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Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1FTMNPNNK59KDFNHKVZQF9
Run Details
Model:
MiniMax M2.7
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
1m 29s
Cost:
$0.004820
Provider:
Minimax
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
44.16%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
83.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
67.08%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
66.67%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
98.28%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
76.15%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
2.46%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
81.2774%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The ivory handle of the
cane caught the dim hallway light before she registered the face above it. "Lucien."
Her voice came out steadier
than she felt. Three deadbolts between them, and still her heart hammered against her ribs like something trying to escape. "Aurora." He leaned against the doorframe, all composure and tailored charcoal, though something in his heterochromatic eyes betrayed him.
Amber and black, watching her
now the way a starving man watches bread. "Lovely as ever." "You've got thirty seconds before I close this door." "Fifty. I've just crossed three boroughs to reach you." "Should've taken the tube." "The last one left at eleven."
He smiled, and it didn't
reach his eyes. "I've been standing outside your building for an hour." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, the traitor.
The tabby's purr broke something
in her
resolve
. "Fine."
She stepped back from the
door. "But you're not staying long."
He entered like he owned
the space, which
was galling
given he'd never seen it before.
His gaze swept over the
chaos of Eva's flat, cataloguing every stack of books, every scroll pinned to the wall, every surface buried under research notes and half-empty teacups. "Cozy," he said. "It's a flat above a curry house. On Brick Lane. It's not meant to be cozy." "It's
very
you."
He turned the cane in
his hands, ivory handle catching the lamp's inadequate light. "Cramped. Overwhelming. Secrets in every corner." She crossed her arms. "Why are you here, Lucien?" "I require your assistance." "Try again." He sighed, the sound theatrical. "I require your assistance with something, and I knew you wouldn't answer my calls." "Because I blocked your number." "Inadvisable, but yes. Because of that."
He moved closer, and the
familiar
scent of him hit her like a wall. Sandalwood.
Something darker underneath, the Avaros
in his blood. "Someone's been following your friend. Eva." Rory's
blood went cold
. "What?" "She left the flat this evening. Went to a warehouse in Canary Wharf. Met with a man I recognise from my father's records."
His jaw tightened
. "A demon collector. Trades in half-bloods." "Eva wouldn't—" "Not willingly." Lucien's hand found her arm, and the touch burned through her like a brand.
He pulled away immediately, as
if scalded. "Someone's manipulating her. Using her. Your friend is in danger, Aurora, and the threads lead back to London." "To Evan." "You knew?" "I suspected." She turned away from him, needing distance, needing to think. "He's been sending letters. Anonymous at first, then increasingly... specific. He knows where I work. Where I live. He knows about Eva." "And you didn't think to mention this?" "To whom? The police?"
She laughed bitterly
. "I tried that once. You remember how that ended." The
silence
stretched between them. Lucien had been there that night, three years ago. Had found her bleeding on the floor of Evan's flat, a
shattered
vase at her feet. Had held her while she shook, saying nothing, just being there.
It was the most intimate
he'd ever been with her, and she'd run from it. She'd run from him. "I left because I was afraid,"
she said quietly
. "Not of you. Of how much I needed you. Of what that need could become." Lucien moved to the window, looking out at the neon glow of Brick Lane below.
His reflection in the glass
looked older. Tired. "I know." "You know?" "I always knew."
He turned back to her
. "I let you go because I thought it was what you needed. Space. Time. The freedom to become whoever you were going to be without me casting a shadow over everything." "And now?" "Now people are going to die, and I need your help."
He pulled a folded photograph
from his breast pocket and handed it to her. "This was taken two nights ago. Outside your building." Rory looked at the image. Eva, crossing the street, unaware of the figure watching her from the shadows. The figure wore a
familiar
coat, a
familiar
stance. "Derek," she breathed. "Your ex's brother. He's been building a network. Other victims' families, people with grudges, people who think they understand what your ex did to you." Lucien's voice was flat, controlled. "They don't understand. They're using his obsession as a recruitment tool, and your friend wandered right into their ranks." Rory's hands shook. "What do they want?" "Revenge. On you, specifically. On anyone they consider complicit in what happened." He paused. "On me." She looked up
sharply
. "Why you?" "Because I was there that night. Because I held you while you bled, and someone took a photograph, and that photograph has been circulating in certain circles for three years." His smile was thin. "The half-blood who couldn't save the woman he loved. The demon playing at humanity. I've become a symbol, Aurora. A cautionary tale." "Lucien..." "Save your pity. I'm not here for absolution." He moved to the cluttered table, pushing aside books to reveal a map of London covered in markings. "I'm here because I need your connections. Your thinking. The out-of-the-box solutions that got me out of Avaros when I was nineteen." "You came to me for strategy?" "I came to you because you're the only person I've ever met who sees the board differently than everyone else." He met her eyes. "And because I'm tired of pretending I don't need you." The admission
hung in the air
between them. Ptolemy jumped onto the table, sniffing at the map, tail flicking. "You need to leave," Rory said finally. His face shuttered. "Of course." "Not like that." She grabbed his wrist before he could move, her fingers finding the
pulse
point where his heartbeat betrayed everything his expression didn't. "You need to leave because I can't think clearly when you're standing three feet away from me looking like that." "Looking like what?" "Like you're not sure whether you want to kiss me or kill me." "Perhaps both." His voice had dropped, gone rough at the edges. "Perhaps I've wanted both since the moment I first saw you arguing with a parking meter in Cardiff." "That's oddly specific." "I have an excellent memory. A curse,
really
." She should let go of his wrist. She didn't. "This is a terrible idea." "Almost certainly." "We can't just—" "Stop." He stepped closer, and she let him, her back finding the edge of the bookshelf. His free hand came up to cup her face, thumb
tracing
the line of her cheekbone with devastating gentleness. "Tell me to leave. Tell me this is over. Tell me you want me gone and I'll go, Aurora. I'll disappear and you'll never see me again. But if you tell me to stay..." "If I tell you to stay?" His forehead dropped to hers, and she felt him shaking, felt the demon in him straining against the leash he kept so
carefully
wound. "Then I will burn this city to the ground before I let anyone hurt you again." The front door slammed open. Rory spun, Lucien moved with her, his cane already opening to reveal the blade hidden inside. Derek stood in the doorway, two men behind him, their faces hidden in shadow. "Got her," Derek said into a phone. "The half-blood too. Boss is going to be pleased." Lucien's blade hummed through the air.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
44.16%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
22
adverbTagCount
6
adverbTags
0
"She stepped back [back]"
1
"She turned away [away]"
2
"She laughed bitterly [bitterly]"
3
"she said quietly [quietly]"
4
"He turned back [back]"
5
"Rory said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences
77
tagDensity
0.286
leniency
0.571
rawRatio
0.273
effectiveRatio
0.156
83.54%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1215
totalAiIsmAdverbs
4
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
1
adverb
"sharply"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
3
adverb
"carefully"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"sharply"
2
"really"
3
"carefully"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
67.08%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1215
totalAiIsms
8
found
0
word
"resolve"
count
1
1
word
"familiar"
count
3
2
word
"silence"
count
1
3
word
"shattered"
count
1
4
word
"pulse"
count
1
5
word
"tracing"
count
1
highlights
0
"resolve"
1
"familiar"
2
"silence"
3
"shattered"
4
"pulse"
5
"tracing"
66.67%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
2
found
0
label
"blood ran cold"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
highlights
0
"blood went cold"
1
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
63
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
116
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
34
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1215
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
12
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
98.28%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
22
wordCount
580
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.03
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Amber
1
Ptolemy
2
Eva
2
Sandalwood
1
Avaros
1
Lucien
6
Evan
1
Brick
1
Lane
1
Rory
5
London
1
persons
0
"Amber"
1
"Ptolemy"
2
"Eva"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Evan"
5
"Rory"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"London"
globalScore
0.983
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
38
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1215
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
67
mean
18.13
std
16.61
cv
0.916
sampleLengths
0
18
1
1
2
25
3
35
4
9
5
9
6
4
7
23
8
15
9
12
10
45
11
3
12
16
13
23
14
9
15
4
16
2
17
19
18
5
19
35
20
5
21
32
22
2
23
41
24
2
25
2
26
34
27
7
28
16
29
56
30
4
31
24
32
25
33
2
34
39
35
2
36
34
37
27
38
3
39
49
40
7
41
16
42
6
43
56
44
1
45
48
46
6
47
34
48
19
49
7
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
63
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
116
matches
0
"was galling"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
116
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
581
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
18
adverbRatio
0.03098106712564544
lyAdverbCount
6
lyAdverbRatio
0.010327022375215147
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
116
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
116
mean
10.47
std
8.04
cv
0.768
sampleLengths
0
18
1
1
2
8
3
17
4
19
5
13
6
3
7
9
8
9
9
4
10
14
11
9
12
7
13
8
14
7
15
5
16
16
17
29
18
3
19
16
20
17
21
6
22
4
23
5
24
4
25
2
26
5
27
14
28
5
29
20
30
1
31
8
32
6
33
4
34
1
35
26
36
6
37
2
38
16
39
7
40
18
41
2
42
2
43
12
44
22
45
7
46
7
47
9
48
5
49
9
76.15%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
5
diversityRatio
0.4827586206896552
totalSentences
116
uniqueOpeners
56
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
57
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
2.46%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
31
totalSentences
57
matches
0
"Her voice came out steadier"
1
"He leaned against the doorframe,"
2
"He smiled, and it didn't"
3
"She stepped back from the"
4
"He entered like he owned"
5
"His gaze swept over the"
6
"He turned the cane in"
7
"She crossed her arms."
8
"He sighed, the sound theatrical."
9
"He moved closer, and the"
10
"His jaw tightened"
11
"He pulled away immediately, as"
12
"She turned away from him,"
13
"She laughed bitterly"
14
"It was the most intimate"
15
"She'd run from him."
16
"she said quietly"
17
"His reflection in the glass"
18
"He turned back to her"
19
"He pulled a folded photograph"
ratio
0.544
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
54
totalSentences
57
matches
0
"The ivory handle of the"
1
"Her voice came out steadier"
2
"He leaned against the doorframe,"
3
"Amber and black, watching her"
4
"He smiled, and it didn't"
5
"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
6
"The tabby's purr broke something"
7
"She stepped back from the"
8
"He entered like he owned"
9
"His gaze swept over the"
10
"He turned the cane in"
11
"She crossed her arms."
12
"He sighed, the sound theatrical."
13
"He moved closer, and the"
14
"Something darker underneath, the Avaros"
15
"Rory's blood went cold."
16
"His jaw tightened"
17
"Lucien's hand found her arm,"
18
"He pulled away immediately, as"
19
"She turned away from him,"
ratio
0.947
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
57
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
15
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
22
uselessAdditionCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien's hand found, and the touch burned through her like a brand"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"She laughed bitterly (laugh)"
1
"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences
77
tagDensity
0.078
leniency
0.156
rawRatio
0.333
effectiveRatio
0.052
81.2774%