| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.042 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 92.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.85% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1367 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "sanctuary" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "warmth" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "rhythmic" | | 15 | "stomach" | | 16 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 144 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 170 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 18 | | totalWords | 1385 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared" | | 1 | "screamed" | | 2 | "torn" | | 3 | "inside" | | 4 | "sing" | | 5 | "felt" | | 6 | "have" | | 7 | "are" | | 8 | "eat" | | 9 | "consume" | | 10 | "your" | | 11 | "You’re nothing unless I say you’re something." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 59 | | wordCount | 1022 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.76 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Nyx | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Warm | 1 | | Isolde | 17 | | Rory | 18 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Eva | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.619 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 70.63% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago" | | 1 | "as if listening to a song only she could hear" |
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| 55.60% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.444 | | wordCount | 1385 | | matches | | 0 | "not just in the pendant, but in the air, in the roots underfoot" | | 1 | "not with hunger, but with revulsion" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 76 | | mean | 18.22 | | std | 18.75 | | cv | 1.029 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 71 | | 11 | 33 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 49 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 76 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 26 | | 38 | 39 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 38 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 39 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 28 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 212 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 170 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "The next — silence." | | 1 | "She didn’t walk — she *appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago." | | 2 | "A breeze carried the scent of rain and something deeper — crushed juniper, distant fire, the perfume of seasons out of order." | | 3 | "Trees arched overhead, but their trunks were not wood — they were rib-like curves of fossilised bone, wrapped in twisting ivy that glowed faintly at the edges." | | 4 | "“A sanctuary,” Isolde corrected, but her pale lavender eyes flickered toward the shadows between the standing stones — rough ovals of ancient oak petrified into stone, forming a broken circle deeper in the grove." | | 5 | "Fireflies — if they were fireflies — floated in spirals, each one a tiny, flickering glyph that vanished when stared at directly." | | 6 | "Nyx moved ahead, shifting into incorporeal form — a ribbon of darkness skimming just above the ground." | | 7 | "Not aloud — it vibrated in Rory’s skull, a shriek of metal dragged over glass." | | 8 | "Moonlight — there was no moon — made the blade *sing*." | | 9 | "And now she *felt* it — not just in the pendant, but in the air, in the roots underfoot." | | 10 | "A scent rose — roast meat, honeyed figs, spiced wine, charred flesh." | | 11 | "And yet — part of her wanted to *eat*." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 942 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.036093418259023353 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0074309978768577496 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 170 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 170 | | mean | 8.15 | | std | 6.22 | | cv | 0.764 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 24 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 51.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.34705882352941175 | | totalSentences | 170 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 88.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Isolde stepped through." | | 1 | "Just that shifting, watchful light." | | 2 | "Even the mercury stream stilled." |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "It wavered like heat rising" | | 1 | "Her fingers twitched at her" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes flickered, scanning." | | 3 | "She reached into her coat" | | 4 | "She didn’t walk — she" | | 5 | "They shimmered through colours: copper," | | 6 | "It was a slow swirl" | | 7 | "Their voice was softer here," | | 8 | "It stayed folded, as if" | | 9 | "She touched a tree trunk." | | 10 | "she said to Isolde" | | 11 | "Their caps were black, speckled" | | 12 | "She followed the warmth." | | 13 | "She jerked back." | | 14 | "They passed through one of" | | 15 | "They didn’t look carved." | | 16 | "They looked *torn*." | | 17 | "She stepped back." | | 18 | "She drew it." | | 19 | "Her eyes were distant, unfocused." |
| | ratio | 0.221 | |
| 83.89% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The trees ended where the" | | 1 | "The next — silence." | | 2 | "Rory stepped forward and the" | | 3 | "A shimmer, almost invisible, clung" | | 4 | "It wavered like heat rising" | | 5 | "Her fingers twitched at her" | | 6 | "The scar there tingled." | | 7 | "Their violet eyes flickered, scanning." | | 8 | "She reached into her coat" | | 9 | "She didn’t walk — she" | | 10 | "The clearing bloomed around her." | | 11 | "Flowers erupted in spirals of" | | 12 | "A breeze carried the scent" | | 13 | "Isolde murmured, head tilted as" | | 14 | "Rory turned slowly." | | 15 | "The grove wasn’t natural." | | 16 | "Trees arched overhead, but their" | | 17 | "The leaves weren’t green." | | 18 | "They shimmered through colours: copper," | | 19 | "It was a slow swirl" |
| | ratio | 0.752 | |
| 44.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "To remember the flat above" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 75.89% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t walk — she *appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago." | | 1 | "Trees arched overhead, but their trunks were not wood — they were rib-like curves of fossilised bone, wrapped in twisting ivy that glowed faintly at the edges." | | 2 | "Fireflies — if they were fireflies — floated in spirals, each one a tiny, flickering glyph that vanished when stared at directly." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached, fingers closing around the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Isolde said, not turning" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 21 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 6 | "Nyx urged (urge)" | | 7 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.42 | | leniency | 0.84 | | rawRatio | 0.381 | | effectiveRatio | 0.32 | |