| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 84.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1251 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.06% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1251 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "sentinels" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 205 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 205 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 210 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 13 | | markdownWords | 43 | | totalWords | 1237 | | ratio | 0.035 | | matches | | 0 | "Bring the stone to the grove before moonrise. If you want answers, come alone." | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "Gliding." | | 3 | "her" | | 4 | "inside" | | 5 | "You came with the key." | | 6 | "Why?" | | 7 | "You carry the blood." | | 8 | "The old line. The broken covenant." | | 9 | "Liar." | | 10 | "It chose you." | | 11 | "breathing." | | 12 | "Now you must choose." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1196 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.75 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Limbs | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | One | 3 | | Like | 5 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Like" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1237 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 115 | | mean | 10.76 | | std | 12.54 | | cv | 1.166 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 74 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 59 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 1 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 40 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 205 | | matches | | 0 | "been replaced" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been named" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 224 | | matches | | 0 | "weren’t looking" | | 1 | "were looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 210 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "The weight of the forest pressed in on her from all sides—trees too tall, too still, their bark blackened in patches like scorched paper." | | 1 | "It had started humming two miles back—soft at first, a vibration against her collarbone, then stronger, insistent." | | 2 | "Not the usual quiet of woods at night—no rustle of foxes, no distant yelp from a dog in the park." | | 3 | "The standing stones—dark, ancient oaks ringed in moss, forming an uneven circle ahead." | | 4 | "The scent of wet earth twisted into something floral and cloying—night-blooming jasmine, maybe, but sickly sweet, like it had rotted at the stem." | | 5 | "Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible colours—deep violet, neon yellow, a blue that hadn’t been named yet." | | 6 | "It pulsed once—slow, deliberate." | | 7 | "Between two stones, something pale flickered—long, thin limbs, too many joints, pulling a shape forward on elbows and knees." | | 8 | "The pendant flared—hot against her skin." | | 9 | "The scent turned rancid—sweet decay, like overripe fruit left in a closed room." | | 10 | "One of the figures stepped forward—tall, bent, its skin the colour of dried moss." | | 11 | "The scar—the crescent on her left wrist—throbbed, warm and sharp, like it had just been cut." | | 12 | "Just the absence of one—like silence snapping." |
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| 92.48% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1214 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 59 | | adverbRatio | 0.048599670510708404 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005766062602965404 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 210 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 210 | | mean | 5.89 | | std | 4.94 | | cv | 0.839 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 40.95% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.2904761904761905 | | totalSentences | 210 | | uniqueOpeners | 61 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "Just slipped under her door" | | 1 | "Just silence, deep and total," | | 2 | "Then a whisper of movement" | | 3 | "Just the trees." | | 4 | "Once, with Eva, chasing a" | | 5 | "Just *wrong*, as if the" | | 6 | "Then solid again." | | 7 | "Just the circle, the stones," | | 8 | "Then the figure turned." | | 9 | "Just the impression of one." | | 10 | "Just stood, head slightly tilted," | | 11 | "Then a sound." | | 12 | "Just breath shaped into sound," | | 13 | "Just watched from between the" | | 14 | "Just the absence of one—like" |
| | ratio | 0.1 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 40 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked the pendant." | | 1 | "It had started humming two" | | 2 | "She paused, breathing through her" | | 3 | "She hadn’t seen them until" | | 4 | "She’d been here before." | | 5 | "They’d found the entrance behind" | | 6 | "She gripped it through her" | | 7 | "She crossed between two of" | | 8 | "Her breath came fast, ragged." | | 9 | "She stumbled, catching herself on" | | 10 | "They swayed, though there was" | | 11 | "Their stems didn’t bend." | | 12 | "She stood motionless, hands clasped" | | 13 | "It pulsed once—slow, deliberate." | | 14 | "Its face was smooth." | | 15 | "It took a step toward" | | 16 | "She backed away, slow, careful," | | 17 | "It didn’t follow." | | 18 | "She turned her head." | | 19 | "It vanished before she could" |
| | ratio | 0.267 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had swept through Richmond" | | 1 | "The air hung thick and" | | 2 | "Aurora stepped over a gnarled" | | 3 | "The weight of the forest" | | 4 | "She checked the pendant." | | 5 | "The Heartstone glowed faintly, a" | | 6 | "It had started humming two" | | 7 | "That was why she’d come." | | 8 | "The note had been clear:" | | 9 | "She paused, breathing through her" | | 10 | "Aurora turned sharply." | | 11 | "The standing stones—dark, ancient oaks" | | 12 | "The boundary of the Fae" | | 13 | "She hadn’t seen them until" | | 14 | "The next, the stones stood" | | 15 | "That wasn’t how it worked." | | 16 | "She’d been here before." | | 17 | "They’d found the entrance behind" | | 18 | "This circle was different." | | 19 | "The trunks split in places," |
| | ratio | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 150 | | matches | | 0 | "If you want answers, come" | | 1 | "Now the moon was high," | | 2 | "*Now you must choose.*" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 48.87% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain had swept through Richmond Park earlier, leaving the ground slick and steaming under a sky that refused to clear." | | 1 | "They’d found the entrance behind a fallen yew, marked by three crooked oaks that leaned like watching sentinels." | | 2 | "Just *wrong*, as if the oxygen had been replaced with something thinner, something that didn’t belong in her lungs." | | 3 | "The bark crumbled under her fingers, crumbling into grey ash that clung to her skin." | | 4 | "Wildflowers spilled across the ground in impossible colours—deep violet, neon yellow, a blue that hadn’t been named yet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |