| 7.69% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 21 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Clarke's torch trembled slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "he said finally [finally]" | | 3 | "she said softly [softly]" | | 4 | "She simply turned to Clarke and said [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.404 | | leniency | 0.808 | | rawRatio | 0.238 | | effectiveRatio | 0.192 | |
| 77.29% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1761 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1761 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "trembled" | | 4 | "footsteps" | | 5 | "echoing" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "depths" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "firmly" | | 11 | "unwavering" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "familiar" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 61.69% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" |
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| 97.65% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "\"The body was arranged. Positioned. Like someone had刻意ly placed her.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1750 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.71% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1066 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 12 | | Underground | 1 | | Clarke | 12 | | Edwardian | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Notting | 1 | | Hill | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Clarke" |
| | places | | 0 | "Underground" | | 1 | "Notting" | | 2 | "Hill" | | 3 | "Whitechapel" |
| | globalScore | 0.937 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift in her peripheral vision" | | 1 | "seemed incongruous for an abandoned Tube station—a vintage velvet dress that might have belonged in a Notting Hill boutique rather than this forgotten underworld" | | 2 | "seemed deeper than mere death" | | 3 | "seemed different" | | 4 | "symbols that seemed to writhe when she wasn't looking at them directly" | | 5 | "as if committing to the words made them more real" | | 6 | "as if responding to something in the depths below" |
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| 85.71% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.143 | | wordCount | 1750 | | matches | | 0 | "not the territorial tags she'd expect from urban explorers, but symbols" | | 1 | "not just the body but its context" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 35.71 | | std | 23.84 | | cv | 0.668 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 58 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 38 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 85 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 48 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 42 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 51 | | 24 | 59 | | 25 | 61 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 54 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 62 | | 36 | 35 | | 37 | 75 | | 38 | 61 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 81 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 36 | | 43 | 46 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 33 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 20 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | 0 | "been stripped" | | 1 | "was fanned" | | 2 | "were folded" | | 3 | "was tucked" | | 4 | "been demolished" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was only beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.076 | | matches | | 0 | "Old copper and something else beneath it—something chemical, medicinal, wrong." | | 1 | "Graffiti covered the walls—not the territorial tags she'd expect from urban explorers, but symbols that seemed to shift in her peripheral vision." | | 2 | "Her worn leather watch caught on her sleeve as she pushed it back—three years of habit, checking the time even when she didn't need to." | | 3 | "A woman, early twenties by the look of her, dressed in clothing that seemed incongruous for an abandoned Tube station—a vintage velvet dress that might have belonged in a Notting Hill boutique rather than this forgotten underworld." | | 4 | "The market stalls were visible now in the gloom—wooden structures that hadn't existed when this station was operational, vendor booths arranged in careful rows." | | 5 | "Most were empty, their wares removed, but a few still displayed their inventory: glass bottles containing luminescent liquids, leather-bound books with no titles, and—her investigator's instincts pricking—a collection of small bone tokens arranged in a wooden bowl near what appeared to be a currency exchange station." | | 6 | "\"She wasn't killed here. She was brought here. Arranged. Those aren't the actions of someone trying to hide a crime; they're the actions of someone performing a ritual. A display. Someone wanted her found, Clarke. They called it in themselves.\"" | | 7 | "She extracted it carefully—a small card, heavy stock, embossed with the same symbols she'd seen on the market stalls." | | 8 | "And for just a moment, Harlow Quinn could have sworn she felt a hand brush against her shoulder—cold, gentle, familiar." |
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| 99.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1080 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.040740740740740744 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017592592592592594 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 14.71 | | std | 11.15 | | cv | 0.758 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 46 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 24 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 73.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.47058823529411764 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Too peaceful for a woman" | | 1 | "More substantial than mere absence" | | 2 | "Instead, she pulled a pen" | | 3 | "Then he reached into his" | | 4 | "Somewhere in the darkness beneath" |
| | ratio | 0.064 | |
| 81.54% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "His torch beam swept across" | | 1 | "He'd been on the force" | | 2 | "His discomfort was evident in" | | 3 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 4 | "She shook off the memory." | | 5 | "Her dark hair was fanned" | | 6 | "She noted the pallor of" | | 7 | "She studied the woman's face," | | 8 | "She stopped at the edge" | | 9 | "She didn't answer immediately." | | 10 | "It tilted at an angle" | | 11 | "she said quietly" | | 12 | "She turned to face him" | | 13 | "His voice dropped" | | 14 | "She closed her hand around" | | 15 | "Her brown eyes met Clarke's," | | 16 | "She released the compass and" | | 17 | "he said finally" | | 18 | "She holstered her weapon and" | | 19 | "She knelt beside the victim" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 30.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The smell hit her first." | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn paused at" | | 2 | "London Underground signage, painted over" | | 3 | "DS Clarke said from behind" | | 4 | "His torch beam swept across" | | 5 | "Graffiti covered the walls—not the" | | 6 | "He'd been on the force" | | 7 | "His discomfort was evident in" | | 8 | "Quinn descended the last few" | | 9 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 10 | "Morris had bought her this" | | 11 | "The leather had softened with" | | 12 | "She shook off the memory." | | 13 | "The body lay near the" | | 14 | "A woman, early twenties by" | | 15 | "Her dark hair was fanned" | | 16 | "Quinn said, crouching beside the" | | 17 | "She noted the pallor of" | | 18 | "Clarke consulted his notebook" | | 19 | "Quinn's jaw tightened." |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "London Underground signage, painted over in green and gold leaf that had begun to flake, indicated this had once been the northern terminus of a line that no lo…" | | 1 | "His torch beam swept across tiles that had been stripped of their Edwardian glory, leaving only grey concrete beneath." | | 2 | "Graffiti covered the walls—not the territorial tags she'd expect from urban explorers, but symbols that seemed to shift in her peripheral vision." | | 3 | "He'd been on the force for six years, solid but conventional, the kind of officer who followed procedure without questioning it." | | 4 | "A woman, early twenties by the look of her, dressed in clothing that seemed incongruous for an abandoned Tube station—a vintage velvet dress that might have bel…" | | 5 | "Too peaceful for a woman found dead in an underground market that shouldn't exist." | | 6 | "The market stalls were visible now in the gloom—wooden structures that hadn't existed when this station was operational, vendor booths arranged in careful rows." | | 7 | "Most were empty, their wares removed, but a few still displayed their inventory: glass bottles containing luminescent liquids, leather-bound books with no title…" | | 8 | "Quinn reached into her pocket and withdrew a small brass compass, its casing green with verdigris, its face etched with symbols that seemed to writhe when she w…" | | 9 | "Quinn watched it with the patient attention of someone who had learned to trust instruments that defied explanation." | | 10 | "The compass in her pocket felt warm against her thigh, as if responding to something in the depths below." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 21 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She simply turned to Clarke and said (turn say)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 52 | | tagDensity | 0.192 | | leniency | 0.385 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |