and yet too bright, painting everything in a surreal glow." | | 4 | "The earth turned black beneath their feet, slick with moisture that wasn't water, but something thicker, darker." | | 5 | "The trees here were different—gnarled, twisted things with bark like cracked leather and sap that wept a slow, glowing amber." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her voice sharper than before" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.122 | | leniency | 0.244 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |