Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1GVR53F0Y7WRJ39X6MW50H

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts. She'd actually installed three deadbolts on the door after Evan, and now Lucien Moreau stood in the gap between them like a problem she'd buried coming back to rot. "Lucien." His name tasted like old wine and regret. "That's a name I haven't heard in a while." "Eight months, four days." He hadn't moved from the threshold. "But who's counting?" Ptolemy wound between her ankles, purring like a traitor. She scooped him up as a shield, which was ridiculous because the man had once shown her the collection of curse marks hidden beneath his tailored cuffs. A cat wouldn't stop him if he wanted in. "What do you want, Luc?" He tilted his head, and that heterochromatic gaze caught the dim hallway light. Amber and black, like a warning sign. "Your delivery shift at the Golden Empress ended forty minutes ago. You didn't go home." "You've been tracking my shifts now?" "I track many things." The ivory handle of his cane caught the light. "It's how I stay alive in this city." The flat behind her felt smaller suddenly. Books everywhere, notes spread across every surface where she'd been researching demon summoning circles for a case Lucien had no idea she'd been working. Her laptop sat open on the kitchen table, its screen casting blue shadows across the chaos. "You'd better come in before the neighbours start asking questions." She stepped back, still holding Ptolemy like a furry anchor. He entered like he owned the space, which was infuriating. That was his way. The cane clicked once against the hardwood, and he paused, taking in the organized disaster of her living situation. The curtains were closed. The kettle was still warm. Evidence of a woman who'd been working late into the night on something she didn't want found. "Sit anywhere," she said, depositing Ptolemy on the back of the sofa where he immediately began grooming. "Except the blue chair. That's not—it's not clean." "The blue chair has a suspicious coffee stain." "Yes. Exactly." She busied herself in the kitchen, running water just to have something to do with her hands. "Tea? Coffee? I might have whiskey somewhere." "Whiskey. Neat." "Of course." She found the bottle behind a stack of Welsh textbooks and poured two fingers into a glass that had seen better days. His glass, actually. He'd left it here the night he'd shown up at Eva's with information about Evan's new address, information that had cost her three weeks of sleepless nights and an introduction to the seedier corners of London's supernatural underworld. She handed him the glass. Their fingers brushed, and she pulled back like she'd touched something hot. "Lucien." She put distance between them, leaning against the kitchen counter. "You tracked my shift. You came to my friend's flat. You have that look in your eye, the one that says you've found something I'm not going to like. So just—" She gestured with her coffee mug. "Do it. Tell me." He swirled the whiskey, watching the amber liquid catch the light. "Evan's out." The words hit like ice water. "No." "Released three days ago. Early good behaviour. Boring paperwork errors." A ghost of a smile. "Someone paid to make those errors happen." "Three days." Her voice came out flat. "You've known for three days and you're only telling me now?" "I was confirming the source. Verifying the threat." He set the glass down on her cluttered side table. "He's not alone anymore, Rory. Whatever protection you thought you had, whatever arrangements you made through our mutual acquaintances—" "Arrangements you facilitated." "Yes." She wanted to throw something. The coffee mug trembled in her grip, so she set it down before she shattered it. "Arrangements that cost me six months of silence. Six months of not knowing if you were alive or dead after that job in Whitechapel went wrong. Arrangements that—" "He found someone new." Lucien cut through her words like a blade. "Someone with connections to Avaros." The realm of his father. The place where demons came from. "What kind of connections?" "The kind that trades in old debts." He moved closer, and she fought the urge to retreat. "He knows you're here, Rory. He knows about Eva's flat. He knows about the Golden Empress, your shifts, your schedule. He's been patient for three days because he's planning something." "Planning what?" "I don't know yet. That's why I'm here." He stopped an arm's length away. Close enough that she could smell his cologne, something expensive and woodsy that had haunted her dreams for months. "I'm offering my services. Pro bono." "Pro bono." She laughed, but it came out brittle. "You don't do pro bono, Luc. You don't even do free coffee." "No." His voice dropped, and that was the thing about Lucien, the thing that had always undone her. He spoke four languages, but when it came to her, he used none of them. Just raw honesty wrapped in silk. "I do you. And this is me, telling you that Evan is the least of your problems right now." Ptolemy jumped down from the sofa and wound between Lucien's ankles, completely ignoring the death glare Rory gave him. Traitor. She'd fed him this morning. She'd fed him and emptied his litter box and now he was making friends with the half-demon who had broken her heart in the most professional way possible. "I need details." She moved past him to her laptop, pulling up the research she'd been doing. "Everything you know. Names, locations, anything about this Avaros connection." "You're researching summoning circles." "Observant as always." "I recognise the symbols." He moved to stand behind her, close enough that she could feel the heat of him. "You've been looking into contract demons. Specifically, the kind that answer to blood magic." "Is that what Evan found? Someone who does blood magic?" "That's what I'm afraid of." She turned, and he was closer than she'd realised. Close enough to see the faint scar along his jaw that he'd gotten the night Whitechapel fell apart. Close enough to see the way his pupils had dilated, human and inhuman at once. "Why are you afraid?" she asked. "What do you know that you're not telling me?" He cupped her face with one hand, and she didn't pull away. She should have. She should have stepped back, grabbed Ptolemy, thrown him out into the hallway where he belonged. "Because blood magic binds the caster as well as the target." His thumb traced her cheekbone. "And if Evan is stupid enough to try it, which he is, the backlash will kill him. But not before he hurts you first." "Then help me stop him before he tries." "That." His voice was rough. "That is exactly what I intend to do." Their lips were inches apart. She could feel the demon in him, the part that came from Avaros, pressing against the surface. The part that had drawn her to him in the first place, that dangerous edge that no amount of tailored suits and perfect French could hide. "You left," she whispered. "You left and you didn't say goodbye and I thought—" "I know what you thought." His hand slid from her face to the back of her neck, tangling in her hair. "I know what I made you think. And I am not a good man, Rory. You know this." "I know." "But I am here now." He pulled her closer, forehead to forehead. "And I am not leaving until this is finished. Whatever it takes. Whatever it costs." Ptolemy meowed loudly from somewhere, completely ruining the moment. She laughed despite herself, the tension cracking just enough to breathe. "He's hungry. He's always hungry around midnight." "Of course he is." Lucien released her, stepping back with visible effort. "Feed the cat. I'll make myself useful and find out exactly who Evan is meeting tomorrow night." "You have a lead?" "A bar in Whitechapel. The kind that doesn't advertise." His smile was all teeth. "I know the owner." Of course he did. Lucien knew everyone who mattered in London's supernatural underworld, and most of the ones who thought they didn't matter but definitely did. She grabbed the cat food from under the sink while he settled onto her sofa like he owned it, pulling out a sleek phone that probably cost more than her monthly rent. The nerve. The absolute nerve of this man. "Lucien." He looked up, amber eye glowing faintly in the dim light. "Eight months, four days," she said. "And you never once called." "No." He returned to his phone, but she caught the tension in his jaw. "I should have." "You think?" "I thought it would be safer. For you." He typed something, then paused. "I was wrong. I am often wrong about things that matter." Coming from Lucien Moreau, that was practically an apology. She opened the cat food with more force than necessary, and Ptolemy began eating with single-minded focus. "The spare bedroom has clean sheets," she said. "Since you're apparently staying." "I assumed." "Don't assume anything. You know what they say about assumptions." "They makeasses out of u and mptions?" His accent made the terrible pun even worse. She threw the empty can at him. He caught it without looking, which was so perfectly Lucien that she had to turn away before she started smiling. This was going to be a long night. A long week, probably. A long situation with her ex-boyfriend trying to kill her and her ex-lover trying to save her and a cat who couldn't be trusted to take any of it seriously. She pulled out her laptop and sat down beside him, close enough that their shoulders touched. "Show me what you know about blood magic. And the summoning circles. I want to see everything." He tilted the screen toward her, and for a moment, his hand settled on her knee. Just resting there. A weight she hadn't realised she'd been missing. The research could wait. But this, this impossible situation with its impossible man and its impossible complications, this was just beginning. Ptolemy purred from his spot on the floor, blissfully unaware of how much danger they were all in.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His name tasted like [like]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.682
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.047
88.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"completely"
2"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1703
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"trembled"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"trembled"
1"shattered"
2"silence"
3"silk"
4"could feel"
5"traced"
6"perfect"
7"tension"
8"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1702
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions33
wordCount1077
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Evan2
Lucien9
Moreau2
Ptolemy8
Welsh1
Eva1
London2
Close3
Rory1
Whitechapel1
Avaros1
French1
Coming1
persons
0"Evan"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Eva"
5"Rory"
6"Whitechapel"
7"French"
8"Coming"
places
0"London"
1"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like old wine and regret"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1702
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean22.1
std16.14
cv0.73
sampleLengths
031
118
213
345
45
535
66
721
847
920
1059
1125
128
1326
142
1565
1617
1752
1813
197
2022
2118
2237
233
241
2549
2617
2711
284
2947
302
3139
3221
3358
3453
3527
364
373
3834
3910
405
4142
4215
4331
4440
458
4613
4748
4814
4939
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"was just beginning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences149
ratio0
matches(empty)
91.21% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1079
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.05004633920296571
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.014828544949026877
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean11.42
std7.8
cv0.682
sampleLengths
02
129
29
39
410
53
69
727
89
95
1013
117
1215
136
1413
158
167
1724
1816
1920
2010
214
2219
234
245
2517
2617
278
288
2919
307
312
3224
333
3438
355
3612
3711
3837
394
4011
412
426
431
4415
457
467
4711
4818
4919
49.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.348993288590604
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners52
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences89
matches
0"Just raw honesty wrapped in"
1"Of course he did."
2"Just resting there."
ratio0.034
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd actually installed three deadbolts"
1"His name tasted like old"
2"He hadn't moved from the"
3"She scooped him up as"
4"He tilted his head, and"
5"Her laptop sat open on"
6"She stepped back, still holding"
7"He entered like he owned"
8"she said, depositing Ptolemy on"
9"She busied herself in the"
10"She found the bottle behind"
11"His glass, actually."
12"He'd left it here the"
13"She handed him the glass."
14"Their fingers brushed, and she"
15"She put distance between them,"
16"She gestured with her coffee"
17"He swirled the whiskey, watching"
18"Her voice came out flat"
19"He set the glass down"
ratio0.584
10.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences89
matches
0"She'd actually installed three deadbolts"
1"His name tasted like old"
2"He hadn't moved from the"
3"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
4"She scooped him up as"
5"A cat wouldn't stop him"
6"He tilted his head, and"
7"Amber and black, like a"
8"The ivory handle of his"
9"The flat behind her felt"
10"Her laptop sat open on"
11"She stepped back, still holding"
12"He entered like he owned"
13"That was his way."
14"The cane clicked once against"
15"The curtains were closed."
16"The kettle was still warm."
17"Evidence of a woman who'd"
18"she said, depositing Ptolemy on"
19"She busied herself in the"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She scooped him up as a shield, which was ridiculous because the man had once shown her the collection of curse marks hidden beneath his tailored cuffs."
1"He'd left it here the night he'd shown up at Eva's with information about Evan's new address, information that had cost her three weeks of sleepless nights and …"
2"Close enough that she could smell his cologne, something expensive and woodsy that had haunted her dreams for months."
3"She'd fed him and emptied his litter box and now he was making friends with the half-demon who had broken her heart in the most professional way possible."
4"Lucien knew everyone who mattered in London's supernatural underworld, and most of the ones who thought they didn't matter but definitely did."
5"A long situation with her ex-boyfriend trying to kill her and her ex-lover trying to save her and a cat who couldn't be trusted to take any of it seriously."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences85
tagDensity0.071
leniency0.141
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.047
84.0053%