Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0AER4S61TAY44VHK2S3BD3

Run Details

Duration:
36.4s
Cost:
$0.030405
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest glowed green on the corner of the street, its neon sign humming over the wet pavement while taxis hissed past and threw up dirty water. Inside, the bar held its usual dim warmth, all black wood and old maps pinned to the walls, black-and-white photographs of strangers with hard mouths and narrow suits staring out from frames that had gone a little crooked over the years. Rory stood near the end of the bar with a clean glass in her hand and a half-tied delivery bag at her feet. The night had gone quiet after the dinner rush. A few stools held the same regulars nursing the last of their drinks. Silas moved behind the counter with his easy, measured pace, his limp obvious when he turned, his right hand flashing the silver signet ring each time he reached for a bottle. The door opened and a slice of damp London air cut through the room. Rory looked up on instinct, ready for another customer, another late drink, another shrug at the world. The woman in the doorway stopped as if she had walked into the wrong decade. Rory knew the voice before the face settled into place. “Rory?” Her fingers tightened on the glass. “No one called me that in years.” The woman blinked once, hard, and the rain on her coat shivered. “Megan Hughes?” Rory stared. The room shifted around the shape of her memory. Megan used to come into lectures with a backpack hanging off one shoulder, hair in a messy knot, three pens jammed into a pocket and a laugh that bounced off the walls. This woman wore a tailored navy coat, her hair cut sharp at her jaw, one silver streak running through the brown near her temple. Her posture had changed too. She stood like a person used to doors opening for her. “Don’t stand there gawping,” Rory said, and the words came out rough. Megan let out a breath that sounded like it hurt. “You’re alive.” Rory snorted and set the glass down. “I can see how that would throw you.” Megan crossed the room in slow steps, as if she expected Rory to vanish if she moved too fast. She stopped at the bar, close enough for Rory to catch the smell of cold rain and expensive perfume under it. “You look…” Megan’s mouth worked once. “Different.” Rory tipped her head. “That’s rich coming from you.” Megan glanced down at her own coat, her shoes, the leather satchel hanging from one shoulder. “I meant you look like you’ve spent the last few years fighting somebody.” “London did most of the work.” Silas set a clean tumbler on the bar between them and filled it with a finger of whisky before Rory could stop him. “For the reunion,” he murmured, his hazel eyes moving once over Megan’s face and back to Rory’s, “I’ll leave you to it.” He walked off with the bottle, his limp steady and familiar, and the soft clink of glasses filled the gap he left behind. Megan turned the tumbler in both hands but didn’t drink. “I walked in because it was raining.” “That’s usually how rain works.” “I mean I walked in because I wanted somewhere warm.” She looked up at the green neon glow reflected in the mirrors behind the bar. “I didn’t know you’d be here.” Rory leaned her hip against the counter. “I live upstairs.” Megan’s face changed at that, something quick and raw sliding across it before she smoothed it away. “Of course you do.” “You say that like it’s a confession.” “It sounds like one.” Rory lifted one shoulder. “You always did like making drama out of geography.” Megan gave a short laugh, then her gaze snagged on Rory’s wrist where the crescent scar sat pale against her skin. Her voice dropped. “You still had that.” Rory curled her hand around the glass. “It never grew back.” “I know that.” “You remember it?” “I remember everything about you, Rory.” The words hung there, heavier than either of them wanted. Rory looked away first, toward the row of bottles lit from below, toward the mirrors that returned her own face in fragments. Her hair had gone straighter with time, the black cut to her shoulders. Her mouth had lost the loose openness it used to have. The scar on her wrist had grown into the rest of her like it belonged there. Megan swallowed and finally took a sip. “I heard you went to London.” “I’m in London.” “I know that now.” Rory reached for a tea towel and folded it once, twice, not needing it. “You heard after it happened.” Megan’s hand stilled around the glass. “I heard after you left Cardiff.” Rory looked at her. “That wasn’t the same thing.” “No.” Megan held her stare. “It wasn’t.” The quiet that followed had edges. Someone at the far end of the bar laughed too loudly at something on a phone. Ice shifted in a glass. Silas moved somewhere behind the racks, letting the room pretend it was still only a bar. Megan set the tumbler down. “I rang your old flat.” Rory’s expression didn’t move, but her fingers did, once, against the towel. “I spoke to your mother,” Megan said. Rory shut her eyes for a breath. “You rang home.” “She sounded tired.” “She always sounded tired when she had to talk to students.” “She asked if you were in trouble.” Rory opened her eyes again, and the bright blue of them sharpened. “And you said?” “I said I didn’t know.” “That part was true.” Megan flinched, a small movement around the mouth. “You vanished.” “I relocated.” “You vanished,” Megan said again, and this time there was steel under it. “No forwarding address. No new number. Eva kept saying you were fine, and then she stopped answering me too.” Rory’s laugh came out once, dry and ugly. “Eva knew better than to answer questions she couldn’t solve.” “I wasn’t asking for a solution.” “What were you asking for?” Megan looked at her for a long second, then dropped her gaze to the wood grain in the bar top. “To know you made it out.” Rory leaned back against the counter and crossed her arms. The old habit of defensiveness sat on her shoulders like a borrowed coat. “Did you think I wouldn’t?” “No.” Megan rubbed the rim of the glass with one thumb. “I thought you might not let anyone know if you did.” “That sounds more like me.” “It sounded like you at the time. Not so much now.” Rory stared at her. “What does that mean?” “It means you used to talk before you thought.” “I still do.” “No.” Megan’s eyes flicked over Rory’s face, her hair, the line of her jaw, the hard set of her mouth. “You’ve got this whole new way of looking at people like they’re standing too close to something breakable.” Rory let out a small breath through her nose. “And you’ve got a whole new way of sounding like a lecture.” “I spent enough years in rooms where people listened when I spoke.” Rory’s mouth twitched. “Right. That happened.” Megan’s expression shifted, half pride, half discomfort, like praise had landed somewhere she hadn’t expected. “I’m at chambers now.” Rory glanced at the coat, the satchel, the watch with a narrow silver face. “That explains the suit.” Megan looked down at herself as if she had forgotten what she wore. “I came straight from work.” “You still chase other people’s disasters for a living, then.” “Someone has to.” Rory gave her a long look. “You always wanted to win arguments.” “I wanted to be right.” “You were never shy about that.” “You weren’t either.” Rory picked up the glass again and turned it between her hands. The scar on her wrist flashed when she moved. Megan noticed it. Her eyes held there, then came back up. “I should have called,” Megan said. Rory laughed once, a sound without much humour. “That’s a useful line. Pity it came late.” Megan lifted a shoulder, then let it fall. “I thought if I gave you space, you’d come back when you were ready.” “Back where?” “Anywhere.” Rory looked past her, through the mirror behind the bar, where their reflections sat side by side in a frame full of old photographs and dim light. Time had done its work on both of them. It had taken Megan’s softness and sharpened it into something polished. It had taken Rory’s ease and rubbed it thin. “You always did believe people had clean exits,” Rory said. Megan’s mouth tightened. “What was I meant to believe?” “That I could sort it out.” “You couldn’t sort everything.” “No one can.” Megan nodded once, but she didn’t let it go. “You never asked for help.” Rory set the glass down with care. “You never asked the right question.” The words landed between them and stayed there. Megan looked down at her whisky, then up again. Her voice turned quieter. “Did he hurt you?” Rory went still. Even the room seemed to hold its breath around the question. Silas stopped mid-step at the far end of the bar and glanced over, just once, before turning away again. Rory’s eyes stayed on Megan’s face. “That’s a late question too.” “I know.” “Then why ask it now?” “Because I wanted to know whether I’d failed you, or whether I just arrived too late to matter.” Rory looked at her for a long time. The green light from the sign outside slipped through the window and caught in the glass, in Megan’s ringless fingers, in the line of Rory’s wrist. “You were never there to fail me,” Rory said at last. Megan closed her eyes for a second, and when she opened them again, the shine in them had gone hard at the edges. “I heard about the move through Eva. She said you’d taken a new name.” Rory gave a small, tight smile. “Eva had a talent for making disaster sound like admin.” “Laila,” Megan said, careful with the word. “That was it, wasn’t it?” Rory’s jaw tightened. “Don’t fish for the one you want.” Megan held her stare. “What do you want me to call you?” Rory’s hand brushed her wrist once, over the scar, like she was checking the shape of an old wound. “Rory’s fine.” Megan nodded, once, as if she had been given something fragile and was afraid to break it. “Rory.” The name sounded different now. Smaller. Older. Full of years neither of them could put back. Silas came back down the bar with a clean cloth over one shoulder and a bottle tucked under his arm. “You two looked like you’d run out of weather,” he said, his gaze moving between them. “Need another drink?” Megan looked at the whisky in front of her, untouched save for one swallow. Rory watched Silas’s face instead, that quiet, knowing look he wore when he chose not to step in too far. “I’ll have one more,” Megan said. Rory reached for the bottle, then stopped with her fingers around the neck. “You’ve got somewhere else to be.” Megan’s mouth parted, then closed again. She glanced at the satchel at her side, at the rain on the window, at Rory’s face. “I did,” she said. “Then I saw you.” Rory poured the drink anyway. The amber liquid moved steady into the glass, catching the light. When she set it back down, Megan’s hand covered the base for a second, not taking it yet. “Tell me something,” Megan said. Rory raised a brow. “That’s dangerous.” “Were we ever good to each other?” Rory met her eyes across the bar, the old maps and the black-and-white dead looking on from the walls, the green neon bleeding through the glass and over both their hands. She didn’t answer straight away. She kept her fingers on the bottle, feeling the cool shape of it, and Megan stayed still on the other side of the wood, waiting with the kind of patience that cost something.
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native_tokens_reasoning4003
native_tokens_cached0
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Megan’s mouth worked once [once]"
1"Megan said again [again]"
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.157
leniency0.315
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.037
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
90.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2016
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"measured"
2"familiar"
3"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences124
matches
0"was afraid"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences215
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2016
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions30
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions98
wordCount1415
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity3.46
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Megan40
Rory49
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Megan"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences93
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like it hurt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2016
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences215
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs130
mean15.51
std14.93
cv0.963
sampleLengths
069
176
214
317
415
510
61
76
87
914
1083
1112
1212
1315
1440
157
169
1729
186
1923
2022
2123
2217
235
2431
2510
2621
277
284
2913
3024
314
3211
333
343
356
3610
3762
3813
393
404
4119
4212
439
447
4543
4610
4712
487
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"been given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was checking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences215
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1421
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.03589021815622801
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0028149190710767065
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences215
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences215
mean9.38
std7.06
cv0.753
sampleLengths
028
141
223
39
413
531
614
717
815
910
101
116
127
1312
142
152
169
1732
1824
195
2011
2112
2210
232
247
258
2619
2721
286
291
304
315
3216
3313
346
3523
3622
3723
3810
397
405
4125
426
437
443
4517
464
477
484
494
44.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.19534883720930232
totalSentences215
uniqueOpeners42
28.99% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences115
matches
0"Even the room seemed to"
ratio0.009
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences115
matches
0"Her fingers tightened on the"
1"Her posture had changed too."
2"She stood like a person"
3"She stopped at the bar,"
4"he murmured, his hazel eyes"
5"He walked off with the"
6"She looked up at the"
7"Her voice dropped."
8"Her hair had gone straighter"
9"Her mouth had lost the"
10"Her eyes held there, then"
11"It had taken Megan’s softness"
12"It had taken Rory’s ease"
13"Her voice turned quieter."
14"he said, his gaze moving"
15"She glanced at the satchel"
16"She didn’t answer straight away."
17"She kept her fingers on"
ratio0.157
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount110
totalSentences115
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest glowed green"
1"Rory stood near the end"
2"The night had gone quiet"
3"Silas moved behind the counter"
4"The door opened and a"
5"Rory looked up on instinct,"
6"The woman in the doorway"
7"Rory knew the voice before"
8"Her fingers tightened on the"
9"The woman blinked once, hard,"
10"The room shifted around the"
11"Megan used to come into"
12"This woman wore a tailored"
13"Her posture had changed too."
14"She stood like a person"
15"Rory said, and the words"
16"Megan let out a breath"
17"Rory snorted and set the"
18"Megan crossed the room in"
19"She stopped at the bar,"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She kept her fingers on the bottle, feeling the cool shape of it, and Megan stayed still on the other side of the wood, waiting with the kind of patience that c…"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, and the words came out rough"
1"he said, his gaze moving between them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences108
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.019
84.3375%