Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1GNRA9A6AXRHR8TQCTCPEH

Run Details

Duration:
1m 10s
Cost:
$0.003156
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had driven her inside, nothing more. Eleanor told herself that as she pushed through the heavy oak door and let her eyes adjust to the amber gloom of the bar. She hadn't come looking for ghosts. But ghosts had a way of finding her lately. The Raven's Nest suited her mood. Dim lighting, the smell of old wood and spilled beer, a jazz record crackling in the corner. She claimed a booth near the back, ordered whiskey neat, and let her gaze drift across the walls covered in faded photographs and yellowed maps. The kind of place that collected stories like dust. She was halfway through her drink when she heard her name. "Eleanor Marsh?" The voice came from her left. Female, uncertain, carrying an accent she recognized before she turned around. Cardiff. That particular music her mother used to hum while cooking. The woman standing beside her table looked nothing like the girl Eleanor remembered. Gone was the wild tangle of auburn hair, replaced by a sleek black bob that caught the light. She wore a charcoal coat that probably cost more than Eleanor's monthly wage. Her face had sharpened into something elegant, the soft cheeks she used to have now defined by something harder beneath the skin. But the eyes—those stayed the same. That particular shade of grey-green, like seafoam. "God," Eleanor breathed. "Margaret?" "Maggie." The correction came automatic, accompanied by a thin smile. "Nobody calls me Margaret anymore." "Of course." Eleanor gestured to the empty seat across from her. "Sit down. Please." Maggie slid into the booth with the careful precision of someone unused to cramped spaces. She declined the offer of a drink with a wave of her fingers, those fingers adorned now with a thick gold band that Eleanor noticed and then deliberately looked away from. "How long?" Maggie asked. "How long has it been?" "Thirteen years." Eleanor heard the number leave her mouth and felt its weight. "You left for Manchester after A-Levels. I went to Bristol." "I remember." Something flickered across Maggi's face, there and gone. "You wrote me a letter. When I was in hospital." Eleanor's throat tightened. "You read it?" "I did." They sat with that for a moment. The jazz record ended and began again, the same song, the needle stuck in some groove that nobody noticed. "You look good," Maggie said. The words landed awkwardly, a formality from a script she no longer remembered. Eleanor almost laughed. "You're a terrible liar. Always were." "I'm not lying." Maggie's composure cracked, just slightly, just enough. "You look... different." "Different." Eleanor turned the word over. "That's one way to put it." The waitress appeared. Maggie ordered tea, and Eleanor flagged down another whiskey. When they were alone again, she asked the question that had been sitting in her chest since the name first reached her ears. "How did you find me?" "I didn't. I found this bar." Maggie's fingers traced the rim of the wooden table. "I come to London every few months. For work. I walked past it on Tuesday and saw the sign and thought..." She trailed off. "Thought what?" "I thought about the summer we were sixteen. Do you remember?" Eleanor remembered. She remembered all of it. The summer they'd spent roaming the Cardiff docks, pretending to be explorers discovering uncharted territory. The summer Maggie's father had left and Eleanor's mother had gotten sick, the two of them huddled in Maggi's bedroom listening to her mother's weeping through the walls. The summer they'd made a pact in the churchyard behind St. Mary's, blood drawn from their fingers, promises about futures they couldn't possibly keep. "I remember," Eleanor said. "I always wondered what happened to that version of us." Maggie's voice had gone quiet, stripped of its polished cadence. "The girls we were supposed to become." "We made different choices." "We did." Maggie met her eyes, and for a moment she looked like the girl Eleanor had known, the one who'd cried in the bathroom at their prom because she thought nobody liked her. "I got married. Did you know? To David Ashworth. The solicitor's son." "I saw the announcement. In the paper." "Right." Maggie nodded slowly. "Of course you did." The tea arrived. Maggie wrapped her hands around the cup but didn't drink, her gaze fixed somewhere over Eleanor's shoulder, on the maps and photographs covering the walls. "He's dead now," she said. "David. Four years ago. Heart attack." Eleanor's second whiskey arrived. She wrapped her fingers around the glass, feeling the cold seep into her palm. "I'm sorry." "Don't be. We divorced long before that. It was..." She paused, searching for the word. "It was a practical arrangement more than anything. Two people who looked good on paper. We both knew it." The jazz record crackled again. Someone at the bar laughed, a burst of sound that seemed to belong to a different world. "What about you?" Maggie asked. "Are you... did you..." "No." Eleanor shook her head. "No husband. No children. Just me and my flat and a job that pays the bills." "That sounds—" "Lonely?" Eleanor finished. "It isn't. Not anymore. It took a long time to get there, but I made peace with it. With who I am. What I've become." Maggie set down her untouched tea. Her hands were trembling, just slightly, and Eleanor saw her notice, saw her hide them in her lap beneath the table. "When I left for Manchester," Maggie said, "I told myself it was for the best. That I needed to become someone new. Someone who didn't carry all the weight of being Margaret O'Leary from Cardiff, with her sick mother and her dead-end prospects." Her laugh held no humor. "I was so desperate to escape. I never looked back." "I looked back." The admission came easier than Eleanor expected. "For a long time, I kept looking for you. Waiting for you to come back or write or call. When you didn't, I thought you'd forgotten us. Forgotten me." "I didn't forget." Magii's voice broke on the word. "I couldn't. I just... I was ashamed. Ashamed of where I came from. Ashamed of who I was. I thought if I cut it all away, I'd finally become the person I was supposed to be." "And did you?" Maggie looked at her then, truly looked, and the mask she wore fell away completely. What Eleanor saw beneath it was exhaustion. Bone-deep, irrecoverable tiredness. "I became someone," Maggie said. "I just don't think she was worth the cost." The bar had grown busier around them. Bodies moved through the amber light, conversations rising and falling like tides. But in their booth, time had folded in on itself, two women suspended in the ruins of a friendship neither had known how to save. "I should go," Maggie said, but she didn't move. Eleanor reached across the table. Her fingers found Maggi's, cold and trembling. "You don't have to. Not yet." "I have a meeting in the morning. An early flight." "Tomorrow's a Saturday." Maggie smiled, and it was the saddest thing Eleanor had ever seen. "It's always Saturday, somewhere in the world. That's the thing about my life now. There's always another flight. Another meeting. Another reason to keep moving." "And what happens when you stop?" The question hung between them. Eleanor watched Maggie turn it over, watched her consider it with the same careful attention she probably gave to contracts and negotiations. "I don't know," Maggie admitted. "I've never let myself stop long enough to find out." Eleanor squeezed her hand. "Maybe you should. Just once." The jazz record had moved on to something slower, a melancholy trumpet winding through changes that sounded like longing. Outside, the rain had intensified, drumming against the windows in sheets. "My card," Maggie said. She reached into her coat and produced a cream-colored business card, silk-smooth to the touch. "I'm the head of acquisitions now. International division. If you ever need anything. A job. Money. Anything at all." Eleanor looked at the card but didn't take it. "I don't need your help, Maggie." "I know." Maggie set the card on the table between them. "It's not about need. It's about... I don't know what it's about. Making up for lost time. Trying to prove that something from before still matters." "Does it? Still matter?" Maggie met her eyes. "You were my best friend, Eleanor. The only person who ever really knew me. I told myself I could become someone new without you, but that was a lie. I've been playing a role for thirteen years, and I'm so tired of performing." The admission settled between them like a stone dropped into still water. Eleanor felt the ripples spread outward, touching everything. "Then stop," she said simply. "Perform for everyone else if you have to. But not with me. Not anymore." Maggie let out a breath, ragged and raw. She blinked rapidly, her composure finally, fully broken. "I don't know if I remember how to be Maggie," she whispered. "If she even exists anymore." "She exists. She's been here the whole time, underneath all the layers." Eleanor released her hand but leaned closer. "You just have to be willing to look." The trumpet wailed. The rain hammered. And in a dimly lit booth in a bar called The Raven's Nest, two women who had been sisters in everything but blood sat with the weight of thirteen years between them, and began the slow, uncertain work of closing the gap.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Maggie's composure cracked just [just]"
1"Maggie nodded slowly [slowly]"
2"she said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.795
rawRatio0.097
effectiveRatio0.077
77.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1586
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
3"truly"
4"completely"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
77.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1586
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"weight"
2"flickered"
3"traced"
4"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1585
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"When they were alone again, she asked the question that had been sitting in her chest since the name first reached her e…"
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount966
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3
worstName"Eleanor"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eleanor"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Eleanor29
Maggie24
Maggi3
Cardiff2
St1
Magii1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eleanor"
3"Maggie"
4"Magii"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"St"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like the girl Eleanor had known, t"
1"sound that seemed to belong to a different world"
2"sounded like longing"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1585
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences145
matches
0"changes that sounded"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean22.32
std17.1
cv0.766
sampleLengths
047
157
211
32
428
579
64
715
814
946
109
1123
1220
136
142
1526
1618
179
1813
1912
2035
215
2239
232
2411
257
2667
274
2827
294
3046
317
328
3328
3411
3520
3634
3722
389
3921
402
4128
4227
4358
4439
4545
463
4725
4814
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were trembling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences145
ratio0.007
matches
0"But the eyes—those stayed the same."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount971
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.037075180226570546
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.018537590113285273
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.93
std8.88
cv0.812
sampleLengths
08
124
26
39
46
517
625
79
811
92
106
1111
121
1310
1413
1518
1613
1722
186
197
203
211
2210
235
2411
253
2615
2731
284
295
3013
3110
3210
3310
343
353
362
377
3819
395
4013
413
426
4310
443
456
466
473
489
4923
45.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3310344827586207
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences85
matches
0"She hadn't come looking for"
1"She claimed a booth near"
2"She was halfway through her"
3"She wore a charcoal coat"
4"Her face had sharpened into"
5"She declined the offer of"
6"They sat with that for"
7"She trailed off"
8"She remembered all of it."
9"She wrapped her fingers around"
10"She paused, searching for the"
11"Her hands were trembling, just"
12"Her fingers found Maggi's, cold"
13"She reached into her coat"
14"she said simply"
15"She blinked rapidly, her composure"
ratio0.188
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The rain had driven her"
1"Eleanor told herself that as"
2"She hadn't come looking for"
3"The Raven's Nest suited her"
4"She claimed a booth near"
5"The kind of place that"
6"She was halfway through her"
7"The voice came from her"
8"That particular music her mother"
9"The woman standing beside her"
10"She wore a charcoal coat"
11"Her face had sharpened into"
12"That particular shade of grey-green,"
13"The correction came automatic, accompanied"
14"Eleanor gestured to the empty"
15"Maggie slid into the booth"
16"She declined the offer of"
17"Eleanor heard the number leave"
18"Something flickered across Maggi's face,"
19"Eleanor's throat tightened."
ratio0.871
58.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"When they were alone again,"
ratio0.012
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"And in a dimly lit booth in a bar called The Raven's Nest, two women who had been sisters in everything but blood sat with the weight of thirteen years between …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Eleanor breathed (breathe)"
1"Maggie admitted (admit)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.077
84.0425%