Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0AD88N9YT86B2462Z1625M

Run Details

Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.001685
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign buzzed like an insect caught in a jar above the door, its green light flickering across the pavement. Rory paused under it, the same old coil of dread tightening in her chest. Three years since she’d walked these cobbled streets, three years since she’d set foot in The Raven’s Nest. Yet the place still pulled at her, like a scab she couldn’t help but pick. She pushed the door open. The air hit her—smoke and stale beer and something faintly chemical clinging to the back of her tongue. The bar hadn’t changed. The same warped wooden floor, the same mismatched chairs, the same ceiling fan with one blade slightly off-kilter. The walls were still papered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photos of men in fedoras, their faces half-erased by time. Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that might’ve been white once. His auburn hair had more grey now, streaked through it like fault lines. He moved slower, too, the limp in his left leg more pronounced after years of standing. His hands were steady though—always steady. Rory hesitated by the door. Three months she’d lived upstairs, and in all that time she’d made sure to come and go through the back staircase. But tonight, she’d run out of milk. And the landlord’s knock had echoed down the corridor just after midnight, his voice nasally and insistent about the rent being late *again*. So here she was. Silas’ eyes flicked up. Recognition bloomed slow, like a match catching. He didn’t stop polishing. “You’re out of hours,” she said. Her voice felt rusty from disuse. “Customers come when they need to.” His fingers stilled, just for a second. Then resumed their motion. “You look well.” She wasn’t. Not really. The fluorescent lights above the bar turned her dark skin sallow, and the circles under her eyes weren’t just from exhaustion. But she lifted her chin anyway. “I’ve got used to sleeping at night.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “So have I.” Silas slid the polished glass onto the shelf behind him with a quiet *click*. He reached for another one, inspected it against the light. The signet ring on his right hand caught the glow, silver flashing between his fingers. Rory stepped forward, her boots scuffing the floor. The soles were worn thin where she dragged her feet when she walked alone at night. She’d bought them second-hand. Everything nowadays impressed her that way—cheap and temporary. “What’ll you have?” “Whiskey. Neat.” She said it like she lived here. Like she hadn’t spent three years avoiding the question of why she left Cardiff in the first place. Silas didn’t comment. He poured two fingers into a glass, slid it across the bar. The liquid caught the neon glow, amber and warm. Rory wrapped her fingers around it, felt the chill of the glass against her palm. She took a sip. The burn surprised her—she wasn’t used to drinking something that didn’t come in a can labelled Emergency or Guilt. They stared at each other. Not hostility, not warmth. The kind of stillness that happened when two people knew too many secrets to speak them aloud. “You’re working at the Golden Empress now,” he said finally. “Delivery driver. Part-time.” She traced a finger along the bar’s edge. The wood was sticky in places. “Flexible hours. No questions asked about schedules.” “Smart.” “Not really.” Silas exhaled through his nose, a sound that might’ve been a laugh in another life. “You always knew how to survive.” The words hung between them. Survival wasn’t the half of it. Survival was eating cold beans from a can while huddled under a blanket. Survival was calling your mother at 3 AM just to hear a familiar voice before hanging up. Survival was the hollow thump in your chest when Evan’s fingers closed around your wrist again. But Rory didn’t say any of that. Silas leaned his weight on his good leg, the left one that gave him trouble after Prague. “The flat’s paid up till the end of the month.” “I know.” “Then why are you still here?” The question settled between them like a dropped coin. Rory swirled the whiskey, watched it climb the sides of the glass. She could say she liked the location. Easy access to Soho, close to the restaurant, the transport links. She could say it was temporary until she saved enough for something better. But they both knew the truth. She’d stayed because it was the last place that felt like home. Even if Silas hadn’t talked to her in over a thousand days. He turned away, busied himself wiping down the optics. “You eat yet?” “Not hungry.” “Liar.” A beat. “Yu-Fei’s got leftovers. Pork belly. Still warm in the bag.” Rory’s stomach answered for her—a sharp, traitorous growl. Silas’s mouth twitched. Fifteen minutes later, she stood in the back alley behind the bar, the scent of fried meat cutting through the usual stench of bin bags and old rain. The delivery bag was warm in her hands. Silas had added a chilli sauce packet and a fork wrapped in paper. No note. Just the food. She bit into the pork belly. The meat was tender, infused with five-spice and garlic. Perfect. Yu-Fei never disappointed. Back inside, the bar had filled up—regulars at the far end, a couple in the corner booth whispering over a laptop, some bloke hunched over a single glass of something expensive. The hum of voices wrapped around Rory like an old coat. Familiar. Safe. Silas watched her from behind the bar as she ate, something unreadable in his expression. “You’re not working tonight?” she asked around a mouthful. “Cover came in.” He nodded toward the back. The secret room’s door was ajar, a sliver of light cutting through the dim. “No rest for the wicked.” Rory swallowed. “Needs must.” Silas’s laugh was quiet. “My thoughts exactly.” She wiped her fingers on a napkin, balled it up. The trash can sat behind him, just out of reach. He didn’t move to take it. Neither did she. Outside, a siren wailed, echoing off the buildings like a dying animal. Rory glanced at the door, then back at Silas. “It’s good to see you, Rory.” The name hit her like a punch—sudden, unexpected. He hadn’t called her that in… how long? Cardiff, maybe. Before everything. Before Evan’s grip bruised her wrists. Before she learned to sleep with a knife under her pillow. “You too, Silas.” The lie tasted bitter. She crushed the empty bag into a tighter ball, tossed it into the bin. Then she turned toward the door. Silas didn’t call her back. Didn’t try to stop her. But as she pushed through the door into the neon-lit street, she felt his eyes on her back. Burning hotter than any debt.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His fingers stilled just [just]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.259
leniency0.519
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.148
86.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1149
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"flicked"
2"chill"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"familiar"
6"weight"
7"stomach"
8"perfect"
9"unreadable"
10"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"felt the chill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1142
ratio0.002
matches
0"again"
1"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1024
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.17
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Like1
Cardiff2
Emergency1
Guilt1
Evan2
Rory10
Prague1
Soho1
Silas12
Survival4
persons
0"Evan"
1"Rory"
2"Silas"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
2"Prague"
3"Soho"
globalScore0.914
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like home"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1142
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean22.84
std18.93
cv0.829
sampleLengths
068
165
251
356
44
515
612
720
838
911
1039
1136
123
1327
1462
1526
1610
1724
181
192
2021
2157
227
2327
242
256
2652
276
2824
2912
302
3113
3211
3354
3419
3544
3615
379
3827
394
407
4129
4221
436
4437
453
464
4720
4810
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs171
matches
0"was eating"
1"was calling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences129
ratio0.054
matches
0"The air hit her—smoke and stale beer and something faintly chemical clinging to the back of her tongue."
1"His hands were steady though—always steady."
2"Everything nowadays impressed her that way—cheap and temporary."
3"The burn surprised her—she wasn’t used to drinking something that didn’t come in a can labelled Emergency or Guilt."
4"Rory’s stomach answered for her—a sharp, traitorous growl."
5"Back inside, the bar had filled up—regulars at the far end, a couple in the corner booth whispering over a laptop, some bloke hunched over a single glass of something expensive."
6"The name hit her like a punch—sudden, unexpected."
73.09% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount313
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same warped wooden floor,"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.06389776357827476
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.012779552715654952
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean8.85
std6.02
cv0.681
sampleLengths
021
114
218
315
45
518
64
718
820
916
1013
1116
126
135
1421
157
1623
174
184
197
204
216
226
2313
244
253
262
272
2821
296
307
318
323
3314
3410
3515
368
3716
384
398
403
419
4218
433
4412
459
4615
474
4819
495
58.40% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3875968992248062
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then resumed their motion."
1"Just the food."
2"Then she turned toward the"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences97
matches
0"She pushed the door open."
1"His auburn hair had more"
2"He moved slower, too, the"
3"His hands were steady though—always"
4"He didn’t stop polishing."
5"Her voice felt rusty from"
6"His fingers stilled, just for"
7"He reached for another one,"
8"She’d bought them second-hand."
9"She said it like she"
10"He poured two fingers into"
11"She took a sip."
12"They stared at each other."
13"he said finally"
14"She traced a finger along"
15"She could say she liked"
16"She could say it was"
17"She’d stayed because it was"
18"He turned away, busied himself"
19"She bit into the pork"
ratio0.268
83.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences97
matches
0"The neon sign buzzed like"
1"Rory paused under it, the"
2"She pushed the door open."
3"The air hit her—smoke and"
4"The bar hadn’t changed."
5"The same warped wooden floor,"
6"The walls were still papered"
7"Silas stood behind the bar,"
8"His auburn hair had more"
9"He moved slower, too, the"
10"His hands were steady though—always"
11"Rory hesitated by the door."
12"Recognition bloomed slow, like a"
13"He didn’t stop polishing."
14"Her voice felt rusty from"
15"His fingers stilled, just for"
16"The fluorescent lights above the"
17"A ghost of a smile"
18"Silas slid the polished glass"
19"He reached for another one,"
ratio0.753
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences97
matches
0"Even if Silas hadn’t talked"
1"Before Evan’s grip bruised her"
2"Before she learned to sleep"
ratio0.031
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Silas stood behind the bar, polishing a glass with a rag that might’ve been white once."
1"The burn surprised her—she wasn’t used to drinking something that didn’t come in a can labelled Emergency or Guilt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.5037%