| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.93% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1107 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "searing" | | 7 | "echoed" | | 8 | "silk" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 122 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 41 | | totalWords | 1107 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "You brought it back." | | 1 | "Liar." | | 2 | "You took something that belonged here. Long ago. Before your kind learned to walk upright. Before the stars you worship were even born." | | 3 | "No one leaves the Heartstone." | | 4 | "We have waited such a very long time." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 8 | | wordCount | 1067 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.19 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 0.5 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Putney | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | October | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 34.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like hours" | | 1 | "quite catalogue" | | 2 | "quite match" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.903 | | wordCount | 1107 | | matches | | 0 | "Not by much, perhaps five degrees, but enough to raise the hair on my arms" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 24.07 | | std | 20.5 | | cv | 0.852 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 60 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 57 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 40 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 42 | | 45 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 197 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.98% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1069 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.0617399438727783 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01683816651075772 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 8.79 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.847 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 61.64% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 14 | | diversityRatio | 0.4365079365079365 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the pale ribbon of" | | 1 | "Instantly, the temperature dropped." | | 2 | "Then the voice came." | | 3 | "Then another thing." |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "It hadn't stopped since." | | 1 | "I'd pedalled through the quiet" | | 2 | "It shouldn't have been." | | 3 | "My phone had lost signal" | | 4 | "My torch app turned on," | | 5 | "I kept walking." | | 6 | "They stood twice my height," | | 7 | "I stopped at the boundary." | | 8 | "I couldn't see it, but" | | 9 | "I walked for what felt" | | 10 | "My legs ached." | | 11 | "My eyes burned." | | 12 | "I spun, torch raised, and" | | 13 | "I'm losing it, I thought." | | 14 | "I called out" | | 15 | "My voice echoed strangely, returning" | | 16 | "It came from everywhere." | | 17 | "I fell back against a" | | 18 | "I pulled it from beneath" | | 19 | "It had texture, that silence," |
| | ratio | 0.248 | |
| 93.66% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant had grown" | | 1 | "It hadn't stopped since." | | 2 | "I'd pedalled through the quiet" | | 3 | "The bicycle I abandoned somewhere" | | 4 | "The lock I didn't bother" | | 5 | "Something told me I wouldn't" | | 6 | "The gate stood open." | | 7 | "It shouldn't have been." | | 8 | "The park closed at dusk," | | 9 | "The pendant pulsed." | | 10 | "Warmth spreading through my sternum" | | 11 | "The path wound through ancient" | | 12 | "My phone had lost signal" | | 13 | "My torch app turned on," | | 14 | "That was the first wrong" | | 15 | "Shadows shouldn't move that way." | | 16 | "These leaned like curious things," | | 17 | "I kept walking." | | 18 | "The standing stones appeared maybe" | | 19 | "They stood twice my height," |
| | ratio | 0.733 | |
| 99.01% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | 0 | "Before your kind learned to" | | 1 | "Before the stars you worship" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Seven of them, arranged in a rough circle, ancient oaks that had somehow petrified into grey-white columns." | | 1 | "The wildflowers brushed my fingers as I passed, petals too soft, too warm, leaving trails of pollen that glowed faintly gold before fading into my skin." | | 2 | "Alone in the dark, heart hammering against my ribs like a trapped bird, convinced of sounds that didn't exist." | | 3 | "The pendant burned against my chest, searing through my shirt, and I followed its heat like a compass needle pointing toward something I couldn't name." | | 4 | "My voice echoed strangely, returning in layers, as though multiple mouths repeated my words from multiple distances." | | 5 | "The wildflowers turned to face me, all of them at once, petals opening to reveal centers that were not centers, dark pits ringed with teeth that shouldn't exist…" | | 6 | "Shapes that were almost human, that wore humanity like ill-fitting coats, their proportions subtly wrong in ways I couldn't quite catalogue." | | 7 | "It had a face, I think, or something that approximated one, features shifting like oil on water, never quite settling into anything recognizable." | | 8 | "This time the grove had closed around me, oaks pressing close, branches tangling overhead, the wildflowers reaching up to snag my ankles with stems that felt di…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |