| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She turned back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.59 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 94.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1866 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 46.41% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1866 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "electric" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "resolve" | | 8 | "cascading" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "depths" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "chill" | | 14 | "beacon" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 72.14% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 97.55% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 53 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Around the pool, the grass grew in spirals, each blade a different shade of green, and trees with bark like polished obsidian curved inward, their branches编织ing a canopy that sang …" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1845 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1478 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.49 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 22 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | English | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | Evan | 1 | | London | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Varga" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Eva" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.756 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed flat now, painted, like a backdrop someone had propped against the world" | | 1 | "blooms that seemed to breathe, white petals so pure they hurt to look at directly" | | 2 | "wildflowers that seemed to turn toward her as she approached" | | 3 | "harmonies that seemed to have words if she could just catch them" | | 4 | "quite match her ageless face" | | 5 | "felt like a warning—and then it settled" | | 6 | "as if retreating from a coming frost" |
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| 37.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.626 | | wordCount | 1845 | | matches | | 0 | "not leaves rustling but actual music, harmonies" | | 1 | "not turned from the pool, but her voice carried a warning" | | 2 | "not the three-mooned sky but a glimpse of somewhere else" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 38.44 | | std | 25.43 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 36 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 93 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 77 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 76 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 59 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 63 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 35 | | 28 | 93 | | 29 | 81 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 82 | | 33 | 57 | | 34 | 48 | | 35 | 36 | | 36 | 45 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 66 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 69 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 33 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 246 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 21 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.162 | | matches | | 0 | "The next, she stepped forward and the air changed—thickened, sweetened, pressed against her skin like velvet." | | 1 | "The parkland she had walked through moments ago existed still—a distant green glimpsed through the standing stones—but it seemed flat now, painted, like a backdrop someone had propped against the world." | | 2 | "The air smelled of night-blooming jasmine and something else beneath it—something electric, sharp, like the moment before lightning strikes." | | 3 | "Here, they were almost a person—almost human, except for the way light bent around their edges." | | 4 | "The path wound through silver-leafed trees, their branches heavy with fruit Rory did not recognize—round and luminous, glowing faintly from within like paper lanterns." | | 5 | "A sound reached them—water, somewhere ahead, but wrong." | | 6 | "The clearing stretched for miles, or perhaps it was only the size of a tennis court—the perspective here refused to settle, kept sliding between her eyes like a magic eye puzzle refusing to resolve." | | 7 | "Around the pool, the grass grew in spirals, each blade a different shade of green, and trees with bark like polished obsidian curved inward, their branches编织ing a canopy that sang when the wind touched it—not leaves rustling but actual music, harmonies that seemed to have words if she could just catch them." | | 8 | "Her dress was simple white linen, but it shifted colors as she moved—pale lavender, soft gold, the faintest blush of rose." | | 9 | "Rory thought of the keyring on her belt—the spare to her flat, the key to the restaurant's back door, a tiny brass key her mother had given her years ago that she couldn't remember what it opened." | | 10 | "\"Because the Veil thins.\" Isolde smiled, and it was the most unsettling expression Rory had ever seen—not because it was cruel or strange, but because it was so perfectly, painfully human." | | 11 | "The water rippled without her touching it, images forming in its depths—a flash of shadow that might have been wings, a glimpse of fire beyond a horizon that wasn't there, and then a face." | | 12 | "The warmth became pain for just a heartbeat—a searing pulse that felt like a warning—and then it settled back to that steady, insistent heat." | | 13 | "\"This one knows. This one has always been attuned to the edges, even before she knew the edges existed.\" She stepped closer, and her presence was overwhelming—scent of wild honey and winter storms, the taste of electricity on Rory's tongue." | | 14 | "She thought of Evan—the bruise on her ribs that had taken months to fade, the way he had cornered her in the kitchen that last time with murder in his eyes." | | 15 | "\"What comes is what always comes when the Veil grows thin. What seeks ingress. What hungers.\" She turned back toward the pool, and the image had changed—the man's face was gone, replaced by something vaster, darker, a presence that filled the water like ink poured into glass." | | 16 | "Water rose in a column, then parted, revealing not the three-mooned sky but a glimpse of somewhere else—amber sky, rolling hills green with impossible abundance, the distant spires of buildings that gleamed like gold and bone." | | 17 | "A face—young, beautiful, starving." | | 18 | "The Heartstone's glow faded to its previous warmth, but Rory could still feel it—that persistent pulse, that insistent call." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1506 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.03851261620185923 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006640106241699867 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 15.77 | | std | 10.61 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 34 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 52 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 45.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3504273504273504 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "She faced forward again." | | 1 | "They moved beside her now," | | 2 | "They walked in silence for" | | 3 | "They drifted ahead, their silhouette" | | 4 | "It came in intervals too" | | 5 | "They rounded a massive trunk," | | 6 | "She wore no shoes, and" | | 7 | "Her dress was simple white" | | 8 | "Her eyes found Rory's, and" | | 9 | "Her voice was wind chimes" | | 10 | "Her hand went to the" | | 11 | "She extended one hand, pale" | | 12 | "She stepped closer, and her" | | 13 | "She paused, her pale lavender" | | 14 | "She thought of Evan—the bruise" | | 15 | "She had run from that" | | 16 | "She had built a new" | | 17 | "She had found this world" | | 18 | "She turned back toward the" | | 19 | "She had not turned from" |
| | ratio | 0.281 | |
| 27.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 77 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "The threshold between worlds had" | | 1 | "The next, she stepped forward" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant at Rory's" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 4 | "Rory looked back." | | 5 | "The parkland she had walked" | | 6 | "She faced forward again." | | 7 | "The path wound between the" | | 8 | "Bark glistened with something that" | | 9 | "The air smelled of night-blooming" | | 10 | "They moved beside her now," | | 11 | "Here, they were almost a" | | 12 | "They walked in silence for" | | 13 | "The path wound through silver-leafed" | | 14 | "Flowers carpeted the ground in" | | 15 | "None of them were quite" | | 16 | "The geometry felt off, petals" | | 17 | "Rory paused beside a patch" | | 18 | "They drifted ahead, their silhouette" | | 19 | "A sound reached them—water, somewhere" |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 56.18% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | 0 | "As if summoned, a figure" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 17 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx flickered from shadow to shadow, their violet eyes catching the strange light that now filtered through leaves that should not have been silver." | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant at Rory's chest pulsed once, twice, then settled into a steady warmth that matched her heartbeat." | | 2 | "Bark glistened with something that resembled sap but caught the light like amber honey." | | 3 | "Flowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion: deep purples and jeweled blues, blood-red blooms that seemed to breathe, white petals so pure they hurt to …" | | 4 | "The geometry felt off, petals too symmetrical or not symmetrical enough, stems bending at angles that tugged at something primal in her hindbrain." | | 5 | "At its center, a pool of water perfectly still reflected a sky that held three moons, each a different phase." | | 6 | "Stars burned in broad daylight, pinpricks of impossible brilliance scattered across an indigo heavens that couldn't decide if it was night or day." | | 7 | "Around the pool, the grass grew in spirals, each blade a different shade of green, and trees with bark like polished obsidian curved inward, their branches编织ing…" | | 8 | "Isolde tilted her head, a birdlike gesture that didn't quite match her ageless face." | | 9 | "The water rippled without her touching it, images forming in its depths—a flash of shadow that might have been wings, a glimpse of fire beyond a horizon that wa…" | | 10 | "A man's face, gaunt and hungry, his eyes burning with a light that had nothing to do with warmth." | | 11 | "The warmth became pain for just a heartbeat—a searing pulse that felt like a warning—and then it settled back to that steady, insistent heat." | | 12 | "She thought of Evan—the bruise on her ribs that had taken months to fade, the way he had cornered her in the kitchen that last time with murder in his eyes." | | 13 | "Isolde smiled again, and this time there was something ancient in it, something that had seen civilizations rise and crumble." | | 14 | "The three moons above the pool seemed to dim, their light retreating as if something vast had passed between them and the earth." | | 15 | "The wildflowers around the pool's edge began to close, petals folding inward as if retreating from a coming frost." | | 16 | "Water rose in a column, then parted, revealing not the three-mooned sky but a glimpse of somewhere else—amber sky, rolling hills green with impossible abundance…" |
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| 59.78% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, though their tone suggested they had forgotten what caution meant centuries ago" | | 1 | "Nyx interrupted, their whisper cutting through the grove's strange music" | | 2 | "She stepped, and her presence was overwhelming—scent of wild honey and winter storms, the taste of electricity on Rory's tongue" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde interrupted (interrupt)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.41 | | leniency | 0.821 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |