| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 37 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "she said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 99 | | tagDensity | 0.374 | | leniency | 0.747 | | rawRatio | 0.081 | | effectiveRatio | 0.061 | |
| 87.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2030 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "gently" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 70.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2030 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "predator" | | 2 | "familiar" | | 3 | "stomach" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "unsettled" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "trembled" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "hung in the air" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 50 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2021 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 31 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1229 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 9 | | Carter | 1 | | Tuesday | 1 | | Moreau | 2 | | Eva | 3 | | London | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Old | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Clerkenwell | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Started | 1 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | Relief | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Eight | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Moreau" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Lucien" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Ptolemy" | | 7 | "Relief" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Clerkenwell" | | 2 | "Whitechapel" | | 3 | "Brick" | | 4 | "Lane" |
| | globalScore | 0.971 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 84.21% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite a smile" | | 1 | "seemed almost deliberate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2021 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "wearing that damn" | | 1 | "trusted that whatever" | | 2 | "chose that moment" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 84 | | mean | 24.06 | | std | 17.04 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 51 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 48 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 58 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 60 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 66 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 39 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 34 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 47 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 61 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 49 | | 46 | 52 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 32 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 241 | | matches | | 0 | "was offering" | | 1 | "wasn't saying" | | 2 | "was happening" |
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| 40.21% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's gaze swept the room—the chaos of books piled on every surface, the maps pinned to walls, the research notes covered in her cramped handwriting." | | 1 | "The half-demon heritage showed more clearly in certain lights—the slight asymmetry of his features, the way his pupils sometimes caught light wrong." | | 2 | "His eyes found it, and something flickered across his face—recognition, maybe." | | 3 | "He stopped just outside arm's reach, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive, woodsy, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench." | | 4 | "Eight months of silence, and now this—three words that undid everything she'd told herself about moving on." | | 5 | "Starting over, or maybe just continuing—the story unfinished, waiting for them to decide what came next." |
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| 96.10% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1237 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.0444624090541633 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014551333872271624 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 12.1 | | std | 9.28 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 47 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 60.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.40718562874251496 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 68 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a man standing in" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 56.56% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "His lips curved into something" | | 1 | "Her name in his voice" | | 2 | "She gripped the doorframe, bare" | | 3 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 4 | "Her neighbors were a retired" | | 5 | "She should slam the door." | | 6 | "She should tell him to" | | 7 | "She should do anything except" | | 8 | "She'd stopped locking things after" | | 9 | "He turned to face her," | | 10 | "He was quiet for a" | | 11 | "His eyes found it, and" | | 12 | "he said finally" | | 13 | "He stopped just outside arm's" | | 14 | "She laughed, and it came" | | 15 | "She stopped, pressed her palm" | | 16 | "She met his mismatched eyes," | | 17 | "His voice had dropped low" | | 18 | "His thumb traced the edge," | | 19 | "he said quietly" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 62.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt scraped open" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau tilted his head," | | 2 | "His lips curved into something" | | 3 | "Her name in his voice" | | 4 | "She gripped the doorframe, bare" | | 5 | "He leaned against the doorframe," | | 6 | "Her neighbors were a retired" | | 7 | "Neither knew about the supernatural" | | 8 | "She should slam the door." | | 9 | "She should tell him to" | | 10 | "She should do anything except" | | 11 | "The tabby cat lifted his" | | 12 | "Lucien's gaze swept the room—the" | | 13 | "Aurora closed the door but" | | 14 | "She'd stopped locking things after" | | 15 | "He turned to face her," | | 16 | "The half-demon heritage showed more" | | 17 | "The question landed somewhere soft," | | 18 | "He was quiet for a" | | 19 | "His eyes found it, and" |
| | ratio | 0.796 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she didn't know what" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 91.84% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The tabby cat lifted his head from his spot on a stack of encyclopedias, studied Lucien with the particular disdain reserved for people who didn't live there, a…" | | 1 | "He stopped just outside arm's reach, close enough that she could smell his cologne—something expensive, woodsy, familiar in a way that made her stomach clench." | | 2 | "Ptolemy watched her go with feline knowing, as if he alone understood what was happening in this cramped flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, where everythin…" |
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| 97.97% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 37 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien's voice had, careful" | | 1 | "He spread, a gesture of surrender" |
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| 89.39% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She laughed (laugh)" | | 1 | "Lucien interrupted (interrupt)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Aurora corrected (correct)" | | 4 | "She sighed (sigh)" | | 5 | "she corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 99 | | tagDensity | 0.141 | | leniency | 0.283 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.121 | |