Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0AJTBQXZ9A1XY0W30CXPAK

Run Details

Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.006941
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube platform under Camden looked wrong even in the dark. Harlow Quinn stepped through the gap in the boarded tunnel and let the Metropolitan Police lamp sweep the air in slow arcs. The beam caught dust, old signage, and a scatter of broken tiles that should have read like decay. Instead, the floor looked… arranged. A neat semicircle of chalk markings cut through grime near the dead end of the platform, as if someone had drawn a boundary and then decided the rest didn’t matter. A faint brass smell hung in the cold. It rose every time the lamp moved, like the air itself carried metal. Behind her, the colleague with the satchel clicked a strap loose and held still. Eva Kowalski’s round glasses reflected the light in quick, sharp flashes. Her red curls sat tight around her face, and she kept tucking strands behind her left ear like it was a habit she could use as a lock. “You’re here fast,” Eva said. “I walked,” Harlow answered. Her jaw stayed sharp. “No badge gets me inside a crime scene nobody admits exists.” Eva lifted her hand. On her palm sat a bone token, pale and notched, the kind you only saw in places with rules nobody wrote down. “You had to go through the entry gap too.” Harlow didn’t look at the token. She walked the lamp along the semicircle of chalk. The lines weren’t ordinary chalk. The powder clung in ridges that didn’t fall. It looked baked-on, like someone had pressed it into the dust while it still had structure. “What’s the call for?” she asked. Eva followed her line of sight and breathed out through her teeth. “A body. Under Camden. Reported by a—” She paused, then moved on without softening her voice. “By someone who knew the Veil Market could deliver silence.” Harlow stopped at the dead end. A figure lay sprawled across the tracks with one arm twisted too far, as if the joint had met resistance and lost. The man wore a cheap coat that had seen rain and a pair of boots that had mud ground into the soles. Nothing about the clothing matched the bone-white platform. She angled the lamp closer. The skin of his neck had faint marks, not bruises. Lines like ink that hadn’t bled. Thin, protective-looking sigils at the throat. “The rift doesn’t care about branding,” Eva murmured, crouching beside the body. Her satchel thumped against her shoulder as she shifted her weight. “It chews through whatever’s convenient.” Harlow kept her gaze on the hands. One fist had been clenched so long the knuckles had gone dull. In the man’s grip lay a scrap of paper, folded into a tight square. It had no printed address, no signature. Just a spiral of tiny symbols—stamped, not written—within a circle of wax. Harlow pinched the edge of the paper with gloved fingers. The wax didn’t break. It gave a slow, reluctant flex, like it had turned elastic. She stared at her own glove where the lamp shone on it. “Wax that doesn’t crack,” she said. “Chalk that’s baked-on. This place wasn’t made for waiting rooms and rats.” Eva’s eyes flicked up. “Neither was he.” Harlow turned her attention to the space around the body. A shallow puddle lay under the tracks, reflecting nothing but a smear of lamp light. It should have held water from the tunnel leak. Instead, it looked like oil. It moved only when she moved the lamp, and the surface tension held too neatly. She leaned in. The puddle didn’t stink like drains. It smelled like pennies. Eva drew her satchel open and pulled out a small notebook and a narrow pack of powder vials. She didn’t rush. She worked like she had done the same measurements in rooms where people had gone missing. “You called this in as a homicide?” Harlow asked. Eva’s mouth tightened. “I didn’t have a choice. The person who contacted the station demanded you. They said you’d read the clues like they were police reports instead of… fairy tales.” “Fairy tales,” Harlow repeated, flat. Her left wrist creaked as her leather watch pressed against her bones when she moved. The worn strap had carried her for eighteen years. It had never felt like a talisman, but it sat against her skin like an old reminder. “DS Morris didn’t die as a fairy tale.” Eva’s fingers paused on the vial tops. “I know.” Harlow held the dead man’s paper closer to the lamp. The spiral symbols caught the light in a way printed ink didn’t. The wax seal had protective sigils too. The markings at the throat matched the seal. So someone had prepared both the seal and the throat. Either the victim had come armed with ritual protection, or someone had handled him with care. That care didn’t align with the twisted arm. Violence didn’t work that cleanly. Harlow looked up at the chalk semicircle again. The chalk lines weren’t just boundary work. They curved toward the body, then stopped short, as if they had failed to complete the circle. A gap on the right-hand side sat untouched, raw platform showing through. “What happened to the other half?” she asked. Eva followed her gaze and went still. “That gap wasn’t drawn over. It wasn’t erased.” “Then it never existed,” Harlow said. “Unless someone removed the chalk after.” Eva swallowed. “Or unless the chalk couldn’t touch what was there.” Harlow straightened and swept the lamp along the tracks toward the tunnel mouth. The beam caught a brass object half-buried in a crack between sleepers. She knelt, ignoring the cold that seeped through her knees. Her fingers brushed the object and it came free with a slow scrape. Small brass. Verdigris dusted the casing in the shape of old green leaves. “A Compass,” she said before she could stop herself. “Not ours. Not a police issue.” Eva leaned in and her face shifted. The green of her eyes turned brighter under the lamp. “The Veil Compass.” Harlow turned it in her hands. The casing carried protective sigils etched into the brass. She could feel the patterns under her glove. The needle sat steady, not trembling like a regular compass needle. It pointed—not north, not magnetic—but toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. Except the needle pointed straight into the gap in the chalk semicircle. Harlow lifted the Veil Compass closer to the wax seal paper. The needle didn’t wobble. It held its direction with a stubborn precision, like it recognized the rift as a fixed point. “That’s the rift they used,” Eva said softly. Harlow’s gaze sharpened on the chalk. “No. That’s the rift they avoided.” Eva blinked. “How can you avoid—” “You can stop drawing at the edge,” Harlow cut in. Her voice carried less volume than anger. More accuracy. “If you’d made the circle wrong, you’d mark the boundary. You’d finish it. Here, they stopped. They left a hole.” Eva’s nervous habit returned immediately. She tucked hair behind her left ear and then held her hand there as if it could keep the thought from spilling out. “They didn’t stop because it was hard. They stopped because completing it would have done something.” Harlow didn’t answer right away. She looked at the body’s throat again. The sigils there looked protective, but the pattern wasn’t random. It mirrored the protective sigils on the Veil Compass casing. Someone had secured the victim against the rift’s reach. Someone had also brought the Compass that could find the rift. That suggested control. Not panic. And control didn’t sit right with the report of a homicide. Harlow stood and stepped around the body, tracking lamp light across the platform. The chalk semicircle held. Beyond it, the floor bore no footprints. No dragging. No blood spatter. The tracks carried no tracks, either. The man lay like he had been placed, not thrown. She crouched near his shoulder and tilted his head slightly. The twisted arm had displaced the coat sleeve. Under the cuff, a thin line of pale skin marked where a strap had once been. Residue from a harness that had been removed cleanly. Eva’s eyes tracked the movement. “He wasn’t bound when he died.” “No.” Harlow let the coat fall back into place. “He died after someone released him.” Eva exhaled. “People do that. They release a—” “They don’t release a man and then leave him positioned on the tracks without blood,” Harlow said. “They don’t leave a sealed paper in his fist with a spiral of stamped symbols.” Eva pulled her notebook open and wrote quickly, then stopped to stare at the paper. “Those symbols… they match a Veil Market registry mark.” “Registry mark,” Harlow echoed. “Meaning he belonged to someone who trades in information.” Eva’s pen hovered. “Or he belonged to the place itself. The Veil Market moves location every full moon. People think it’s just sales. It’s not. It’s a system.” Harlow stood and turned toward Eva with the Veil Compass still in her hand. The brass needle held a steady aim at the chalk gap. The protective sigils on the casing caught the light like old scars. “Why did the call go out for me?” Harlow asked. Eva stared at the compass needle, then looked at Harlow like she had reached the end of a long hallway and found a wall where there should have been a door. “Because you suspected the clique.” Harlow’s stomach tightened. “You knew that.” Eva nodded once. “The British Museum restricted archives gave me access to enough ledger fragments to see names that kept turning up in Veil Market trades. I noticed the same clique would sell banned alchemical substances one week and then buy them back the next. Like they owned the supply.” Harlow held the compass needle steady. It didn’t care about Eva’s theory. It cared about the rift. “You’re telling me you came down here with me because you wanted me to notice what you noticed,” Harlow said. Eva’s face didn’t soften. “I wanted you to notice what everyone else missed.” Harlow glanced around the platform again. The lamp caught a pile of broken ceramic near a column. Not random debris. A pattern of small fragments scattered like someone had tipped over a container and then collected most of it, leaving the mess where it wouldn’t be the first thing people saw. She moved toward it. Eva stayed two steps behind, watching Harlow’s hands. “You think that’s evidence.” “It’s bait,” Harlow said, and her voice didn’t carry a guess. “Look at the angle. It would catch light. It would make someone think of a struggle. The dead man doesn’t show struggle.” Eva crouched near the ceramic pile. “What is it?” Harlow picked up one fragment. It had a faint coating that resisted her glove. Under the lamp, it showed the same protective sigil work as the wax seal and the Veil Compass casing—tiny lines etched into the ceramic, like a shield made of fired clay. “Someone tried to throw protection onto the floor,” she said. “Then they cleaned most of it up.” Eva’s eyes narrowed. “Why protect the floor?” “So the evidence would look wrong,” Harlow replied. “So nobody would question the rift.” Eva swallowed again. Her left hand hovered by her hair, then she forced it to drop. “You keep saying rift like it’s a person.” Harlow held the fragment up to the light. “It acted like one. It took what it wanted. But someone told it where to stop.” Eva moved closer, lamp reflection flicking across her glasses. “Then the chalk gap wasn’t a mistake.” “No.” Harlow’s fingers tightened around the fragment until the ceramic resisted her grip. “It was a decision. They left the boundary open so the rift wouldn’t touch something in the missing half-circle.” “What?” Eva asked, voice sharper now, no longer cautious. Harlow looked at the chalk gap again. The untouched platform showed dark stains, but the stains had the wrong shape. They didn’t smear like spilled grime. They formed curved streaks, like energy had passed through and scoured the surface, leaving a residue in the path. A person might call it burn marks. Harlow called it tool marks. She tapped the Veil Compass casing lightly against her palm. The needle stayed locked on the chalk gap as if it could see through stone. “A target,” Harlow said. “They needed to open the rift without bringing everything through.” Eva leaned in until her shoulder almost brushed Harlow’s. Her perfume cut through brass and pennies with something herbal and museum-clean. “Then what did they bring out?” Harlow didn’t answer with theory. She answered by pointing her lamp toward the far tunnel wall. The tunnel wall held a faint mural of sorts, half-hidden behind layered paint. Old graffiti, flaking. But within the cracks, someone had pressed protective ink, creating a map-like pattern. Arches. Lines. A route. And right at the end of that route sat a smear of red-brown—like dried blood—except it had no bead edges. It looked smeared by a tool with width, not by a body. The clue hit Harlow in the gut. “It wasn’t blood,” she said. Eva’s head jerked. “What was it?” “Alchemical staining,” Harlow said. “Banned compounds carry through water and oil. Blood breaks down. This didn’t.” Eva’s face tightened. “There were banned substances in the ledger.” “Then this wasn’t random,” Harlow said. “This place hosted a trade. Someone staged a homicide to control the narrative.” Eva stood. Her satchel strap creaked as she shifted. “Who?” Harlow didn’t say a name. Names made people defend themselves. Instead she looked down at the dead man’s fist and the spiral symbols stamped into the wax. She turned the folded paper and shone her lamp on the back. There, barely visible under grime, sat a set of tiny scratches—scratches like someone had pressed a small brass tool against wax to imprint a matching key. She held the Veil Compass up toward the paper. The needle swung a fraction, then corrected itself, still pointed at the rift. But the movement wasn’t random. It acknowledged the wax seal, then ignored it, like it only cared about a specific imprint. Harlow’s fingers went careful. She opened her pocket kit and pulled out a small magnifier lens. The scratches on the wax looked like they had been made by the same artisan style as the protective sigils on the compass. Eva watched the lens hover. “You think he carried a key imprint.” Harlow nodded once. “A Shade artisan marks the casing. If the wax imprint matches the artisan style, then the death served the market’s machinery.” Eva’s mouth tightened. “Or it served your detective instincts.” Harlow looked at her. “Don’t flatter me.” “I wasn’t,” Eva said. “You keep seeing the supernatural as a method, not a myth. That’s why you suspect the clique. That’s why you don’t buy the tidy story.” Harlow lowered the lens. Her voice stayed steady, but her pulse got loud in her ears. Three years ago, DS Morris had disappeared during a case with supernatural origins. She had watched his partner badge empty out on an office desk. She had heard the official language of accident. She had seen the language used to cover. She hadn’t understood the how, not yet. Now the how stood in front of her on a Tube platform like it belonged there. “This man didn’t come here to die,” Harlow said. “He came to seal a transaction. Someone else moved him.” Eva’s expression sharpened. “You don’t think he was killed by the rift.” “I think the rift acted on his protection,” Harlow answered. “It took him where it could reach without breaking the boundary chalk. The violence looked staged because it wasn’t meant to end with blood.” Eva stared at the body, then at the chalk. Her voice dropped. “So the missing half-circle held the part that would have made the death make sense.” “And they stopped before it opened,” Harlow said. Eva’s breath hitched. “Because it would have dragged something else through.” Harlow kept her lamp on the chalk gap and stepped closer until she could see the texture of the floor. Under the grime, a thin layer of protective paste coated the stone in a smear along the edge of the chalk line. It didn’t belong to chalk. It looked poured, then wiped. She ran a gloved finger along the edge. The paste didn’t smear. It lifted as if it had hardened around whatever touched it. Eva leaned over her shoulder. “What do you see?” Harlow held her finger up to the lamp. On the glove edge sat a faint dust of green—verdigris mixed with something else. The same green tint that coated the Veil Compass casing. “This platform had a Shade tool,” Harlow said. “Someone used the same artisan protection style.” Eva’s eyes widened behind her glasses. “That means the clique didn’t just trade. They commissioned. They knew the method.” Harlow turned toward the chalk semicircle’s untouched end and stared into the space where the boundary should have completed. The needle pointed there. The rift lay there. The missing half-circle held a choice: stop the marks, keep the rift from eating the rest of the scene, stage a death to stop questions. Her mind followed the logic like it followed a case file, every detail pinned to what it refused to do. “Where’s the bone token?” Harlow asked suddenly. Eva blinked, then reached into her satchel. She pulled out a second bone token, smaller than the first, and held it between thumb and forefinger. The edges looked freshly cut. “I got it from the liaison who brought me in,” Eva said. “They said it would keep me out of trouble.” Harlow watched Eva carefully. “Keep you out of trouble how?” Eva stared back. “By preventing the rift from grabbing me.” Harlow’s gaze dropped to Eva’s neck. No sigils, no bruising. But her collar had a faint smudge, a thin line of greenish dust caught where cloth met skin. Harlow raised a finger and brushed it with the back of her glove. Eva jerked, then went still. “That dust wasn’t there before.” Harlow didn’t pull her hand away. She tipped the lamp toward the smudge. The marks on Eva’s collar matched the paste on the platform edge, down to the verdigris-like tint. “You got handled,” Harlow said. Eva’s throat moved when she swallowed. “The liaison did.” “The liaison didn’t come down here alone,” Harlow said, and the certainty in her voice made the words land like metal on stone. “Someone in charge needed you alive. Someone put protection dust on you to keep you close enough to interpret the wrong evidence.” Eva’s eyes went hard. “You think the clique brought me in.” “I think they used your knowledge,” Harlow corrected. “They counted on your books. They counted on your understanding of Veil Market machinery. Then they used your fear to funnel you here.” Eva’s left hand went to her ear. Her fingers paused behind the curl, then dropped to her side. “You don’t want to believe it, but that’s what you do. You connect things.” Harlow straightened. The Veil Compass needle still pointed at the chalk gap. The platform didn’t shift. The rift didn’t open. It waited like a held breath. “What does the needle do when the rift stays closed?” Harlow asked. Eva reached into her satchel and pulled out a small strip of paper and a tiny vial with ink-like liquid. She dabbed the strip, then held it near the compass needle. The liquid shifted, darkened at one edge, and formed a thin crescent pointing toward the chalk gap. Eva’s voice came out tight. “It still tracks it.” Harlow looked at the dead man’s fist again. The wax seal sat clean, too clean. The spiral symbol stamped into it mirrored the protective sigils on the compass. It wasn’t just a registry mark. It had acted like an instruction. Someone had left a body behind as the visible story, and they had relied on the Veil Compass to pull the real attention to the edge they wanted people to stare at. Harlow turned to Eva and kept her lamp moving, slow and deliberate, taking in the platform columns, the chalk gap, the staged debris of ceramic, the mural stains on the wall. “Start from your first step in,” Harlow said. “Tell me what you saw before you saw him.” Eva’s jaw flexed. “I saw the chalk boundary. It already sat there when I arrived.” “And the Veil Compass?” Harlow asked. Eva hesitated for a fraction, then moved the truth into her words like she had prepared the shape. “I didn’t have the Compass. The liaison carried something like it, but it didn’t have sigils you could see. They handed me the bone token and told me you’d understand the rest.” Harlow nodded once, like she filed the answer into the only place it belonged. “Then the liaison planned the evidence. They placed protection dust on you. They staged the body. And they aimed the rift at a missing boundary.” Eva’s eyes flicked to the chalk gap again. “You still haven’t told me what others missed.” Harlow took one step toward the gap, slow enough that her lamp didn’t smear over the floor. She stared at the line where chalk ended and stone began. “Everyone else saw a crime scene,” she said. “You and I saw a tool boundary. The chalk gap wasn’t meant to hide the rift. It was meant to make people think the rift was the killer.” Eva followed her gaze, and her voice dropped. “So the killer wasn’t the rift.” Harlow lowered the lamp until the beam hit the paste edge at a shallow angle. The hardened paste carried a faint imprint: a rectangle of pressure marks, too even to be accidental, arranged around a central notch like a device key. The shape looked like a brass plate pressed into wax—only this imprint sat in paste on stone. She lifted her glove and traced the edge without touching. “This platform carried a seal device,” Harlow said. “Someone set the rift’s access point. Then they staged a death inside the boundary. The evidence didn’t add up because the rift had rules. It didn’t act like a chaos event. It acted like someone’s contract.” Eva’s face went pale under the lamp’s glare. “Then who contracted it?” Harlow didn’t answer. She looked up at the tunnel mouth where the entry path lay hidden behind the boards. The air smelled like pennies and brass and old smoke. Somewhere above, London kept making noise. Down here, the platform waited with the dead man’s wax seal and the Veil Compass needle locked on a choice someone had left unfinished. Eva shifted behind her, satchel heavy against her back. Her voice carried a new edge, like she had made a decision. “If the clue sits in that imprint, then the clique didn’t just stage a homicide.” Harlow turned the Veil Compass slightly and kept the needle aimed at the chalk gap. “They staged an inspection. They wanted us to come looking.” Eva leaned in, eyes fixed on the platform. “And they wanted you to suspect them.” Harlow moved her lamp in a small arc across the chalk edge again. The protective paste edge held one more detail: at the notch, a thin thread of something clung to the stone—fine, metallic, and green-tinted. Not hair. Not wire. A sliver of sigil-thread used to bind wards. Harlow’s glove closed around it, carefully, and lifted. The thread stretched a fraction and then snapped cleanly, leaving a tiny indentation in the paste like a needle had pressed it. Eva stared at the snapped end. “That thread’s fresh.” Harlow looked at the dead man. Then she looked at Eva. “They put it there after he arrived.” Eva swallowed. “Which means someone came back.” A floorboard groaned above, faint through layers of tunnel. Harlow didn’t move her feet, but she lowered the Veil Compass and let the lamplight bite the chalk gap one last time, searching for anything that didn’t match a staged scene. The brass needle held true. The chalk gap waited. The platform stayed quiet—until the next sound came, closer than the first.
created_at"2026-03-18T11:16:35.847Z" 3/18/2026, 11:16:35 AM
model"openai/gpt-5.4-nano-20260317"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1506
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time23161
tokens_prompt1149
tokens_completion6401
native_tokens_prompt1009
native_tokens_completion5391
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning202
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
usage0.00694055
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"0c835f2e-c18d-4e8c-b245-e1e3bd08b97f"
id"resp_0866a46fd25dce800169ba8993e7bc8196b3ef1c8c5af98bb0"
is_byokfalse
latency183
model_permaslug"openai/gpt-5.4-nano-20260317"
provider_name"OpenAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1773832595-jKLuQHtSigC8Ipo3raKZ"
upstream_id"resp_0866a46fd25dce800169ba8993e7bc8196b3ef1c8c5af98bb0"
total_cost0.00694055
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"OpenAI"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags41
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"She paused then [then]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
2"Harlow’s fingers tightened around [around]"
3"Harlow asked suddenly [suddenly]"
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.651
rawRatio0.098
effectiveRatio0.063
90.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount4048
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"lightly"
4"suddenly"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
81.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount4048
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"etched"
count2
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"flicked"
4"tension"
5"reminder"
6"etched"
7"could feel"
8"magnetic"
9"echoed"
10"stomach"
11"pulse"
12"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences323
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences323
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences407
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords4037
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions45
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions178
wordCount2901
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.72
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity6
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Camden1
Quinn1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Kowalski1
Harlow79
Eva65
Veil12
Compass13
Morris1
London1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Harlow"
4"Eva"
5"Compass"
6"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.138
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences206
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a talisman, but it sat agains"
1"looked like they had been made by the sam"
2"looked like a brass plate pressed into wa"
3"smelled like pennies and brass and old smo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount4037
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences407
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs171
mean23.61
std14.41
cv0.61
sampleLengths
012
175
221
353
45
519
635
744
86
938
1058
1127
1228
1352
1437
1518
167
1754
1813
1937
209
2131
2254
239
2437
2526
2613
2744
288
2915
3012
3111
3225
3336
3415
3520
3646
3712
3832
398
4012
416
4239
4344
4432
4520
465
4711
4845
4943
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences323
matches
0"been clenched"
1"been placed"
2"been removed"
3"been made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs545
matches(empty)
79.68% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences407
ratio0.022
matches
0"Just a spiral of tiny symbols—stamped, not written—within a circle of wax."
1"It pointed—not north, not magnetic—but toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal."
2"Under the lamp, it showed the same protective sigil work as the wax seal and the Veil Compass casing—tiny lines etched into the ceramic, like a shield made of fired clay."
3"And right at the end of that route sat a smear of red-brown—like dried blood—except it had no bead edges."
4"There, barely visible under grime, sat a set of tiny scratches—scratches like someone had pressed a small brass tool against wax to imprint a matching key."
5"On the glove edge sat a faint dust of green—verdigris mixed with something else."
6"The shape looked like a brass plate pressed into wax—only this imprint sat in paste on stone."
7"The protective paste edge held one more detail: at the notch, a thin thread of something clung to the stone—fine, metallic, and green-tinted."
8"The platform stayed quiet—until the next sound came, closer than the first."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2924
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount103
adverbRatio0.03522571819425445
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.006839945280437756
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences407
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences407
mean9.92
std6.79
cv0.685
sampleLengths
012
122
218
34
41
530
68
713
814
911
1028
115
124
134
1411
154
1622
179
186
199
205
218
2216
236
2412
2516
2610
276
2822
2922
308
315
3210
336
346
3512
3611
375
387
3912
4014
417
4212
4310
444
4511
4612
476
4812
494
42.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.18427518427518427
totalSentences407
uniqueOpeners75
72.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences277
matches
0"Instead, the floor looked…"
1"Just a spiral of tiny"
2"Instead, it looked like oil."
3"Instead she looked down at"
4"Somewhere above, London kept making"
5"Then she looked at Eva."
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount69
totalSentences277
matches
0"It rose every time the"
1"Her red curls sat tight"
2"Her jaw stayed sharp."
3"She walked the lamp along"
4"It looked baked-on, like someone"
5"She paused, then moved on"
6"She angled the lamp closer."
7"Her satchel thumped against her"
8"It had no printed address,"
9"It gave a slow, reluctant"
10"She stared at her own"
11"It should have held water"
12"It moved only when she"
13"She leaned in."
14"It smelled like pennies."
15"She didn’t rush."
16"She worked like she had"
17"Her left wrist creaked as"
18"It had never felt like"
19"They curved toward the body,"
ratio0.249
15.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount246
totalSentences277
matches
0"The abandoned Tube platform under"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped through the"
2"The beam caught dust, old"
3"A neat semicircle of chalk"
4"A faint brass smell hung"
5"It rose every time the"
6"Eva Kowalski’s round glasses reflected"
7"Her red curls sat tight"
8"Her jaw stayed sharp."
9"Eva lifted her hand."
10"Harlow didn’t look at the"
11"She walked the lamp along"
12"The lines weren’t ordinary chalk."
13"The powder clung in ridges"
14"It looked baked-on, like someone"
15"Eva followed her line of"
16"She paused, then moved on"
17"Harlow stopped at the dead"
18"A figure lay sprawled across"
19"The man wore a cheap"
ratio0.888
36.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences277
matches
0"Either the victim had come"
1"Now the how stood in"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences122
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"A neat semicircle of chalk markings cut through grime near the dead end of the platform, as if someone had drawn a boundary and then decided the rest didn’t mat…"
1"A figure lay sprawled across the tracks with one arm twisted too far, as if the joint had met resistance and lost."
2"Harlow didn’t move her feet, but she lowered the Veil Compass and let the lamplight bite the chalk gap one last time, searching for anything that didn’t match a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags41
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Harlow repeated, flat"
1"Eva asked, voice sharper now, no longer cautious"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags37
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
1"Harlow repeated (repeat)"
2"Harlow corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences126
tagDensity0.294
leniency0.587
rawRatio0.081
effectiveRatio0.048
87.2801%