Run: 2026-03-25-01KMJ7TTCKAAYW2FN2FWJ5FHVC

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25.3s
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$0.000375
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You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The trees ended where the world began to breathe. One moment there was Richmond Park’s damp gravel underfoot, the distant bark of deer echoing through the mist. The next — silence. Thick, velvet, complete. Rory stepped forward and the air split like a curtain parting. A shimmer, almost invisible, clung to the space between two ancient oaks. It wavered like heat rising from tarmac, but cold seeped from it, not heat. Her fingers twitched at her wrist. The scar there tingled. Behind her, Nyx rippled into solidity, a tall figure of shifting shadow coalescing like ink spreading in water. Their violet eyes flickered, scanning. “The Veil’s thin here. Older than it should be.” “I felt it too,” Rory said. “Like static in my teeth.” She reached into her coat pocket, fingers closing around the Heartstone Pendant. Warm. Pulsing. Steady as a second heartbeat. Then Isolde stepped through. She didn’t walk — she *appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago. No footprints. Never any footprints. The clearing bloomed around her. Flowers erupted in spirals of violet and gold, petals unfurling too fast, too bright. A breeze carried the scent of rain and something deeper — crushed juniper, distant fire, the perfume of seasons out of order. “Time forgets here,” Isolde murmured, head tilted as if listening to a song only she could hear. Rory turned slowly. The grove wasn’t natural. Not anymore. Trees arched overhead, but their trunks were not wood — they were rib-like curves of fossilised bone, wrapped in twisting ivy that glowed faintly at the edges. The leaves weren’t green. They shimmered through colours: copper, indigo, blood-red, depending on how you looked. Above, the sky wasn’t sky. It was a slow swirl of tarnished silver and bruise-purple, like oil on water. No sun. No moon. Just that shifting, watchful light. Nyx knelt, pressing a shadowed hand to the ground. “The earth remembers magic. Old magic. Not mortal. Not even Fae.” Their voice was softer here, muffled, as if the air itself resisted sound. Rory took a step, then another. Grass bent beneath her boots but didn’t spring back. It stayed folded, as if time paused where she stepped. She touched a tree trunk. Cold stone, not bone. Yet it throbbed, faintly, like it had a pulse. “You weren’t lying,” she said to Isolde. “This place — it’s not on any map.” “No map holds true here.” Isolde drifted past, one hand trailing over a ring of mushrooms growing in perfect symmetry. Their caps were black, speckled with silver dust. “This grove is a wound. A place where the Veil was torn once — long ago. It never healed. Only scarred.” Nyx rose. “Then it’s a weak point.” “A sanctuary,” Isolde corrected, but her pale lavender eyes flickered toward the shadows between the standing stones — rough ovals of ancient oak petrified into stone, forming a broken circle deeper in the grove. “Some doors should stay closed. Others… must be opened.” Rory’s pendant pulsed harder. She followed the warmth. The deeper they went, the stranger it became. Fireflies — if they were fireflies — floated in spirals, each one a tiny, flickering glyph that vanished when stared at directly. A stream cut through the moss, but the water flowed uphill, silent, its surface too smooth, like liquid mercury. When Rory crouched to touch it, her reflection didn’t match. For a heartbeat, she saw herself older, face lined, eyes hollow, holding a knife she didn’t recognise. She jerked back. “Don’t look too long,” Isolde said, not turning. “Reflections here show what might be. Or what fears pretend to be.” Nyx moved ahead, shifting into incorporeal form — a ribbon of darkness skimming just above the ground. They passed through one of the standing stones. For a split second, the stone *screamed*. Not aloud — it vibrated in Rory’s skull, a shriek of metal dragged over glass. Then silence. Nyx reformed on the other side, shadows peeling off like wet cloth. “There’s writing,” they said. “Carved into the other side. Not any language I know. But it… it remembers pain.” Rory approached. On the far face of the stone, deep grooves formed jagged symbols. They didn’t look carved. They looked *torn*. And as she watched, one of the lines twitched, like a muscle under skin. She stepped back. “That wasn’t there before,” she said. Isolde stood at the center of the ring now, arms slightly out, head tipped back. “This place was a crossroads once. Before the Fae Courts locked their gates. Before Hel claimed its due. Mortals came here to bargain. To plead. To lose themselves.” “And now?” Rory asked. “Now it listens.” A low, rhythmic thud filled the air. Not from the ground. From *inside* the stones. Boom. Boom. Like a heart buried beneath the roots. Nyx solidified again, tense. “That’s not natural.” “No,” Isolde agreed. “It’s older.” Rory’s hand went to her side, where the Fae-Forged Blade rested in its sheath. The metal was colder than ever, biting through fabric. She drew it. Moonlight — there was no moon — made the blade *sing*. A faint chime, high and pure. The leaf-shaped dagger glowed, edges outlined in pale cerulean. Where its light touched the standing stones, the symbols dimmed. The heartbeat stuttered. “It knows the blade,” Nyx whispered. “It fears it,” Isolde corrected. “That which sleeps beneath this grove — it does not like the touch of Fae steel.” Rory didn’t lower the weapon. “What sleeps?” “The first breach,” Isolde said, turning. Her eyes were distant, unfocused. “A prince of hunger, cast out before he could claim a crown. Buried beneath layers of wards and memory. But hunger… does not die. It only waits.” Rory’s pendant flared. Hot. She gasped, clutching it. The crimson gem pulsed like a furnace ember. And now she *felt* it — not just in the pendant, but in the air, in the roots underfoot. A pull. Down. Like something vast, dreaming, inhaling. “Dymas,” she breathed. Nyx moved to her side. “The Heartstone reacts to Hel. But Dymas is one of the deeper realms. That kind of pull… it shouldn’t be possible from here.” “It’s not the realm,” Isolde said. “It’s the key.” Rory looked down. The pendant’s glow had spread, bleeding light along the silver chain. “Key?” “The Heartstone was forged in Dymas,” Isolde said. “Part of a binding. A lock. And you — you carry the other half.” “I don’t *have* another half.” “You *are* it,” Isolde said simply. “The pendant seeks its counterpart. And the counterpart… is blood.” Rory’s breath caught. The scar on her wrist burned. Nyx stepped between them. “You’re saying she’s connected to a prince of Gluttony?” “I’m saying the blood remembers,” Isolde said. “Even if the soul forgets.” The wind died. The glowing flowers dimmed. Even the mercury stream stilled. And from beneath the grove, something exhaled. A scent rose — roast meat, honeyed figs, spiced wine, charred flesh. The perfume of eternal feast. It rolled through the air, thick and cloying. Rory’s stomach clenched, not with hunger, but with revulsion. And yet — part of her wanted to *eat*. To devour. To *consume*. She stumbled back, hand tightening on the Fae blade. “Put it away,” Nyx urged, voice like cracked stone. “It’s feeding on the hunger. On *your* hunger.” Rory forced herself to breathe. To remember the flat above Silas’ bar. Eva’s laugh. The smell of egg foo young from the Golden Empress. She thought of Evan’s grip on her wrist, his voice hissing, *You’re nothing unless I say you’re something.* She snapped the blade back into the sheath. The scent faded. The heartbeat slowed. Isolde exhaled, as if waking. “The Wardens will come,” she said. “The Veil trembled when you drew the blade. They’ll feel the rift.” Nyx glanced toward the edges of the grove. “Then we don’t stay.” Rory looked back the way they came. The path was gone. In its place, a wall of blooming thorns, each flower a tiny, screaming face. Isolde touched her arm. “The grove decides when you leave. Not you. Not even me.” Rory swallowed, the taste of phantom feast still on her tongue. “I don’t like places that decide for me,” she said. “The best ones never ask permission,” Isolde whispered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.48
leniency0.96
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.04
92.68% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"wavered"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"sanctuary"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count2
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"rhythmic"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silence"
2"velvet"
3"wavered"
4"flickered"
5"scanning"
6"shimmered"
7"throbbed"
8"pulse"
9"perfect"
10"sanctuary"
11"pulsed"
12"warmth"
13"vibrated"
14"rhythmic"
15"stomach"
16"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences144
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences144
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords18
totalWords1385
ratio0.013
matches
0"appeared"
1"screamed"
2"torn"
3"inside"
4"sing"
5"felt"
6"have"
7"are"
8"eat"
9"consume"
10"your"
11"You’re nothing unless I say you’re something."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1022
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx11
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Warm1
Isolde17
Rory18
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae2
Eva1
Golden1
Empress1
Evan1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Rory"
3"Blade"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.619
windowScore0.5
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago"
1"as if listening to a song only she could hear"
55.60% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.444
wordCount1385
matches
0"not just in the pendant, but in the air, in the roots underfoot"
1"not with hunger, but with revulsion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs76
mean18.22
std18.75
cv1.029
sampleLengths
09
172
232
330
44
570
617
73
84
92
1071
1133
1243
1315
1449
157
1643
174
184
1976
203
2120
2249
2331
2435
253
266
2743
284
293
307
318
321
331
347
357
365
3726
3839
396
4021
417
4238
433
441
4539
463
4728
489
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs212
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences170
ratio0.071
matches
0"The next — silence."
1"She didn’t walk — she *appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago."
2"A breeze carried the scent of rain and something deeper — crushed juniper, distant fire, the perfume of seasons out of order."
3"Trees arched overhead, but their trunks were not wood — they were rib-like curves of fossilised bone, wrapped in twisting ivy that glowed faintly at the edges."
4"“A sanctuary,” Isolde corrected, but her pale lavender eyes flickered toward the shadows between the standing stones — rough ovals of ancient oak petrified into stone, forming a broken circle deeper in the grove."
5"Fireflies — if they were fireflies — floated in spirals, each one a tiny, flickering glyph that vanished when stared at directly."
6"Nyx moved ahead, shifting into incorporeal form — a ribbon of darkness skimming just above the ground."
7"Not aloud — it vibrated in Rory’s skull, a shriek of metal dragged over glass."
8"Moonlight — there was no moon — made the blade *sing*."
9"And now she *felt* it — not just in the pendant, but in the air, in the roots underfoot."
10"A scent rose — roast meat, honeyed figs, spiced wine, charred flesh."
11"And yet — part of her wanted to *eat*."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount942
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.036093418259023353
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0074309978768577496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean8.15
std6.22
cv0.764
sampleLengths
09
118
24
33
411
512
614
76
84
918
105
119
126
1317
141
151
165
174
1824
192
203
215
2214
2322
2417
253
264
272
2827
294
3012
315
3214
332
342
355
369
3724
386
399
4010
415
424
439
447
458
4620
478
4821
492
51.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34705882352941175
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners59
88.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"Then Isolde stepped through."
1"Just that shifting, watchful light."
2"Even the mercury stream stilled."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences113
matches
0"It wavered like heat rising"
1"Her fingers twitched at her"
2"Their violet eyes flickered, scanning."
3"She reached into her coat"
4"She didn’t walk — she"
5"They shimmered through colours: copper,"
6"It was a slow swirl"
7"Their voice was softer here,"
8"It stayed folded, as if"
9"She touched a tree trunk."
10"she said to Isolde"
11"Their caps were black, speckled"
12"She followed the warmth."
13"She jerked back."
14"They passed through one of"
15"They didn’t look carved."
16"They looked *torn*."
17"She stepped back."
18"She drew it."
19"Her eyes were distant, unfocused."
ratio0.221
83.89% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences113
matches
0"The trees ended where the"
1"The next — silence."
2"Rory stepped forward and the"
3"A shimmer, almost invisible, clung"
4"It wavered like heat rising"
5"Her fingers twitched at her"
6"The scar there tingled."
7"Their violet eyes flickered, scanning."
8"She reached into her coat"
9"She didn’t walk — she"
10"The clearing bloomed around her."
11"Flowers erupted in spirals of"
12"A breeze carried the scent"
13"Isolde murmured, head tilted as"
14"Rory turned slowly."
15"The grove wasn’t natural."
16"Trees arched overhead, but their"
17"The leaves weren’t green."
18"They shimmered through colours: copper,"
19"It was a slow swirl"
ratio0.752
44.25% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"To remember the flat above"
ratio0.009
75.89% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She didn’t walk — she *appeared*, silver hair drifting as though underwater, bare feet soundless on moss that hadn’t been there a second ago."
1"Trees arched overhead, but their trunks were not wood — they were rib-like curves of fossilised bone, wrapped in twisting ivy that glowed faintly at the edges."
2"Fireflies — if they were fireflies — floated in spirals, each one a tiny, flickering glyph that vanished when stared at directly."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She reached, fingers closing around the Heartstone Pendant"
1"Isolde said, not turning"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags21
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde corrected (correct)"
2"Isolde agreed (agree)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Isolde corrected (correct)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
6"Nyx urged (urge)"
7"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.42
leniency0.84
rawRatio0.381
effectiveRatio0.32
80.7862%