Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1FTMNMSZBK3V22EBJBATKA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.004006
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven on a Thursday night. Aurora looked up from the pile of takeaway menus she'd been sorting through, her pen suspended over a half-finished order list. Ptolemy, Eva's perpetually unimpressed tabby, lifted his head from his spot on the windowsill and narrowed his eyes at the door. She wasn't expecting anyone. Eva was still in Manchester for her grandmother's memorial, and Rory hadn't told anyone else about this address. She'd been careful about that. The knock came again, three measured raps that she recognized before she could place them. No. Not here. Not now. Her body decided before her mind caught up, feet carrying her across the cramped sitting room where every surface bore the weight of Eva's obsessive research into matters that shouldn't exist. She stepped over a stack of manuscripts, past the cluttered kitchen counter with its permanent collection of cold cups of tea, and reached the door with its three deadbolts. The first lock turned with a click that sounded too loud in the quiet flat. The second, a little stiffer. Her fingers trembled on the third. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, backlit by the flickering fluorescent light that never worked properly in this building. He looked exactly as he had six months ago, when she'd walked out of his office in Shoreditch and told him never to contact her again. Tailored charcoal suit, immaculate. Ivory-handled cane held loosely in one hand. That face that could have been carved from marble if marble came with a scar bisecting the left eyebrow and eyes that didn't match each other—one amber, one black, both watching her now with an expression she couldn't read. "Lucien." His name left her mouth flat, careful. "What are you doing here?" He inclined his head, a gesture that managed to be both polite and insufferable. "A good evening to you as well, Rory." "Don't call me that." She kept one hand on the door, ready to close it. "How did you find me?" "I have resources." "I told you not to look for me." "You told me a great many things." His voice carried that familiar French lilt, softer now, as though the hours had worn it down. "You also left rather abruptly without letting me explain." "I understood perfectly." "You understood what you wanted to." Ptolemy made a sound from somewhere behind her, a low warning growl that rumbled through the flat. Aurora glanced back, then faced Lucien again, aware suddenly of how she must look—oversized t-shirt advertising a band she'd seen years ago, hair pulled back in a messy knot, bare feet on cold floorboards. "This isn't a good time." She said it knowing it didn't matter. He'd found her. He'd always been good at finding people. "Whatever you came for, it can wait." "It has waited." Something shifted in his mismatched eyes, a crack in that careful composure. "Six months is quite a wait, don't you think?" "Lucien—" "There's been a development. Regarding your situation with your ex." She went still. The temperature in the hallway seemed to drop, though she knew that was impossible. Evan. Even his name in her head sent ice through her veins, a reaction that hadn't faded no matter how much time passed, no matter how far she ran. "I told you I handled it." "You told me you handled it. You disappeared. I had no way of verifying." "I didn't ask you to verify anything." "You asked me to help you disappear." He took a step closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and woodsy, the same as before. "I did as you requested. I have continued to do so, in fact. Evan Williams was released from hospital three weeks ago. He's been asking questions about you." The words hit her like cold water. She opened her mouth, closed it again. The corridor behind Lucien stretched empty in both directions, shadows pooling in the corners where the light didn't reach. "He's in London?" Her voice came out smaller than she wanted. "I have reason to believe so." "How long have you known?" "Since yesterday." "Yesterday." She laughed, a sharp sound that surprised her. "And you're telling me now?" "I wasn't certain you would even see me. You've proven rather skilled at making yourself invisible when you wish to be." He paused, and something flickered across his face—hurt, maybe, or old anger. "I did try your flat above Silas' bar. The proprietor informed me you'd moved out." "I needed a change." "So I gathered." They stood there, two people who had once sat across from each other in a candlelit office in Shoreditch, mapping out escape routes and safe houses over glasses of wine. She remembered how his hand had brushed hers when he slid a folder across the desk. How she'd thought about it for days afterward, the casual electricity of that touch. How she'd wanted him in a way that terrified her, because wanting things had always been the first step toward losing them. Then Evan had found her again, and she'd run, and she'd blamed Lucien for it. Easier than admitting she'd been scared of what she felt. "Come in," she said, stepping back from the doorway. "If we're going to do this, we're doing it properly." Lucien's eyebrows rose slightly, but he crossed the threshold without hesitation. He moved through the cluttered space with the careful grace of someone accustomed to navigating cramped rooms, pausing only when Ptolemy hissed at him from the kitchen counter. "Does the cat always react that way to visitors?" "Only to people who deserve it." She watched him take in the chaos of Eva's research materials, the walls papered with photocopied pages and handwritten notes connected by red string. His expression didn't change, but she saw the questions forming behind his eyes. "You've been busy," he said. "Eva's been busy. I'm just staying here while she's away." "Researching what, exactly?" "Things." "Rory." "Don't call me that." "Then what would you prefer?" He turned to face her fully, the movement pulling his jacket tight across his shoulders. "Aurora? Miss Carter? Laila?" She flinched at the last one. That had been the name she'd used when she'd first come to London, the fake identity Lucien had arranged for her. He'd been the one to suggest it, a clean break from the woman Evan knew. "That one especially," she said. "We agreed to leave her behind." " Agreements change." "Says who?" "Says the man who's been lying awake at night wondering if you're safe." The words came out sharper than anything he'd said before, his accent thickening around the edges. "Says the fool who let you walk away without fighting for you." The silence that followed pressed against the walls of the tiny flat. Ptolemy had gone quiet too, watching them from his perch with suspicious golden eyes. "You had no right to worry about me," Aurora finally said. "What happened between us—" "What happened between us?" "You know what I mean." "I know what you tell me. I know what you chose to share, and I know what you decided to keep hidden." He set his cane against the wall with deliberate care, a gesture that felt like a threat. "What I don't know is why you ran. Not from Evan. From me." She wrapped her arms around herself, suddenly aware of how cold the flat was, how exposed. "It wasn't like that." "Then what was it like?" "It was—" She stopped, tried again. The words tangled in her throat, years of silence pressing down on her chest. "I couldn't stay. I couldn't watch myself fall for you while knowing it would end badly. Everything I touch ends up broken." "You don't know that." "I do, though." She met his eyes, both of them, the mismatched pair that had haunted her dreams for six months. "My mother left when I was twelve. My father drank himself to death by the time I was twenty. Every boyfriend I've had has ended up resenting me or hurting me or both. I'm bad luck, Lucien. I carry it with me." "And you thought I would be immune?" "I thought you were stronger than most. Cleverer, at least." "You thought wrong." He crossed the distance between them in two steps, close enough now that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the slight shadow of stubble along his jaw. "I am neither as clever nor as immune as you believe. The truth is, I have thought about almost nothing but you since you left. Every client, every job, every moment of my miserable existence—you were there. In the back of my mind. Under my skin." "That's not—" "Aurora." Her name, soft and careful, like he was handling something fragile. "I am half-demon. Do you understand what that means? I have spent thirty-two years keeping people at a distance because of what I am, what my father was. Then you walked into my office with your bright blue eyes and your carefully constructed lies, and I forgot every lesson I'd ever learned about staying detached." Her breath caught. "I wasn't lying about everything." "I know." His hand came up, hovered near her face without touching. "That's what frightened me." She leaned into the touch before she could stop herself, his palm warm against her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her cheekbone. He made a sound low in his throat, something that might have been relief or pain or both. "I should have stopped you," he said. "When you said you were leaving. I should have told you everything then." "What everything?" "That I didn't want you to go. That I would have given you any life you wanted, anywhere in the world, if you'd only asked. That I would have fought Evan myself, consequences be damned, if you'd only trusted me enough to stay." "I was scared." "I know." "I wanted to stay. I wanted—" Her voice cracked. "I still want." His forehead dropped to rest against hers, and for a moment they stood there, breathing the same air, existing in the same impossible space. His other hand found her waist, pulled her closer, and she went willingly, her body remembering what her mind had tried to forget. "The man who hurt you," Lucien murmured against her skin. "He's in London. I can find him. I can make sure he never comes near you again." "Violence isn't the answer." "You of all people should know that's not always true." She pulled back just enough to look at him, really look. His face was so close she could count the individual strands of platinum hair that made up his lashes. "You'd do that? For me?" "I would do considerably more than that." A ghost of a smile crossed his features, there and gone. "I have already done considerably more than that. There are people in Avaros who owe me favors. Demons who would think twice before crossing someone under my protection." "Lucien—" "You are under my protection now. Whether you like it or not." He kissed her forehead, a gesture that felt both tender and absolute. "I should have made that clear six months ago. I won't make the same mistake twice." She should argue. She should push him away again, maintain the careful distance that had kept her alive this long. But his arms were around her, solid and warm, and she was so tired of running, so tired of pretending she didn't want exactly this. "Don't disappear on me this time," he said. "Don't give me a reason to." He kissed her then, properly, deeply, with six months of silence behind it. She melted into him, her fingers curling into the fabric of his jacket, her whole body singing with a relief she hadn't known she needed. In the kitchen, Ptolemy yawned and went back to sleep. The notes on the walls could wait. The threats could wait. For this one moment, suspended in time, there was only Lucien—his hands in her hair, his mouth on hers, his heart beating against her chest in a rhythm that matched her own. When they finally broke apart, he was smiling. A real smile, unguarded in a way she'd never seen from him before. "I suppose," she said, breathless, "you'd better come inside properly. It's late." "I thought you'd never ask." She took his hand, led him toward the narrow bedroom, and didn't look back at the door with its three locks. For the first time in months, she didn't feel like running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.274
leniency0.547
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2109
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"slightly"
4"carefully"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2109
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"marble"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"lilt"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"constructed"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"weight"
2"trembled"
3"marble"
4"eyebrow"
5"familiar"
6"lilt"
7"flickered"
8"navigating"
9"silence"
10"constructed"
11"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
98.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences97
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences164
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2104
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"In the kitchen, Ptolemy yawned and went back to sleep."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1305
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.61
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Thursday1
Eva4
Manchester1
Rory1
Moreau1
Shoreditch2
French1
Ptolemy5
Lucien8
Evan3
London1
Aurora3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Manchester"
1"Shoreditch"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a threat"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.475
wordCount2104
matches
0"neither as clever nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences164
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs94
mean22.38
std21.22
cv0.948
sampleLengths
053
127
215
35
460
526
695
713
822
920
103
118
1233
133
146
1551
1629
1724
181
1910
2046
216
2214
237
2455
2533
2611
276
285
292
3014
3148
324
333
3482
3525
3619
3739
389
396
4037
415
4210
433
441
451
464
4724
4842
4911
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"been carved"
1"been scared"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
1"was handling"
55.75% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences164
ratio0.03
matches
0"That face that could have been carved from marble if marble came with a scar bisecting the left eyebrow and eyes that didn't match each other—one amber, one black, both watching her now with an expression she couldn't read."
1"Aurora glanced back, then faced Lucien again, aware suddenly of how she must look—oversized t-shirt advertising a band she'd seen years ago, hair pulled back in a messy knot, bare feet on cold floorboards."
2"\"You asked me to help you disappear.\" He took a step closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive and woodsy, the same as before."
3"\"I wasn't certain you would even see me. You've proven rather skilled at making yourself invisible when you wish to be.\" He paused, and something flickered across his face—hurt, maybe, or old anger."
4"For this one moment, suspended in time, there was only Lucien—his hands in her hair, his mouth on hers, his heart beating against her chest in a rhythm that matched her own."
98.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1312
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.041920731707317076
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.012957317073170731
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences164
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences164
mean12.83
std10.35
cv0.807
sampleLengths
011
121
221
34
418
55
615
71
82
92
1031
1129
1215
135
146
1519
1626
174
187
1939
208
215
2214
238
2415
255
263
278
2824
299
303
316
3217
3334
3412
353
367
377
3815
399
401
4110
423
4314
441
4528
466
4714
487
4927
38.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.3048780487804878
totalSentences164
uniqueOpeners50
74.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Even his name in her"
1"Then Evan had found her"
ratio0.022
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences89
matches
0"She wasn't expecting anyone."
1"She'd been careful about that."
2"Her body decided before her"
3"She stepped over a stack"
4"Her fingers trembled on the"
5"He looked exactly as he"
6"His name left her mouth"
7"He inclined his head, a"
8"She kept one hand on"
9"His voice carried that familiar"
10"She said it knowing it"
11"He'd found her."
12"He'd always been good at"
13"She went still."
14"He took a step closer,"
15"She opened her mouth, closed"
16"Her voice came out smaller"
17"She laughed, a sharp sound"
18"He paused, and something flickered"
19"They stood there, two people"
ratio0.562
27.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences89
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora looked up from the"
2"Ptolemy, Eva's perpetually unimpressed tabby,"
3"She wasn't expecting anyone."
4"Eva was still in Manchester"
5"She'd been careful about that."
6"The knock came again, three"
7"Her body decided before her"
8"She stepped over a stack"
9"The first lock turned with"
10"The second, a little stiffer."
11"Her fingers trembled on the"
12"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
13"He looked exactly as he"
14"That face that could have"
15"His name left her mouth"
16"He inclined his head, a"
17"She kept one hand on"
18"His voice carried that familiar"
19"Ptolemy made a sound from"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"That face that could have been carved from marble if marble came with a scar bisecting the left eyebrow and eyes that didn't match each other—one amber, one bla…"
1"They stood there, two people who had once sat across from each other in a candlelit office in Shoreditch, mapping out escape routes and safe houses over glasses…"
2"The silence that followed pressed against the walls of the tiny flat."
3"For this one moment, suspended in time, there was only Lucien—his hands in her hair, his mouth on hers, his heart beating against her chest in a rhythm that mat…"
28.85% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"His name left, careful"
1"She kept, ready to close it"
2"He turned, the movement pulling his jacket tight across his shoulders"
3"The words came out, his accent thickening around the edges"
4"she said, breathless,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"The words came out (come out)"
2"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences95
tagDensity0.105
leniency0.211
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.063
81.7041%