| 51.85% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His fingers stilled just [just]" | | 1 | "he said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.259 | | leniency | 0.519 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |
| 86.95% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.78% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1149 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoed" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "traced" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1142 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1024 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Like | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Emergency | 1 | | Guilt | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Rory | 10 | | Prague | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Silas | 12 | | Survival | 4 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Prague" | | 3 | "Soho" |
| | globalScore | 0.914 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 22.84 | | std | 18.93 | | cv | 0.829 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 56 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 57 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 44 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 20 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 171 | | matches | | 0 | "was eating" | | 1 | "was calling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The air hit her—smoke and stale beer and something faintly chemical clinging to the back of her tongue." | | 1 | "His hands were steady though—always steady." | | 2 | "Everything nowadays impressed her that way—cheap and temporary." | | 3 | "The burn surprised her—she wasn’t used to drinking something that didn’t come in a can labelled Emergency or Guilt." | | 4 | "Rory’s stomach answered for her—a sharp, traitorous growl." | | 5 | "Back inside, the bar had filled up—regulars at the far end, a couple in the corner booth whispering over a laptop, some bloke hunched over a single glass of something expensive." | | 6 | "The name hit her like a punch—sudden, unexpected." |
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| 73.09% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 313 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same warped wooden floor," |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.06389776357827476 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012779552715654952 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 8.85 | | std | 6.02 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 21 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 58.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3875968992248062 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then resumed their motion." | | 1 | "Just the food." | | 2 | "Then she turned toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed the door open." | | 1 | "His auburn hair had more" | | 2 | "He moved slower, too, the" | | 3 | "His hands were steady though—always" | | 4 | "He didn’t stop polishing." | | 5 | "Her voice felt rusty from" | | 6 | "His fingers stilled, just for" | | 7 | "He reached for another one," | | 8 | "She’d bought them second-hand." | | 9 | "She said it like she" | | 10 | "He poured two fingers into" | | 11 | "She took a sip." | | 12 | "They stared at each other." | | 13 | "he said finally" | | 14 | "She traced a finger along" | | 15 | "She could say she liked" | | 16 | "She could say it was" | | 17 | "She’d stayed because it was" | | 18 | "He turned away, busied himself" | | 19 | "She bit into the pork" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 83.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The neon sign buzzed like" | | 1 | "Rory paused under it, the" | | 2 | "She pushed the door open." | | 3 | "The air hit her—smoke and" | | 4 | "The bar hadn’t changed." | | 5 | "The same warped wooden floor," | | 6 | "The walls were still papered" | | 7 | "Silas stood behind the bar," | | 8 | "His auburn hair had more" | | 9 | "He moved slower, too, the" | | 10 | "His hands were steady though—always" | | 11 | "Rory hesitated by the door." | | 12 | "Recognition bloomed slow, like a" | | 13 | "He didn’t stop polishing." | | 14 | "Her voice felt rusty from" | | 15 | "His fingers stilled, just for" | | 16 | "The fluorescent lights above the" | | 17 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 18 | "Silas slid the polished glass" | | 19 | "He reached for another one," |
| | ratio | 0.753 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Even if Silas hadn’t talked" | | 1 | "Before Evan’s grip bruised her" | | 2 | "Before she learned to sleep" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that might’ve been white once." | | 1 | "The burn surprised her—she wasn’t used to drinking something that didn’t come in a can labelled Emergency or Guilt." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |