Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7SN3BGQYKXEB197P46411

Run Details

Duration:
24.5s
Cost:
$0.000267
Provider:
WandB

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain had swept through Richmond Park earlier, leaving the ground slick and steaming under a sky that refused to clear. The air hung thick and cool, the kind that clings to skin and won’t let go. Aurora stepped over a gnarled root, her boots sinking slightly into the dark soil. The weight of the forest pressed in on her from all sides—trees too tall, too still, their bark blackened in patches like scorched paper. She checked the pendant. The Heartstone glowed faintly, a dull pulse beneath the silver casing, like a dying ember tucked into flesh. It had started humming two miles back—soft at first, a vibration against her collarbone, then stronger, insistent. That was why she’d come. The note had been clear: *Bring the stone to the grove before moonrise. If you want answers, come alone.* No signature. No explanation. Just slipped under her door at dawn, ink smudged as if written in haste. Now the moon was high, a bleached coin veiled behind clouds, and the grove should have been close. She paused, breathing through her nose. Listened. Silence. Not the usual quiet of woods at night—no rustle of foxes, no distant yelp from a dog in the park. Just silence, deep and total, like the world had taken a breath and forgotten to let it go. Then a whisper of movement to her left. Aurora turned sharply. Nothing. Just the trees. The standing stones—dark, ancient oaks ringed in moss, forming an uneven circle ahead. The boundary of the Fae Grove. She hadn’t seen them until now. One moment, empty forest. The next, the stones stood waiting. That wasn’t how it worked. She’d been here before. Once, with Eva, chasing a rumour of fae lights and stolen time. They’d found the entrance behind a fallen yew, marked by three crooked oaks that leaned like watching sentinels. This circle was different. Older. The trunks split in places, revealing hollows that seemed too deep, too symmetrical. Like mouths. The pendant throbbed. She gripped it through her coat, warmth spreading through her palm. Not comforting. Not painful. Warning. Aurora stepped forward. The air changed. Not colder. Not warmer. Just *wrong*, as if the oxygen had been replaced with something thinner, something that didn’t belong in her lungs. The scent of wet earth twisted into something floral and cloying—night-blooming jasmine, maybe, but sickly sweet, like it had rotted at the stem. She crossed between two of the standing stones. The world tilted. For a heartbeat, the ground vanished beneath her. Then solid again. Her breath came fast, ragged. She stumbled, catching herself on one of the trunks. The bark crumbled under her fingers, crumbling into grey ash that clung to her skin. Behind her, the forest was gone. No trees. No path. Just the circle, the stones, and the grove. Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible colours—deep violet, neon yellow, a blue that hadn’t been named yet. They swayed, though there was no wind. Their stems didn’t bend. The entire field rippled, like water under pressure. In the centre, a figure. A woman, back turned, dressed in grey cloth that moved like smoke. She stood motionless, hands clasped in front of her, head bowed. Aurora took a step back. The woman didn’t move. Aurora’s pulse hammered in her throat, but her voice stayed steady. “Who are you?” The woman didn’t answer. Aurora tightened her grip on the pendant. It pulsed once—slow, deliberate. Then the figure turned. And wasn’t a woman at all. Its face was smooth. Blank. Like marble carved too hastily, features suggested but not finished. No eyes. No mouth. Just the impression of one. It took a step toward her. Aurora didn’t run. Running meant losing control. Losing control got people killed. She backed away, slow, careful, eyes locked on the thing. It didn’t follow. Just stood, head slightly tilted, as if listening. Then a sound. From the edge of the grove. A rustle. Not fabric. Not leaves. Like something dragging itself through dirt. She turned her head. Movement. Quick. Low to the ground. Between two stones, something pale flickered—long, thin limbs, too many joints, pulling a shape forward on elbows and knees. It vanished before she could focus. She spun back. The figure was closer. Ten feet. Still silent. Still blank. The pendant flared—hot against her skin. Another noise. This time from behind her. A whisper. Not words. Just breath shaped into sound, like someone trying to remember how to speak. Then another. And another. From every direction. The flowers in the field twitched. The colours deepened. The scent turned rancid—sweet decay, like overripe fruit left in a closed room. Something moved behind the standing stones. Figures. Tall. Thin. Not walking. *Gliding.* Limbs too long, heads at awkward angles. They didn’t enter the circle. Just watched from between the trees, from behind the stones. She wasn’t alone. She hadn’t been since she crossed the threshold. The blank-faced figure raised a hand. Not human. Fingers too long, too many. Joints bending backward. It pointed. Not at her. Behind her. Aurora didn’t want to look. But she did. In the centre of the grove, where the figure had stood moments ago, a door had appeared. Tall. Narrow. Made of black wood, carved with spirals that turned the wrong way. No handle. No hinges. But the air around it shimmered, like heat rising off asphalt. The Heartstone burned. She knew what it was. A Hel portal. But it wasn’t supposed to be here. Not in the Fae Grove. Not in this realm. The whispers grew. Softer, but more insistent. Like voices layered over each other, speaking in languages that didn’t have words. One of the figures stepped forward—tall, bent, its skin the colour of dried moss. It reached a hand toward the door. Then stopped. They weren’t looking at the door. They were looking at *her*. She backed toward the edge of the circle. The standing stones loomed. She reached for one, fingers brushing the ash-covered bark. Nothing happened. No resistance. No portal home. The door remained. Silent. Waiting. The blank-faced figure tilted its head again. Then spoke. Its voice wasn’t sound. It was *inside* her skull, pressing against the bones. *You came with the key.* Her breath caught. The pendant. They knew. *Why?* She forced her voice out. “I received a note. That’s all. I didn’t know—” *You carry the blood.* “The blood?” *The old line. The broken covenant.* “I don’t know what you’re talking about.” The thing stepped closer. The others didn’t move. But the air thickened. The flowers wilted, their colours draining into the soil. *Liar.* Her wrist ached. The scar—the crescent on her left wrist—throbbed, warm and sharp, like it had just been cut. She didn’t flinch. “You want the pendant. Take it. I don’t know how it works. I don’t know who gave it to me.” The figure tilted its head the other way. Then laughed. Not a sound. Just the absence of one—like silence snapping. *It chose you.* Behind her, the door creaked. Not open. But *breathing.* The wood expanded slightly, then shrank. Like lungs. The figures at the edge of the grove dropped to their knees. One by one. The blank-faced thing stepped forward again. *Now you must choose.* Aurora’s fingers curled around the pendant. She didn’t move. Windless, the flowers trembled. The portal pulsed. The scar on her wrist burned. And the thing with no face smiled without a mouth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
84.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1251
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"sentinels"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"comforting"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count2
9
word"marble"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"sentinels"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"comforting"
8"pulsed"
9"marble"
10"flickered"
11"shimmered"
12"loomed"
13"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences205
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences210
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans13
markdownWords43
totalWords1237
ratio0.035
matches
0"Bring the stone to the grove before moonrise. If you want answers, come alone."
1"wrong"
2"Gliding."
3"her"
4"inside"
5"You came with the key."
6"Why?"
7"You carry the blood."
8"The old line. The broken covenant."
9"Liar."
10"It chose you."
11"breathing."
12"Now you must choose."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1196
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone2
Fae2
Grove2
Eva1
Limbs1
Hel1
Aurora9
One3
Like5
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Eva"
2"Aurora"
3"Like"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if listening"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1237
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences210
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs115
mean10.76
std12.54
cv1.166
sampleLengths
074
14
259
318
418
57
639
78
83
91
1038
115
1254
133
1416
153
163
1746
188
193
2040
216
2212
2337
245
2523
265
274
2811
293
304
3111
324
336
3424
356
363
379
3821
393
4012
416
424
436
4425
453
464
472
482
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences205
matches
0"been replaced"
1"was gone"
2"been named"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs224
matches
0"weren’t looking"
1"were looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences210
ratio0.062
matches
0"The weight of the forest pressed in on her from all sides—trees too tall, too still, their bark blackened in patches like scorched paper."
1"It had started humming two miles back—soft at first, a vibration against her collarbone, then stronger, insistent."
2"Not the usual quiet of woods at night—no rustle of foxes, no distant yelp from a dog in the park."
3"The standing stones—dark, ancient oaks ringed in moss, forming an uneven circle ahead."
4"The scent of wet earth twisted into something floral and cloying—night-blooming jasmine, maybe, but sickly sweet, like it had rotted at the stem."
5"Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible colours—deep violet, neon yellow, a blue that hadn’t been named yet."
6"It pulsed once—slow, deliberate."
7"Between two stones, something pale flickered—long, thin limbs, too many joints, pulling a shape forward on elbows and knees."
8"The pendant flared—hot against her skin."
9"The scent turned rancid—sweet decay, like overripe fruit left in a closed room."
10"One of the figures stepped forward—tall, bent, its skin the colour of dried moss."
11"The scar—the crescent on her left wrist—throbbed, warm and sharp, like it had just been cut."
12"Just the absence of one—like silence snapping."
92.48% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1214
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.048599670510708404
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005766062602965404
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences210
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences210
mean5.89
std4.94
cv0.839
sampleLengths
020
116
214
324
44
518
617
75
813
96
102
112
1214
1318
146
151
161
1720
1818
198
203
211
223
2313
246
256
264
276
285
294
3012
3118
324
331
3413
352
363
3711
382
392
401
413
423
432
442
4519
4623
478
483
498
40.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2904761904761905
totalSentences210
uniqueOpeners61
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount15
totalSentences150
matches
0"Just slipped under her door"
1"Just silence, deep and total,"
2"Then a whisper of movement"
3"Just the trees."
4"Once, with Eva, chasing a"
5"Just *wrong*, as if the"
6"Then solid again."
7"Just the circle, the stones,"
8"Then the figure turned."
9"Just the impression of one."
10"Just stood, head slightly tilted,"
11"Then a sound."
12"Just breath shaped into sound,"
13"Just watched from between the"
14"Just the absence of one—like"
ratio0.1
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences150
matches
0"She checked the pendant."
1"It had started humming two"
2"She paused, breathing through her"
3"She hadn’t seen them until"
4"She’d been here before."
5"They’d found the entrance behind"
6"She gripped it through her"
7"She crossed between two of"
8"Her breath came fast, ragged."
9"She stumbled, catching herself on"
10"They swayed, though there was"
11"Their stems didn’t bend."
12"She stood motionless, hands clasped"
13"It pulsed once—slow, deliberate."
14"Its face was smooth."
15"It took a step toward"
16"She backed away, slow, careful,"
17"It didn’t follow."
18"She turned her head."
19"It vanished before she could"
ratio0.267
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences150
matches
0"Rain had swept through Richmond"
1"The air hung thick and"
2"Aurora stepped over a gnarled"
3"The weight of the forest"
4"She checked the pendant."
5"The Heartstone glowed faintly, a"
6"It had started humming two"
7"That was why she’d come."
8"The note had been clear:"
9"She paused, breathing through her"
10"Aurora turned sharply."
11"The standing stones—dark, ancient oaks"
12"The boundary of the Fae"
13"She hadn’t seen them until"
14"The next, the stones stood"
15"That wasn’t how it worked."
16"She’d been here before."
17"They’d found the entrance behind"
18"This circle was different."
19"The trunks split in places,"
ratio0.667
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences150
matches
0"If you want answers, come"
1"Now the moon was high,"
2"*Now you must choose.*"
ratio0.02
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rain had swept through Richmond Park earlier, leaving the ground slick and steaming under a sky that refused to clear."
1"They’d found the entrance behind a fallen yew, marked by three crooked oaks that leaned like watching sentinels."
2"Just *wrong*, as if the oxygen had been replaced with something thinner, something that didn’t belong in her lungs."
3"The bark crumbled under her fingers, crumbling into grey ash that clung to her skin."
4"Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible colours—deep violet, neon yellow, a blue that hadn’t been named yet."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.5459%