| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 4 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "she said unnecessarily [unnecessarily]" | | 2 | "Nyx finally admitted [finally]" | | 3 | "Isolde said gently [gently]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.517 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.267 | | effectiveRatio | 0.267 | |
| 74.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1347 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "furrowed" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "resonated" | | 4 | "tinged" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "enigmatic" | | 11 | "synchronized" | | 12 | "whisper" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "electric" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | matches | | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 66 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1337 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 976 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.13 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | October | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Rory | 11 | | Fae | 1 | | Seer | 4 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Hel" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Fae" |
| | globalScore | 0.936 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like petrified flesh" | | 1 | "not quite touching the water" | | 2 | "as if parting curtains" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.244 | | wordCount | 1337 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sharp heat she'd felt near Hel portals, but something gentler" | | 1 | "not just hers, but Nyx's as well" | | 2 | "Not what you seek from me, but what you seek from yourself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 33 | | mean | 40.52 | | std | 22.3 | | cv | 0.55 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 73 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 72 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 76 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 71 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 71 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 70 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 54 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 48 | | 30 | 55 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 4 |
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| 89.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been woven" |
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| 78.05% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 164 | | matches | | 0 | "was still, filtering" | | 1 | "were speaking" | | 2 | "was standing" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx materialized beside her, shadow pooling into solid form with that particular sound—like wind escaping a sealed room." | | 1 | "They were massive—older than anything she'd ever seen—with bark so deeply furrowed it looked like petrified flesh." | | 2 | "It pulsed warmly against her skin—not the sharp heat she'd felt near Hel portals, but something gentler." | | 3 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—the distant traffic, a jogger's footsteps, a dog's bark—cut off as cleanly as if someone had switched off a radio." | | 4 | "The air tasted different—sweeter, tinged with something floral and unfamiliar, coating her tongue like honey." | | 5 | "The surface reflected nothing—not the canopy above, not the flowers surrounding it, not her or Nyx standing at its edge." | | 6 | "A sound reached them from deeper in the grove—footsteps in grass, though nothing disturbed the wildflowers." | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory's chest, synchronized with her heartbeat, and she had the sudden certainty that she was standing at a crossroads—not just hers, but Nyx's as well." |
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| 89.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 991 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.050454086781029264 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02119071644803229 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 16.71 | | std | 9.71 | | cv | 0.581 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 28 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 25 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 49.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.35 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Just darkness, deep and absolute," | | 1 | "Then it was gone, and" | | 2 | "Even the rustle of leaves" |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 97.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "They said nothing." | | 1 | "They didn't need to." | | 2 | "she said quietly, turning to" | | 3 | "They were massive—older than anything" | | 4 | "Their voice carried that distant" | | 5 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 6 | "They stepped forward together, crossing" | | 7 | "It was larger than it" | | 8 | "She pointed toward the center" | | 9 | "she said unnecessarily, straightening" | | 10 | "Her hand drifted to the" | | 11 | "She was slight, barely five-and-a-half" | | 12 | "Her eyes were the palest" | | 13 | "She wore a gown of" | | 14 | "She turned to Rory, those" | | 15 | "She glided toward the seeing" | | 16 | "She extended one pale hand" | | 17 | "Her hand closed around the" | | 18 | "She asked her question." |
| | ratio | 0.306 | |
| 8.39% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The path had vanished twenty" | | 1 | "Rory stopped at the threshold" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized beside her, shadow" | | 3 | "They said nothing." | | 4 | "They didn't need to." | | 5 | "The grove spoke for itself." | | 6 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 7 | "The grass beneath her boots" | | 8 | "she said quietly, turning to" | | 9 | "They were massive—older than anything" | | 10 | "Symbols had been carved into" | | 11 | "Their voice carried that distant" | | 12 | "Rory touched the Heartstone pendant" | | 13 | "It pulsed warmly against her" | | 14 | "The silver chain hummed faintly" | | 15 | "They stepped forward together, crossing" | | 16 | "The change was immediate." | | 17 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—the" | | 18 | "The clearing opened before them" | | 19 | "It was larger than it" |
| | ratio | 0.903 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx materialized beside her, shadow pooling into solid form with that particular sound—like wind escaping a sealed room." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors: deep violet blooms beside others that shifted from copper to gold as the light caught them, all blooming i…" | | 2 | "The sounds of Richmond Park—the distant traffic, a jogger's footsteps, a dog's bark—cut off as cleanly as if someone had switched off a radio." | | 3 | "In their place came a soft music, almost below hearing: the grove's own heartbeat, a rhythm that resonated in her chest." | | 4 | "The air before them shimmered, distorting like heat haze over summer pavement, and a woman stepped through the veil of invisibility as if parting curtains." | | 5 | "She was slight, barely five-and-a-half feet tall, with hair like spun silver that fell past her waist in waves that moved independently of any breeze." | | 6 | "Her eyes were the palest lavender Rory had ever seen, almost white, and they held a depth that made her think of drowning in shallow water." | | 7 | "She wore a gown of something that might have been white silk or might have been woven moonlight, and when she walked, no footprints remained." | | 8 | "Her hand closed around the pendant, feeling its warmth pulse against her palm, and she drew a breath that tasted of wildflowers and ancient magic and the electr…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "she said quietly, turning to examine the ancient oaks that marked the boundary" | | 1 | "Nyx answered, though their tone suggested uncertainty" | | 2 | "Nyx had, their shadow-form rippling like disturbed water" | | 3 | "the woman said, her voice carrying the cadence of distant bells" |
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| 12.07% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx finally admitted (admit)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.31 | | leniency | 0.621 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.276 | |