Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7TSPRTK0CSWZBBAZK7XQ4

Run Details

Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.001923
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Tube station stank of mildew and charred sage. Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed in the cavernous emptiness as she descended the concrete steps, her left wrist steady beneath the leather sleeve of her trench coat. The Veil Compass in its glass case at the station’s entrance trembled slightly, a guard’s fingers brushing its brass casing as he passed. The Implement Exchange’s new_forces had already taped off the scene with gauzy plastic—jammed between a toppled New Age crystal stand and a frayed-market awning. “DS Quinn,” Inspector Lyle Hargate greeted, his voice already preening. “Tell me you’ve a better theory than this.” He gestured to the body slumped against a graffiti-streaked pillar. The corpse’s throat was seared, the skin there not pale but ink-black, like pages left in a burning fireplace. Harlow stepped around a pile of esoteric pendulums, her thumbnail carving a half-circle behind her left ear. The victim wasn’t moving. He wore a tailored suit, the fabric stiff with ash. No wallet, she noted first. No phone, no rings, no pocket watch. Only the Veil Compass on a chain around his neck, gleaming faintly. “A Shade Scourge attack?” Hargate’s jaw twitched. “What do you have?” Harlow crouched. Her partner, DS Morris, had bled precisely like this before the night he vanished. She didn’t mention it. He’d hated attention. “A mugger takes the corpse’s wallet, leaves the compass.” Hargate parked a gloved palm on his hip. “Professional opinion here, Quinn.” His badge glinted. “West End mugging, not metafictional whimsy.” The corpse’s lipstick traced a smudge over his mouth. Harlow tilted her head, thinking through the math. If this were a pickpocketing turned lethal, why the ritual symmetry? The Compass beneath his chin pointed straight toward the pillar’s base, not the exits. She unclipped her own Compass from a duty belt—bought a stolen version under the alias *Thomas*. Its needle wobbled at first, then spun rapidly to the west. “Shade Scourges don’t steal from their kills,” Harlow said. “They leave crypts. You see the burn’s shape?” She slid her finger along the ridge of the wound. “It’s not a wound, it’s a doorstop.” Hargate snorted. “The man’s still dead. Still missing down the road.” He yanked a corner of the crime scene tape. “This is *my* division. Cut any deductions to ribbons after paperwork.” A commotion began: three silk-clad traders with pierced serpentine rings wrangling a nargleskin jacket from a Licensing Office man. Harlow ignored it. She’d learned not to watch markets shift themselves—seen this one once cling to Ketamine stains in Primrose Hill, once flicker entirely into a ditch near Canary Wharf. Instead, she read the man’s blood. Not just blood. A droplet clung to the pillar, and Harlow’s nostrils flared. She knew that tar-black viscosity, that iron-oxide shimmer, from a case file locked in her Combustion Bay office. The Licensing Office insisted it was a merculite distillation—impossible under the 1986 Anti-Resonance Act. Hargate would write it as enhancement. “It’s mostly clean.” He was reading over her shoulder now. His tie snagged on an iron gate. “Maybe you’re just blowing vapor.” Harlow didn’t respond. She reached for her sulfate pen, drew a single drop from the corpse’s chest. The point of contact surfaced a spiderweb of dark sigils, delicate as lace but knotting into a vertical line that mirrored her Compass’s travel. DS Morris had said a Shade artisan left the sigils in their raindrops. “The victim’s pulse points,” she murmured, “match the bank of this station.” She turned. “Where’s the bone token?” Hargate raised an eyebrow. “What, your market entrance key?” He gestured to the corpse’s palm. “Nothing. Gelded him, whatever it was.” “Still can’t just be a mugging.” “And we aren’t in a Basque village.” Hargate waved a hand at the station’s shadows. “You think something colonial’s at work?” “No.” Harlow’s voice sharpened. “The compass is left here as an *invitation*. Someone wanted him to touch it.” He stepped back. “Why you then?” She ignored him. Walked the Compass through the station. The needle snapped to each dark sigil—on the wall, in the sizing of rat droppings, in the curl of the corpse’s little finger. She remembered DS Morris’s last report. *Aurora’s not a name. It’s a condition.* The Compass led her beneath a rotting staircase, through a cordon of dead pigeons clustered like fallen leaves, to a stanchion marked 1789 in chalk. The numbers often flaked, but these had been refreshed. Harlow knelt. “There’s a pattern here every 11.5 feet.” “What pattern?” “The Veil Market’s structured like a strangerogen trap. You align your simplex points to the Compass’s printing—and whoever’s waiting then retains you as a toll.” She said this as casually as if remarking on the weather, and watched him smirk. “Quinn, they probably hit him with a couple acid vials—Licensing’s got their suppliers.” She reached for a journal in her coat pocket. Its leather cased a half-liquefied eraser, a symptom of proximity to the forbidden Realm. Now, the pages held solid. “You’re trained to recognize quick jobs—Protectionist stabs, union disrupters with Taser spines. Not a wizarding coalition decoding millennial vestiges through market economies.” “This one?” Hargate’s eyes narrowed. “He’s for sale here. Star Pentacle’s got a whole ring section for their precision-wrought manacles.” “Then why no footprints?” She gestured to the corpse’s position. “He was slumped *perfectly*—centimeter from the anteroom lights. Whatever he became, it walked to the exact center of the most trafficked section.” Harlow thought again of the Licensing Office’s pamphlets. *Shade artisans take comfort from your asymmetry. They colonize the gaps.* Hargate’s phone vibrated. “Cuppa or a call?” “Call.” He moved aside, slapping down his card to a junior officer. “Internal’s asking for your file.” Harlow turned her thumb to her watch. The breach would come first. She always timed it. The Veil Compass spun wildly. Its needle hovered between - “Need to run the Compass texture, boss,” Hargate was shouting. “Bloke on the bank says—” Harlow’s hand snared the Compass snappily. “Orientation detentions,” she murmured. “Who’s got a black-market X-ray for the pillar?” “X-ray? Is this a joke?” “Then what were you thinking minutes ago?” He stormed off. Only handy when the police were in a mood. Harlow unclipped a caliper and her indelible ruler from a belt. Measured the sigils. Measured the corpse’s ridges of vertebrae—ones parallel to the pillar. Then found the crack at his nape, inches long, like a caterpillar trail turned sickly white. “You’re looking at this wrong.” Another voice. Female. Thin. Harlow turned. Eva Kowalski sorted a satchel full of scrolls against the faded blue funeral cloth of the stanchion. “Movent sold you to the North Door and you call me?” Eva’s glasses reflected the Compass. “They’re not even noting the -” “Your Colonel Hargate?” Eva huffed. “He’s *terrified* of anything sounding enlightened.” “You’ve seen this, then?” “Saw it in the Licensing Office reports from 1932 to last week. Someone breathes alive in this archway. Breathed alive at the same coordinates as/?/” “You think he’s a Shade artifact?” Eva’s tongue pressed behind her molars. “Dead. But someone who can/uncastrate themselves before westward foils collect if they/out-throng.” She fumbled with a white-folded sheet in her satchel. “Your reading’s off by epsilon. You’re missing the tell in foot',['../'] Hargate’s voice cut through. “Higher Audit sent an expert. You *hired* this one.” Eva blinked at him. “This isn’t religion, it’s geometry. Can I?” She unclipped Harlow’s Compass with a glove. “The supraslemn ethics code—the Navigator’s protocol—that must be breached by external bursars.” Hargate frowned. “Is this English?” “New Hungarian. Weeks in development.” Eva’s voice quickened. “It wasn’t a mugging. The action was crafted. To throw back to the—” “Kowalski,” Hargate said, “if your theories last a minute, you can stay.” Eva adjusted her glasses. Tucked back her hair absently. “He isn’t dead. He’s a *solvent* in this market.” “You said he was dead.” “Atmospheric.” She shook the Compass. “There’s an enhance—“ The corpse’s hand twitched. One digit, then two, then a news-worthy contortion toward Harlow’s chest. She took two steps back. The Compass’s needle locked. Eva was already stepping ahead, unfurling a notebook. “The Charles Bridge people said they’d taken them, that these aren’t even mortal anymore. And whoever’s west of us agrees with the licensing. You see the fourth sigil TODO?” Harlow did. A mark like a sparrow’s wing on the wall. She’d never read this across context. The Compass hummed under Eva’s gaze. “All your Aura’s shifts—” Hargate’s hand clamped her shoulder. “We live in socio-religious references with your theories, Quinn. If this gets out, the official will cite a Spectrality.” Eva didn’t back off. Harlow unclipped the Compass. It was warm in her hand. “The market has a brain,” she said softly. “A spliced one. That corpse was bait, and the Compass leads us deeper into their design.” Hargate stood up, his patience fully gone. “Deepen the case. Vignette how the corpse got this wound, not what the cắt. A(psychological condition)Deimos is a(a) -” The Veil Compass spun again. Tally of cases and quips left Harlow with no other Consequences. “Well,” she said. “We’ll find our caller.” “Call whom?” “Someone trading in the dead.” She walked toward the Compass’s direction, past the crowd of traders. Eva caught up. “You need a supervisor of—the void.” “Void supervisor.” “Joke is on you.” They rounded a corner, found the pillar right at the edge of a merculite-slick, records of some licensing complaint. The Compass's needle knelt. Faint tracing between the lines of the trading setup: a map in tendrils. Not the man’s injuries, but his path. Leading to a closed booth in the distance. Harlow unclipped a flashlight from her belt. The beam found the corner, ruffled some charge. The booth bore no number, no table. Only a rectangle of black ink between the columns, crusted like baby oil on stone. “You think it’s a portal?” Eva was behind her, fast now. “Shade codex?” Harlow said nothing. Collected the black residue with a handkerchief. Lost none. The scent was wrong again. Hargate’s voice from mid-corridor: “Did you hear me, Quinn? You’ve got no verification unless you—” She ignored him. The Compass pulsed like a Zamboni slow anomaly, and the sound of footsteps behind her was already too late. “Kowalski.” “Eva,” she corrected. “And you?” A man’s voice, but Harlow knew the pattern by now. It was younger. Long vowels. A modicum behind the hat fringe. She waited. Let her reflexes catch. The side alleys shifted. No more alleyway. Just a door emblazoned with triple locks. “The corpse,” Harlow said slowly, “wasn’t dragged here like that. He walked into a catch door, without guidance.” Eva checked the Compass’s face. “You don’t even see the boxed script?” “Nope.” “The restriction’s gone once you become enjamb. You lose your navigational sense at the barrier. But once—” Hargate stepped into the aisle between them. “Well. This is—who?” “No one.” “But—” “That’s it,” Harlow said. “My colleague, you told me, doesn’t take your theories seriously.” She turned the Compass slowly in her palm. “But he’s never met someone who walked a market structure because they couldn’t help it.” Eva’s notebooks fluttered. “And you told me, Quinn, that the Trapdoor’s oldest summons wasn’t unfounded—until it was. That you found the old filing cabinet with the copy.” Hargate sighed. “Right. So someone adopted this fella, turned him into bait with a metallic fee, then stuck him in a predicament to aesthete faulty investigation?” “Or for revenue,” Harlow suggested. “We’re the only ones who entered last week with your full attention to activational threads in paper.” The Compass began to click. With vert matched only by DS Morris’s last howl.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags44
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
1"Harlow said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.431
leniency0.863
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.039
84.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1945
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
2"perfectly"
3"softly"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1945
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"resonance"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"eyebrow"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"measured"
count2
12
word"quickened"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"footsteps"
count1
16
word"structure"
count1
17
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"trembled"
2"crystal"
3"gleaming"
4"traced"
5"silk"
6"flicker"
7"resonance"
8"pulse"
9"eyebrow"
10"vibrated"
11"measured"
12"quickened"
13"tracing"
14"pulsed"
15"footsteps"
16"structure"
17"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences150
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences150
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences191
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans9
markdownWords25
totalWords1932
ratio0.013
matches
0"Thomas"
1"my"
2"invitation"
3"Aurora’s not a name. It’s a condition."
4"perfectly"
5"Shade artisans take comfort from your asymmetry. They colonize the gaps."
6"terrified"
7"hired"
8"solvent"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions29
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions120
wordCount1309
uniqueNames32
maxNameDensity1.91
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn1
Veil4
Compass22
Implement1
Exchange1
New1
Age1
Lyle1
Hargate18
Harlow25
Morris4
Licensing3
Office3
Ketamine1
Primrose1
Hill1
Canary1
Wharf1
Combustion1
Bay1
Anti-Resonance1
Act1
Shade2
Realm1
Female1
Kowalski1
Eva13
Navigator1
Consequences1
You4
Zamboni1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Compass"
2"Exchange"
3"Lyle"
4"Hargate"
5"Harlow"
6"Morris"
7"Office"
8"Kowalski"
9"Eva"
10"Navigator"
11"You"
places
0"Licensing"
1"Primrose"
2"Hill"
3"Canary"
4"Combustion"
5"Bay"
globalScore0.545
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if remarking on the weather, and watched him smirk"
96.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.035
wordCount1932
matches
0"not pale but ink-black, like pages left in a burning fireplace"
1"Not the man’s injuries, but his path"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs95
mean20.34
std16.26
cv0.8
sampleLengths
082
147
262
327
430
569
634
731
855
93
1048
1122
1254
1318
1421
156
1621
1718
186
1945
2043
212
2240
2313
2450
2520
2632
2719
287
291
3016
3116
3210
3315
3418
355
367
3752
389
3935
406
4111
424
4325
446
4538
4613
4730
485
4921
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences150
matches
0"was seared"
1"been refreshed"
2"was crafted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was reading"
1"was shouting"
2"was already stepping"
23.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences191
ratio0.042
matches
0"The Implement Exchange’s new_forces had already taped off the scene with gauzy plastic—jammed between a toppled New Age crystal stand and a frayed-market awning."
1"She unclipped her own Compass from a duty belt—bought a stolen version under the alias *Thomas*."
2"She’d learned not to watch markets shift themselves—seen this one once cling to Ketamine stains in Primrose Hill, once flicker entirely into a ditch near Canary Wharf."
3"The Licensing Office insisted it was a merculite distillation—impossible under the 1986 Anti-Resonance Act."
4"The needle snapped to each dark sigil—on the wall, in the sizing of rat droppings, in the curl of the corpse’s little finger."
5"Measured the corpse’s ridges of vertebrae—ones parallel to the pillar."
6"Can I?” She unclipped Harlow’s Compass with a glove. “The supraslemn ethics code—the Navigator’s protocol—that must be breached by external bursars.”"
7"This is—who?”"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1138
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.030755711775043937
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.012302284710017574
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences191
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences191
mean10.12
std7.15
cv0.707
sampleLengths
09
126
223
324
410
518
619
717
84
910
105
117
1212
137
146
1514
164
173
1817
197
206
219
228
2311
2414
2516
2611
279
2818
297
302
3118
3211
3319
343
3527
366
373
3810
3918
4014
416
4210
437
445
453
4614
4724
4813
4914
59.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3717277486910995
totalSentences191
uniqueOpeners71
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences132
matches
0"Only the Veil Compass on"
1"Instead, she read the man’s"
2"Only handy when the police"
3"Then found the crack at"
ratio0.03
89.70% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences132
matches
0"He gestured to the body"
1"He wore a tailored suit,"
2"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
3"She didn’t mention it."
4"He’d hated attention."
5"His badge glinted"
6"She unclipped her own Compass"
7"Its needle wobbled at first,"
8"She slid her finger along"
9"He yanked a corner of"
10"She’d learned not to watch"
11"She knew that tar-black viscosity,"
12"He was reading over her"
13"His tie snagged on an"
14"She reached for her sulfate"
15"she murmured, She turned"
16"He gestured to the corpse’s"
17"He stepped back."
18"She ignored him."
19"She remembered DS Morris’s last"
ratio0.326
58.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences132
matches
0"The Tube station stank of"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots echoed in"
2"The Veil Compass in its"
3"The Implement Exchange’s new_forces had"
4"Inspector Lyle Hargate greeted, his"
5"He gestured to the body"
6"The corpse’s throat was seared,"
7"Harlow stepped around a pile"
8"The victim wasn’t moving."
9"He wore a tailored suit,"
10"Hargate’s jaw twitched"
11"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
12"She didn’t mention it."
13"He’d hated attention."
14"His badge glinted"
15"The corpse’s lipstick traced a"
16"Harlow tilted her head, thinking"
17"The Compass beneath his chin"
18"She unclipped her own Compass"
19"Its needle wobbled at first,"
ratio0.803
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences132
matches
0"If this were a pickpocketing"
1"Now, the pages held solid."
2"To throw back to"
3"If this gets out, the"
ratio0.03
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The Veil Compass in its glass case at the station’s entrance trembled slightly, a guard’s fingers brushing its brass casing as he passed."
1"The point of contact surfaced a spiderweb of dark sigils, delicate as lace but knotting into a vertical line that mirrored her Compass’s travel."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags40
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Inspector Lyle Hargate greeted, his voice already preening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Hargate said (hargate say)"
3"she corrected (correct)"
4"Harlow suggested (suggest)"
dialogueSentences102
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.216
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.098
89.2610%