| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "belt she’d finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.52% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 208 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 216 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1251 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1153 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.69 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Evan" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 8 | | Carter | 1 | | Park | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | English | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Evan | 8 | | Like | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "Cardiff" | | 2 | "Welsh" | | 3 | "English" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the world holding its breath" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.799 | | wordCount | 1251 | | matches | | 0 | "not green but a bruise-coloured purple, trembling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 216 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 20.51 | | std | 18.92 | | cv | 0.923 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 70 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 48 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 39 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 1 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 203 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 216 | | ratio | 0.065 | | matches | | 0 | "No traffic sounds, no distant hum of civilisation—just the rasp of her breath fogging the windshield, the occasional pop from the engine cooling." | | 1 | "Like iron and rotting leaves and something else—something faintly metallic beneath the damp earth." | | 2 | "Not a stone’s throw from the motorway, a place she’d cycled past dozens of times—verdant, open, deer grazing under cloud-filtered moonlight." | | 3 | "Old habit—some habits die hard." | | 4 | "She’d read about them once—folklore, a local legend about a grove that didn’t belong." | | 5 | "The pendant flared—deep crimson glow leaking through her collar, warm against her throat." | | 6 | "The ground changed—from grass to packed earth to something slick." | | 7 | "A nursery rhyme she barely remembered—" | | 8 | "A figure—small, pale, standing between two trees." | | 9 | "Aurora’s hand went to her hip—where she carried no knife." | | 10 | "A voice—broken, layered, like six people speaking at once—hissed from the darkness beneath the hood:" | | 11 | "A gash opened in the air two metres ahead—no wind, no light, just a tear in reality, jagged and wet." | | 12 | "A *thing* pulsed there—something vast and many-eyed, watching through the membrane of the world." | | 13 | "“He’s here,” it whispered—through the hood, through her bones, through the pendant." |
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| 82.65% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1171 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "under cloud-filtered moonlight." | | 1 | "blood-red, thick veins" |
| | adverbCount | 54 | | adverbRatio | 0.04611443210930828 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008539709649871904 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 216 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 216 | | mean | 5.79 | | std | 5.02 | | cv | 0.867 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 1 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 47.69% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 22 | | diversityRatio | 0.3472222222222222 | | totalSentences | 216 | | uniqueOpeners | 75 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the sickly silver glow" | | 1 | "Then she heard the child" | | 2 | "Just blackness dripping like tar." | | 3 | "Then the laughter began." | | 4 | "Fully, terrifyingly human." | | 5 | "Just her phone, battery at" | | 6 | "Then the pendant spoke." | | 7 | "Too many joints." |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped out." | | 1 | "It smelled old." | | 2 | "She hadn’t expected the trees." | | 3 | "She hadn’t worn it tonight." | | 4 | "It’d appeared yesterday on her" | | 5 | "She’d read about them once—folklore," | | 6 | "She didn’t want to go" | | 7 | "Her ears popped." | | 8 | "She pulled it out." | | 9 | "It came from everywhere and" | | 10 | "She stepped deeper." | | 11 | "She looked down." | | 12 | "It pooled around her soles," | | 13 | "Her breath came shallow." | | 14 | "It was soft." | | 15 | "Her heart hammered the back" | | 16 | "Its sleeves were empty." | | 17 | "She looked down." | | 18 | "She didn’t remember taking it" | | 19 | "Her voice was too loud" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 104 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "The night swallowed the car" | | 1 | "She stepped out." | | 2 | "Richmond Park didn’t smell like" | | 3 | "It smelled old." | | 4 | "She hadn’t expected the trees." | | 5 | "Leaves not green but a" | | 6 | "The trunks leaned inward, curving" | | 7 | "Aurora zipped the jacket higher." | | 8 | "The pendant beneath her collar" | | 9 | "She hadn’t worn it tonight." | | 10 | "It’d appeared yesterday on her" | | 11 | "Eva would’ve said it was" | | 12 | "Silas would’ve said drink more" | | 13 | "The standing stones were there," | | 14 | "She’d read about them once—folklore," | | 15 | "She didn’t want to go" | | 16 | "The first step inside the" | | 17 | "The air thickened." | | 18 | "Her ears popped." | | 19 | "The pendant flared—deep crimson glow" |
| | ratio | 0.689 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "No traffic sounds, no distant hum of civilisation—just the rasp of her breath fogging the windshield, the occasional pop from the engine cooling." | | 1 | "Yet her boots moved forward, drawn by the same stupid curiosity that had dragged her to Cardiff docks at midnight, or through Eva’s burning flat six months ago." | | 2 | "It pooled around her soles, then retracted, vanishing into the dirt as if hungry." | | 3 | "The kind that felt like the world holding its breath." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "belt she’d finally (would)" | | 1 | "she snapped (snap)" | | 2 | "it whispered— (whisper)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.389 | | leniency | 0.778 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.444 | |