| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said slowly [slowly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.424 | | leniency | 0.848 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |
| 82.25% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1127 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1127 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "glinting" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "trembled" | | 6 | "racing" | | 7 | "desire" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "flicked" | | 11 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 137 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 156 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.08% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 18 | | markdownWords | 78 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0.07 | | matches | | 0 | "felt" | | 1 | "bleeds" | | 2 | "not wind. Breath. A living thing exhaling." | | 3 | "moved." | | 4 | "shrunk." | | 5 | "time." | | 6 | "sighed." | | 7 | "where." | | 8 | "You bring the iron. You fear the dark. You walk the bleeding path." | | 9 | "It’s a Warden. Not a guard. A memory of one." | | 10 | "You ask for the glutton’s door. Why?" | | 11 | "The Veil bleeds everywhere," | | 12 | "But here, it hungers." | | 13 | "Beyond the last oak. Third stone from the oak. There is a tear. But it is not honest." | | 14 | "It smiles. It bites." | | 15 | "shifted again." | | 16 | "exist." | | 17 | "waited." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.11% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 901 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Val | 1 | | Nyx | 7 | | Rory | 18 | | Silas | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Vale | 9 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Warden | 4 | | Veil | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Pulled | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Val" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Vale" | | 6 | "Warden" | | 7 | "Veil" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.501 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like frozen dew" | | 1 | "Something like old meat left too long in the" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.903 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "not with sound, but with presence, like the whisper of a held breath before spee" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 71 | | mean | 15.59 | | std | 13.48 | | cv | 0.865 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 26 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 18 | | totalSentences | 156 | | ratio | 0.115 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the carvings—runes half-worn smooth by centuries of rain and wind." | | 1 | "She didn’t step on the grass—if it was grass." | | 2 | "The wildflowers, though—deep reds, indigos, and one impossible violet that pulsed softly—bloomed without pause, year-round, as the codex said." | | 3 | "The delivery driver—tall, broad, carrying a scar across his eyebrow from a knife fight years back—stood rigid, eyes wide." | | 4 | "She steadied him, her mind racing—*not wind." | | 5 | "Like a living body, the earth beneath them stretched, and roses—thorned and blood-red—bloomed along the path in seconds, their petals unfurling with a sound like wet fabric tearing." | | 6 | "“You brought iron,” she said—not a question." | | 7 | "Between them, the air rippled—like heat over pavement, but colder." | | 8 | "Not in size—in presence." | | 9 | "Above, the sky shifted from twilight to perpetual dusk—amber and bruise-blue, like a sunset trapped in a bottle." | | 10 | "She felt it too—the pressure behind her eyes, the weight in her lungs, the pull in her ribs." | | 11 | "A figure stood between two silver birches—tall, cloaked in grey, face hidden." | | 12 | "The Heartstone pulsed—once—warm against her collarbone." | | 13 | "A sound came from the cloaked figure—like wind through a crack in a door." | | 14 | "Stars inside—fading, dying ones." | | 15 | "Then it pointed—one skeletal finger—beyond the grove, toward the amber sky." | | 16 | "The path ahead split—one fork rising gently, a second plunging into darkness." | | 17 | "Rory looked at the rising path—the false one, lined with flowers that didn’t wilt, that whispered as they brushed past." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 925 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03891891891891892 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010810810810810811 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 156 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 156 | | mean | 7.1 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.789 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 45.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3141025641025641 | | totalSentences | 156 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the world shifted." | | 1 | "Then the ground *moved.*" | | 2 | "Then its head tilted." | | 3 | "Just a fraction." | | 4 | "Then it spoke, voice layered," | | 5 | "Then Vale spoke, raw:" | | 6 | "Then it pointed—one skeletal finger—beyond" | | 7 | "Then the ground *shifted again.*" | | 8 | "Then she turned to the" |
| | ratio | 0.082 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t knock." | | 1 | "Their shadow stretched longer than" | | 2 | "She didn’t step on the" | | 3 | "It bent under her feet," | | 4 | "It didn’t crumble." | | 5 | "It *felt* alive, like skin" | | 6 | "She exhaled, noticing the steady" | | 7 | "His knuckles whitened around the" | | 8 | "She steadied him, her mind" | | 9 | "she said—not a question" | | 10 | "Her employer, Silas, had given" | | 11 | "She carried it now, tucked" | | 12 | "She stepped through." | | 13 | "Their form had become mostly" | | 14 | "They put a hand to" | | 15 | "She felt it too—the pressure" | | 16 | "It didn’t move." | | 17 | "She hadn’t even realised she" | | 18 | "she said slowly" | | 19 | "*You bring the iron." |
| | ratio | 0.236 | |
| 60.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 88 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers brushed the carvings—runes" | | 2 | "The air hummed, not with" | | 3 | "She didn’t knock." | | 4 | "Nyx murmured, their voice woven" | | 5 | "Their shadow stretched longer than" | | 6 | "Rory shot them a glance." | | 7 | "Isolde moved past them, silver" | | 8 | "She didn’t step on the" | | 9 | "It bent under her feet," | | 10 | "The wildflowers, though—deep reds, indigos," | | 11 | "Rory crouched, brushing a hand" | | 12 | "It didn’t crumble." | | 13 | "It *felt* alive, like skin" | | 14 | "She exhaled, noticing the steady" | | 15 | "The delivery driver—tall, broad, carrying" | | 16 | "His knuckles whitened around the" | | 17 | "Nyx stirred, their form flickering" | | 18 | "Isolde didn’t turn." | | 19 | "Isolde said, stepping into the" |
| | ratio | 0.8 | |
| 45.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "*But here, it hungers.*" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 95.24% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient oak surfaces blackened with time, glinting faintly with moss that looked like frozen dew." | | 1 | "Like a living body, the earth beneath them stretched, and roses—thorned and blood-red—bloomed along the path in seconds, their petals unfurling with a sound lik…" |
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| 17.86% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Vale asked, voice tight" | | 1 | "Vale spoke, raw:" | | 2 | "Vale said, sharp" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Vale whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Vale muttered (mutter)" | | 4 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Vale spoke (speak)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 33 | | tagDensity | 0.424 | | leniency | 0.848 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.364 | |