| 85.71% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Nyx corrected gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.114 | |
| 90.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1525 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lazily" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1525 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "measured" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "resonance" | | 11 | "trembled" | | 12 | "gleaming" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "echoes" | | 15 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 150 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 70 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 49 | | totalWords | 1542 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Beneath the oak where moonlight bleeds, find the key that feeds the weed." | | 1 | "Touch the roots," | | 2 | "remembers" | | 3 | "him" | | 4 | "rose" | | 5 | "you" | | 6 | "remembered" | | 7 | "memory" | | 8 | "drawn" | | 9 | "collects" | | 10 | "sing" | | 11 | "roots" | | 12 | "rose" | | 13 | "presence" | | 14 | "You have come to trade." | | 15 | "shape" | | 16 | "Aldric." | | 17 | "You are the echo of a debt," | | 18 | "And debts must be paid in kind." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1266 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.34 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Nyx" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.829 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like rain on crushed mint and some" | | 1 | "not quite day" | | 2 | "It was as if time had slipped its moorings" | | 3 | "as though remembering starlight" | | 4 | "felt like a weapon" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 7 | | per1kWords | 4.54 | | wordCount | 1542 | | matches | | 0 | "neither comforting nor" | | 1 | "not pain, but recognition" | | 2 | "not a man, not a shadow, but a *presence* made of echoes" | | 3 | "not a shadow, but a *presence* made of echoes" | | 4 | "not from any throat, but from the air itself" | | 5 | "not solid, not form, but a *shape* of memory" | | 6 | "not form, but a *shape* of memory" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 27.54 | | std | 21.27 | | cv | 0.773 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 89 | | 1 | 91 | | 2 | 69 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 54 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 53 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 37 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 33 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 46 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 53 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 51 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 38 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 216 | | matches | | 0 | "was inhaling" | | 1 | "were moving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 16 | | totalSentences | 150 | | ratio | 0.107 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse hadn’t slowed since she’d slid the silver key over the runes carved beneath the arch — a summoning, a fragment of Isolde’s riddle: *Beneath the oak where moonlight bleeds, find the key that feeds the weed.* The words had made little sense until Nyx, their violet-glowing gaze steady, simply said, *Touch the roots,* and then pinched the key from her pocket as if it had always belonged there." | | 1 | "Now, inside the grove, the air tasted like rain on crushed mint and something older — the scent of wet moss after centuries of silence." | | 2 | "Not metaphorically — it actually pulsed." | | 3 | "Rory — she caught herself thinking in her own voice, not the alias tonight — paused and let the pendant settle against her sternum." | | 4 | "“No,” Nyx said, turning — if you could call the fluid unspooling of shadow a turn." | | 5 | "They drifted upward, through the branches, until their glow shimmered like a broken star against the arching sky — not night, not quite day." | | 6 | "Isolde reached into the moss at her feet and drew out a blade — no, not drew." | | 7 | "The moment her fingers closed around the grip, a jolt ran up her arm — not pain, but recognition." | | 8 | "Isolde pointed toward the heart of the grove, where a single tree stood apart — taller than the others, its bark black as polished obsidian, its leaves the color of dried blood." | | 9 | "A note hummed through the earth, through the air, through her blood — a sound that wasn’t sound, something that existed before sound, before light, before touch." | | 10 | "Not the trees — the *roots*." | | 11 | "Then came the shape — a throne, forged from the same rusted iron as the key, but gleaming inside, as if its veins pulsed with molten light." | | 12 | "The throne beneath it groaned, and from its seat, a figure emerged — not a man, not a shadow, but a *presence* made of echoes and hunger." | | 13 | "Then, from the hollow of the black oak, a thing emerged — not solid, not form, but a *shape* of memory." | | 14 | "And his eyes — they were violet, like twilight over water." | | 15 | "And with that, she stepped forward — into the heart of the grove, into the mouth of the black oak, into the space between a riddle and its answer." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1255 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.0350597609561753 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010358565737051793 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 150 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 150 | | mean | 10.28 | | std | 9.09 | | cv | 0.885 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 40.00% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.28 | | totalSentences | 150 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Once, Rory thought she saw" | | 1 | "Then, from the depths of" | | 2 | "Then came the shape —" | | 3 | "Then, from the hollow of" |
| | ratio | 0.036 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse hadn’t slowed since" | | 1 | "They split the sky in" | | 2 | "Their leaves shimmered in silver-green," | | 3 | "Its deep crimson glow pulsed" | | 4 | "She pressed a finger to" | | 5 | "She moved without sound, as" | | 6 | "she replied, voice like wind" | | 7 | "Their form shifted between solid" | | 8 | "they whispered, voice like wind" | | 9 | "She hadn’t told them how" | | 10 | "They drifted upward, through the" | | 11 | "It was as if time" | | 12 | "It glowed faintly, as though" | | 13 | "She held the blade out," | | 14 | "She turned it over." | | 15 | "It wasn’t silver." | | 16 | "It wasn’t moonsilver." | | 17 | "It was old." | | 18 | "She raised a finger, and" | | 19 | "It rippled, then contracted, reforming" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 71.61% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 87 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones were cold" | | 1 | "Her pulse hadn’t slowed since" | | 2 | "The trees here weren’t just" | | 3 | "They split the sky in" | | 4 | "Their leaves shimmered in silver-green," | | 5 | "The undergrowth breathed." | | 6 | "Rory — she caught herself" | | 7 | "The Heartstone had come alive" | | 8 | "Its deep crimson glow pulsed" | | 9 | "She pressed a finger to" | | 10 | "Isolde stepped beside her, her" | | 11 | "She moved without sound, as" | | 12 | "she replied, voice like wind" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow-body" | | 14 | "Their form shifted between solid" | | 15 | "they whispered, voice like wind" | | 16 | "Nyx said, turning — if" | | 17 | "A cold finger traced her" | | 18 | "She hadn’t told them how" | | 19 | "Nyx didn’t answer." |
| | ratio | 0.777 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 112 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, inside the grove, the" | | 1 | "*And debts must be paid" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pulse hadn’t slowed since she’d slid the silver key over the runes carved beneath the arch — a summoning, a fragment of Isolde’s riddle: *Beneath the oak wh…" | | 1 | "Tiny fronds curled and unfurled in slow motion, as if the earth itself was inhaling and exhaling." | | 2 | "She pressed a finger to it and felt a warmth that was neither comforting nor dangerous, just present." | | 3 | "She moved without sound, as if the grove itself cushioned her passage." | | 4 | "The pendant blazed against her neck, burning now, searing through her shirt." | | 5 | "The crown rose higher, untwisting into a spiral that lifted into the air like a serpent preparing to strike." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 35.71% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx corrected gently (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 35 | | tagDensity | 0.286 | | leniency | 0.571 | | rawRatio | 0.4 | | effectiveRatio | 0.229 | |