Run: 2026-03-18-01KM1H5T7GYVBPQP0AGTJYS50R

Run Details

Duration:
1m 2s
Cost:
$0.006923
Provider:
Minimax

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory checked her phone again. No signal. That was to be expected, she'd been told — the grove swallowed radio waves like a stone sinks water — but the gesture had become automatic, a small nervous tic she couldn't seem to break. The screen read 11:47 PM. She had arrived forty minutes ago, though it felt longer. She had walked from the car park at Sheen Gate with the easy confidence of someone who had done this before, following the deer trails past the herd of fallow deer that watched her pass without lifting their heads. The animals had known something, she thought now. But she hadn't listened. The grove announced itself the way it always did — not with fanfare but with a subtle shift, a thinning of the dark as the trees drew closer and the air took on a different taste. Metallic. Sweet. The kind of air that made her think of blood and honey, which she knew was absurd. She had been here four times now. She knew its rhythms. Or she had thought she did. Tonight something was different. She stopped at the ring of standing stones and pressed her palm against the nearest oak. Still warm. That was the first wrong thing. The stones were supposed to be cold by midnight, even in summer. Isolde had told her that during their third session, when she'd finally admitted why she kept coming back. The grove remembers, Isolde had said. It holds warmth the way a body holds a fever. And right now it was feverish beneath Rory's hand, hot enough that she pulled her fingers away and stared at the place she'd touched. No mark. No change in the bark. But the heat lingered on her palm like a brand. She tucked her hand under her opposite arm and walked deeper. The Heartstone pendant lay flat against her sternum, tucked beneath her shirt. She hadn't needed to wear it, but the habit had settled into her the way habits do — without decision, without thought. Her fingers found it through the fabric now, pressing against the small warm weight of it. It pulsed. That was normal. It pulsed when she was near the grove's center, near the old threshold that Isolde had shown her. But this pulse was faster than she remembered. Thready. Like a heartbeat running out of sync. The clearing opened ahead of her, the wildflowers glowing faintly white in the moonlight. Summer jasmine and something else, something with no name she knew, their petals curled shut against the dark. She sat down on the flat stone at the clearing's heart and crossed her legs and tried to breathe. She was here because Eva had asked her to be. Eva, who had pulled her out of Cardiff and out of the wreckage of her life three years ago and set her down in London with a spare key and a promise. Eva, who had found Isolde, or who Isolde had found — Rory still didn't understand the geometry of it — and who had come to her last Tuesday with bright eyes and thin hands and a voice that shook when she spoke about healing. The doctors had given up. Isolde hadn't. And if Isolde said the grove could help, then Rory would sit here every night until the moon waned if that's what it took. She closed her eyes. Breathed. Counted the seconds the way her therapist had taught her before she'd stopped going. One. Two. Three. On four, she heard the deer. No — not the deer. Something moving through the undergrowth at the far edge of the clearing, where the wildflowers gave way to the dark line of the oaks. A slow, deliberate crunching. The sound of weight settling, then shifting. She opened her eyes and looked, but the darkness at the tree line was absolute, a wall of black that her eyes couldn't penetrate. She waited. The sound stopped. Silence pressed in from all sides, heavier than before, the kind of silence that isn't an absence of noise but the presence of something listening. She had never noticed that before. She had sat in this clearing four times and never once noticed how the silence here had texture, had weight, had the quality of held breath. She checked the pendant again. Still pulsing. Faster now. Rory stood up. "I know this is part of it," she said to the clearing, to the dark, to whatever was at the tree line. Her voice came out flat and controlled, the way it always did when she was scared — not brave, just controlled, the fear locked behind a door she knew how to keep shut. "Isolde told me. The grove tests. I know." The grove did not respond. The silence remained. She walked the perimeter, making the circuit that Isolde had traced for her with her long pale fingers, dragging them through the soil as if drawing in water. Nine steps from the central stone to the inner ring. Sixteen from the inner ring to each standing stone in turn. A geometry Rory had memorized the way she memorized case law — through repetition, through ritual, through the kind of rote learning that made her feel stupid and safe at the same time. She counted her steps. She reached the first stone. She reached the second. The third stone was wrong. She stopped. Turned. The stone stood where it had always stood, an ancient oak darkened by centuries of weather, broad as a door and twice as tall. But the moss on its northern face had been scraped away in long, deliberate strokes. Fresh. Still wet. She could smell it — green and vegetal and raw, like a wound. Rory stared at the gouges in the moss and felt the fear shift in her chest, sliding from the locked room behind her ribs into a space she couldn't control. No one else came here. Isolde had been explicit about that. The grove was a closed space, a pocket, a breathing room between worlds. It didn't share. She backed away from the stone. She did not run. Running in the grove was inadvisable — Isolde had said that too, with a look on her face that Rory had taken for superstition and was no longer sure she understood. You run, the woman had said, you might run into something that runs faster. The crunching started again. Closer now. Not at the tree line but somewhere behind her, circling, the way a thing circles when it has decided what it wants but hasn't decided when to take it. She turned with it, pivoting on her heel, keeping the central stone between herself and the sound. The pendant burned against her skin. She pulled it out from under her shirt and looked at it. The crimson gem inside was glowing, no longer a faint inner warmth but a steady, arterial light that painted the skin beneath her collarbone red. The air changed. It was subtle — so subtle that if she had been anyone else, anyone less practiced at reading rooms and moods and the small lies people told with their bodies, she would have missed it. The air thickened. Not with moisture or cold but with presence, as if the clearing had drawn a breath and was holding it with her. Something exhaled near her left ear. She flinched — hard, instinctive, her whole body contracting — and spun to face the empty air. Nothing there. Nothing she could see. But the hair on her arms had risen and the pendant was so bright now it left afterimages when she blinked. She walked. Not running, not walking fast — something between the two, a controlled urgency that kept her dignity and possibly saved her life. She moved toward the path she had taken coming in, toward the gap in the trees where the deer trail began. The oaks on either side watched her pass with the patience of things that had been watching for longer than trees had any right to exist. She counted her steps. She reached the gap. The path was gone. Not overgrown. Not blocked. Gone. Where the narrow trail had wound between the birches there was now only dense undergrowth, bramble and hawthorn woven together so tightly the darkness beyond was impenetrable. She pushed against it. The thorns caught her jacket, her sleeve, the back of her hand. A bead of blood welled up along her knuckle and she watched it gather and fall and vanish into the dark earth. She turned around. The clearing was behind her. The standing stones still ringed it, still warm, still waiting. But the path out had closed the way a wound closes, skin drawn over absence, and the grove was round her again, all around her, the way a fist is around the thing it holds. Rory pressed her back against the nearest tree and forced herself to think. The pendant was unbearable now, hot enough that she wanted to tear it from her neck, but when her fingers found the chain they stopped. Something in the pendant's pulse had changed. It was no longer fast. It was slow, deliberate, rhythmic — the way a heartbeat sounds when someone is standing directly behind you. She did not turn around. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist began to itch. A phantom sensation, she told herself. Nerve damage from the accident when she was nine, the glass and the stitches and her father's hand on her shoulder in the emergency room. Phantom itch. The mind playing tricks. She pressed her thumbnail into the scar and breathed through the sensation because breathing through things was what she did, it was all she had ever known how to do, and she breathed now and she listened. The grove had sounds at night. She knew this. Wind through leaves. The distant call of owls. The small negotiations of creatures she couldn't name. But beneath these, threaded through them like a wrong note in an otherwise correct melody, there was something else. A low hum. Not mechanical. Not animal. A hum that seemed to rise from the ground itself, vibrating through the soles of her shoes and into the bones of her ankles, a sound so deep it bypassed her ears entirely and settled directly into her chest. She pressed harder against the tree. The bark was hot. Not the warmth of a summer night but the dry, searing heat of something that had been burning for a very long time and had learned to be patient. The hum rose in pitch. At the edge of the clearing, beyond the wildflowers, in the place where the jasmine met the dark, something stood. Rory saw it the way she saw things at the corner of her eye — not clearly, not fully, but with enough certainty to know it was there and not there, present and absent, a shape that her brain refused to assemble into anything she could name. Tall. Thin. Still in a way that living things are not still, the way a photograph of a person is still, the way a memory of a person is still. It did not move. It did not breathe. But it was there, and the hum was coming from it, or through it, or around it — she couldn't tell, the sound had no origin she could point to, it was everywhere and nowhere, in the stones and the soil and the spaces between her heartbeats. The pendant pulsed once. Hot, searing, the chain burning against the back of her neck. She looked at it. The crimson light was blinding now, and beneath the light — she had never noticed this before, in all the times she had worn it, in all the times she had held it — beneath the light there was something else. A shadow, moving inside the stone. Slow. Coiled. The size of a thumbnail, the size of the gem itself, but wrong in the way a reflection is wrong when it doesn't match the thing it reflects. The thing at the edge of the clearing took a step forward. Not walking. Not moving. Taking a step — a single, deliberate displacement of weight, the way a body does when it has decided to cross a distance it has already crossed a thousand times. The wildflowers bent away from it. The jasmine released its scent in a wave so thick she could taste it on her tongue, sweet and rotting, the smell of something beautiful that had been left too long in the dark. Rory's hand closed around the pendant. She could feel the shadow inside it, pressing against the glass, and the heat of it was almost enough to make her let go. Almost. But her fingers tightened instead, the chain cutting into the back of her neck, and she held on because letting go of things had never saved her, it had only ever made the fall longer. The thing took another step. The scar on her wrist burned as if the glass that had cut it nine years ago had just now decided to finish the job.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2184
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2184
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"weight"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"mechanical"
count1
8
word"searing"
count2
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"pulse"
4"silence"
5"traced"
6"rhythmic"
7"mechanical"
8"searing"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences183
matches
0"was scared"
96.02% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences183
filterMatches
0"think"
1"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
3"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences184
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2205
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A phantom sensation, she told herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount2190
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Sheen1
Gate1
Isolde10
Rory11
Heartstone1
Eva3
Cardiff1
London1
Tuesday1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
places
0"Sheen"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
75.74% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if drawing in water"
1"something between the two, a controlled urgency"
2"hum that seemed to rise from the ground itself, vibrating through the soles of her shoes and into the bones of her ankles, a sound so deep it bypassed her ears entirely and settled directly into her chest"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords3.175
wordCount2205
matches
0"not with fanfare but with a subtle shift, a thinning of the dark as the trees dre"
1"Not at the tree line but somewhere behind her, circling, the way a thing circles"
2"no longer a faint inner warmth but"
3"Not with moisture or cold but with presence, as if the clearing had drawn a breath"
4"Not the warmth of a summer night but the dry, searing heat of something"
5"not clearly, not fully, but with enough certainty to know it was there"
6"not fully, but with enough certainty to know it was there"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences184
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean43.24
std36.89
cv0.853
sampleLengths
0108
172
24
3111
411
589
651
7117
819
91
101
111
126
1364
145
1557
169
173
1863
198
2095
215
2258
2357
2455
2535
2660
273
2860
296
3044
3179
324
3370
343
3550
3668
375
3884
3990
4039
415
4220
43132
4415
4581
4612
4774
4866
495
97.59% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences183
matches
0"been told "
1"were supposed"
2"been scraped"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs350
matches
0"was glowing"
1"was holding"
2"was coming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount21
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences184
ratio0.092
matches
0"That was to be expected, she'd been told — the grove swallowed radio waves like a stone sinks water — but the gesture had become automatic, a small nervous tic she couldn't seem to break."
1"The grove announced itself the way it always did — not with fanfare but with a subtle shift, a thinning of the dark as the trees drew closer and the air took on a different taste."
2"She hadn't needed to wear it, but the habit had settled into her the way habits do — without decision, without thought."
3"Eva, who had found Isolde, or who Isolde had found — Rory still didn't understand the geometry of it — and who had come to her last Tuesday with bright eyes and thin hands and a voice that shook when she spoke about healing."
4"No — not the deer."
5"Her voice came out flat and controlled, the way it always did when she was scared — not brave, just controlled, the fear locked behind a door she knew how to keep shut."
6"A geometry Rory had memorized the way she memorized case law — through repetition, through ritual, through the kind of rote learning that made her feel stupid and safe at the same time."
7"She could smell it — green and vegetal and raw, like a wound."
8"Running in the grove was inadvisable — Isolde had said that too, with a look on her face that Rory had taken for superstition and was no longer sure she understood."
9"It was subtle — so subtle that if she had been anyone else, anyone less practiced at reading rooms and moods and the small lies people told with their bodies, she would have missed it."
10"She flinched — hard, instinctive, her whole body contracting — and spun to face the empty air."
11"Not running, not walking fast — something between the two, a controlled urgency that kept her dignity and possibly saved her life."
12"It was slow, deliberate, rhythmic — the way a heartbeat sounds when someone is standing directly behind you."
13"Rory saw it the way she saw things at the corner of her eye — not clearly, not fully, but with enough certainty to know it was there and not there, present and absent, a shape that her brain refused to assemble into anything she could name."
14"But it was there, and the hum was coming from it, or through it, or around it — she couldn't tell, the sound had no origin she could point to, it was everywhere and nowhere, in the stones and the soil and the spaces between her heartbeats."
15"The crimson light was blinding now, and beneath the light — she had never noticed this before, in all the times she had worn it, in all the times she had held it — beneath the light there was something else."
16"Taking a step — a single, deliberate displacement of weight, the way a body does when it has decided to cross a distance it has already crossed a thousand times."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2170
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount68
adverbRatio0.03133640552995392
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.005069124423963134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences184
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences184
mean11.98
std11.45
cv0.956
sampleLengths
05
12
235
35
410
539
68
74
836
91
101
1117
127
134
146
154
1616
172
186
1912
2018
216
2210
2324
242
255
2610
2711
2812
2922
3016
312
323
3318
348
351
367
3714
3818
3919
4010
4132
4244
435
442
4524
464
471
4814
491
36.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.2826086956521739
totalSentences184
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount47
totalSentences148
matches
0"She had arrived forty minutes"
1"She had walked from the"
2"She had been here four"
3"She knew its rhythms."
4"She stopped at the ring"
5"It holds warmth the way"
6"She tucked her hand under"
7"She hadn't needed to wear"
8"Her fingers found it through"
9"It pulsed when she was"
10"She sat down on the"
11"She was here because Eva"
12"She closed her eyes."
13"She opened her eyes and"
14"She had never noticed that"
15"She had sat in this"
16"She checked the pendant again."
17"she said to the clearing,"
18"Her voice came out flat"
19"She walked the perimeter, making"
ratio0.318
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences148
matches
0"Rory checked her phone again."
1"That was to be expected,"
2"The screen read 11:47 PM."
3"She had arrived forty minutes"
4"She had walked from the"
5"The animals had known something,"
6"The grove announced itself the"
7"The kind of air that"
8"She had been here four"
9"She knew its rhythms."
10"Tonight something was different."
11"She stopped at the ring"
12"That was the first wrong"
13"The stones were supposed to"
14"Isolde had told her that"
15"The grove remembers, Isolde had"
16"It holds warmth the way"
17"She tucked her hand under"
18"The Heartstone pendant lay flat"
19"She hadn't needed to wear"
ratio0.784
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences78
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"She had walked from the car park at Sheen Gate with the easy confidence of someone who had done this before, following the deer trails past the herd of fallow d…"
1"Eva, who had found Isolde, or who Isolde had found — Rory still didn't understand the geometry of it — and who had come to her last Tuesday with bright eyes and…"
2"Silence pressed in from all sides, heavier than before, the kind of silence that isn't an absence of noise but the presence of something listening."
3"She walked the perimeter, making the circuit that Isolde had traced for her with her long pale fingers, dragging them through the soil as if drawing in water."
4"She turned with it, pivoting on her heel, keeping the central stone between herself and the sound."
5"The crimson gem inside was glowing, no longer a faint inner warmth but a steady, arterial light that painted the skin beneath her collarbone red."
6"Not running, not walking fast — something between the two, a controlled urgency that kept her dignity and possibly saved her life."
7"A hum that seemed to rise from the ground itself, vibrating through the soles of her shoes and into the bones of her ankles, a sound so deep it bypassed her ear…"
8"Not the warmth of a summer night but the dry, searing heat of something that had been burning for a very long time and had learned to be patient."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
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uselessAdditionCount0
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100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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fancyCount0
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