Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0AE0YABZW7R4ED8WRSG6C9

Run Details

Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.001111
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turned with a click that echoed like a gunshot in the narrow hallway. Aurora's fingers tightened around the worn leather strap of her delivery bag as she waited, pulse rioting in her throat. She'd rehearsed this moment every night for three months—what she'd say, how she wouldn't flinch, why she didn't owe him anything. The door swung inward before her fist could connect with the wood. Eva's flat smelled exactly as Rory remembered—incense smoke and peppermint tea, with Ptolemy's musk underneath like old books left in damp weather. The tabby blinked up from the armchair where he'd been grooming, tail flicking in judgment before he stretched and vanished through the kitchen doorway without a sound. Lucien stood there in a charcoal suit that should have looked ridiculous on a person who hunted in shadows but somehow made him look more dangerous. His platinum hair caught the low light from the single bulb overhead, sharp angles and cold perfection. The ivory cane leaned against the doorframe, its tip tapping once against the wood—not irritation, just punctuation to the sudden silence between them. "You," Aurora said. The word came out steadier than she felt. Lucien's lips curled. Not quite a smile. More like someone appreciating a knife's edge. "Technically, you rang the bell. I merely opened the door." She hadn't even heard the chime. The fault of too many late nights weighing on her ears. Rory stepped inside anyway, boots scuffing the worn Persian rug Eva had found at a market in Camden. The bag slipped from her shoulder, thudding against her thigh. "Eva home?" "Not at work. In hospital." The way his voice flattened on the last word should have warned her. Rory's stomach dropped like she'd missed a step on the stairs outside. Eva had been picking at her food for weeks. "Oh hell. What happened?" Lucien closed the door with a push of his shoulder. The deadbolts snicked into place like teeth settling. "That," he said, moving past her into the room, "is why I'm here." The flat had shrunk. Or perhaps it was just that Lucien took up too much space—his presence, the scent of bergamot and gun oil that clung to him like a second skin. Rory dropped her bag beside the armchair, catching a glimpse of Eva's research notes stacked on the coffee table: alchemical symbols, newspaper clippings about ritual sites, a map of London's ley line intersections with red pins marking specific locations. She pointed at the notes. "That look recent?" "Yes." "She tell anyone else about this?" "No." Rory exhaled through her nose, considering. Eva always ran hot and fast with secrets like these. A rhizome of fear took root in her gut. "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned slowly, amber eye catching the dim light. The black one stayed swallowed by shadow, making the glare even sharper. "You were the only one who ever listened to me. Even when I didn't deserve it." The words landed like stones in still water. Rory's fingers found the crescent scar on her wrist, tracing the raised skin absentmindedly. "That was a year ago. Before London Bridge. Before the exchange at the docks." "Before you decided I was too dangerous to keep." "You were." Lucien laughed once, low and without humor. "Dangerous is relative." The cat chose that moment to slink back into the room, tail high, offering his flank to Aurora as if daring her to make the first move. She obliged, giving the familiar fur a single stroke before the animal decided friendship had limits and moved on. "Get to the point. Eva's in hospital. I have deliveries in an hour." "You can't outrun this, Rory." He crossed the room in three strides, stopping just short of where she stood. Close enough that she could smell the gun oil stronger now, could see the faintest scar along his jawline she'd never noticed before. "The old woman who runs the newsstand beneath your flat isn't just selling papers. She's tracking ley line disturbances. So is the baker on Brick Lane. Someone's collecting power." Rory's pulse thudded against her ribs. "And this concerns me because?" "Because the last time someone tried to weaponize ley line energy, half of Borough Market burned." Lucien's cane tapped once against the floorboards— Naples yellow and inlaid with ivory, she noticed now. "Eva's been mapping nodes for six weeks. Someone followed her last night." The room tilted. Rory steadied herself against the back of the armchair, fingers sinking into the worn fabric. "Is she awake?" "Stabilized. Sedated." His lantern jaw tightened. "But she mentioned something before they put her under. Something about you and me." Rory's breath hitched. "What did she say?" Lucien's gaze flicked to the research on the table. "That we're the keys." Silence settled again, heavier this time. Ptolemy paused mid-step in the kitchen doorway, ears pricked, as if weighing whether to intervene before deciding against whatever danger he sensed in the air. The hum of the refrigerator seemed suddenly too loud. Rory finally looked up. "That's impossible." "Is it?" "You don't even believe in that sort of thing." "I believe in what I see." Lucien reached into his breast pocket, withdrawing a folded sheet of paper—Eva's handwriting, the member at the end of her 't' a tiny dagger. He held it out, not closing the distance between them. "She wrote this before they took her. Said you'd know what it means." Rory unfolded the note with fingers that refused to stop trembling. The ink was smeared in places, as if written in haste or pain. In the top left corner, Eva had drawn the same alchemical symbol from the notes on the coffee table—a stylized eye inside a triangle. Beneath it, in Eva's jagged script: *She's the key to the lock. He's the blade to cut it.* The words blurred. Rory blinked hard, but the room stayed upright. "This is bullshit." "Agreed." Lucien's voice was closer now, barely above a murmur. "But Eva's never been wrong about magic. And neither have you, deep down." Rory crumpled the paper in her fist. "I don't have magic. I'm just a courier with a bad history." Lucien's eyes darkened, the black pupil swallowing the amber edge. "You carried a demon's soul from Borough to Highgate without breaking a sweat. You did it wearing miserable shoes and arguing with traffic the whole way. That isn't human." The memories hit like a freight train—Lucien hunched over a coffee cup in some anonymous flat, his breath stale with whiskey and something older; her own hands shaking as she pocketed a fragment of shadow that refused to dissipate; Eva's voice on the phone saying *get out, now.* Rory swallowed bile. "I didn't know what I was doing then." "And now?" She crushed the note tighter. "I know danger when I see it." Lucien tilted his head, just slightly. The movement made the candlelight flicker across his face, highlighting the hollows beneath his cheekbones. "Spoken like someone who's already made her choice." The words clawed inside her chest. Rory looked down at the crumpled paper in her fist, the ink bleeding through her grip. Eva's flat pressed in around her, the scent of old books and peppermint too thick in her throat. She tucked the ruined note into her back pocket. "Where's the hospital?" Lucien didn't answer. He simply reached for his cane, sliding the blade free with a whisper of metal. The ivory handle gleamed in the low light. "I'll drive. We can talk on the way." Rory's delivery bag waited by the door, her phone buzzing inside with another order—probably some corporate drone expecting a vindaloo to save his miserable Tuesday. She left it where it lay. "Fine," she said, stepping past Lucien toward the exit. "But you're buying the tea."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien's cane tapped once [once]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.178
leniency0.356
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.044
88.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
57.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1308
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"stomach"
4"tracing"
5"familiar"
6"flicked"
7"flicker"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords15
totalWords1300
ratio0.012
matches
0"She's the key to the lock. He's the blade to cut it."
1"get out, now."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount970
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Ptolemy2
Persian1
Eva10
Camden1
Lucien14
London1
Aurora3
Close1
Naples1
Tuesday1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Camden"
1"London"
2"Naples"
globalScore0.675
windowScore0.667
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if daring her to make the first move"
1"as if weighing whether to intervene before deciding against whatever danger he sensed in the air"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1300
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean27.08
std20.66
cv0.763
sampleLengths
068
149
266
311
424
547
618
725
831
971
108
111
126
131
1430
1537
1636
179
182
1910
2059
2171
2211
2344
2421
2520
267
2713
2840
296
302
319
3253
3366
3414
3523
3619
3739
3848
3911
402
4112
4229
4340
4412
4534
4631
4714
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was smeared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences114
ratio0.079
matches
0"She'd rehearsed this moment every night for three months—what she'd say, how she wouldn't flinch, why she didn't owe him anything."
1"Eva's flat smelled exactly as Rory remembered—incense smoke and peppermint tea, with Ptolemy's musk underneath like old books left in damp weather."
2"The ivory cane leaned against the doorframe, its tip tapping once against the wood—not irritation, just punctuation to the sudden silence between them."
3"Or perhaps it was just that Lucien took up too much space—his presence, the scent of bergamot and gun oil that clung to him like a second skin."
4"\"Because the last time someone tried to weaponize ley line energy, half of Borough Market burned.\" Lucien's cane tapped once against the floorboards— Naples yellow and inlaid with ivory, she noticed now."
5"\"I believe in what I see.\" Lucien reached into his breast pocket, withdrawing a folded sheet of paper—Eva's handwriting, the member at the end of her 't' a tiny dagger."
6"In the top left corner, Eva had drawn the same alchemical symbol from the notes on the coffee table—a stylized eye inside a triangle."
7"The memories hit like a freight train—Lucien hunched over a coffee cup in some anonymous flat, his breath stale with whiskey and something older; her own hands shaking as she pocketed a fragment of shadow that refused to dissipate; Eva's voice on the phone saying *get out, now.*"
8"Rory's delivery bag waited by the door, her phone buzzing inside with another order—probably some corporate drone expecting a vindaloo to save his miserable Tuesday."
98.11% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount759
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.04216073781291173
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006587615283267457
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean11.4
std8.64
cv0.758
sampleLengths
015
120
221
312
422
527
626
717
823
93
108
113
124
137
1410
156
1611
1718
1810
192
2018
2112
229
234
2410
258
2613
274
2828
2939
305
313
321
336
341
356
3610
379
385
399
4012
4116
428
4314
4414
459
462
477
483
4927
55.56% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners38
43.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"More like someone appreciating a"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences77
matches
0"She'd rehearsed this moment every"
1"His platinum hair caught the"
2"She hadn't even heard the"
3"he said, moving past her"
4"She pointed at the notes."
5"He turned slowly, amber eye"
6"She obliged, giving the familiar"
7"He crossed the room in"
8"His lantern jaw tightened"
9"He held it out, not"
10"He's the blade to cut"
11"She crushed the note tighter."
12"She tucked the ruined note"
13"He simply reached for his"
14"She left it where it"
15"she said, stepping past Lucien"
ratio0.208
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences77
matches
0"The key turned with a"
1"Aurora's fingers tightened around the"
2"She'd rehearsed this moment every"
3"The door swung inward before"
4"Eva's flat smelled exactly as"
5"The tabby blinked up from"
6"Lucien stood there in a"
7"His platinum hair caught the"
8"The ivory cane leaned against"
9"The word came out steadier"
10"Lucien's lips curled."
11"She hadn't even heard the"
12"The fault of too many"
13"Rory stepped inside anyway, boots"
14"The bag slipped from her"
15"The way his voice flattened"
16"Rory's stomach dropped like she'd"
17"Eva had been picking at"
18"Lucien closed the door with"
19"The deadbolts snicked into place"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Lucien stood there in a charcoal suit that should have looked ridiculous on a person who hunted in shadows but somehow made him look more dangerous."
1"Ptolemy paused mid-step in the kitchen doorway, ears pricked, as if weighing whether to intervene before deciding against whatever danger he sensed in the air."
2"The memories hit like a freight train—Lucien hunched over a coffee cup in some anonymous flat, his breath stale with whiskey and something older; her own hands …"
3"Rory's delivery bag waited by the door, her phone buzzing inside with another order—probably some corporate drone expecting a vindaloo to save his miserable Tue…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.7376%