| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 983 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 983 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "shimmered" | | 3 | "crystalline" | | 4 | "echoed" | | 5 | "tracing" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "unraveling" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "structure" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "etching" | | 14 | "pulse" | | 15 | "quickened" | | 16 | "flicker" | | 17 | "crystal" | | 18 | "etched" | | 19 | "crystallized" | | 20 | "resonated" | | 21 | "silence" | | 22 | "roaring" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 65 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 95.14% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 1 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 1 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0.012 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone’s crimson gem pulsed, not with the steady warmth of a Hel portal, but a slow, arrhythmic thrum—like a heartbeat with a stutter." |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 972 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.42% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 47 | | wordCount | 755 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.25 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 13 | | Aurora | 17 | | Nyx | 9 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.374 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sigils that seemed to whisper in her blood" |
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| 97.12% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.029 | | wordCount | 972 | | matches | | 0 | "not with the steady warmth of a Hel portal, but a slow, arrhythmic thrum" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 36 | | std | 20.22 | | cv | 0.562 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 65 | | 9 | 38 | | 10 | 52 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 46 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 54 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 11 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 136 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones hummed as the trio passed, their carvings—a tangled weave of antlers and serpents—vibrating with a low, resonant tone that Aurora felt in her molars." | | 1 | "The Heartstone’s crimson gem pulsed, not with the steady warmth of a Hel portal, but a slow, arrhythmic thrum—like a heartbeat with a stutter." | | 2 | "She tightened her grip on the Fae blade at her hip; its moonsilver edge gleamed dully in the filtered light." | | 3 | "The air buzzed with the sound of distant music—strings played in reverse, laughter that echoed before it began." | | 4 | "The markings shifted as she watched—letters in languages she’d seen only in Evan’s occult books, sigils that seemed to whisper in her blood." | | 5 | "Nyx reached toward the passage, their hand phasing through the air until their fingers touched something solid—a thread of shadow woven into the stone." | | 6 | "The Fae blade at her hip vibrated, its edge dimly etching a pattern into her palm—a ward against what?" | | 7 | "The corridor ahead yawned wider, revealing a garden of bones—ribcages arching like trellises, skulls topped with ivy." | | 8 | "From the shadows of the crystal, fissures bloomed like veins—threads of light too pale to be real." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 764 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.030104712041884817 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013089005235602094 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 7.18 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 19 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 49.40% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.3253012048192771 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She moved ahead, bare feet" | | 1 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 2 | "she said, tracing a finger" | | 3 | "She laughed, a sound like" | | 4 | "They walked deeper, the grove’s" | | 5 | "She stepped back." | | 6 | "She pointed to a corridor" | | 7 | "they said, retracting quickly" | | 8 | "She looked at Isolde, who" | | 9 | "she said, frowning" | | 10 | "She pressed a hand to" |
| | ratio | 0.183 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the archway" | | 1 | "Nyx followed, their silhouette flickering" | | 2 | "The standing stones hummed as" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, not looking at" | | 4 | "She moved ahead, bare feet" | | 5 | "Nyx tilted their head, violet" | | 6 | "Aurora glanced at the pendant" | | 7 | "The Heartstone’s crimson gem pulsed," | | 8 | "She tightened her grip on" | | 9 | "The grove unfolded around them:" | | 10 | "Flowers with petals like opals" | | 11 | "The air buzzed with the" | | 12 | "Isolde knelt by a pool" | | 13 | "she said, tracing a finger" | | 14 | "The water rippled, reforming into" | | 15 | "She laughed, a sound like" | | 16 | "Aurora crouched, her reflection warping" | | 17 | "The sight made her stomach" | | 18 | "Isolde said, rising" | | 19 | "They walked deeper, the grove’s" |
| | ratio | 0.95 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 20.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx followed, their silhouette flickering like candle smoke at the edges, while Isolde paused, her silver hair catching the iridescent shimmer of the grove’s ai…" | | 1 | "The grove unfolded around them: trees with bark like liquid glass, their branches sagging under clusters of fruit that ripened and rotted in endless cycles." | | 2 | "A bridge of roots materialized beneath Nyx’s feet when they hesitated, as if the earth had judged their doubt." | | 3 | "The architecture was impossibly fluid: arches that curled like ferns, pillars that tapered into the shape of vertebrae." | | 4 | "The markings shifted as she watched—letters in languages she’d seen only in Evan’s occult books, sigils that seemed to whisper in her blood." | | 5 | "She looked at Isolde, who watched her with pale lavender eyes." |
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| 9.62% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, not looking at them" | | 1 | "She pressed, and the stones shuddered" | | 2 | "Isolde vanished, her last words dissolving in the sudden roaring wind:" |
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| 85.48% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.323 | | leniency | 0.645 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |