Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1GWVTCAKAFZ86CG99KV0A7

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Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.003473
Provider:
Minimax

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first thing she noticed was the cane. Then the suit. Then the eyes—one amber, one black—watching her through the gap left by the chain on the door. Rory's hand tightened on the deadbolt. She should have checked the peephole. She knew better. But Ptolemy had been yowling at the window for the past ten minutes, and she'd assumed it was just another fox in the alley, another thing to ignore. "Lucien." "Aurora." He said her full name like it was something precious. Like it was something that had cost him to say. She should have shut the door. Should have slid the chain free, let it swing, pretended she hadn't seen him at all. London was a big city. Seven million people. Plenty of fish in the sea, plenty of half-demons with ivory-handled canes and impeccable suits and that particular way of looking at a person—like they were a puzzle he intended to solve, piece by piece, whether she cooperated or not. But her body had other ideas. Her body was already stepping back, already reaching for the chain, already doing the thing her head screamed against. He pushed inside before she could change her mind. The flat was chaos. It always was—books stacked on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls, research notes scattered across the kitchen table like fallen leaves. Eva's handwriting was everywhere, that cramped scrawl Rory had known since childhood, mapping sigils and symbols and half-translated phrases from languages that shouldn't exist. Lucien looked around with the careful assessment she remembered. Cataloguing. Filing away. That was Lucien—always watching, always learning, always three moves ahead of everyone else in the room. "Ptolemy," he said. The cat had wound between his legs before Rory could warn him. The tabby's fur stood on end, hissing, but Lucien crouched down without hesitation and offered his long fingers for inspection. "He doesn't like strangers." "He remembers me." Rory's throat tightened. "That's impossible. That was months ago." "Half-demons are not the only ones with longer memories than humans." Lucien let Ptolemy sniff his hand, the cat's aggression slowly dissolving into grudging acceptance. "He was a stray when you found him, yes? Abandoned. Frightened. Unwilling to trust." "And you think that applies to you?" His eyes met hers—amber and black, impossible and unbearably human. "I think it might apply to both of us." She turned away. Better to busy herself with something, anything, than to stand there under that gaze. She went to the kitchen, filled the kettle, put it on the stove. Ritual motions. Normalcy. "What do you want, Lucien?" "I need your help." That stopped her. She turned back around. "You," she said slowly. "You need my help. You, Lucien Moreau, who knows everyone in London's supernatural underworld. Who has contacts in every faction, every court, every shadow organization that exists. You need help from me. A delivery driver who works part-time for a Cantonese restaurant." "Your friend Eva has gone missing." The words hit her like a blow. She felt the color drain from her face. "Eva," she repeated. "Eva isn't missing. She's—she went to see her sister in Manchester. She left last week. She texted me." "When did you last speak to her? Actually speak, not just exchange messages?" Rory opened her mouth. Closed it. She tried to think back. The texts had been brief. Casual. The kind of thing you sent when you assumed you'd be seeing someone soon anyway, when a real conversation could wait until they were face to face. "I don't—I don't remember the last time I heard her voice." "Three weeks." Lucien's voice was gentle. "You spoke to her three weeks ago. She mentioned new research. Something she'd found in the British Library archives. Something that frightened her." The kettle began to whistle. Rory didn't move. "I should have noticed," she whispered. "She's my best friend. I should have noticed." "You're not to blame. Eva is skilled at hiding when she needs to. It's one of the reasons I—" He stopped. One of the reasons he what? Cared about her? Trusted her? Loved her, maybe, in whatever broken way half-demons were capable of love? Rory poured the water for tea she didn't want. Her hands were steady. That was something. "Why are you telling me this? Why now?" "Because whoever took her is someone you're connected to. Someone who knows your history." Lucien moved closer, and she could smell him—something expensive, something faintly dangerous, something that had haunted her dreams for months. "Someone who might be using her to get to you." "To me? Why would anyone—" "Because you found the Codex." The room went very quiet. Even Ptolemy seemed to sense the shift; he sat down hard on the carpet, staring up at them with luminous cat eyes. "I didn't find anything," Rory said. "I was just delivering food. I walked into the wrong building, that's all. I saw some papers. I didn't take them. I didn't read them." "Aurora." "Don't." She held up a hand. "Don't use that tone with me. I'm not one of your clients. I'm not one of your assets. I am just—" She faltered. "I am just the girl you kissed once in an alley behind the restaurant and then disappeared on for six weeks." The words hung between them. She hadn't meant to say it. Hadn't meant to bring it up, to make it a thing, to give him evidence of how much his silence had hurt. But there it was. Lucien's jaw tightened. "I didn't disappear. I protected you." "From what? From who?" She stepped closer, close enough to see the slight dilation of his pupils, the way his breathing had changed. "You never told me. You just—left. You just went back to your world of shadows and secrets, and you left me standing there like a fool, wondering what I'd done wrong." "You did nothing wrong." "Then why—" "Because I am half-demon." He said it simply, like a fact, like a confession. "Because my father is a creature from a realm where the laws of love and possession blur together until they're indistinguishable. Because when I am with you, I cannot tell if what I feel is my own or something inherited. Something dangerous." Rory's heart was pounding. She could hear it in her ears. "And you thought leaving was better than explaining?" "I thought leaving was kinder. I thought if I stayed, I would only hurt you more." "That's not your decision to make." "No." His voice cracked, just slightly. "It wasn't. I see that now." He reached out, slowly, giving her time to pull away. She didn't. His fingers brushed her cheek, tucked a strand of hair behind her ear, traced down to the curve of her jaw. "I have thought about you every day," he said quietly. "Every hour. Do you understand what that means for someone like me? I have lived for thirty-two years. I have seen empires fall and rise and fall again. I have forgotten the faces of people I loved for centuries. But I cannot forget you." "Lucien—" "I came here tonight because your friend is in danger. Because you are in danger. But I also came because—" He drew a breath. "Because I could not bear another night of wondering if you hated me." She should have been angry. She had every right to be. He had made decisions for her, kept her in the dark, left without explanation—all that infuriating, protective, half-demon nonsense that she could have lived her whole life without experiencing. But she wasn't angry. She was tired. Tired of pretending she didn't care. Tired of the dreams that featured amber and black eyes and whispered words in languages she didn't understand. Tired of the way her heart clenched every time she passed the alley behind Golden Empress. "I don't hate you," she admitted. "I hate that I don't hate you." Something shifted in his expression. Something that might have been hope. "Then help me," he said. "Help me find Eva. Help me keep you safe. And when this is over, I will answer every question you have. I will tell you everything—the Codex, my father, what I am, what you are becoming. All of it." "What I'm becoming?" "You don't know yet. But you will." He took her hand, and his skin was warm—warmer than a human's, she remembered. "Please, Aurora. Let me do this one thing right." She looked at their joined hands. At Ptolemy, who had curled up at their feet like this was the most natural thing in the world. At the books and scrolls and research notes that Eva had left behind, clues to a mystery neither of them fully understood. "Okay," she said. "But we're doing this together. No more disappearing. No more secrets. You talk to me, and I talk to you, and we figure this out like two people who actually trust each other." "Even if what I tell you is difficult?" "Especially then." He smiled. It was small, tentative, nothing like the polished charm he usually wore. It made him look younger. Human. "I have missed you," he said. "More than I knew it was possible to miss anyone." "I know." She squeezed his hand. "I missed you too. Even when I was angry. Even when I told myself I was better off without you." "Will you tell me about it? The anger?" "Maybe. When this is over." She hesitated. "But Lucien?" "Yes?" "If you ever disappear on me again without a word, I will find you. And I will make you regret it." He laughed—actually laughed, a surprised, delighted sound. "I believe you." "Good." She released his hand and moved toward the cluttered table, shuffling through Eva's notes. "Now. Tell me everything you know about the Codex. And who might want to use it to get to me." She heard him move up behind her, close enough that she could feel the warmth of him through her shirt. "It will take hours," he said. "Good thing I make my own schedule." She glanced back at him, and for a moment, the danger and the fear and the complicated history all fell away. There was just this—two people, standing in a cramped flat above a curry house, ready to face whatever came next. "I've got nowhere else to be."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she said slowly [slowly]"
1"His voice cracked just [just]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"She glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.641
rawRatio0.16
effectiveRatio0.103
85.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1739
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"normalcy"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"charm"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"normalcy"
1"silence"
2"pounding"
3"traced"
4"charm"
5"could feel"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
77.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
3"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences162
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1725
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions28
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount951
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy4
Rory9
Lucien7
One1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva3
Tired3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1725
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"notes that Eva"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean20.54
std16.89
cv0.822
sampleLengths
08
120
243
31
41
520
670
725
89
950
1028
113
1232
134
143
159
1639
177
1819
1933
205
214
227
2346
246
2515
2621
2713
286
2938
3011
3129
328
3314
3421
3523
3616
378
3844
395
405
4127
4231
431
4450
4533
464
479
4854
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was already stepping"
1"was pounding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences162
ratio0.068
matches
0"Then the eyes—one amber, one black—watching her through the gap left by the chain on the door."
1"Plenty of fish in the sea, plenty of half-demons with ivory-handled canes and impeccable suits and that particular way of looking at a person—like they were a puzzle he intended to solve, piece by piece, whether she cooperated or not."
2"It always was—books stacked on every surface, scrolls pinned to the walls, research notes scattered across the kitchen table like fallen leaves."
3"That was Lucien—always watching, always learning, always three moves ahead of everyone else in the room."
4"His eyes met hers—amber and black, impossible and unbearably human."
5"\"Because whoever took her is someone you're connected to. Someone who knows your history.\" Lucien moved closer, and she could smell him—something expensive, something faintly dangerous, something that had haunted her dreams for months."
6"Even Ptolemy seemed to sense the shift; he sat down hard on the carpet, staring up at them with luminous cat eyes."
7"He had made decisions for her, kept her in the dark, left without explanation—all that infuriating, protective, half-demon nonsense that she could have lived her whole life without experiencing."
8"\"You don't know yet. But you will.\" He took her hand, and his skin was warm—warmer than a human's, she remembered."
9"He laughed—actually laughed, a surprised, delighted sound."
10"There was just this—two people, standing in a cramped flat above a curry house, ready to face whatever came next."
96.05% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount966
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.044513457556935816
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011387163561076604
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences162
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences162
mean10.65
std9.52
cv0.894
sampleLengths
08
13
217
36
46
53
628
71
81
910
1010
116
1216
135
143
1540
166
1719
189
194
2022
2124
229
231
242
2516
263
2712
2820
294
303
313
326
3325
3414
357
3610
379
383
3914
4013
412
421
435
444
453
464
474
4842
496
54.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3950617283950617
totalSentences162
uniqueOpeners64
75.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences88
matches
0"Then the suit."
1"Then the eyes—one amber, one"
ratio0.023
47.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences88
matches
0"She should have checked the"
1"She knew better."
2"He said her full name"
3"She should have shut the"
4"Her body was already stepping"
5"He pushed inside before she"
6"It always was—books stacked on"
7"His eyes met hers—amber and"
8"She turned away."
9"She went to the kitchen,"
10"She turned back around."
11"she said slowly"
12"She felt the color drain"
13"She tried to think back."
14"Her hands were steady."
15"She held up a hand"
16"She hadn't meant to say"
17"She stepped closer, close enough"
18"He said it simply, like"
19"She could hear it in"
ratio0.432
79.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences88
matches
0"The first thing she noticed"
1"Rory's hand tightened on the"
2"She should have checked the"
3"She knew better."
4"He said her full name"
5"She should have shut the"
6"London was a big city."
7"Plenty of fish in the"
8"Her body was already stepping"
9"He pushed inside before she"
10"The flat was chaos."
11"It always was—books stacked on"
12"Eva's handwriting was everywhere, that"
13"Lucien looked around with the"
14"That was Lucien—always watching, always"
15"The cat had wound between"
16"The tabby's fur stood on"
17"Rory's throat tightened."
18"Lucien let Ptolemy sniff his"
19"His eyes met hers—amber and"
ratio0.761
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Even Ptolemy seemed to sense"
ratio0.011
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Eva's handwriting was everywhere, that cramped scrawl Rory had known since childhood, mapping sigils and symbols and half-translated phrases from languages that…"
1"Tired of the dreams that featured amber and black eyes and whispered words in languages she didn't understand."
85.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Lucien let, the cat's aggression slowly dissolving into grudging acceptance"
1"He took, and his skin was warm—warmer than a human's, she remembered"
85.90% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien let (let)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"She faltered (falter)"
4"she admitted (admit)"
dialogueSentences78
tagDensity0.179
leniency0.359
rawRatio0.357
effectiveRatio0.128
86.6211%