Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1G7VVS604FEFZCQH3KW44C

Run Details

Duration:
52.3s
Cost:
$0.007325
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign flickered twice as Aurora pushed through the Raven's Nest's heavy oak door. Rain had started again, a cold April drizzle that soaked through her delivery jacket despite the hood she'd pulled up. She wiped her boots on the mat inside, leaving dark streaks on the worn bristle, and scanned the Thursday evening crowd. Three suits nursing whiskeys at the bar. A couple in the corner booth trading documents across the table, their voices low. Two women near the window laughing at something on a phone screen. And there, halfway down the bar with a half-empty pint in front of him, sat a face she hadn't expected to see outside of nightmares. Gareth Hughes. He looked different. The boy she'd known at Cardiff had been lean, quick to smile, always carrying a battered guitar case to wherever the music took him. The man at the bar had filled out, shoulders stretching the fabric of a grey wool coat that probably cost more than Rory made in a month. His dark hair had thinned at the temples, and there was a heaviness to his jaw that hadn't been there at nineteen. But she recognized him instantly. She would have recognized him anywhere. Rory's hand went to her left wrist without her permission, fingers pressing against the small crescent scar hidden beneath her sleeve. She should leave. She should turn around, go back out into the rain, text Silas that she wasn't coming up tonight, sleep in the storage room of the restaurant if she had to. She should do anything except walk toward the man who had stood beside Evan the night everything fell apart. But her feet carried her forward anyway. Gareth looked up as she approached, and she watched recognition move across his face like a shadow. His hand tightened around his glass. The easy posture he wore for the empty stool beside him disappeared. "Rory." Her name came out flat. Guarded. "Gareth." She stopped three feet away, maintaining the distance. Old habit. "Didn't know you were in London." "Work." He gestured vaguely toward the suits at the bar. "Consulting. Half the week here, half in Manchester." "Consulting." She let the word sit between them. He nodded, then seemed to realize he should offer something more. "Just passing through, really. Thought I'd find a drink, maybe some decent music. This place came recommended." "It's a front for a spy network." The joke left her mouth before she could stop it. Gareth's eyebrows rose, and for a moment something like the old Gareth surfaced—a flicker of the boy who'd smuggled her into illegal music venues, who'd hidden her from Evan at parties by shoving her behind开了 jacket and lying to his face. "That's a hell of a thing to say to someone you haven't seen in six years." "I know what I said." Silence stretched between them. The couple in the corner booth had stopped talking, their attention drifting toward the tension at the bar. Rory became suddenly aware of how she must look—rain-soaked, delivery jacket wrinkled, hair escaping its tie in damp strands. Nothing like the girl Gareth had known before. She'd been softer then. Younger. Willing to believe that the people around her would protect her. "You look different," Gareth said finally. "So do you." He touched his chest, a self-conscious gesture that would have been endearing if she didn't know what it was meant to distract from. "Getting by. You look..." He paused, searching for something. "Harder. Tired." "Life does that." "Does it?" His eyes met hers, and there it was—the question he'd really come here to ask. "Is that what happened? Life?" Rory pulled out the stool beside him and sat down without invitation. If she was going to do this, she was going to do it sitting down. She signaled to Silas at the far end of the bar, and the old man raised a hand in acknowledgment, already reaching for a glass. "Whiskey," she said when he approached. "Neat. Whatever's open." Silas poured without comment, his hazel eyes moving between them with the practiced assessment of a man who noticed everything. He set the glass in front of her and retreated. Rory took a sip. The whiskey burned going down, a welcome distraction. "Evan's dead." Gareth flinched. "I heard." "When did you hear?" "Years ago. Papers, mostly. The trial." He turned his pint glass slowly between his hands. "I didn't come back for that." "No. You didn't come back for any of it." She kept her voice level, conversational, as if they were discussing the weather instead of the wreckage of her early twenties. "I needed people to show up. To say what they'd seen. To tell the truth about what kind of man he was and what he did when no one was watching. And you were all so busy with your music and your degrees and your bloody consulting jobs that none of you could be bothered." "That's not fair." "Tell me what is." Gareth set down his glass. His jaw worked, and she watched him struggle with something—guilt, maybe, or the comfortable rationalization he'd built over the years to justify his absence. "I was scared," he said finally. "Evan had connections. His family had connections. I thought if I testified, if I said what I knew—" "You knew he beat me. You knew he broke my wrist." "I knew he'd hurt you. I didn't know how bad it was until later. Until after." "After I left. After everyone left." Rory's fingers found the scar again, pressing hard enough to hurt. The crescent mark had come from Evan's class ring the night he'd thrown her down the stairs. She'd been nineteen. She'd told everyone it was a fall. The silence between them grew teeth. "I should have been there," Gareth said. "I know that. I've known it for years. Every time I thought about coming to find you, I—" He stopped. Started again. "I convinced myself you'd moved on. That you didn't need me dragging up the past." "I needed you to tell the truth." "I know." "Do you?" She turned to face him fully, and something in her expression must have shifted because he leaned back slightly. "Do you have any idea what it's like to stand in a courtroom and have the man who hurt you sit three feet away, watching you testify? To have his lawyers pick apart every decision you made, every person you chose to trust, as if somehow you were the one on trial? And then to look out at the gallery and see everyone who knew, everyone who saw something or heard something or looked the other way because it was easier, and realize that not a single one of them thought you were worth the risk?" Gareth's face had gone pale. "Rory—" "Evan got eighteen months. Eighteen months for what he did to me. Do you know why? Because the physical evidence was contested. Because there were witnesses willing to say I'd been drinking, that I'd been 'emotional,' that maybe I'd hurt myself to frame him. Because people like you weren't in that courtroom to say otherwise." "I couldn't—" His voice cracked. "I didn't know what to do." "You could have done something. You could have done anything." She finished her whiskey in one long swallow. "Instead you disappeared into your career and your comfortable life and you told yourself I was fine, that I'd gotten over it, that you were probably just exaggerating things in your memory anyway." "That's not—" "That's exactly what you did. We all do it. We all find ways to make the past bearable. You just chose to do it by pretending it never happened." Gareth stared at his hands. When he looked up again, his eyes were wet. "I'm sorry." The words came out rough, broken. "I know that's not enough. I know I don't get to say that and have it fix anything. But I am. I'm sorry I wasn't there. I'm sorry I didn't believe you sooner. I'm sorry I was a coward." Rory watched him for a long moment. The old Gareth would have made excuses. Would have deflected or blamed someone else or changed the subject. This Gareth sat with his failure and didn't try to run from it. It didn't fix anything. Six years couldn't be undone by an apology in a bar. But it was something. "I'm not the same person you knew," she said quietly. "I'm not sure I'd want to be." "I can see that." "It's not all bad. It's not all—" She gestured vaguely at herself, at the tired lines around her eyes, at the way she held herself like someone expecting a blow. "I've built something. A life. It's small, but it's mine, and nobody gets to take it from me anymore." "That's good." He meant it. She could tell that he meant it. "You deserve that." "I do." Another silence. Less sharp this time. The couple in the corner had gone back to their documents. The women by the window had moved on to another video. The rain outside had intensified, drumming against the windows in heavy sheets. Silas appeared with the whiskey bottle, topping off her glass without being asked. He caught her eye and gave an almost imperceptible nod—the kind of approval he rarely offered. She'd handled that well. She hadn't let it break her. Gareth reached into his coat and pulled out a business card. He set it on the bar between them. "That's my direct line. In case you ever need anything. A reference, a contact, someone to—" He stopped, shook his head. "I know I don't get to offer anything. But I wanted you to have it anyway." Rory looked at the card. Gold lettering on cream paper. Gareth Hughes, Senior Consultant, nothing else. She picked it up. "I'll think about it." It was the most she could offer. It was more than he'd earned. Gareth stood, pulling his coat tighter. He hesitated, as if he wanted to say more, then seemed to think better of it. "Take care of yourself, Rory." "You too." He left without looking back. The door swung shut behind him, letting in a brief gust of rain-scented air before the heavy oak fell closed. Rory sat at the bar for a long time after that. She turned the business card over in her fingers, feeling the weight of it, the strangeness of an offering that came six years too late. Silas didn't ask questions. He never did. He just poured her another whiskey when her glass emptied and retreated to the other end of the bar to give her space. She thought about the girl she'd been at nineteen. The one who believed people would show up for her. The one who trusted too easily and paid for it. She thought about the woman she'd become—the one who checked locks twice and slept with her back to the wall and trusted only herself. Neither of them was entirely gone. Both of them were still here, in this bar, in this moment. Rory tucked the business card into her jacket pocket and finished her drink. It wasn't forgiveness. It wasn't absolution. It was just two old friends, finally saying the things that should have been said years ago. And that would have to be enough.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
41.27% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Gareth said finally [finally]"
2"he said finally [finally]"
3"she said quietly [quietly]"
4"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.349
leniency0.698
rawRatio0.227
effectiveRatio0.159
86.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1907
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1907
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"comfortable"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"scanned"
2"flicker"
3"silence"
4"tension"
5"comfortable"
6"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences120
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
99.16% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen96
ratio0.006
matches
0"Gareth's eyebrows rose, and for a moment something like the old Gareth surfaced—a flicker of the boy who'd smuggled her into illegal music venues, who'd hidden her from Evan at par…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1900
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1248
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Gareth"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Gareth"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Raven1
Nest1
April1
Thursday1
Hughes2
Cardiff1
Rory10
Silas5
Evan3
Guarded1
Old1
Gareth16
Started1
Senior1
Consultant1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nest"
2"Hughes"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Evan"
6"Gareth"
places
0"Raven"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.859
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like the old Gareth surfaced—a fli"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1900
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences161
matches
0"believe that the"
1"tell that he"
2"handled that well"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean24.05
std22.22
cv0.924
sampleLengths
057
158
22
387
421
552
67
735
87
917
1018
118
1228
137
1451
1516
165
1749
1816
196
203
2134
223
2322
2452
259
2630
2712
282
294
304
3121
3285
333
344
3529
3624
3711
3816
3944
406
4144
427
432
44117
456
4655
4711
4851
492
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences120
matches
0"was meant"
1"been nineteen"
2"being asked"
3"been said"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs232
matches
0"wasn't coming"
1"were discussing"
36.38% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences161
ratio0.037
matches
0"Gareth's eyebrows rose, and for a moment something like the old Gareth surfaced—a flicker of the boy who'd smuggled her into illegal music venues, who'd hidden her from Evan at parties by shoving her behind开了 jacket and lying to his face."
1"Rory became suddenly aware of how she must look—rain-soaked, delivery jacket wrinkled, hair escaping its tie in damp strands."
2"\"Does it?\" His eyes met hers, and there it was—the question he'd really come here to ask."
3"His jaw worked, and she watched him struggle with something—guilt, maybe, or the comfortable rationalization he'd built over the years to justify his absence."
4"He caught her eye and gave an almost imperceptible nod—the kind of approval he rarely offered."
5"She thought about the woman she'd become—the one who checked locks twice and slept with her back to the wall and trusted only herself."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1258
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.03815580286168521
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.014308426073131956
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean11.8
std11.56
cv0.98
sampleLengths
016
120
221
37
414
512
625
72
83
924
1027
1122
125
136
1421
153
1630
1719
187
1917
206
2112
226
231
249
252
266
2710
288
298
3011
3117
327
3310
3441
3516
365
374
3818
3919
408
414
421
4311
446
453
4623
479
482
493
42.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats22
diversityRatio0.33540372670807456
totalSentences161
uniqueOpeners54
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences111
matches
0"She wiped her boots on"
1"He looked different."
2"His dark hair had thinned"
3"She would have recognized him"
4"She should leave."
5"She should turn around, go"
6"She should do anything except"
7"His hand tightened around his"
8"Her name came out flat"
9"She stopped three feet away,"
10"He gestured vaguely toward the"
11"She let the word sit"
12"He nodded, then seemed to"
13"She'd been softer then."
14"He touched his chest, a"
15"He paused, searching for something"
16"His eyes met hers, and"
17"She signaled to Silas at"
18"she said when he approached"
19"He set the glass in"
ratio0.468
14.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences111
matches
0"The green neon sign flickered"
1"Rain had started again, a"
2"She wiped her boots on"
3"A couple in the corner"
4"He looked different."
5"The boy she'd known at"
6"The man at the bar"
7"His dark hair had thinned"
8"She would have recognized him"
9"Rory's hand went to her"
10"She should leave."
11"She should turn around, go"
12"She should do anything except"
13"Gareth looked up as she"
14"His hand tightened around his"
15"The easy posture he wore"
16"Her name came out flat"
17"She stopped three feet away,"
18"He gestured vaguely toward the"
19"She let the word sit"
ratio0.892
45.05% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences111
matches
0"If she was going to"
ratio0.009
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Gareth's eyebrows rose, and for a moment something like the old Gareth surfaced—a flicker of the boy who'd smuggled her into illegal music venues, who'd hidden …"
1"The couple in the corner booth had stopped talking, their attention drifting toward the tension at the bar."
2"He touched his chest, a self-conscious gesture that would have been endearing if she didn't know what it was meant to distract from."
3"Silas poured without comment, his hazel eyes moving between them with the practiced assessment of a man who noticed everything."
4"She turned the business card over in her fingers, feeling the weight of it, the strangeness of an offering that came six years too late."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"The words came out, broken"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences63
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.159
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.4484%