| 94.74% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She walked back [back]" | | 1 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.421 | | leniency | 0.842 | | rawRatio | 0.125 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |
| 92.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1271 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 80.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1271 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "standard" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "perfect" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "etched" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.64% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 74 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1261 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 935 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 14 | | Davies | 9 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Transport | 1 | | Authority | 1 | | Thomas | 1 | | Crane | 1 | | Dagenham | 1 | | Morris | 4 | | Barking | 1 | | Camden | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Davies" | | 3 | "Authority" | | 4 | "Thomas" | | 5 | "Crane" | | 6 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Dagenham" | | 1 | "Barking" | | 2 | "Camden" |
| | globalScore | 0.751 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite but something older beneath it, a musty wrongness that clung to the back of her throat like dust from a sealed room" | | 1 | "darkness that seemed to swallow the light three feet from its source, and felt the hair rise on the back of her neck" | | 2 | "looked like a wallet and a phone, strung" | | 3 | "felt like warning" |
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| 41.40% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.586 | | wordCount | 1261 | | matches | | 0 | "not graffiti, not vandalism, but symbols" | | 1 | "not vandalism, but symbols" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 43 | | mean | 29.33 | | std | 24.03 | | cv | 0.819 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 55 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 84 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 52 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 65 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 54 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 75 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 54 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 32 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 72 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 3 |
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| 86.30% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "being moved" | | 1 | "been burned" | | 2 | "was inscribed" | | 3 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 96 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Not death—not quite—but something older beneath it, a musty wrongness that clung to the back of her throat like dust from a sealed room." | | 1 | "Someone had been here recently—she could see fresh scuff marks on the steps, the telltale drag pattern of a body being moved." | | 2 | "\"Detective.\" Davies straightened as she approached, his face doing the thing it always did when she arrived—a careful neutrality that read as guilty conscience in a man who had too much to hide." | | 3 | "Quinn stood and walked six feet to her left, where the floor tiles—still the original 1920s cream and brown—had been burned black in a perfect circle, three feet in diameter." | | 4 | "Someone had scratched marks into the concrete—not graffiti, not vandalism, but symbols that made her eyes slide sideways when she tried to focus on them." | | 5 | "His hands were soft, uncalloused—the hands of someone who worked with books and didn't do manual labour." | | 6 | "A compass, but wrong—the needle didn't point north, and the face was inscribed with patterns that hurt to look at directly." | | 7 | "Three years ago, in the basement of a warehouse in Dagenham, when the evidence had stopped making sense and the shadows had started moving and Morris had—" |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 946 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03276955602536998 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008456659619450317 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 96 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 96 | | mean | 13.14 | | std | 9.79 | | cv | 0.746 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 27 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 78.13% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 96 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 49.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Only one figure remained, hunched" |
| | ratio | 0.015 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached the bottom and" | | 1 | "She walked back to the" | | 2 | "She pulled out her phone," | | 3 | "Her hand remembered them even" | | 4 | "She turned back to the" | | 5 | "His hands were soft, uncalloused—the" | | 6 | "She looked down." | | 7 | "She'd felt this before." | | 8 | "She'd found the symbols." | | 9 | "She heard her own voice" | | 10 | "She held up the compass" | | 11 | "She climbed the stairs without" |
| | ratio | 0.179 | |
| 94.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 49 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit her first." | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stood at" | | 2 | "Sergeant Davies had called it" | | 3 | "Squatter turned violent, he'd said." | | 4 | "That was the first thing" | | 5 | "Quinn clicked her torch off" | | 6 | "The stairs were industrial concrete," | | 7 | "Someone had been here recently—she" | | 8 | "Someone had been using this" | | 9 | "She reached the bottom and" | | 10 | "Water dripped somewhere in the" | | 11 | "The body lay near the" | | 12 | "Davies straightened as she approached," | | 13 | "Quinn crouched beside the body," | | 14 | "Quinn kept her voice flat" | | 15 | "Davies shifted his weight" | | 16 | "Quinn stood and walked six" | | 17 | "The edges were crisp, deliberate," | | 18 | "She walked back to the" | | 19 | "Someone had scratched marks into" |
| | ratio | 0.731 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Not death—not quite—but something older beneath it, a musty wrongness that clung to the back of her throat like dust from a sealed room." | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn stood at the mouth of the tunnel, her torch beam cutting through darkness that seemed to swallow the light three feet from its source, an…" | | 2 | "The edges were crisp, deliberate, the kind of burning that came from sustained heat rather than a dropped cigarette or electrical fault." | | 3 | "Quinn killed it and stood, the compass in her palm, her heart hammering against her ribs in a rhythm that felt like warning." |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn took out, careful to copy the symbols exactly as they appeared" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Davies laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |