| 88.89% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn crouched again [again]" | | 1 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.278 | | leniency | 0.556 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.111 | |
| 66.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 887 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loosely" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 21.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 887 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shattered" | | 1 | "measured" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "tracing" | | 5 | "echo" | | 6 | "footsteps" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "jaw clenched" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "jaw/fists clenched" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 877 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 490 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 3.47 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 17 | | Tube | 1 | | Piccadilly | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Pentonville | 1 | | Eva | 15 | | Two | 1 | | Ziploc | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | Morris | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Line" | | 3 | "Kowalski" | | 4 | "Pentonville" | | 5 | "Eva" | | 6 | "Two" | | 7 | "Ziploc" | | 8 | "Morris" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0 | | windowScore | 0.167 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.97% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.14 | | wordCount | 877 | | matches | | 0 | "not earth, but darkness" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 19.93 | | std | 15.31 | | cv | 0.768 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 9 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 40 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 1 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 33 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 3 |
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| 94.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "was killed" | | 1 | "was obscured" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp concrete, mildew, and something metallic underneath—a scent she knew too well." | | 1 | "\"—was killed roughly three blocks east of here, near the old arcade off Pentonville Road.\" Quinn said, her voice low and measured." | | 2 | "The fingers of his right hand trembled slightly—postmortem twitch." | | 3 | "She withdrew a pair of tweezers and a Ziploc, kneeling to collect something from the floor beside the body—a single silver button, tarnished but unmistakably metallic." | | 4 | "\"Not taken. *Sent*.\" Quinn crouched again, eyes tracing the platform’s edge, where the tiles ended abruptly, replaced by jagged, unnatural gaps in the floor—gaps that revealed not earth, but darkness that didn't belong to this world." | | 5 | "A distant echo rippled through the tunnel—footsteps." | | 6 | "The footsteps grew louder, rhythmic, boot-like—marching from the direction of the escalator shaft." |
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| 85.72% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 405 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 21 | | adverbRatio | 0.05185185185185185 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024691358024691357 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 9.74 | | std | 7.84 | | cv | 0.804 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 26 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 58.89% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.36666666666666664 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "She knelt, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "She gestured toward the body" | | 2 | "She lifted the victim’s arm" | | 3 | "She lifted it higher." | | 4 | "She withdrew a pair of" | | 5 | "She held it up between" | | 6 | "She reached into her coat" | | 7 | "She held up a hand." |
| | ratio | 0.151 | |
| 7.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into" | | 1 | "A single flickering bulb cast" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "She knelt, fingers brushing the" | | 4 | "A watch dangled loosely from" | | 5 | "Quinn exhaled sharply through her" | | 6 | "Eva Kowalski appeared from behind" | | 7 | "Heels clicked as Quinn rose." | | 8 | "She gestured toward the body" | | 9 | "\"—was killed roughly three blocks" | | 10 | "Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened." | | 11 | "She lifted the victim’s arm" | | 12 | "The watch lies between the" | | 13 | "Eva looked again." | | 14 | "The fingers of his right" | | 15 | "Quinn pressed two gloved fingers" | | 16 | "She lifted it higher." | | 17 | "Quinn pointed to the neck" | | 18 | "Quinn stood, brushing dust from" | | 19 | "Eva pulled a small leather" |
| | ratio | 0.906 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 17 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the abandoned Tube station, her boots crunching over broken glass and crumbling tiles." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn asked, voice flat" | | 1 | "Quinn said, voice razor-thin" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 36 | | tagDensity | 0.111 | | leniency | 0.222 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.056 | |