Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1G48RP0JR45WFS8WZH8APJ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.003373
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory had just settled into the sagging armchair by the window when the knock came. Three sharp raps, deliberate, unhurried. Ptolemy lifted his head from the armrest and fixed her with an expression that clearly said he wasn't impressed either. She set down her tea. "Eva, if that's you forgetting your keys again—" The door swung open before she reached it. Lucien Moreau stood in the corridor, one hand raised as if to knock again, the other resting on the head of his cane. The stairwell behind him smelled of cumin and simmering ghee, but he carried something else entirely—sandalwood and smoke, faintly sweet, unmistakably other. He looked exactly the same. Immaculate. Charcoal suit, white shirt open at the collar, platinum hair slicked back despite the drizzle she'd heard on the windows an hour ago. His mismatched eyes found hers, and for a fraction of a second, something cracked in that polished composure. "Aurora." Her name in his accent, low and rounded at the edges. She felt it in her chest and hated herself for it. "No," she said, and started to close the door. He caught it with his cane, not roughly, but firmly enough. "Please." "You don't get to say please. Not after—" "I'm not asking for me." His jaw tightened. "There's a situation. Yu-Fei's people are looking for you." The words hit like cold water. She stilled. "Looking for me? I delivered there an hour ago. Everything was fine." "It was. Things change." He glanced over his shoulder, down the narrow stairwell. "May I come in? I'd rather not discuss this in a hallway that smells like your neighbor's vindaloo." Despite everything, a sharp laugh escaped her. "That's rich, coming from you. You want to come in? After six months of nothing—not a word, not a message, not even through your usual channels?" "Six months, three weeks, and four days," he said quietly. She stared at him. "You counted." "I always did." Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between her ankles, purring like a small engine. Traitor. She stepped back, and Lucien took it for the permission it wasn't. He moved past her into the cramped flat, his gaze sweeping over the towers of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls, the kitchen table buried under research notes and empty takeaway containers. He paused at a photograph tacked above the desk—a younger Rory, laughing, her arm around Eva at some carnival or festival. "You've been busy," he observed. "I've been surviving. That's different." She shut the door, engaged the deadbolt—not all three, she wasn't that petty—and leaned against the frame. "Yu-Fei. Start there." He turned to face her, and she saw it then, the tension coiled beneath his stillness. Lucien was always controlled, always several steps ahead, but something had him rattled. His left hand gripped the cane a little too tightly. "One of her couriers went missing last night. Found this morning in the Thames, drained." "Drained?" "Magically. Completely. Whoever did it took everything—essence, energy, the lot. Yu-Fei thinks it's a message. Someone challenging her territory, her supply lines." He paused. "The courier was using your route last night. Your usual stops." Rory felt the blood drain from her face. "You think someone's framing me." "I think you're a target, yes. Whether you're being framed or simply used as a conduit for something larger remains to be seen." He moved closer, and she resisted the urge to step back. "Yu-Fei is not a patient woman, Aurora. She doesn't care about your innocence. She cares about her empire, and right now, her empire has a leak that leads directly to your doorstep." "So what, you came to warn me? Or deliver me?" She heard the bitterness in her own voice and didn't care. "Which side are you on, Luc? Because last time I checked, you were very clear about where your loyalties lay." Something flickered in his amber eye. The black one remained unreadable, as always. "That night wasn't about loyalty." His voice dropped. "You know that." "I know you chose the mission over us. Over—" She stopped herself. Over me. Over whatever we were becoming. "I chose survival. Yours, specifically." He closed the remaining distance between them, and she could smell him now, that otherworldly undertone beneath the sandalwood. "The Hollowing was coming for you. Yu-Fei's people were the only ones who could shield you. I made a deal." "A deal." The word tasted like ash. "You told me everything was fine. You told me to trust you. And then you disappeared into whatever deal you'd made without me, and I—" She couldn't finish. Six months of silence, of wondering what she'd done wrong, of replaying every moment trying to find the flaw. And now he stood here, smelling the same, looking at her like she was a problem he couldn't solve. "You would have said no." His composure cracked further, just barely. "You would have tried to fight. And you would have died, Aurora. The Hollowing doesn't negotiate. It consumes. I gave them what they wanted, and in exchange, they left you alone." "What did they want?" He went quiet. "Luc. What did they want?" "My services. Exclusive. Permanent." He said it like he was discussing the weather, but she saw the way his hand trembled, just slightly, on the cane. "I'm theirs now. Yu-Fei knows this. That's why she sent me." "Because you're her pet demon on a leash?" "Because I'm the one person she trusts to find the truth." His lips curved, humorless. "And the one person she thinks might be expendable if I fail." Ptolemy meowed and butted his head against Lucien's leg. He reached down absently, scratching behind the cat's ears, and something in Rory's chest twisted at the sight. He always did that. Always. When they'd first met, in that cramped basement office in Whitechapel, she'd had a cat back then too. A grey tabby named Minerva. He'd sat with her while she recovered from a job gone wrong, fed her tea, told her terrible jokes in three languages until she'd laughed despite herself. That felt like another life. "Why are you telling me this?" she asked. "If you're supposed to be working for Yu-Fei—" "Because I told you. I always counted." He straightened, meeting her gaze directly. "The night I left, you asked me where we stood. I didn't answer. I couldn't. I was already negotiating my own destruction, and I thought—" He stopped. "I thought it would be easier if you hated me." "Easier." "Easier than watching you wait for someone who might never come back. Easier than making you a widow before you were ever a wife." The word hung between them, heavy and unexpected. "I was wrong. I see that now." Rory's throat tightened. "You don't get to decide that for me. What was easier for you. You don't get to choose what I can handle." "I know." He stepped back, creating space again, as if he needed it as much as she did. "I'm not asking you to forgive me. I'm asking you to let me help. There's something else—a name that came up in the initial reports. Someone new, operating in Southwark. Someone who's been collecting artifacts, relics from the old wards. If it's connected to the Hollowing—" "It might not be." "It's always connected." His voice steadied, slipping back into that cool broker's tone. "I've arranged safe passage to a contact in Greenwich. Neutral ground. If we can get there before Yu-Fei's people—" "We?" He looked at her, really looked, and for once she saw past the mask entirely. Tired. Angry at himself. Lonely in a way that mirrored her own. "I didn't come here just to warn you," he admitted. "I came to ask if you'd work with me. One last job. Clear your name, find out who's really behind this, and then—" He hesitated. "Then you can decide what happens next." "And if I say no?" "Then I'll go alone. Yu-Fei will get her answers. And you can disappear again, start over somewhere new." He paused. "But you won't be safe. Not from her, not from whoever's hunting the old wards. Not from the Hollowing, if it's truly back." She thought about running. She'd done it before—Cardiff to London, one broken situation into another. Running was easy. Staying was the hard part. "What's in Greenwich?" she asked finally. "A woman who knew my father. She deals in information the same way I do, but she's older. Deeper. If anyone knows what's been stirring in the old places, it's her." "Your father." She'd heard stories. Demon lord of Avaros, chaos made flesh, dead before Lucien was old enough to remember him. "You've never talked about him." "I never had anyone to talk to." He said it simply, without self-pity, and somehow that was worse. Ptolemy purred louder, circling Lucien's ankles like a furry chaperone. Rory looked at the cat, then at the man, then at the door with its three deadbolts. One locked against the world. Two more locked against everything she'd been running from. She crossed her arms. "If I do this—if I work with you—things change. You don't get to disappear again. You don't get to make decisions for me. And you explain everything. No more secrets, no more deals made in the dark." "Aurora—" "Non-negotiable." He studied her for a long moment. Then, slowly, he extended his hand. Not for a handshake—for her. An offering. "Then we have an accord?" She took it. His fingers were cool against her palm, and when he held on a beat too long, she didn't pull away. "We have an accord," she said. "Now tell me what we're dealing with."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"The word tasted like [like]"
2"His composure cracked further [further]"
3"He stepped back [back]"
4"she asked finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.392
leniency0.784
rawRatio0.172
effectiveRatio0.135
75.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count2
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"completely"
2"very"
3"slightly"
4"really"
5"truly"
6"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1628
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"simmering"
count1
1
word"firmly"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"unreadable"
count1
5
word"otherworldly"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"simmering"
1"firmly"
2"tension"
3"flickered"
4"unreadable"
5"otherworldly"
6"silence"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences93
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1617
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount830
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.72
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Despite1
Lucien6
Rory6
Eva1
Ptolemy4
Whitechapel1
Minerva1
Cardiff1
London1
Demon1
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Minerva"
places
0"Whitechapel"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.618
wordCount1617
matches
0"not roughly, but firmly enough"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean23.78
std18.35
cv0.772
sampleLengths
040
113
253
347
41
522
69
712
88
917
1020
1131
1233
1310
146
153
1627
1754
185
1925
2039
2115
221
2335
2413
2566
2641
2713
2811
2919
3044
3132
3241
3342
344
353
365
3737
388
3927
4082
415
4216
4350
441
4539
4625
4764
484
4932
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was discussing"
39.34% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences138
ratio0.036
matches
0"The stairwell behind him smelled of cumin and simmering ghee, but he carried something else entirely—sandalwood and smoke, faintly sweet, unmistakably other."
1"He paused at a photograph tacked above the desk—a younger Rory, laughing, her arm around Eva at some carnival or festival."
2"\"I've been surviving. That's different.\" She shut the door, engaged the deadbolt—not all three, she wasn't that petty—and leaned against the frame."
3"She'd done it before—Cardiff to London, one broken situation into another."
4"Not for a handshake—for her."
76.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount837
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount53
adverbRatio0.06332138590203107
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.023894862604540025
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean11.72
std9.13
cv0.779
sampleLengths
015
15
220
35
48
58
623
722
85
91
1023
1118
121
1311
1411
159
1611
171
188
198
209
216
222
2312
2413
2518
267
2726
2810
294
302
313
3214
331
3412
3533
3621
375
3822
393
4016
4113
4210
4315
441
4524
4611
478
485
4934
64.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.427536231884058
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners59
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then, slowly, he extended his"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences78
matches
0"She set down her tea."
1"He looked exactly the same."
2"His mismatched eyes found hers,"
3"Her name in his accent,"
4"She felt it in her"
5"she said, and started to"
6"He caught it with his"
7"His jaw tightened"
8"He glanced over his shoulder,"
9"he said quietly"
10"She stared at him."
11"She stepped back, and Lucien"
12"He moved past her into"
13"He paused at a photograph"
14"She shut the door, engaged"
15"He turned to face her,"
16"His left hand gripped the"
17"He moved closer, and she"
18"She heard the bitterness in"
19"His voice dropped"
ratio0.551
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"Rory had just settled into"
1"Ptolemy lifted his head from"
2"She set down her tea."
3"The door swung open before"
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"The stairwell behind him smelled"
6"He looked exactly the same."
7"Charcoal suit, white shirt open"
8"His mismatched eyes found hers,"
9"Her name in his accent,"
10"She felt it in her"
11"she said, and started to"
12"He caught it with his"
13"His jaw tightened"
14"The words hit like cold"
15"He glanced over his shoulder,"
16"he said quietly"
17"She stared at him."
18"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
19"She stepped back, and Lucien"
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"His lips curved, humorless"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.122
leniency0.243
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.054
82.5026%