Run: 2026-03-18-01KM0APS4JQSTW8M5MDRGW325Y

Run Details

Duration:
12.9s
Cost:
$0.000883
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the grimy window as Rory pulled the door open, the sudden draft rattling the stacks of index cards balanced precariously on Eva's bookshelf. She hadn't expected company—not tonight, not in this state. She'd just finished plating the last of the triple-chocolate tart she'd baked, hoping the sugar would take the edge off the bickering with the Golden Empress kitchen staff. "Surprise." The voice cut through the static like a knife. Rory's grip tightened around the door handle as Lucien stepped forward, his tailored charcoal suit already glistening with rain. His amber eye locked onto hers, the black one distant, as if watching something beyond the flat's ceiling. Ptolemy bolted from the armchair where he'd been curled, tail fluffed, and darted under the couch with a hiss. Eva wasn’t home—thank god—but the flat's usual smell of curry and old books had been replaced by the sharp, metallic tang of his cologne, the one Rory had bought him last Christmas. Three years melted away in the space between heartbeats. "You're soaked." His lips quirked, but his cane tapped against the hardwood floor, the ivory tip leaving a damp mark. "London decides to greet me properly tonight." The tart slipped slightly in her grip, golden crumbs tumbling onto the doormat. She caught it before it hit the floor but not before Lucien's gaze flicked to the dessert, then to her bare arms dusted with flour. "You bake when upset?" "Only when I lose bets with myself." The lie slipped out easier than she expected, the kind of thing she’d have told him once upon a time. Not now. Not like this. He stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind him with a finality that made her chest tighten. The deadbolts hadn’t been drawn—the oversight now glaring. She should’ve locked up. Should’ve known. This flat was a haven, but not from him. Never from him. "I didn’t know you were back." "Two days ago." Two days. Plenty of time to find her address. Plenty of time to decide to come. The flour on her hands caught the dim light from the streetlamp outside, skimming over the crescent scar on her wrist like a ghost touch. Lucien’s gaze followed it down, then up again, slower this time, as if he were stripping layers instead of just clothes. "You look good, Rory." Not Aurora. Not even Malphora. Just Rory. The name he’d given her in a different life. She set the tart down on the nearest surface—the dining table buried under spell diagrams drawn in messy ink. "What do you want?" His cane tapped once against the floor. "Can’t a man visit without an agenda?" "You? Unless it involves leverage or payment, no." The words came out sharper than intended, but the years of silence between them had honed that edge sharp enough to cut. Lucien exhaled, the sound almost a laugh. "Same sharp tongue. I missed that." "Don’t." He tilted his head, the platinum blond hair catching the faint glow of the hour-lamp Eva kept on for late-night readings. "Don’t what?" "Don’t pretend this is casual. Not after everything." The flat seemed to shrink, the scent of incense clinging to the air suddenly too thick, too intimate. Lucien moved toward the armchair Eva had abandoned, the fabric scratching as he lowered himself, cane carefully propped against the side. He adjusted his cuff, the sleeve riding up just enough to reveal the faintest trace of sigils tattooed along his wrist. Protection? Power? She didn’t ask. "You think I don’t know what ‘everything’ means? I left you letters. Messages. You erased every one." Rory’s fingers curled into fists. "You left a key to a flat in Soho in my coat pocket. A flat you never told me about. With a safe full of cash and a lease in your name. That wasn’t a message—that was a lifeline you dangled and then yanked away." His amber eye darkened, the black one flickering like a dying ember. "You think I had a choice?" "Bullshit. You always have a choice." He stood suddenly, too fast for someone with a cane’s support. The chair scooted back, wood screeching against the floor. "I let you think that. Maybe I should’ve told you the truth sooner—that I wasn’t just some fixer, just some half-breed with a silver tongue. I was hunting something. And it found you anyway." Rory’s breath hitched. "What?" Lucien didn’t answer. His stare drilled into her, unblinking, as if he were memorizing her face again. Or reclaiming it. The rain outside softened to a whisper, but the silence in the flat was louder. "You’re bleeding." His voice dropped, rougher than before. She followed his gaze down. A thin line of red welled at her palm from where the tart’s sharp edge had nicked her finger. She hadn’t even felt it. Lucien moved before she could react—her hand in his, the touch warm, electric, sending a jolt up her arm that made her knees threaten to fold. He pressed her finger to his lips, the tip of his tongue warm and wet against the wound. Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. His eyes were inches from hers, his breath hot on her skin. The scent of him—bergamot and gunpowder—filled her lungs. For a second, she forgot how to breathe. Then he stepped back, releasing her hand as if burned. "You always were reckless with knives," he murmured. "Even in the kitchen." The words hung between them, heavy with everything left unsaid. The tart sat forgotten. Eva’s flat felt too small, too thin a barrier against the storm of memory. Lucien’s cane tapped twice against the floor, steady as a heartbeat. "You going to offer me tea, or am I just here to bleed for you now?" Rory stared at him, chest rising and falling too fast. The anger was still there, simmering, but now it was tangled with something else. Something warm and dangerous. She turned toward the kettle, fingers steady despite the storm inside. "Sit down, Lucien. You’re dripping on Eva’s scrolls."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.115
leniency0.231
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1016
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"simmering"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"flicked"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"electric"
5"pulse"
6"simmering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1006
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.43% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount791
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Eva5
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien8
Christmas1
Aurora1
Malphora1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if watching something beyond the flat's ceiling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1006
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"honed that edge"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.87
std17.58
cv0.804
sampleLengths
064
11
246
351
49
52
625
738
84
932
1043
116
123
1316
1446
154
1616
1723
1814
1930
2013
211
2223
238
2465
2517
2650
2718
286
2954
304
3120
3215
332
3435
3544
366
3728
3810
3912
4028
4111
4216
4328
4411
458
85.21% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences70
matches
0"been curled"
1"been replaced"
2"been drawn"
3"was tangled"
97.44% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs130
matches
0"were stripping"
1"were memorizing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences93
ratio0.065
matches
0"She hadn't expected company—not tonight, not in this state."
1"Eva wasn’t home—thank god—but the flat's usual smell of curry and old books had been replaced by the sharp, metallic tang of his cologne, the one Rory had bought him last Christmas."
2"The deadbolts hadn’t been drawn—the oversight now glaring."
3"She set the tart down on the nearest surface—the dining table buried under spell diagrams drawn in messy ink."
4"Lucien moved before she could react—her hand in his, the touch warm, electric, sending a jolt up her arm that made her knees threaten to fold."
5"The scent of him—bergamot and gunpowder—filled her lungs."
96.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount802
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.043640897755610975
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006234413965087282
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean10.82
std8.88
cv0.821
sampleLengths
027
19
228
31
49
519
618
719
832
99
102
1118
127
1313
1425
154
1627
172
183
1917
208
214
222
239
243
256
263
272
287
297
3025
3121
324
332
343
352
369
3719
384
397
407
4130
427
436
441
4521
462
478
4818
4921
55.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3763440860215054
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners35
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then he stepped back, releasing"
ratio0.016
84.52% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences62
matches
0"She hadn't expected company—not tonight,"
1"She'd just finished plating the"
2"His amber eye locked onto"
3"His lips quirked, but his"
4"She caught it before it"
5"He stepped inside, the door"
6"She should’ve locked up."
7"She set the tart down"
8"His cane tapped once against"
9"He tilted his head, the"
10"He adjusted his cuff, the"
11"She didn’t ask."
12"His amber eye darkened, the"
13"He stood suddenly, too fast"
14"His stare drilled into her,"
15"His voice dropped, rougher than"
16"She followed his gaze down."
17"She hadn’t even felt it."
18"He pressed her finger to"
19"His eyes were inches from"
ratio0.339
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"She hadn't expected company—not tonight,"
2"She'd just finished plating the"
3"The voice cut through the"
4"Rory's grip tightened around the"
5"His amber eye locked onto"
6"Ptolemy bolted from the armchair"
7"Eva wasn’t home—thank god—but the"
8"His lips quirked, but his"
9"The tart slipped slightly in"
10"She caught it before it"
11"The lie slipped out easier"
12"He stepped inside, the door"
13"The deadbolts hadn’t been drawn—the"
14"She should’ve locked up."
15"This flat was a haven,"
16"Plenty of time to find"
17"Plenty of time to decide"
18"The flour on her hands"
19"Lucien’s gaze followed it down,"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His amber eye locked onto hers, the black one distant, as if watching something beyond the flat's ceiling."
1"He stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind him with a finality that made her chest tighten."
2"His stare drilled into her, unblinking, as if he were memorizing her face again."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.038
leniency0.077
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.077
83.6193%